Zero no Tsukaima:Side Story Volume1 Story1 - Revision history

AKAAkira: Undo revision 255053 by AKAAkira (talk) Sorry, accidental click on Save Page while experimenting

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Undo revision 255053 by AKAAkira (talk) Sorry, accidental click on Save Page while experimenting

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	===1st Story—Tabitha and the Pterosaur===		===1st Story—Tabitha and the Pterosaur===

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	Carrying her master, the blue-scaled Sylphid soared high above, flying towards the other end of a sky even bluer than herself. The two moons shone brightly in the clear heavens. The white moon was so luminous it could almost be transparent, while the red moon left a slightly reddish tinge. Seeing this view from such a high altitude, it was like a scene in a dream.		Carrying her master, the blue-scaled Sylphid soared high above, flying towards the other end of a sky even bluer than herself. The two moons shone brightly in the clear heavens. The white moon was so luminous it could almost be transparent, while the red moon left a slightly reddish tinge. Seeing this view from such a high altitude, it was like a scene in a dream.
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AKAAkira at 07:26, 29 May 2013

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	===1st Story—Tabitha and the Pterosaur===		===1st Story—Tabitha and the Pterosaur===

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	Carrying her master, the blue-scaled Sylphid soared high above, flying towards the other end of a sky even bluer than herself. The two moons shone brightly in the clear heavens. The white moon was so luminous it could almost be transparent, while the red moon left a slightly reddish tinge. Seeing this view from such a high altitude, it was like a scene in a dream.		Carrying her master, the blue-scaled Sylphid soared high above, flying towards the other end of a sky even bluer than herself. The two moons shone brightly in the clear heavens. The white moon was so luminous it could almost be transparent, while the red moon left a slightly reddish tinge. Seeing this view from such a high altitude, it was like a scene in a dream.
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AKAAkira: Forgot to insert nav bar before...and, hm, a bit disgruntled this called itself "Story1" rather than "Chapter1"

2013-05-24T02:03:43Z

Forgot to insert nav bar before...and, hm, a bit disgruntled this called itself "Story1" rather than "Chapter1"

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	"A wedding is so beautiful! It would be great if Nee-sama also married somebody! That way even Sylphid can dress up! Dress up with lots of flowers! Kyuikyui! Ohh, first we need a lover! Lover hurray! Nee-sama should hurry and make one! Lover! Lov-er! Kyuikyui!"		"A wedding is so beautiful! It would be great if Nee-sama also married somebody! That way even Sylphid can dress up! Dress up with lots of flowers! Kyuikyui! Ohh, first we need a lover! Lover hurray! Nee-sama should hurry and make one! Lover! Lov-er! Kyuikyui!"

	Tabitha felt no need to answer		Tabitha felt no need to answer.

	"Who would be a good candidate? Who would be a good candidate? That's right! How about Guiche? He looks pretty handsome!"		"Who would be a good candidate? Who would be a good candidate? That's right! How about Guiche? He looks pretty handsome!"
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	Therefore, this blue-scaled Sylphid, regardless of how many times Tabitha said, "Quiet down quiet down", would always nag next to Tabitha's side.		Therefore, this blue-scaled Sylphid, regardless of how many times Tabitha said, "Quiet down quiet down", would always nag next to Tabitha's side.

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AKAAkira: Added pics. I don't have the book, but pretty sure I put them where I'm supposed to.

2013-03-29T23:56:49Z

Added pics. I don't have the book, but pretty sure I put them where I'm supposed to.

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	How could Isabella give such a cruel treatment to her cousin?		How could Isabella give such a cruel treatment to her cousin?

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	It was exactly because they were of the same bloodline, that Isabella couldn't stand the talent Tabitha wielded. From a young age she was already carrying the title of Chevelier and was able to perform outstanding magic.		It was exactly because they were of the same bloodline, that Isabella couldn't stand the talent Tabitha wielded. From a young age she was already carrying the title of Chevelier and was able to perform outstanding magic.
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	Superstitious hunters all fled, throwing down their bows.		Superstitious hunters all fled, throwing down their bows.

	"Don't run! There's only 4 of them!"		"Don't run! There's only four of them!"

	"Ahhhhhhhh! Primal magic! Primal!"		"Ahhhhhhhh! Primal magic! Primal!"
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	''Whooooooshhhh!''		''Whooooooshhhh!''

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	A strong wind along with small traces of ice and snow suddenly blew across the trees. All the dry leaves were whisked away in this icy wind.		A strong wind along with small traces of ice and snow suddenly blew across the trees. All the dry leaves were whisked away in this icy wind.

AKAAkira: General copyedit - adding punctuation, correcting grammar, changing phrases, tossing redundancy, using synonyms. The works. Second lookover would be appreciated.

2013-03-28T20:40:03Z

General copyedit - adding punctuation, correcting grammar, changing phrases, tossing redundancy, using synonyms. The works. Second lookover would be appreciated.

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66.61.52.227 at 20:10, 26 August 2012

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	Capital of Gallia, the city of Lutèce was about 1,000 leagues inland from the border of the neighboring country Tristain. It boasts a population of 300,000 and is the largest city on Halkenia.		Capital of Gallia, the city of Lutèce was about 1,000 leagues inland from the border of the neighboring country Tristain. It boasts a population of 300,000 and is the largest city on Halkenia.

