Unlimited Fafnir:Brynhildr Valkyries Chapter 1 - Revision history

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:00:37Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	"—My name is Shinomiya Haruka. I am Midgard Academy's student council president and captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad."		"—My name is Shinomiya Haruka. I am Midgard Academy's student council president and captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad."

	After the ship reached the pier, a girl dressed in a primarily monochrome uniform greeted me.		After the ship reached the pier, a girl dressed in a primarily monochrome uniform greeted me.
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	Wearing a raincoat, I was waiting at the Academy's entrance together with the student council members.		Wearing a raincoat, I was waiting at the Academy's entrance together with the student council members.

	To ensure the ship could reach the pier safely, Haruka-san and the elite members of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad had gone off to deploy a gigantic barrier of wind.		To ensure the ship could reach the pier safely, Haruka-san and the elite members of the Dragon Subjugation Squad had gone off to deploy a gigantic barrier of wind.

	Lisa-san and Firill-san were at the pier while I was the Academy's entrance, standing by as emergency rescuers.		Lisa-san and Firill-san were at the pier while I was the Academy's entrance, standing by as emergency rescuers.
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	I was holding towels in my arms under my raincoat so that the new arrivals could dry themselves. At the same time, I felt terror at the power of Ds, capable of resisting a storm.		I was holding towels in my arms under my raincoat so that the new arrivals could dry themselves. At the same time, I felt terror at the power of Ds, capable of resisting a storm.

	At the same time, I came to a realization. Unless I joined the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, I could not assist Haruka-san in any real sense.		At the same time, I came to a realization. Unless I joined the Dragon Subjugation Squad, I could not assist Haruka-san in any real sense.

	Finally able to stabilize my fictional armament recently, I still had far to go.		Finally able to stabilize my fictional armament recently, I still had far to go.

Entropy at 07:44, 27 September 2015

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	"—Midgard is protected by the Midgardsormr defense system. Although it is currently submerged out of sight, it will emerge from the water if anything happens, fulfilling its function as a physical line of defense."		"—Midgard is protected by the Midgardsormr defense system. Although it is currently submerged out of sight, it will emerge from the water if anything happens, fulfilling its function as a physical line of defense."

	Standing on the side was a member of Midgard's staff. The ~~woman—Maika~~ Stuart-san—was engaged in all sorts of explanations but I was paying no attention.		Standing on the side was a member of Midgard's staff. The woman—Mica Stuart-san—was engaged in all sorts of explanations but I was paying no attention.

	My mind was occupied with thoughts about Nii-san... Mononobe Yuu.		My mind was occupied with thoughts about Nii-san... Mononobe Yuu.
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	"So you see it... Indeed, that island is Midgard. The self-governed educational institution created for Ds and existing for Ds."		"So you see it... Indeed, that island is Midgard. The self-governed educational institution created for Ds and existing for Ds."

	Looking at where I pointed, ~~Maika~~-san explained.		Looking at where I pointed, Mica-san explained.

	Finally... I can finally see you again... Nii-san!		Finally... I can finally see you again... Nii-san!
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	"—My name is Shinomiya Haruka. I am Midgard Academy's student ~~body~~ president and captain of the Counter-Dragon Squad."		"—My name is Shinomiya Haruka. I am Midgard Academy's student council president and captain of the Counter-Dragon Squad."

	After the ship reached the pier, a girl dressed in a primarily monochrome uniform greeted me.		After the ship reached the pier, a girl dressed in a primarily monochrome uniform greeted me.
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	Wow... So pretty.		Wow... So pretty.

	I could not help but stare in amazement, forgetting to answer her. Realizing that, ~~Maika~~-san responded on my behalf.		I could not help but stare in amazement, forgetting to answer her. Realizing that, Mica-san responded on my behalf.

	"She is Mononobe Mitsuki, thirteen, a D discovered in Japan. We will hold a full-school assembly to introduce her to the students tomorrow."		"She is Mononobe Mitsuki, thirteen, a D discovered in Japan. We will hold a full-school assembly to introduce her to the students tomorrow."
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	"Will she be assigned to Brynhildr Class?"		"Will she be assigned to Brynhildr Class?"

	Haruka-san asked in a lively voice and ~~Maika~~-san replied.		Haruka-san asked in a lively voice and Mica-san replied.

	"Yes, that is the plan. May I leave the rest to you?"		"Yes, that is the plan. May I leave the rest to you?"
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	"Even if you say that..."		"Even if you say that..."

	With a troubled expression, Haruka-san looked at ~~Maika~~-san.		With a troubled expression, Haruka-san looked at Mica-san.

	"I am not lying... When I outed myself as a D to NIFL, I also told them about Nii-san. Nii-san and I had fought against 'Blue' Hekatonkheir..."		"I am not lying... When I outed myself as a D to NIFL, I also told them about Nii-san. Nii-san and I had fought against 'Blue' Hekatonkheir..."

	Hearing that, ~~Maika~~-san's expression instantly changed in alarm.		Hearing that, Mica-san's expression instantly changed in alarm.

