Toaru Majutsu no Index:RailgunSS2 Chapter7 - Revision history

Cthaeh: consistency and AE

2013-09-16T23:56:12Z

consistency and AE

Cthaeh at 02:02, 5 August 2013

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	She had found the name of the person with the highest level of responsibility according to the documents, but from what she could find, that person was only for show and had little to do with the actual work. It was possible that person was completely unaware of the shopping mall’s darkness.		She had found the name of the person with the highest level of responsibility according to the documents, but from what she could find, that person was only for show and had little to do with the actual work. It was possible that person was completely unaware of the shopping mall’s darkness.

	But given that those controlling the shopping mall from the shadows truly did exist, that result was suspicious. They must have worked to leave absolutely no trace because there was absolutely no sign of them. They were of course not in any register of names and nothing that appeared to be their names ~~were~~ listed in any of the documents.		But given that those controlling the shopping mall from the shadows truly did exist, that result was suspicious. They must have worked to leave absolutely no trace because there was absolutely no sign of them. They were of course not in any register of names, and nothing that appeared to be their names was listed in any of the documents.

	Mikoto looked at the ID card with the highest authority that Lessar had given her.		Mikoto looked at the ID card with the highest authority that Lessar had given her.
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	“Right, right.” Floris raised the output of her wings of light. “But the main problem is that those are not the same as simple wheels or gears. To make them grind to a halt, we need analyze what magical symbols those wheels use and what process they use to rearrange.”		“Right, right.” Floris raised the output of her wings of light. “But the main problem is that those are not the same as simple wheels or gears. To make them grind to a halt, we need analyze what magical symbols those wheels use and what process they use to rearrange.”

	“There are two ways to do that,” Lessar suggested while moving her fingers. “The first is to continue letting it attack us like this. If you’re skillful enough to avoid all of its attacks, I can carry out the analysis slowly but surely. But it doesn’t look like you have the mobility to spare to do that and the plan to drop ~~off~~ a nuke on Academy City is still ongoing. It wouldn’t be good to stretch this out unnecessarily.”		“There are two ways to do that,” Lessar suggested while moving her fingers. “The first is to continue letting it attack us like this. If you’re skillful enough to avoid all of its attacks, I can carry out the analysis slowly but surely. But it doesn’t look like you have the mobility to spare to do that and the plan to drop a nuke on Academy City is still ongoing. It wouldn’t be good to stretch this out unnecessarily.”

	“What’s the second?”		“What’s the second?”
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	That was what the UAV was for.		That was what the UAV was for.

	An environment allowing long distance transmissions had been created where the person behind the plan could send the detonation signal to the UAV or even cancel it it if necessary.		An environment allowing long distance transmissions had been created where the person behind the plan could send the detonation signal to the UAV or even cancel it if necessary.

	Once the small UAV with the detonation signal inside it made it within Academy City, it could transmit the signal without being affected by the jamming.		Once the small UAV with the detonation signal inside it made it within Academy City, it could transmit the signal without being affected by the jamming.

Lofthouse at 20:06, 19 January 2013

2013-01-19T20:06:31Z

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	“Right, right.” Floris raised the output of her wings of light. “But the main problem is that those are not the same as simple wheels or gears. To make them grind to a halt, we need analyze what magical symbols those wheels use and what process they use to rearrange.”		“Right, right.” Floris raised the output of her wings of light. “But the main problem is that those are not the same as simple wheels or gears. To make them grind to a halt, we need analyze what magical symbols those wheels use and what process they use to rearrange.”

	“There are two ways to do that,” Lessar suggested while moving her fingers. “The first is to continue letting it attack us like this. If you’re skillful enough to avoid all of its attacks, I can carry out the analysis slowly but surely. But it doesn’t look like you have the mobility to spare to do that and the plan to drop of a nuke on Academy City is still ongoing. It wouldn’t be good to stretch this out unnecessarily.”		“There are two ways to do that,” Lessar suggested while moving her fingers. “The first is to continue letting it attack us like this. If you’re skillful enough to avoid all of its attacks, I can carry out the analysis slowly but surely. But it doesn’t look like you have the mobility to spare to do that and the plan to drop off a nuke on Academy City is still ongoing. It wouldn’t be good to stretch this out unnecessarily.”

	“What’s the second?”		“What’s the second?”

Dagger: Typo

2012-02-12T05:00:01Z

Typo

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	“Oh, come on, really? It feels like Telesma has been forcibly gathered together.”		“Oh, come on, really? It feels like Telesma has been forcibly gathered together.”

