White Album 2/Script/2023 - Revision history

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	\|「杉浦の計略で無理やりな」		\|「杉浦の計略で無理やりな」
	\|"I'm talking about the scheme you set up, ~~Suigura~~."		\|"I'm talking about the scheme you set up, Sugiura."
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	\|仕事が忙しい最中、<br>けれど一度お節介モードに入ってしまった杉浦が、<br>どちらかを切り捨てられるはずもなく。		\|仕事が忙しい最中、<br>けれど一度お節介モードに入ってしまった杉浦が、<br>どちらかを切り捨てられるはずもなく。
	\|Even amidst being busy at work, ~~Suguira~~, who had entered her usual meddlesome state of mind, refuses to abandon either of the two responsibilities.		\|Even amidst being busy at work, Sugiura, who had entered her usual meddlesome state of mind, refuses to abandon either of the two responsibilities.
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	\|予想以上の杉浦の俺への味方ぶりに、<br>ちょっとだけ反抗的な態度を取ってしまう。		\|予想以上の杉浦の俺への味方ぶりに、<br>ちょっとだけ反抗的な態度を取ってしまう。
	\|In response to ~~Suguira~~ unexpectedly siding with me, I take a slightly more defiant stance against her.		\|In response to Sugiura unexpectedly siding with me, I take a slightly more defiant stance against her.
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	\|72\|小春\|Koharu		\|72\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「...早く反論してください。<br>わたしだって忙しいんですから」		\|「...早く反論してください。<br>わたしだって忙しいんですから」
	\|"...~~Hurry~~ up and refute me. I'm busy too."		\|"...Please hurry up and refute me. I'm busy too."
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	\|ただ、杉浦に捕まった時点で、<br>本来はこのリハビリは諦めるべきだった。		\|ただ、杉浦に捕まった時点で、<br>本来はこのリハビリは諦めるべきだった。
	\|It's just that ~~the~~ original intent was to give up on it once Sugiura caught up to me.		\|It's just that my original intent was to give up on this little bit of rehabilitation once Sugiura caught up to me.
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	\|ただ、杉浦に捕まった時点で、<br>本来はこのリハビリは諦めるべきだった。		\|ただ、杉浦に捕まった時点で、<br>本来はこのリハビリは諦めるべきだった。
	\|It's just that ~~Suguira's intervals of catching me during work are making me feel like I want~~ to give up on it.		\|It's just that the original intent was to give up on it once Sugiura caught up to me.
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	\|「俺が逃げるとか逃げない以前に、<br>俺のつけた傷は、もう治りようがないくらい悪化してた」		\|「俺が逃げるとか逃げない以前に、<br>俺のつけた傷は、もう治りようがないくらい悪化してた」
	\|"The wound I've inflicted has worsened to the point of where it could no longer be cured before I could decide if I should run away or not."		\|"The wound I've inflicted has worsened to the point where it could no longer be cured before I could decide if I should run away or not."
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	\|正確には、その横顔の後ろにある小さな耳が。		\|正確には、その横顔の後ろにある小さな耳が。
	\|To be exact~~, her right ear~~.		\|Her right ear, to be exact.
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2018-05-29T16:38:33Z

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	\|「杉浦の計略で無理やりな」		\|「杉浦の計略で無理やりな」
	\|"~~Well,~~ you ~~schemed it all~~ up, Suigura."		\|"I'm talking about the scheme you set up, Suigura."
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	\|「俺が逃げるとか逃げない以前に、<br>俺のつけた傷は、もう治りようがないくらい悪化してた」		\|「俺が逃げるとか逃げない以前に、<br>俺のつけた傷は、もう治りようがないくらい悪化してた」
	\|"The wound I've inflicted has worsened to the point of no ~~cure~~ before I could decide if I should run away or not."		\|"The wound I've inflicted has worsened to the point of where it could no longer be cured before I could decide if I should run away or not."
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NaokiP at 16:29, 29 May 2018

