Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 8 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:14:49Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	Because not too long ago, she used to be a student at Midgard just like me.		Because not too long ago, she used to be a student at Midgard just like me.

	"—Shinomiya-sensei, you used to be the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's captain, right? I heard Mitsuki mention that everyone idolized you."		"—Shinomiya-sensei, you used to be the Dragon Subjugation Squad's captain, right? I heard Mitsuki mention that everyone idolized you."

	Shinomiya-sensei smiled wryly at my question.		Shinomiya-sensei smiled wryly at my question.
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	Like Mitsuki, she was shouldering a heavy cross due to Shinomiya Miyako's death.		Like Mitsuki, she was shouldering a heavy cross due to Shinomiya Miyako's death.

	During the Kraken battle two years ago, Shinomiya-sensei's younger sister, Miyako, had turned into a dragon and was killed by Mitsuki's own hand. And the one who had issued the order to attack was Shinomiya Haruka, the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad captain at the time.		During the Kraken battle two years ago, Shinomiya-sensei's younger sister, Miyako, had turned into a dragon and was killed by Mitsuki's own hand. And the one who had issued the order to attack was Shinomiya Haruka, the Dragon Subjugation Squad captain at the time.

	"Regret over that incident was what made me stay in Midgard even after losing my powers. The principal offered me a chance for atonement. That being said, even to this day, I still haven't been able to save anyone by my own power."		"Regret over that incident was what made me stay in Midgard even after losing my powers. The principal offered me a chance for atonement. That being said, even to this day, I still haven't been able to save anyone by my own power."
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	Regarding the arrival of Kraken Zwei—what could be considered her sister's daughter—She must feel equally shocked as Mitsuki. But even so, she did not forget her position as the commander.		Regarding the arrival of Kraken Zwei—what could be considered her sister's daughter—She must feel equally shocked as Mitsuki. But even so, she did not forget her position as the commander.

	Just like two years ago, she did not forsake her duties as captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad—		Just like two years ago, she did not forsake her duties as captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad—

	"...Thank you very much."		"...Thank you very much."

Entropy: note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

2015-09-27T07:34:40Z

note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

Belatkuro: /* Part 4 */

2015-08-26T02:10:01Z

Part 4

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	"I never thought I'd get to eat the Captain's own cooking..."		"I never thought I'd get to eat the Captain's own cooking..."

	John seemed inexplicably touched. Even ~~her~~ eyes were getting moist.		John seemed inexplicably touched. Even his eyes were getting moist.

	Everyone was at the dining table apart from Mitsuki.		Everyone was at the dining table apart from Mitsuki.
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	"The Kraken's child was very obedient. Oh, even though we couldn't understand each other in the beginning, throughout the dialogue process, she gradually started to comprehend what I was saying... She's really smart!"		"The Kraken's child was very obedient. Oh, even though we couldn't understand each other in the beginning, throughout the dialogue process, she gradually started to comprehend what I was saying... She's really smart!"

	John looked especially happy while ~~she~~ spoke.		John looked especially happy while he spoke.

	"Stop acting like an idiot parent showing off her child and get to the point."		"Stop acting like an idiot parent showing off her child and get to the point."
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	"Yes. Sleipnir launched a sudden attack while we were camping in the mountain. Reacting late because she was obeying me, the Kraken's child was open... I sacrificed myself to block the attack for her."		"Yes. Sleipnir launched a sudden attack while we were camping in the mountain. Reacting late because she was obeying me, the Kraken's child was open... I sacrificed myself to block the attack for her."

	John touched ~~her~~ chest after saying that.		John touched his chest after saying that.

	"I definitely suffered a mortal wound at the time. In my fading consciousness, I saw the child in anger—I was already on a bed when I woke up. Kili should know better what happened during that time."		"I definitely suffered a mortal wound at the time. In my fading consciousness, I saw the child in anger—I was already on a bed when I woke up. Kili should know better what happened during that time."
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	"Wait! It's too early to decide that. Just let me meet that child and confirm with her. Before that, I hope you won't jump to conclusions first. That child is no dragon... She's human."		"Wait! It's too early to decide that. Just let me meet that child and confirm with her. Before that, I hope you won't jump to conclusions first. That child is no dragon... She's human."