	“We originally set that up as insurance.” Without getting up, Caliche moved just her head to look over and smile at Lessar. “We would use it if the shopping mall decided not to give us our reward. The situation got out of hand and we lost ~~out~~ chance to use it, but it looks like it has come in handy after all.”		“We originally set that up as insurance.” Without getting up, Caliche moved just her head to look over and smile at Lessar. “We would use it if the shopping mall decided not to give us our reward. The situation got out of hand and we lost our chance to use it, but it looks like it has come in handy after all.”

	The giant form that appeared through the curtain of dust was easily over 70 meters long. It was likely a weapon designed to crush things with its weight.		The giant form that appeared through the curtain of dust was easily over 70 meters long. It was likely a weapon designed to crush things with its weight.

Mr.Kyon: /* Chapter 7 */

2012-01-11T12:50:20Z

Chapter 7

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	“…Do you understand what you’re saying?”		“…Do you understand what you’re saying?”

	“Of course. Only our scouting ~~specialist – that’s me – can~~ carry out the analysis of that spiritual item. You couldn’t do it, Floris.”		“Of course. Only our scouting specialist—that’s me—can carry out the analysis of that spiritual item. You couldn’t do it, Floris.”

	“If I let go now, you’ll be upside down. Even if you do land on top of the pursuing giant wheel snake, your feet will get caught in the wheels’ absorption and you’ll be thrown upside down into the gap between the wheels.”		“If I let go now, you’ll be upside down. Even if you do land on top of the pursuing giant wheel snake, your feet will get caught in the wheels’ absorption and you’ll be thrown upside down into the gap between the wheels.”

Opt418: typo fixed: marital law => martial law

2011-12-26T14:09:05Z

typo fixed: marital law => martial law

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	Suddenly, a new piece of information appeared on the Semipublic AR Enirya was looking at. She frowned and set the screen at a level where her colleague could see it.		Suddenly, a new piece of information appeared on the Semipublic AR Enirya was looking at. She frowned and set the screen at a level where her colleague could see it.

	“It seems the use of ~~marital~~ law has been approved.”		“It seems the use of martial law has been approved.”

	“The approval of the higher ups is needed for that.”		“The approval of the higher ups is needed for that.”

184.166.100.71: /* Part 14 */

2011-08-30T18:44:27Z

Part 14

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	A very bad feeling came over Mikoto.		A very bad feeling came over Mikoto.

	It had come to her mind to.		It had come to her mind too.

	When she thought about it, it had been deeply related from the very first incident. It had spread the urban legends. It had caused the riots. It had free use of the cameras and the Semipublic AR, it read people’s reactions, it automatically created news sources to spread, and it manipulated group psychology like a toy car.		When she thought about it, it had been deeply related from the very first incident. It had spread the urban legends. It had caused the riots. It had free use of the cameras and the Semipublic AR, it read people’s reactions, it automatically created news sources to spread, and it manipulated group psychology like a toy car.

Js06: /* Part 14 */

2011-08-30T15:36:31Z

Part 14

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Js06: /* Part 13 */

2011-08-30T06:02:32Z

Part 13

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	=== Part 13 ===		=== Part 13 ===

			A number of explosive noises rang out above the Sea of Japan.

			The modified MIG-21s were loaded with chaff and flairs, but there was simply a limit to what they could do. The cutting edge fighters prepared by Academy City were more than two generations more advanced. And the difference in numbers was simply too great.

			It was impossible to fly such that the more advanced fighters did not get on their tail.

			There was no way to escape a lock.

			Once a missile was fired, it was all over.

			Even while taking special actions like quick rotations and using deceptive actions such as using chaff and flares, they could not continue to avoid the explosives forever while they approached with sharp angles.

			“Klyuch Samolyot to Nochi Samolyot!! That’s enough!! Eject right now. Smoke is coming from your main wing where it was hit. If you stick with this any longer, you’ll just get caught up in the explosion!!”

			“Nochi Samolyot to all crafts!! Not yet! As long as we aren’t all taken out, we win!! I’ll draw the enemy crafts to me!! While I do…!!”

			The ocean was just too vast.

			Academy City was just too far away.

			The pilot of Klyuch Samolyot looked at a gauge in the cockpit with a burning feeling in his stomach.

			Just a bit more.

			The time was coming.

			No matter how erratically he flew or even if he loop-the-looped, his cold sweating would not stop. He was being surrounded from all sides. He would not last long. Those were his simple feelings. He was of course outnumbered and outclassed, but his modified MIG-21 also had a giant weight hanging down from it. It was impossible to take part in a dogfight like that.

			Machinegun fire started coming from one of the cutting edge fighters on his tail and a line of tracer bullets approached. Shortly thereafter, the unpleasant sound of metal being torn reverberated through the fighter.

			“Shit!! My right aileron was taken out!!”

			With that destroyed, he could no longer tilt the craft. Simply put, it was like having the steering wheel no longer work. And it was clear he would be shot down in no time now that another penalty had been added on in that already difficult situation.

