Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 6 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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2015-11-28T22:15:31Z

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	"What kind of person was your mother like?"		"What kind of person was your mother like?"

	—Cheerful and bold, she often led my ~~cowardly~~ father around by the nose.		—Cheerful and bold, she often led my wimpy father around by the nose.

	Reading what she typed, I could only smile wryly.		Reading what she typed, I could only smile wryly.

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-08-10T14:24:15Z

Part 5

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	"Huh...?"		"Huh...?"

	"Yggdrasil can interfere with dark matter. You should know this since you fought it at Midgard, right? In other words, Yggdrasil is the ~~nemesis~~ of 'Black' Vritra—Mother."		"Yggdrasil can interfere with dark matter. You should know this since you fought it at Midgard, right? In other words, Yggdrasil is the natural predator of 'Black' Vritra—Mother."

	Kili had confessed to me in the past that she was a being created from Vritra's dark matter. Hence, what she said just now was meant literally.		Kili had confessed to me in the past that she was a being created from Vritra's dark matter. Hence, what she said just now was meant literally.
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	At the Principality of Erlia, Hraesvelgr chose Firill instead of Kili. Calling herself an "imitation," Kili looked quite heartbroken when she was not chosen... Right now, I could see her "in pain" slightly.		At the Principality of Erlia, Hraesvelgr chose Firill instead of Kili. Calling herself an "imitation," Kili looked quite heartbroken when she was not chosen... Right now, I could see her "in pain" slightly.

	"Because my link to Mother has been severed, altering my dragon mark again is impossible. Thus, I'm free. Prior to that, I've always acted according to Mother's orders. Finding a way to eliminate her ~~nemesis~~ Yggdrasil was also one of my assigned missions, so regarding strategies against Yggdrasil, I have an edge held by no other person."		"Because my link to Mother has been severed, altering my dragon mark again is impossible. Thus, I'm free. Prior to that, I've always acted according to Mother's orders. Finding a way to eliminate her natural predator, Yggdrasil, was also one of my assigned missions, so regarding strategies against Yggdrasil, I have an edge held by no other person."

	Kili spoke in fierce tone of voice and looked at me solemnly.		Kili spoke in fierce tone of voice and looked at me solemnly.

Entropy: point as in key point, not point in time;"for admiring the scenery" specifies which attractions

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point as in key point, not point in time;"for admiring the scenery" specifies which attractions

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	If there was any problem, it was probably that the ''self'' I ought to present honestly was already lost for the most part.		If there was any problem, it was probably that the ''self'' I ought to present honestly was already lost for the most part.

	Would Ren be willing to believe in such an ambiguous me...? I definitely had no confidence at this point.		Would Ren be willing to believe in such an ambiguous me...? I definitely had no confidence regarding this point.


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	This was an attraction named the "Castle of Mirrors." As suggested by its name, the castle's interior design consisted of mirrors covering the whole place. Entry seemed to be unrestricted with no staff at the entrance.		This was an attraction named the "Castle of Mirrors." As suggested by its name, the castle's interior design consisted of mirrors covering the whole place. Entry seemed to be unrestricted with no staff at the entrance.

	It was already close to nightfall. ~~People~~ were gathered at ~~the~~ attractions for admiring the scenery, ~~hence~~ the Castle of Mirrors was empty without anyone in sight.		It was already close to nightfall. Since people were gathered at attractions designed for admiring the scenery, the Castle of Mirrors was empty without anyone in sight.

	"Nii-san!"		"Nii-san!"

Deanimation at 07:58, 31 July 2015

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	At a luxury hotel located in the heart of the capital, Kili Surtr Muspelheim was looking coldly across the land from a window of a suite on the top floor.		At a luxury hotel located in the heart of the capital, Kili Surtr Muspelheim was looking coldly across the land from a window of a suite on the top floor.