	"What—You were involved in the incident where Hekatonkheir vanished for a period of time?"		"What—You were involved in the incident where Hekatonkheir vanished for a period of time?"
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	"Yes. Nii-san had fought Hekatonkheir for my sake. Also... The people at NIFL were not surprised even when I brought this up. I got the feeling that they knew about Nii-san. That's why..."		"Yes. Nii-san had fought Hekatonkheir for my sake. Also... The people at NIFL were not surprised even when I brought this up. I got the feeling that they knew about Nii-san. That's why..."

	I had thought I would naturally get to see Nii-san once I was sent to Midgard. Because my mind was occupied by the wish to see Nii-san as soon as possible, I had even forgotten to confirm with ~~Maika~~-san.		I had thought I would naturally get to see Nii-san once I was sent to Midgard. Because my mind was occupied by the wish to see Nii-san as soon as possible, I had even forgotten to confirm with Mica-san.

	"You don't seem to be lying."		"You don't seem to be lying."

	~~Maika~~-san stared straight at me and murmured solemnly.		Mica-san stared straight at me and murmured solemnly.

	"But a male D... This is not something that can be believed so easily—"		"But a male D... This is not something that can be believed so easily—"
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	"Report to the principal?"		"Report to the principal?"

	Uneasily, I looked up at ~~Maika~~-san and Haruka-san who were talking among themselves over my head.		Uneasily, I looked up at Mica-san and Haruka-san who were talking among themselves over my head.

	What was the going on right now? And afterwards? I had no idea at all.		What was the going on right now? And afterwards? I had no idea at all.
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	"We still cannot believe you completely because there is no evidence. However, we are still on your side in spite of that. We will surely do everything we can so that you don't have to cry."		"We still cannot believe you completely because there is no evidence. However, we are still on your side in spite of that. We will surely do everything we can so that you don't have to cry."

	Haruka-san spoke with powerful words. At the same time, ~~Maika~~-san also spoke up.		Haruka-san spoke with powerful words. At the same time, Mica-san also spoke up.

	"She is your fellow D and will not betray you. This is what Midgard is about."		"She is your fellow D and will not betray you. This is what Midgard is about."
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	A gigantic clock tower that could be seen even from the pier.		A gigantic clock tower that could be seen even from the pier.

	~~Maika~~-san and Haruka-san were taking me up to the clock tower's top floor.		Mica-san and Haruka-san were taking me up to the clock tower's top floor.

	"—Charlotte-sama, this is ~~Maika~~."		"—Charlotte-sama, this is Mica."

	"Come on in."		"Come on in."
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	"Excuse me."		"Excuse me."

	~~Maika~~-san opened the door. Haruka-san and I followed her into the room.		Mica-san opened the door. Haruka-san and I followed her into the room.

	The principal's office was very spacious but a bit dark due to the drawn curtains. Sitting in front of an office desk at the back of the room was a petite blonde.		The principal's office was very spacious but a bit dark due to the drawn curtains. Sitting in front of an office desk at the back of the room was a petite blonde.
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	"U-Umm..."		"U-Umm..."

	I sensed danger from the principal who was smiling eerily. Immediately, ~~Maika~~-san used one hand to pick up the principal by her head.		I sensed danger from the principal who was smiling eerily. Immediately, Mica-san used one hand to pick up the principal by her head.

	"Charlotte-sama, please do not engage in sexual harassment. This task will be undertaken by Haruka-san who is in charge of providing guidance to students. There is no need for you to involve yourself."		"Charlotte-sama, please do not engage in sexual harassment. This task will be undertaken by Haruka-san who is in charge of providing guidance to students. There is no need for you to involve yourself."

	"Owwwwwwww!? U-Unhand me, ~~Maika~~! This isn't sexual harassment! I'm just showing care—"		"Owwwwwwww!? U-Unhand me, Mica! This isn't sexual harassment! I'm just showing care—"

	"In that case, why the malevolence in your grin...? Oh well, whatever. I shall let you off this time."		"In that case, why the malevolence in your grin...? Oh well, whatever. I shall let you off this time."

	~~Maika~~-san relaxed her hand and the principal fell on the floor on her bottom with a thud.		Mica-san relaxed her hand and the principal fell on the floor on her bottom with a thud.

	"Oooh... It's not everyday that I get to act lovey-dovey with a pure and innocent girl..."		"Oooh... It's not everyday that I get to act lovey-dovey with a pure and innocent girl..."
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	"Yes, she will give you the details."		"Yes, she will give you the details."

	Saying that, ~~Maika~~-san urged me with a motion of her gaze.		Saying that, Mica-san urged me with a motion of her gaze.

	She wanted me to tell the principal about Nii-san, I suppose? Perhaps someone with an important position like the principal might know something.		She wanted me to tell the principal about Nii-san, I suppose? Perhaps someone with an important position like the principal might know something.

