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		<title>Magykalman: /* &quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&quot; part of my comment */</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-16T12:03:21Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;&amp;quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&amp;quot; part of my comment&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Nothing against you, I think that you&amp;#039;re an adequate translator in my opinion. A couple things that you could consider improving upon is the use of articles, recognition of nuances, when use or when not to use punctuations, and proofreading your work; relative to the work you&amp;#039;re translating/translated (since editors, most if not all of the time, make edits based on grammar fundamentals rather than original work). Recognition of nuances comes with reading what you&amp;#039;re about to translate at least twice. The ongoing debate of Nuance vs Grammar is a pain in the a**; and it will always be. -Conanbdetective&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Nothing against you, I think that you&amp;#039;re an adequate translator in my opinion. A couple things that you could consider improving upon is the use of articles, recognition of nuances, when use or when not to use punctuations, and proofreading your work; relative to the work you&amp;#039;re translating/translated (since editors, most if not all of the time, make edits based on grammar fundamentals rather than original work). Recognition of nuances comes with reading what you&amp;#039;re about to translate at least twice. The ongoing debate of Nuance vs Grammar is a pain in the a**; and it will always be. -Conanbdetective&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Hi then I am sorry if I misunderstood the comment. I want to at least finish the final chapter for (I hope)the existing Sakurasou fans, so I decided to take some more (cocaine)and translate it. Thank you for your advice and I shall take it to heart. I understand what you mean, naunce vs grammar in sense that it is a pain, and can never be solved. Again, sorry for misunderstanding, and thank you for editing my crappy work. --[[user:Magykalman||Magykalman]]&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;

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		<title>Conanbdetective: /* &quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&quot; part of my comment */ new section</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-16T09:08:23Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;&amp;quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&amp;quot; part of my comment: &lt;/span&gt; new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Erm, hi. Magykalman here. Recently I was either pretty high at the party or smoked weed, I decided to (re)start translating Sakurasou. Thank you for the edit but may I ask what this &amp;quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&amp;quot; means? If I am not good enough you can always help us to translate, or tell me the reason why I&amp;#039;m so horrible (which I admit) at translating so that I can improve. Maybe? Thank you for your time. --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]]&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Erm, hi. Magykalman here. Recently I was either pretty high at the party or smoked weed, I decided to (re)start translating Sakurasou. Thank you for the edit but may I ask what this &amp;quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&amp;quot; means? If I am not good enough you can always help us to translate, or tell me the reason why I&amp;#039;m so horrible (which I admit) at translating so that I can improve. Maybe? Thank you for your time. --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]]&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;== &quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&quot; part of my comment ==&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;That comment was for the edit that I&#039;ve made. I felt like I made a mistake in my edit even though, grammatically, I knew I didn&#039;t. There are also some things I didn&#039;t touch for I felt that correcting how it&#039;s written (thinking that you translated it as you&#039;ve read it) would kill how the atmosphere was set by Kamoshida-sensei.&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Nothing against you, I think that you&#039;re an adequate translator in my opinion. A couple things that you could consider improving upon is the use of articles, recognition of nuances, when use or when not to use punctuations, and proofreading your work; relative to the work you&#039;re translating/translated (since editors, most if not all of the time, make edits based on grammar fundamentals rather than original work). Recognition of nuances comes with reading what you&#039;re about to translate at least twice. The ongoing debate of Nuance vs Grammar is a pain in the a**; and it will always be. -Conanbdetective&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;

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		<title>Magykalman: a</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-15T01:49:36Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;a&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;==&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Sakurasou&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;==&lt;br /&gt;
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Erm, hi. Magykalman here. Recently I was either pretty high at the party or smoked weed, I decided to (re)start translating Sakurasou. Thank you for the edit but may I ask what this &amp;quot;Leaves a lot to be desired.&amp;quot; means? If I am not good enough you can always help us to translate, or tell me the reason why I&amp;#039;m so horrible (which I admit) at translating so that I can improve. Maybe? Thank you for your time. --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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