	Inside a vast park near the hotel, two groups of demonstrators had been facing off since morning. This type of conflict between dragon cultists and dragon haters ~~were~~ commonplace recently.		Inside a vast park near the hotel, two groups of demonstrators had been facing off since morning. This type of conflict between dragon cultists and dragon haters was commonplace recently.

	"Whether worshiping dragons or hating dragons, you are clearly nothing more than humans..."		"Whether worshiping dragons or hating dragons, you are clearly nothing more than humans..."
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	"Y-Yeah."		"Y-Yeah."

	I did not really want to approach it but could not bring myself to act as killjoy, so I agreed in a stammer.		I did not really want to approach it but could not bring myself to act as a killjoy, so I agreed in a stammer.

	"Eh... Tia finds it scary."		"Eh... Tia finds it scary."
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	"This brings back memories."		"This brings back memories."

	"Indeed, it reminds my of childhood."		"Indeed, it reminds me of childhood."

	Mitsuki agreed with Iris. Having lost my memories, I could not remember, but I had probably gone to amusement parks with Mitsuki and our family many times in the past.		Mitsuki agreed with Iris. Having lost my memories, I could not remember, but I had probably gone to amusement parks with Mitsuki and our family many times in the past.
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	—I should first tell her about myself.		—I should first tell her about myself.

	Of course one would not carelessly talk about themselves to someone they did not trust. I must get Ren to know me first.		Of course, one would not carelessly talk about themselves to someone they did not trust. I must get Ren to know me first.

	I switched my mode of thinking and motivated myself.		I switched my mode of thinking and motivated myself.
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	If there was any problem, it was probably that the ''self'' I ought to present honestly was already lost for the most part.		If there was any problem, it was probably that the ''self'' I ought to present honestly was already lost for the most part.

	Would Ren be willing to believe in such an ambiguous me...? I definitely had no confidence on this point.		Would Ren be willing to believe in such an ambiguous me...? I definitely had no confidence at this point.


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	"What are you asking me to protect you from...?"		"What are you asking me to protect you from...?"

	It was not as if monsters would attack us directly. I could not help but sigh.		It was not as if the monsters would attack us directly. I could not help but sigh.

	Ren was expressionless so far, but she was gripping my sleeve quite forcefully. She seemed quite nervous inside.		Ren was expressionless so far, but she was gripping my sleeve quite forcefully. She seemed quite nervous inside.
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	"I'd like to hurry and master dark matter transfer too, but I think just as Lisa said, right now what we need is communication. So I'd be grateful if we could talk here some more."		"I'd like to hurry and master dark matter transfer too, but I think just as Lisa said, right now what we need is communication. So I'd be grateful if we could talk here some more."

	Our car was about reach the highest point of the Ferris wheel, so there was still time to talk.		Our car was about to reach the highest point of the Ferris wheel, so there was still time to talk.

	"...Mm."		"...Mm."
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	She refused the first time I asked, so it was probably something difficult to talk about.		She refused the first time I asked, so it was probably something difficult to talk about.

	But I could feel that it might be the first step to understanding Ren if this was reason that even Ariella did not know.		But I could feel that it might be the first step to understanding Ren if this was the reason that even Ariella did not know.

	Ren's expression instantly froze. Then she nodded and began typing on the terminal.		Ren's expression instantly froze. Then she nodded and began typing on the terminal.
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	"What... I-I am most certainly not jealous!"		"What... I-I am most certainly not jealous!"

	"Really? Then what's the problem? Even though she's calling him Onii-chan, it just an intimate way of addressing someone slightly older."		"Really? Then what's the problem? Even though she's calling him Onii-chan, it's just an intimate way of addressing someone slightly older."

	"I know that, but..."		"I know that, but..."
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	"Hold it right there!!"		"Hold it right there!!"

	What the heck—Who on earth...?'		What the heck—Who on earth...?

