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		<title>83.227.250.155 at 02:48, 22 August 2011</title>
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		<updated>2011-08-22T02:48:40Z</updated>

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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Translator here. Looks fine to me, too. But I beg to differ on not being too aggressive: a translator should be as transparent as possible IMO. So feel free to change any passages that flow poorly or have mistakes in them. For an example, [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tabi_ni_Deyou%3ADream&amp;amp;action=historysubmit&amp;amp;diff=107354&amp;amp;oldid=107340 that&amp;#039;s how I personally love my edits], since it sounds English and I can brush up my own use of English and translating by comparing with my original translation, but that&amp;#039;s just me. And, for that matter, it also depends on what kind of story we&amp;#039;re talking about. [[User:EusthEnoptEron|EusthEnoptEron]] 15:48, 21 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Translator here. Looks fine to me, too. But I beg to differ on not being too aggressive: a translator should be as transparent as possible IMO. So feel free to change any passages that flow poorly or have mistakes in them. For an example, [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tabi_ni_Deyou%3ADream&amp;amp;action=historysubmit&amp;amp;diff=107354&amp;amp;oldid=107340 that&amp;#039;s how I personally love my edits], since it sounds English and I can brush up my own use of English and translating by comparing with my original translation, but that&amp;#039;s just me. And, for that matter, it also depends on what kind of story we&amp;#039;re talking about. [[User:EusthEnoptEron|EusthEnoptEron]] 15:48, 21 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;I&#039;d like to clarify that I believe that flow should almost always be highest priority. What I meant to warn against was losing the inherent quirkiness. Feeling&amp;gt;flow&amp;gt;grammar imo. Not that I don&#039;t believe that is what everyone does - just pointing it out in case. ~novium&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;

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		<title>EusthEnoptEron at 20:48, 21 August 2011</title>
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		<updated>2011-08-21T20:48:16Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-lineno&quot; id=&quot;mw-diff-left-l4&quot;&gt;Line 4:&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Great creds to you however! Please keep up the good work.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Great creds to you however! Please keep up the good work.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[Special:Contributions/83.227.250.155|83.227.250.155]] 10:10, 21 August 2011 (CDT)(novium, on an iPhone way out in the boonies)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[Special:Contributions/83.227.250.155|83.227.250.155]] 10:10, 21 August 2011 (CDT)(novium, on an iPhone way out in the boonies)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Translator here. Looks fine to me, too. But I beg to differ on not being too aggressive: a translator should be as transparent as possible IMO. So feel free to change any passages that flow poorly or have mistakes in them. For an example, [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tabi_ni_Deyou%3ADream&amp;amp;action=historysubmit&amp;amp;diff=107354&amp;amp;oldid=107340 that&#039;s how I personally love my edits], since it sounds English and I can brush up my own use of English and translating by comparing with my original translation, but that&#039;s just me. And, for that matter, it also depends on what kind of story we&#039;re talking about. [[User:EusthEnoptEron|EusthEnoptEron]] 15:48, 21 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<title>83.227.250.155: Created page with &quot;All changes seem proper to me.  Take care not to change too much however, I for one feel that some &#039;misses &quot;reflect the flavor of the written style&quot;. Hope you can relate to this ...&quot;</title>
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		<updated>2011-08-21T15:10:22Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;All changes seem proper to me.  Take care not to change too much however, I for one feel that some &amp;#039;misses &amp;quot;reflect the flavor of the written style&amp;quot;. Hope you can relate to this ...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;All changes seem proper to me. &lt;br /&gt;
Take care not to change too much however, I for one feel that some &amp;#039;misses &amp;quot;reflect the flavor of the written style&amp;quot;.&lt;br /&gt;
Hope you can relate to this even as a native speaker.&lt;br /&gt;
Great creds to you however! Please keep up the good work.&lt;br /&gt;
--[[Special:Contributions/83.227.250.155|83.227.250.155]] 10:10, 21 August 2011 (CDT)(novium, on an iPhone way out in the boonies)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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