			But the pilot of Klyuch Samolyot smiled upon seeing what one of the gauges said.

			They had won.

			“Klyuch Samolyot to all crafts.”

			With that, they had won.

			“The time has come. There is no need to stick with this any longer! Let’s end this quickly!!”

			After yelling that, the pilot of Klyuch Samolyot yanked on a lever which activated the ejection device. Tiny explosives detached the clear windshield covering the cockpit and it blew away as if it had slid back. Immediately afterwards, the seat and the pilot in it were ejected.

			Prisluga Samolyot and Nochi Samolyot’s pilots also ejected from their old fighters and their parachutes opened.

			“What?” said a bewildered Academy City pilot. “They just abandoned their hydrogen bomb. That was their last hope and their trump card. I doubt they can swim back to Russia once they fall in the ocean. They’ll just end up being recovered by one of our ships. It’s like they want to be captured.”

			“…Look, dammit. There’s a submarine coming up to the surface. They were planning to recover the pilots here from the beginning.”

			“Should we sink it?”

			“We only expected this to be a dogfight. We don’t have any torpedoes.”

			Meanwhile, the pilots that had fallen into the ocean were recovered.

			One of the Academy City pilots clicked his tongue at the submarine that started to submerge.

			“I guess we should be rejoicing that they gave up their hydrogen bomb. Contact the salvage ship and have them begin the recovery operation for the dropped hydrogen bomb as planned. Now that we know the enemy has a sub, you should tell them to make sure to sweep the sea for mines.”

			The Academy City pilot took one last stubborn sweep over the area where the submarine had submerged.

			“So in the end, what were they after?”

	=== Part 14 ===		=== Part 14 ===

Jonathanasdf: /* Part 4 */

2011-08-30T04:36:49Z

Part 4

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	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

	Lessar ~~fist~~ headed for a grocery corner.		Lessar first headed for a grocery corner.

	The riots had calmed down a bit, but the after effects could still be seen. A lot of the shelves were knocked over, the number of products was down significantly, and a lot of what was left had been trampled underfoot. Lessar did not see any workers. They had likely decided that their pay did not match the risks.		The riots had calmed down a bit, but the after effects could still be seen. A lot of the shelves were knocked over, the number of products was down significantly, and a lot of what was left had been trampled underfoot. Lessar did not see any workers. They had likely decided that their pay did not match the risks.

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	Not taking into account the alteration of information from analog to digital was a common mistake. But there were some things that were difficult to handle when it came to getting that close to the science side.		Not taking into account the alteration of information from analog to digital was a common mistake. But there were some things that were difficult to handle when it came to getting that close to the science side.

	(…Her name is Caliche I Niknosh. Well, the name is a bit doubtful, but she failed with the photo. From the small ornaments and the traces left on the headless bodies, it’s clear she’s some failed member of the Russian Orthodox Church. But…)		(…Her name is Caliche I. Niknosh. Well, the name is a bit doubtful, but she failed with the photo. From the small ornaments and the traces left on the headless bodies, it’s clear she’s some failed member of the Russian Orthodox Church. But…)

	As Lessar thought to herself, she glanced over at Mikoto.		As Lessar thought to herself, she glanced over at Mikoto.
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	After heading around the next corner, she saw the back of a fleeing woman.		After heading around the next corner, she saw the back of a fleeing woman.

	It was Caliche I Niknosh.		It was Caliche I. Niknosh.

	(Bingo!! Suspicious people always do suspicious things!!)		(Bingo!! Suspicious people always do suspicious things!!)
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	At some point, a spear-like object had appeared in her hand.		At some point, a spear-like object had appeared in her hand.

	It was the ~~Steel Glove~~.		It was the steel glove.

	Four blades were attached to the end of the weapon and it looked a bit like a grabber arm.		Four blades were attached to the end of the weapon and it looked a bit like a grabber arm.
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	The power from above slammed the fleeing woman’s body to the ground, the short trees surrounding the parking lot cracked and broke, and sparks exploded from the pavement. The Semipublic AR on the surface was intended to have large trucks drive over it, but it had not been able to withstand Lessar’s attack.		The power from above slammed the fleeing woman’s body to the ground, the short trees surrounding the parking lot cracked and broke, and sparks exploded from the pavement. The Semipublic AR on the surface was intended to have large trucks drive over it, but it had not been able to withstand Lessar’s attack.

	“I hope you realize I am being merciful by calling out to you,” Lessar said as she rested the ~~Steel Glove~~ on her shoulder after grabbing a new cloth bag in its four blades.		“I hope you realize I am being merciful by calling out to you,” Lessar said as she rested the steel glove on her shoulder after grabbing a new cloth bag in its four blades.

