White Album 2/Script/2007 - Revision history

Frogstat at 23:04, 28 December 2021

2021-12-28T23:04:30Z

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	\|113\|春希\|Haruki		\|113\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「もうちょっと表現を抑えるか」		\|「もうちょっと表現を抑えるか」
	\|"I guess I should ~~reign~~ it in a little."		\|"I guess I should rein it in a little."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|28\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|28\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「足しびれた～。駄目だ正座は。<br>春希～、テーブルと椅子買おうよ。<br>明日見に行かない？」		\|「足しびれた～。駄目だ正座は。<br>春希～、テーブルと椅子買おうよ。<br>明日見に行かない？」
	\|"Aah, my legs are so numb... I hate sitting so formally like this. ~~Harukiii~~... Let's go buy a new table and some chairs. Wanna to go take a look tomorrow?"		\|"Aah, my legs are so numb... I hate sitting so formally like this. Haruki... Let's go buy a new table and some chairs. Wanna go take a look tomorrow?"
	\|Proper term here for how she's supposedly sitting is the traditional "Seiza"}}		\|Proper term here for how she's supposedly sitting is the traditional "Seiza"}}

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	\|33\|春希\|Haruki		\|33\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「あと、そうやって俺の部屋に<br>自分の存在を確立させようとするな。<br>お前が来ていいのはあくまでレポートが終わるまでだ」		\|「あと、そうやって俺の部屋に<br>自分の存在を確立させようとするな。<br>お前が来ていいのはあくまでレポートが終わるまでだ」
	\|"Also, don't just establish yourself as a member of this household like that. At ~~the very most~~, you're only allowed here until the report's done."		\|"Also, don't just establish yourself as a member of this household like that. At best, you're only allowed here until the report's done."
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	\|足がしびれたとか言ってるくせに、<br>この女はベッドの上でそのおみ足をバタバタ暴れさせる。		\|足がしびれたとか言ってるくせに、<br>この女はベッドの上でそのおみ足をバタバタ暴れさせる。
	\|This girl just told me not one minute ago that her legs were numb, and yet now she's making a huge fuss kicking her feet around on my bed.		\|This girl just told me not one minute ago that her legs were numb, and yet now she's making a huge fuss kicking her feet around on my bed.
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	\|だってこいつは…こいつらは、知らないんだ。<br>俺が本当は、どんなことをしでかしてしまったのかを。		\|だってこいつは…こいつらは、知らないんだ。<br>俺が本当は、どんなことをしでかしてしまったのかを。
	\|Because he... ~~Because~~ neither of them know. <br>Neither of them know the true severity of what I've done.		\|Because he... no, neither of them really know. <br>Neither of them know the true severity of what I've done.
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	\|388\|武也\|Takeya		\|388\|武也\|Takeya
	\|「彼女さ、今週の土曜、<br>医学部の男連中とのパーティに出るんだとさ。<br>主催の奴ら、さっきからもうこの話で持ちきりで」		\|「彼女さ、今週の土曜、<br>医学部の男連中とのパーティに出るんだとさ。<br>主催の奴ら、さっきからもうこの話で持ちきりで」
	\|"This Saturday, she's going to a party with the guys from the medical department. ~~<br>~~The party ~~managers~~ just let the word out."		\|"This Saturday, she's going to a party with the guys from the medical department. The party organizers just let the word out."
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	\|389\|春希\|Haruki		\|389\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「パーティくらい普通だろ？<br>何慌ててんだよ？　自分が行けないからか？」		\|「パーティくらい普通だろ？<br>何慌ててんだよ？　自分が行けないからか？」
	\|"What's wrong with going to a party? <br>Why do you look so worried? You didn't get an invitation, ~~or something~~?"		\|"What's wrong with going to a party? <br>Why do you look so worried? You didn't get an invitation, is that it?"
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	\|86\|春希\|Haruki		\|86\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…今日に限って女の格好してんだよ！<br>さっきから見えてんだよ！」		\|「…今日に限って女の格好してんだよ！<br>さっきから見えてんだよ！」
	\|"...Why did you choose to dress so feminine today of all days?!? <br>I saw them just now, you know!?"		\|"...Why did you choose to dress so feminine today of all days!? <br>I saw them just now, you know!?"
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	\|350\|春希\|Haruki		\|350\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「本当に何も言ってない。<br>それどころかここ一週間話してもいない。<br>…少なくとも俺は」		\|「本当に何も言ってない。<br>それどころかここ一週間話してもいない。<br>…少なくとも俺は」
	\|"I really didn't say anything. <br>We haven't even contacted each other in over a week. <br>... At least I haven't."		\|"I really didn't say anything. <br>We haven't even contacted each other in over a week. <br>...At least I haven't."
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	\|86\|春希\|Haruki		\|86\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…今日に限って女の格好してんだよ！<br>さっきから見えてんだよ！」		\|「…今日に限って女の格好してんだよ！<br>さっきから見えてんだよ！」
	\|"...Why did you ~~suddenly decide~~ to dress so ~~shamelessly~~ today!? <br>I saw it just now, you know!?"		\|"...Why did you choose to dress so feminine today of all days?!? <br>I saw them just now, you know!?"
	\|~~Is a camisole and miniskirt "womanly"? Girly? Feminine? // How about "shamelessly"? All of those are kind of tough to fit in.~~}}		\|}}