Entropy at 22:38, 5 September 2015

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Belatkuro: /* Part 3 */

2015-09-05T08:43:39Z

Part 3

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	The clouds of gloom shrouding my vision seemed to disperse all at once. I thanked the principal.		The clouds of gloom shrouding my vision seemed to disperse all at once. I thanked the principal.

	"However, even after confirming his existence beyond doubt, it would be ~~veyr~~ difficult to get hold of concrete evidence to force NIFL to admit to concealing information. Getting him back would probably be even harder. A great deal of time and political power will be essential. I hope you will prepare yourself accordingly."		"However, even after confirming his existence beyond doubt, it would be very difficult to get hold of concrete evidence to force NIFL to admit to concealing information. Getting him back would probably be even harder. A great deal of time and political power will be essential. I hope you will prepare yourself accordingly."

	The principal advised me with a serious look on her face. She told me about the harsh difficulties in the situation in addition to my groundless wishful thinking.		The principal advised me with a serious look on her face. She told me about the harsh difficulties in the situation in addition to my groundless wishful thinking.

Belatkuro: /* Part 2 */

2015-09-05T08:42:16Z

Part 2

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	I could not help but stare in amazement, forgetting to answer her. Realizing that, Maika-san responded on my behalf.		I could not help but stare in amazement, forgetting to answer her. Realizing that, Maika-san responded on my behalf.

	"She is Mononobe Mitsuki, thirteen, a D discovered in Japan. We hold a full-school assembly to introduce her to the students tomorrow."		"She is Mononobe Mitsuki, thirteen, a D discovered in Japan. We will hold a full-school assembly to introduce her to the students tomorrow."

	"Will she be assigned to Brynhildr Class?"		"Will she be assigned to Brynhildr Class?"

Entropy at 00:25, 5 September 2015

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==Chapter 1 - Mononobe Mitsuki==

===Part 1===

A white trail was traced across the navy-blue ocean while a ship advanced along its way.

On this large ship that had never taken passengers before, there was no boisterous hustle and bustle nor the slightest rocking.

Because it was a military ship. Without decorations like those on passenger ships, the ship's gray-painted body was a bit intimidating.

The ship had no recreation facilities at all. To be honest, the multi-day journey was very boring.

However... Soon after...

With a strong sea breeze blowing, I stared in the direction where the ship was heading.

It was coming into sight presently. ''His'' location—the place where Nii-san was.

"—Midgard is protected by the Midgardsormr defense system. Although it is currently submerged out of sight, it will emerge from the water if anything happens, fulfilling its function as a physical line of defense."

Standing on the side was a member of Midgard's staff. The woman—Maika Stuart-san—was engaged in all sorts of explanations but I was paying no attention.

My mind was occupied with thoughts about Nii-san... Mononobe Yuu.

"To enter Midgard, one must pass through Bifrost, a predefined aerial and naval route. From here onwards, any deviations would cause one to be deemed an intruder by Midgardsormor and targeted for elimination."

"Eh, sure, oh no... Sorry, that came out wrong. S-So I see?"

I frantically changed my casual answer. Due to rarely having interactions with elders in my life so far, I was still unused to using polite forms in my speech.

I must pay attention to my language from now on, because I was going to be living with complete strangers at where I was heading for the first time.

The only exception would be Nii-san.

Taken into custody by NIFL, Nii-san should have started a life in Midgard.

I squinted to look for him. Next, a hazy outline of an island appeared on the horizon.

"Oh!"

I could not help but exclaim and point with my finger.

"So you see it... Indeed, that island is Midgard. The self-governed educational institution created for Ds and existing for Ds."

Looking at where I pointed, Maika-san explained.

Finally... I can finally see you again... Nii-san!

"Leave everything to me."

Nii-san's voice echoed in my ears. Engraved deeply in my mind, impossible to forget, those were the words Nii-san left behind when we parted.

A month earlier at Nanato City—our home, the town that stood along "Blue" Hekatonkheir's route of advance—had been on course for destruction in a dragon disaster.

However, just as Nii-san said, he took care of everything by himself.

Obliterating the "Undead" that my transmutation attacks had no effect on, Nii-san then turned in himself to NIFL which had become aware of a D's existence.

Thanks to that, Nanato City survived despite getting trampled and my identity as a D was not exposed.

Soon after, the evacuated residents returned to the town and resumed their daily lives as before.

However, this was not what I desired.

I had desperately guarded the town because it was the place where Nii-san and I were able to become "family." But now, my most precious Nii-san was no longer by my side.

Hence, I followed him. Nii-san might end up angry, but in spite of that, I still wish to meet him... I did not have the patience to wait until after the age of twenty when I would naturally lose my powers as a D.

...I did not want Nii-san to be snatched away by other girls.

To this date, all discovered Ds were female. In that case, Nii-san would be living in a place filled only with girls.

Attracted by other girls, he might forget our engagement promise.

Nii-san... Perhaps his heart had already strayed!?

With feelings of unease and anxiety, I waited for the ship to moor at the pier.

What I still did not know at the time was how optimistic these fears of mine were.

===Part 2===

===Part 3===

===Part 4===

===Part 5===

===Part 6===

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