	She cut across the parking lot.		She cut across the parking lot.
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	His head had fallen on the pavement nearby rather than on Lessar. He had struck down with his head hard enough that it would not have surprised her if the hard pavement had broken. When the man lifted his head, Lessar finally realized what he had been doing.		His head had fallen on the pavement nearby rather than on Lessar. He had struck down with his head hard enough that it would not have surprised her if the hard pavement had broken. When the man lifted his head, Lessar finally realized what he had been doing.

	He was holding the handle of the ~~Steel Glove~~ in his mouth like a dog with a bone.		He was holding the handle of the steel glove in his mouth like a dog with a bone.

	(Not good…)		(Not good…)
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	(Tch! Can I avoid all of them!?)		(Tch! Can I avoid all of them!?)

	As Lessar rolled, a great number of legs fell down in a straight line following her almost like bullets fired from a ~~machinegun~~.		As Lessar rolled, a great number of legs fell down in a straight line following her almost like bullets fired from a machine gun.

	She could not escape to safety just by rolling to the side.		She could not escape to safety just by rolling to the side.
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	She had managed to avoid her enemies’ attack, but she did not have time to breathe a sigh of relief.		She had managed to avoid her enemies’ attack, but she did not have time to breathe a sigh of relief.

	(Including Caliche and that large man, there are about 10 of them. And they’ve taken my ~~Steel Glove~~.)		(Including Caliche and that large man, there are about 10 of them. And they’ve taken my steel glove.)

	She looked over just in time to see the large man named Ivan throw the ~~Steel Glove~~ aside.		She looked over just in time to see the large man named Ivan throw the steel glove aside.

	The large parking lot was a good place for a group to gang up on her.		The large parking lot was a good place for a group to gang up on her.
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	Lessar looked around the area and it seemed Caliche’s comrades were mostly collapsed and unable to move due to the green lightning attacks. It would have been a problem if one of them was faking it, but it did not seem that any of them had had the strength to spare needed to calculate out that far.		Lessar looked around the area and it seemed Caliche’s comrades were mostly collapsed and unable to move due to the green lightning attacks. It would have been a problem if one of them was faking it, but it did not seem that any of them had had the strength to spare needed to calculate out that far.

	Lessar walked over as if dragging her exhausted body along and picked up her ~~Steel Glove~~. She then turned toward Caliche who was collapsed face down on the ground.		Lessar walked over as if dragging her exhausted body along and picked up her steel glove. She then turned toward Caliche who was collapsed face down on the ground.

	Paying no heed to the woman’s bleeding, Lessar forcibly flipped her face up.		Paying no heed to the woman’s bleeding, Lessar forcibly flipped her face up.
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	“Not good, not good.”		“Not good, not good.”

	While using her magical communications to order an additional bombardment from Bayloupe, Lessar held out her ~~Steel Glove~~.		While using her magical communications to order an additional bombardment from Bayloupe, Lessar held out her steel glove.

	“This is not time to be worrying about stopping a nuclear explosion that doesn’t especially concern me.”		“This is not time to be worrying about stopping a nuclear explosion that doesn’t especially concern me.”
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	What was considered “stable” had been conveniently overwritten by the magic user who had brought in the Telesma.		What was considered “stable” had been conveniently overwritten by the magic user who had brought in the Telesma.

	That meant they could easily make the giant wheel snake self destruct by interfering with that point and destructively overwriting the conditions for that stability.		That meant they could easily make the giant wheel snake self-destruct by interfering with that point and destructively overwriting the conditions for that stability.

	The giant wheel snake tried to rearrange its wheels to change its shape and destroy Lessar.		The giant wheel snake tried to rearrange its wheels to change its shape and destroy Lessar.
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	No matter how erratically he flew or even if he loop-the-looped, his cold sweating would not stop. He was being surrounded from all sides. He would not last long. Those were his simple feelings. He was of course outnumbered and outclassed, but his modified MIG-21 also had a giant weight hanging down from it. It was impossible to take part in a dogfight like that.		No matter how erratically he flew or even if he loop-the-looped, his cold sweating would not stop. He was being surrounded from all sides. He would not last long. Those were his simple feelings. He was of course outnumbered and outclassed, but his modified MIG-21 also had a giant weight hanging down from it. It was impossible to take part in a dogfight like that.

	~~Machinegun~~ fire started coming from one of the cutting edge fighters on his tail and a line of tracer bullets approached. Shortly thereafter, the unpleasant sound of metal being torn reverberated through the fighter.		Machine gun fire started coming from one of the cutting edge fighters on his tail and a line of tracer bullets approached. Shortly thereafter, the unpleasant sound of metal being torn reverberated through the fighter.

	“Shit!! My right aileron was taken out!!”		“Shit!! My right aileron was taken out!!”