	John stood up with a screech of ~~her~~ chair, insisting in a strong tone of voice.		John stood up with a screech of his chair, insisting in a strong tone of voice.

	"—Personally I feel the same. I hope that child... I hope Miyako's daughter is human. However, we cannot release her so simply given how difficult it was to imprison her. Let us add this proposal to one of our countermeasure options when we take action in the future."		"—Personally I feel the same. I hope that child... I hope Miyako's daughter is human. However, we cannot release her so simply given how difficult it was to imprison her. Let us add this proposal to one of our countermeasure options when we take action in the future."

Belatkuro: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	"Are you okay?"		"Are you okay?"

	Smiling wryly, I extended my hand to her."		Smiling wryly, I extended my hand to her.

	"T-Thank you..."		"T-Thank you..."

Entropy: /* Part 4 */

2015-08-14T07:45:53Z

Part 4

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	Seeing me nod, Shinomiya-sensei resumed her meal.		Seeing me nod, Shinomiya-sensei resumed her meal.

	~~Considerate of~~ other people's family, her face looked so gentle from the side.		Showing consideration for other people's family, her face looked so gentle from the side.

	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

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2015-08-14T07:45:07Z

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2015-08-14T04:54:15Z

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Entropy: /* Part 3 */

2015-08-11T10:42:30Z

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	The sense of despair when I saw Mitsuki collapse to the ground—		The sense of despair when I saw Mitsuki collapse to the ground—

	I did not want to experience ~~that a second time~~.		That was something I did not want to experience ever again.

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Entropy: /* Part 2 */

2015-08-10T01:58:20Z

Part 2

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

			"—Hmm, I see. Got it."

			This was the fortified island of Midgard in the sea far south of Japan.

			Located at the top floor of the academy's clock tower in the center of the island was her—Charlotte B. Lord's—office.

			A petite figure not too different from a teenager's, a young face, matched with long blonde hair and blue eyes, she looked like a fairy living in the clock tower.

			However, she was Midgard's chief administrator as well as the academy's principal.

			Reclining securely against the large executive chair, she exuded solemnity as befitted a leader.

			"Leave it to me, Haruka. I am humanity's sovereign crowned with the name of 'Gray.' Let me rescue you and the students from your predicament by invoking the authority I inherited from my father."

			Ending her call with Shinomiya Haruka, the girl put down the receiver and turned her gaze to the woman standing by on the side.

			The tall woman, dressed in a maid uniform, was showing a somewhat grave expression.

			"Maika—I know what you wish to say but this is an emergency. My lovely maidens are facing a crisis. If I don't use my power now, when else!?"

			Seeing Charlotte insiste fervently, the secretary—Maika Stuart—emitted a deep sigh.

			"Charlotte-sama, regardless, I must correct you first. They are not yours. Moreover, I believe there is a huge problem regarding the use of authority."

			"Problem?"

			"Charlotte-sama, NIFL is in the process of eliminating your influence completely. There are no 'contractors' within the organization who can be controlled using your authority. During the Leviathan battle, we were unable to stop the invasion mounted by NIFL's forces."

			Maika explained in a calm tone of voice, but Charlotte grinned fearlessly.

			"I know that, but think carefully about it. That situation was different from now. If direct interference is out of the question, we'll just have to mount an offense from the top and the surroundings."

			"The top and the surroundings—namely, Asgard and influential figures in Japan?"

			Maika asked after thinking briefly.

			"Indeed, list out the people who have made ''deals'' with us."

			"As you wish."

			Glancing at Maika as she took out a portable terminal and started operating it, Charlotte then looked up at the ceiling.

			"—That being said, indirect methods have their limits. Things would be fine if Kraken Zwei kept still and stayed sealed at the bottom of the hole... But we'll have to dispose of her if she starts to move. However, the marked Ds cannot be sent to the frontline under those circumstances..."

			Although they had failed to defeat Kraken Zwei, at least they managed to dig out a giant hole using Catastrophe, then plug its opening using mithril, thereby sealing Kraken Zwei inside.

			But in the event that Kraken Zwei broke out of the opening, all Ds would turn into uncertain factors that could become dragons.

			"No... To assert that all Ds will end up this way would be jumping to conclusions. Perhaps my friend might be the exception—"

			Recalling the image of the only young man she acknowledged as her friend, Charlotte murmured.

