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Grrarr: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_subjunctive Undo revision 355370 by WorldCon (talk)

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_subjunctive Undo revision 355370 by WorldCon (talk)

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	Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never come across any. Even if a Relic ~~was~~ right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.		Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never come across any. Even if a Relic were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.

	Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.		Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

WorldCon at 01:29, 23 May 2014

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	Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never come across any. Even if a Relic ~~were~~ right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.		Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never come across any. Even if a Relic was right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.

	Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.		Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

Grrarr at 21:18, 24 August 2012

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	Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.		Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

	~~Unfortunately~~, Relics are real, and more common than people think.		Regrettably, Relics are real, and more common than people think.

	Whether they bring about good or ill fortune depends on the ones who choose to use them.		Whether they bring about good or ill fortune depends on the ones who choose to use them.

Grrarr: oops///

2012-08-24T21:11:56Z

oops///

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	In our world there are objects called 'Relics'.		In our world there are objects called 'Relics'.

	Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed ~~human~~ grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->		Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed their owners' grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->

	For instance: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that shows you how you'll look in the future, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.		For instance: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that shows you how you'll look in the future, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.

Grrarr: thanks much to user: idiffer

2012-08-24T21:08:03Z

thanks much to user: idiffer

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	In our world there are objects called 'Relics'.		In our world there are objects called 'Relics'.

	Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed ~~their owner's grudge~~ or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->		Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed human grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->

	~~Examples of Relics include~~: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that ~~displays your~~ future ~~appearance~~, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.		For instance: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that shows you how you'll look in the future, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.

	Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never ~~encountered~~ any. Even if a Relic were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.		Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never come across any. Even if a Relic were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.

	Some ~~people are~~ unconcerned~~<!--a bit iffy -grrarr-->~~, while others are certain that such things do not exist.		Some remain unconcerned, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

	~~However~~, Relics are real, and more common than people think.		Unfortunately, Relics are real, and more common than people think.

	Whether they bring about good or ill fortune ~~is up~~ to ~~their users~~.		Whether they bring about good or ill fortune depends on the ones who choose to use them.

Grrarr: trying to refer to Relics in a consistent fashion

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trying to refer to Relics in a consistent fashion

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	Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed their owner's grudge or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->		Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed their owner's grudge or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->

	Examples of 'Relics' include: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that displays your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.		Examples of Relics include: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that displays your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.

	Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never encountered any. Even if a ~~'relic'~~ were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.		Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never encountered any. Even if a Relic were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.

	Some people are unconcerned<!--a bit iffy -grrarr-->, while others are certain that such things do not exist.		Some people are unconcerned<!--a bit iffy -grrarr-->, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

	However, 'Relics' are real, and more common than people think.		However, Relics are real, and more common than people think.

	Whether they bring about good or ill fortune is up to their users.		Whether they bring about good or ill fortune is up to their users.

Grrarr at 07:58, 29 July 2012

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	In our world there are objects ~~that go by the name of "Relic~~."		In our world there are objects called 'Relics'.

	Not antiques or ~~items~~ of classical art, no: they ~~may~~ be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed ~~human grudges~~ or natural spiritual powers after long exposure to ~~them.~~		Not antiques or objects of classical art, no: they can be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed their owner's grudge or natural spiritual powers after long exposure.<!--a bit unclear as to whether natural spiritual powers applies to their owner-grrarr-->

	~~For instance,~~ a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that ~~shows~~ your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.		Examples of 'Relics' include: a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that displays your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.

	Everybody has most likely heard of ~~their existence~~ as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of such things, as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	Most people consider ''~~relics~~'' mere fantasies because they have ~~not seen them~~. ~~They do not notice them even~~ if ~~they are~~ right before their eyes, ~~and~~ they dismiss it as ~~some sort of~~ coincidence ~~if something mysterious occurs~~.		Most people consider ''Relics'' mere fantasies because they have never encountered any. Even if a 'relic' were right before their eyes, they'd fail to notice it. If a mysterious event were to occur, they'd dismiss it as a coincidence.

	Some are unconcerned, while others are certain such things do not exist.		Some people are unconcerned<!--a bit iffy -grrarr-->, while others are certain that such things do not exist.

	~~Regrettably~~, ''Relics'' are ~~closer to us~~ than ~~we may~~ think.		However, 'Relics' are real, and more common than people think.

	Whether they bring good or ill fortune is up to ~~the one who chooses to use them~~.		Whether they bring about good or ill fortune is up to their users.

Senile seinen at 22:01, 4 June 2012

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	In our world there are objects that go by the name of "Relic".		In our world there are objects that go by the name of "Relic."

	Not antiques or items of classical art, no: they may be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed human grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure to them.		Not antiques or items of classical art, no: they may be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed human grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure to them.

Senile seinen at 22:01, 4 June 2012

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	In our world there are objects that go by the name "~~Relics~~".		In our world there are objects that go by the name of "Relic".

	Not antiques or items of classical art, no: they ~~can~~ be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed human grudges or natural spiritual powers, after ~~being exposed~~ to them ~~for a long time~~.		Not antiques or items of classical art, no: they may be tools with special powers created by mighty ancients or magicians, or objects that have absorbed human grudges or natural spiritual powers after long exposure to them.

	For instance, a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that shows your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.		For instance, a stone that brings good luck, a doll whose hair grows night after night, a mirror that shows your future appearance, a sword that brings ruin to anyone who draws it.
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	Everybody has most likely heard of their existence as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.		Everybody has most likely heard of their existence as they appear in countless fairy tales and rumors.

	~~However,~~ people consider ~~them~~ mere fantasies because they have not seen them~~, they~~ do not notice them even if they are right before their eyes, and they ~~believe in~~ some sort of coincidence if something mysterious occurs.		Most people consider ''relics'' mere fantasies because they have not seen them. They do not notice them even if they are right before their eyes, and they dismiss it as some sort of coincidence if something mysterious occurs.

	Some ~~feel~~ unconcerned, while others are certain such things do not exist.		Some are unconcerned, while others are certain such things do not exist.

	Regrettably, ''Relics'' are closer to us than we may think.		Regrettably, ''Relics'' are closer to us than we may think.

Whitewinters at 11:24, 13 May 2012

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	Some feel unconcerned, while others are certain such things do not exist.		Some feel unconcerned, while others are certain such things do not exist.

	Regrettably ~~though~~, ''Relics'' are closer to us than we may think.		Regrettably, ''Relics'' are closer to us than we may think.

	Whether they bring good or ill fortune is up to the one who chooses to use them.		Whether they bring good or ill fortune is up to the one who chooses to use them.