	Despite the questions filling my mind, I did not have the luxury to ponder. In any case, I had to rescue Tia.		Despite the questions filling my mind, I did not have the luxury to ponder. In any case, I had to rescue Tia.
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	This was an attraction named the "Castle of Mirrors." As suggested by its name, the castle's interior design consisted of mirrors covering the whole place. Entry seemed to be unrestricted with no staff at the entrance.		This was an attraction named the "Castle of Mirrors." As suggested by its name, the castle's interior design consisted of mirrors covering the whole place. Entry seemed to be unrestricted with no staff at the entrance.

	It was already close to nightfall. People were gathered at attractions for admiring the scenery, hence the Castle of Mirrors was empty without anyone in sight.		It was already close to nightfall. People were gathered at the attractions for admiring the scenery, hence the Castle of Mirrors was empty without anyone in sight.

	"Nii-san!"		"Nii-san!"
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	"Then can I go over?"		"Then can I go over?"

	"Yes. But rather, I will lead the way, because it's a maze inside."		"Yes. But rather, I will lead the way because it's a maze inside."

	John released his combat stance completely and walked deeper into the corridor.		John released his combat stance completely and walked deeper into the corridor.

Belatkuro at 14:04, 20 May 2015

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	Inside a vast park near the hotel, two groups of demonstrators had been facing off since morning. This type of conflict between dragon cultists and dragon haters were commonplace recently.		Inside a vast park near the hotel, two groups of demonstrators had been facing off since morning. This type of conflict between dragon cultists and dragon haters were commonplace recently.

	"Whether worshiping ~~dragon~~ or hating dragons, you are clearly nothing more than humans..."		"Whether worshiping dragons or hating dragons, you are clearly nothing more than humans..."

	Kili spoke with disdain from the bottom of her heart.		Kili spoke with disdain from the bottom of her heart.
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	"This is the amusement park!? It's awesome! Such a huge wheel!"		"This is the amusement park!? It's awesome! Such a huge wheel!"

	Seeing the gigantic ~~ferris~~ wheel visible from outside the park, Tia cried out in excitement.		Seeing the gigantic Ferris wheel visible from outside the park, Tia cried out in excitement.

	"Wow! This is my first time to such a huge amusement park!"		"Wow! This is my first time to such a huge amusement park!"
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	"To be honest, me too."		"To be honest, me too."

	Hearing me say that, ~~ren~~ looked up slightly to show a surprised expression.		Hearing me say that, Ren looked up slightly to show a surprised expression.

	"Because I've never had the experience of riding a Ferris wheel alone with a girl. Suddenly thrust into this date-like situation, I can't stay calm after all."		"Because I've never had the experience of riding a Ferris wheel alone with a girl. Suddenly thrust into this date-like situation, I can't stay calm after all."

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-05-20T09:59:13Z

Part 5

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	"I was scouted for my ''eyes'' that are superior to others, thus becoming a member of Sleipnir. In this space filled with mirrors, Captain, I can observe your movements from all directions. Simply through vision, I can gather several times more information than usual, which improves the accuracy of predictions."		"I was scouted for my ''eyes'' that are superior to others, thus becoming a member of Sleipnir. In this space filled with mirrors, Captain, I can observe your movements from all directions. Simply through vision, I can gather several times more information than usual, which improves the accuracy of predictions."

	"so that's why my attacks all missed."		"So that's why my attacks all missed."

	Hearing John's explanation, I sighed.		Hearing John's explanation, I sighed.

Entropy at 20:20, 26 April 2015

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	Japan was both the place where "Black" Vritra first appeared and also the country where the existence of Ds ~~were~~ first confirmed.		Japan was both the place where "Black" Vritra first appeared and also the country where the existence of Ds was first confirmed.

	Hence, Japan was akin to a pilgrimage destination for dragon worshipers.		Hence, Japan was akin to a pilgrimage destination for dragon worshipers.

Entropy at 22:36, 25 April 2015

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Entropy: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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	"Onii-chan...... Thank you."		"Onii-chan...... Thank you."
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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

Entropy: /* Part 4 */

2015-04-25T14:19:24Z

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