			If the report were true, his dragon mark was supposed to change color sooner or later, but she was pondering the possibility he might be the sole exception.

			Charlotte did not think this just because he was a man.

			Due to Kraken Zwei appearing as a girl, one might reason that being male, he would be even more suitable as a mate instead.

			But ever since she came to know of his existence... Charlotte had always harbored doubts.

			Ds were beings supposed to be all females... Yet he was the sole man among them.

			Was he truly a D?

			A dragon's power—an ability that Charlotte's father had called an authority—was inheritable.

			Just as Mitsuki had obtained the power to create the Kraken's antimatter and Charlotte had inherited her father's title and ability, so-called authorities were abilities that did not rely on congenital aptitude.

			Then having acquired Leviathan and Hraesvelgr's powers, had Mononobe Yuu received the power to generate dark matter under certain serendipitous circumstances?

			It was merely speculation.

			However, the answer might be coming to light very soon.

			If he did not end up marked by a dragon, it could prove that he was not a D by birth.

			"But by this point, it doesn't really matter what he is."

			Charlotte smiled wryly and reached for the chessboard on her office desk.

			"From my standpoint, I'm happy enough as long as we can have fun together again. Hence—Don't you die on me."

			Using her fingertip, Charlotte flicked a knight piece towards her friend afar.

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	The tall woman, dressed in a maid uniform, was showing a somewhat grave expression.		The tall woman, dressed in a maid uniform, was showing a somewhat grave expression.

	"~~Maika—I~~ know what you wish to say but this is an emergency. My lovely maidens are facing a crisis. If I don't use my power now, when else!?"		"Mica—I know what you wish to say but this is an emergency. My lovely maidens are facing a crisis. If I don't use my power now, when else!?"

	Seeing Charlotte insiste fervently, the ~~secretary—Maika~~ Stuart—emitted a deep sigh.		Seeing Charlotte insiste fervently, the secretary—Mica Stuart—emitted a deep sigh.

	"Charlotte-sama, regardless, I must correct you first. They are not yours. Moreover, I believe there is a huge problem regarding the use of authority."		"Charlotte-sama, regardless, I must correct you first. They are not yours. Moreover, I believe there is a huge problem regarding the use of authority."
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	"Charlotte-sama, NIFL is in the process of eliminating your influence completely. There are no 'contractors' within the organization who can be controlled using your authority. During the Leviathan battle, we were unable to stop the invasion mounted by NIFL's forces."		"Charlotte-sama, NIFL is in the process of eliminating your influence completely. There are no 'contractors' within the organization who can be controlled using your authority. During the Leviathan battle, we were unable to stop the invasion mounted by NIFL's forces."

	~~Maika~~ explained in a calm tone of voice, but Charlotte grinned fearlessly.		Mica explained in a calm tone of voice, but Charlotte grinned fearlessly.

	"I know that, but think carefully about it. That situation was different from now. If direct interference is out of the question, we'll just have to mount an offense from the top and the surroundings."		"I know that, but think carefully about it. That situation was different from now. If direct interference is out of the question, we'll just have to mount an offense from the top and the surroundings."
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	"The top and the surroundings—namely, Asgard and influential figures in Japan?"		"The top and the surroundings—namely, Asgard and influential figures in Japan?"

	~~Maika~~ asked after thinking briefly.		Mica asked after thinking briefly.

	"Indeed, list out the people who have made ''deals'' with us."		"Indeed, list out the people who have made ''deals'' with us."
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	"As you wish."		"As you wish."

	Glancing at ~~Maika~~ as she took out a portable terminal and started operating it, Charlotte then looked up at the ceiling.		Glancing at MIca as she took out a portable terminal and started operating it, Charlotte then looked up at the ceiling.

	"—That being said, indirect methods have their limits. Things would be fine if Kraken Zwei kept still and stayed sealed at the bottom of the hole... But we'll have to dispose of her if she starts to move. However, the marked Ds cannot be sent to the frontline under those circumstances..."		"—That being said, indirect methods have their limits. Things would be fine if Kraken Zwei kept still and stayed sealed at the bottom of the hole... But we'll have to dispose of her if she starts to move. However, the marked Ds cannot be sent to the frontline under those circumstances..."