2018-05-29T16:29:42Z

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	\|大事な教え子の親友で、<br>バイト先の同僚で。		\|大事な教え子の親友で、<br>バイト先の同僚で。
	\|The good friend of an important former student of mine, who's also as a colleague from work.		\|The good friend of an important former student of mine, who's also a colleague from work.
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NaokiP at 16:26, 29 May 2018

2018-05-29T16:26:37Z

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	\|「人の名前をそんなリズミカルに呼ばないでください。<br>からかってるんですか？」		\|「人の名前をそんなリズミカルに呼ばないでください。<br>からかってるんですか？」
	\|"And please don't ~~address others' names~~ in such a rhythmical way... are you making fun of me?"		\|"And please don't pronounce my name in such a rhythmical way... are you making fun of me?"
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	\|20\|春希\|Haruki		\|20\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いや...そんなつもりは」		\|「い、いや...そんなつもりは」
	\|"N-No... It wasn't my intention..."		\|"N-No... It really wasn't my intention..."
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	\|先週のバイトの時に埋められていた外堀の、<br>現場監督がそこにいた...		\|先週のバイトの時に埋められていた外堀の、<br>現場監督がそこにいた...
	\|The ~~foreman~~ who had directed the moat around my schedule last week to be filled in ~~was~~ right here...		\|The architect who had directed the moat around my schedule last week to be filled in is right here...
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	\|57\|春希\|Haruki		\|57\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「......そんなの決まってるだろ。<br>俺と相手の問題だよ」		\|「......そんなの決まってるだろ。<br>俺と相手の問題だよ」
	\|"...Isn't it obvious? It's a problem ~~that's~~ between me and her."		\|"...Isn't it obvious? It's a problem between me and her."
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	\|60\|小春\|Koharu		\|60\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「いつまでそんな昔のこと引きずってるんです？<br>いい加減頑張って乗り越えないと...」		\|「いつまでそんな昔のこと引きずってるんです？<br>いい加減頑張って乗り越えないと...」
	\|"How long do you plan to drag the past with you? <br>If you don't work harder to overcome this obstacle..."		\|"How long do you plan to drag the past along with you? <br>If you don't work harder to overcome this obstacle..."
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	\|「ほら、１番テーブルから呼び出しかかったぞ。<br>ついでにチーズハンバーグ。１２番テーブル」		\|「ほら、１番テーブルから呼び出しかかったぞ。<br>ついでにチーズハンバーグ。１２番テーブル」
	\|"Look, table 1 is calling for service. <br>~~While~~ you're at it, ~~there's~~ this cheese hamburger. Table 12."		\|"Look, table 1 is calling for service. <br>And while you're at it, take this cheese hamburger. Table 12."
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	\|「だから悪かったって。<br>今度杉浦がここに来たらちゃんと注意するから」		\|「だから悪かったって。<br>今度杉浦がここに来たらちゃんと注意するから」
	\|"Look, I ~~apologise~~, alright? I'll remind Sugiura to be careful the next time she arrives."		\|"Look, I apologize, alright? I'll remind Sugiura to be careful the next time she arrives."
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	\|「今さら謝っただけで償えるなんてさ、<br>なんて虫のいいこと考えてたんだろうな、俺」		\|「今さら謝っただけで償えるなんてさ、<br>なんて虫のいいこと考えてたんだろうな、俺」
	\|"~~To think~~ that I could wash away my sins just by apologizing at this point... I'm so selfish to have thought about it that way, ~~aren~~'t I?"		\|"Believing that I could wash away my sins just by apologizing at this point... I was so incredibly selfish to have thought about it that way, wasn't I?"
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	\|「今まで人を責めたことなんかなかった雪菜だからこそ、<br>絶対に『心にもあること』なんだってわかっちゃってさ」		\|「今まで人を責めたことなんかなかった雪菜だからこそ、<br>絶対に『心にもあること』なんだってわかっちゃってさ」
	\|"It's because Setsuna's never blamed anyone up until now that I just know that ~~are~~ things ~~tucked~~ within her heart now."		\|"It's because Setsuna's never blamed anyone up until now that I just know that she's keeping things buried deep within her heart now."
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	\|「それは自業自得だし」		\|「それは自業自得だし」
	~~\|"Simply consequences brought about by my own hand."~~		\|"I'm just reaping what I've sowed, then."
	\|"I'~~ve reaped~~ what I've sowed, then." ~~I want to avoid just desserts due to the use of the term later in the Mihoko cutscene.~~}}		\|}}