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	\|87\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|87\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「え～、なに～？<br>女じゃない奴の生足とかぱんつとか見て嬉しいわけ？<br>あはははは、あっはははは～」		\|「え～、なに～？<br>女じゃない奴の生足とかぱんつとか見て嬉しいわけ？<br>あはははは、あっはははは～」
	\|"Eeeh, what ~~noow~~? ~~Are~~ you ~~that happy to see~~ the bare legs and ~~lingerie~~ of a ~~non-female or something~~? Ahaha, ahahaha～!"		\|"Eeeh, what now? Don't tell me you're getting all excited because you saw the bare legs and panties of someone you don't even think of as a girl? Ahaha, ahahaha～!"
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Phirb: line 165 - em dash punctuation

2018-02-17T05:34:13Z

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	\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。		\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。
	\|I experience the feel of her ~~body – which~~ I could only guess up until ~~now – for~~ the very first time.		\|I experience the feel of her body–which I could only guess up until now–for the very first time.
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Phirb: line 165 - changed hyphens to em dashes

2018-02-15T05:08:11Z

line 165 - changed hyphens to em dashes

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	\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。		\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。
	\|I experience the feel of her body - which I could only guess up until now - for the very first time.		\|I experience the feel of her body – which I could only guess up until now – for the very first time.
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

2018-02-08T18:19:06Z

Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

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	== Editing ==		== Editing ==

			*[[User:Phirb\|Phirb]]

	== Translation Notes ==		== Translation Notes ==

	*[[User:Phirb\|Phirb]]

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	\|こ、こいつ…		\|こ、こいつ…
	\|Th-~~this~~ girl...		\|Th-This girl...
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	\|223\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|223\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「あ、あ、あの…<br>この電話、その、えっと、だから…」		\|「あ、あ、あの…<br>この電話、その、えっと、だから…」
	\|"U-um, well... <br>This number is, um, I mean..."		\|"U-Um, well... <br>This number is, um, I mean..."
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	\|225\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|225\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「う、ううん、違う…<br>ここだけは間違えるわけない…」		\|「う、ううん、違う…<br>ここだけは間違えるわけない…」
	\|"N-no, that's not it... <br>There's no way I could mix up this number."		\|"N-No, that's not it... <br>There's no way I could mix up this number."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|231\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|231\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「っ…な、なんでもないです。<br>起こしてしまって本当にごめんなさい。<br>それじゃ、失礼します」		\|「っ…な、なんでもないです。<br>起こしてしまって本当にごめんなさい。<br>それじゃ、失礼します」
	\|"N-no, nothing at all. <br>I'm sorry for waking you up. <br>Good bye."		\|"N-No, nothing at all. <br>I'm sorry for waking you up. <br>Good bye."
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: put back hyphens

2017-12-25T18:17:33Z

put back hyphens

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	\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。		\|今まで知識としてだけで、<br>体験として知らなかったこいつの身体を感じてしまう。
	\|I experience the feel of her ~~body—which~~ I could only guess up until ~~now—for~~ the very first time.		\|I experience the feel of her body - which I could only guess up until now - for the very first time.
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Phirb at 06:18, 25 December 2017

2017-12-25T06:18:30Z

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			*[[User:Phirb\|Phirb]]

	== Text ==		== Text ==