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	\|大事な教え子の親友で、<br>バイト先の同僚で。		\|大事な教え子の親友で、<br>バイト先の同僚で。
	\|The good friend of a important former student, ~~and~~ a ~~fellow working~~ colleague.		\|The good friend of an important former student of mine, who's also as a colleague from work.
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	\|そして、仲間以上の存在で。		\|そして、仲間以上の存在で。
	\|~~An existence that~~'s already surpassed ~~that of~~ a mere colleague, I'd add.		\|Someone who's already surpassed being a mere colleague, I'd add.
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	\|「誰かを好きになることも、<br>誰かに好きって言われることも、<br>怖くて、ほんと怖くてさ...」		\|「誰かを好きになることも、<br>誰かに好きって言われることも、<br>怖くて、ほんと怖くてさ...」
	\|"~~To fall~~ in love with someone, <br>and ~~to have~~ someone ~~else~~ fall in love with me... I was scared — really scared — of that..."		\|"Falling in love with someone, <br>and having someone fall in love with me... I was scared — really scared — of that..."
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	\|おかげで、就業中に例の密談は終わらず、<br>杉浦は『真面目にも』閉店後の後片づけを、<br>自主的に引き受けてきた。		\|おかげで、就業中に例の密談は終わらず、<br>杉浦は『真面目にも』閉店後の後片づけを、<br>自主的に引き受けてきた。
	\|And ~~then, since~~ we ~~couldn't~~ finish our ~~talk during~~ work, Sugiura ~~proposed that she'd do the final cleanup~~ "~~with all she can~~".		\|And given the fact that we never managed to finish our private conversation in the middle of work, Sugiura "earnestly" volunteered to take up clean-up duty after closing hours.
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	\|モップの柄に顎を乗せ、<br>杉浦がふぅ～っとため息をつく。		\|モップの柄に顎を乗せ、<br>杉浦がふぅ～っとため息をつく。
	\|~~Using~~ the mop~~'s handle to support her chin~~, Sugiura lets out a sigh.		\|Supporting her chin with the handle of the mop, Sugiura lets out a sigh.
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	\|「今まで人を責めたことなんかなかった雪菜だからこそ、<br>絶対に『心にもあること』なんだってわかっちゃってさ」		\|「今まで人を責めたことなんかなかった雪菜だからこそ、<br>絶対に『心にもあること』なんだってわかっちゃってさ」
	\|"~~Because up until now,~~ Setsuna ~~hasn~~'t blamed anyone~~, but~~ now I know that ~~she possesses something that 'she holds deep inside~~ her heart'."		\|"It's because Setsuna's never blamed anyone up until now that I just know that are things tucked within her heart now."
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	\|「それで、痛感した。<br>俺は今まで、どれだけ彼女を<br>深く傷つけてきたんだろうって」		\|「それで、痛感した。<br>俺は今まで、どれだけ彼女を<br>深く傷つけてきたんだろうって」
	\|"And it was then that I'd painfully realised — just how badly I've been hurting her ~~up until now~~."		\|"And it was then that I'd painfully realised — just how badly I've been hurting her to this day."
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	\|「それは自業自得だし」		\|「それは自業自得だし」
	\|"~~Consequences~~ brought about by my own hand~~, I'd say~~."		\|"Simply consequences brought about by my own hand."
	\|"I've reaped what I've sowed, then." I want to avoid just desserts due to the use of the term later in the Mihoko cutscene.}}		\|"I've reaped what I've sowed, then." I want to avoid just desserts due to the use of the term later in the Mihoko cutscene.}}