	East to this city was the grand and huge palace of Versailles. It's where the royal family of Gallia lives. A long time ago, this was a lush forest. The one who turned it into the beauty it is now was the second last king, Robespierre the third. King Joseph the first is its current master. At the ~~centre~~ of this Palace, he wields the scepter of government in the heart of Grand Trois, a building made of rose-colored marble.		East to this city was the grand and huge palace of Versailles. It's where the royal family of Gallia lives. A long time ago, this was a lush forest. The one who turned it into the beauty it is now was the second last king, Robespierre the third. King Joseph the first is its current master. At the center of this Palace, he wields the scepter of government in the heart of Grand Trois, a building made of rose-colored marble.

	Some distance from the Grand Trois, inside the pink colored, small scaled palace called Petit Trois, a young lady gave a big yawn.		Some distance from the Grand Trois, inside the pink colored, small scaled palace called Petit Trois, a young lady gave a big yawn.
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	From the Gallian capital of Lutèce to the Al Delaware district, it would take 2 days on horseback; 5 days on foot; but only 2 hours on Sylphid. Al Delaware is a place covered by an endless forest. This forest stretches all the way to Germania. Both countries call this forest the "Black forest"		From the Gallian capital of Lutèce to the Al Delaware district, it would take 2 days on horseback; 5 days on foot; but only 2 hours on Sylphid. Al Delaware is a place covered by an endless forest. This forest stretches all the way to Germania. Both countries call this forest the "Black forest"

	At the corner of this forest, was a small little village called Eginheim. Every war between Gallia and Germania will always end up next to this little village of around a population of 200. The villagers here make their living by transporting lumber to the town and selling it. Today, they were gathered in the ~~centre~~ of the square of the village, yelling with fury		At the corner of this forest, was a small little village called Eginheim. Every war between Gallia and Germania will always end up next to this little village of around a population of 200. The villagers here make their living by transporting lumber to the town and selling it. Today, they were gathered in the center of the square of the village, yelling with fury

	"We cannot take it anymore!"		"We cannot take it anymore!"
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	Sam lifted his head.		Sam lifted his head.

	Looking the winged men in the eye, ten ~~metres~~ high above, Sam's entire body went rigid. ''Those things only look like humans, but they're a different species. It feels so different''		Looking the winged men in the eye, ten meters high above, Sam's entire body went rigid. ''Those things only look like humans, but they're a different species. It feels so different''

	Sam felt very useless. Originally thinking that they would win in numbers, everything turned out to be futile without magic.		Sam felt very useless. Originally thinking that they would win in numbers, everything turned out to be futile without magic.
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	They had not expected such a young and fragile girl with uncommon blue hair to be a strong mage.		They had not expected such a young and fragile girl with uncommon blue hair to be a strong mage.

	The two sides remained still, only a distance of 15 ~~metres~~ between them.		The two sides remained still, only a distance of 15 meters between them.

	Both sides exchanged stares.		Both sides exchanged stares.
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	"Ohh, that spell the knight just chanted, although we have no idea what it was, it sure sounded very powerful!"		"Ohh, that spell the knight just chanted, although we have no idea what it was, it sure sounded very powerful!"

	Walking to the town ~~centre~~, Tabitha faced off with the dragon.		Walking to the town center, Tabitha faced off with the dragon.

	"Quiet down! Gargoyle!"		"Quiet down! Gargoyle!"
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	Under cooperation, lives became easier. Both species plan to learn more from each other. Although troubles may spring up from different cultures and habits, possibly causing even hostility because of misunderstandings, this was not the case in this village. After all, there was already a reassuring couple between these two species.		Under cooperation, lives became easier. Both species plan to learn more from each other. Although troubles may spring up from different cultures and habits, possibly causing even hostility because of misunderstandings, this was not the case in this village. After all, there was already a reassuring couple between these two species.

	At the village ~~centre~~, Josiah in a full tux of winged men and the Elsa in complete white bridal dress was especially eye catching.		At the village center, Josiah in a full tux of winged men and the Elsa in complete white bridal dress was especially eye catching.

	Kids danced happily around Elsa's dress.		Kids danced happily around Elsa's dress.

66.61.52.227 at 04:53, 26 August 2012

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66.61.52.227 at 02:40, 26 August 2012

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	Capital of Gallia, the city of Lutèce was about 1,000 leagues inland from the border of the neighboring country Tristain. It boasts a population of 300,000 and is the largest city on Halkenia.		Capital of Gallia, the city of Lutèce was about 1,000 leagues inland from the border of the neighboring country Tristain. It boasts a population of 300,000 and is the largest city on Halkenia.

	East to this city was the grand and huge palace of Versailles. It's where the royal family of Gallia lives. A long time ago, this was a lush ~~forrest~~. The one who turned it into the beauty it is now was the second last king, Robespierre the third. King Joseph the first is its current master. At the centre of this Palace, he wields the scepter of government in the heart of Grand Trois, a building made of rose-colored marble.		East to this city was the grand and huge palace of Versailles. It's where the royal family of Gallia lives. A long time ago, this was a lush forest. The one who turned it into the beauty it is now was the second last king, Robespierre the third. King Joseph the first is its current master. At the centre of this Palace, he wields the scepter of government in the heart of Grand Trois, a building made of rose-colored marble.

	Some distance from the Grand Trois, inside the pink colored, small scaled palace called Petit Trois, a young lady gave a big yawn.		Some distance from the Grand Trois, inside the pink colored, small scaled palace called Petit Trois, a young lady gave a big yawn.
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	"fuwaaaaaaaaaaa"		"fuwaaaaaaaaaaa"

	It was a 17 years old girl. The unusual color of her hair was the same blue as the pupils of her slender eyes. The appearance of such an unusual color would convey to any person that she is ~~affiliated~~ to the Gallia royal family. The blue hair grown to shoulder length was combed carefully, smooth like silk thread, waving lightly in the ~~winds~~. On her forehead was a large extravagant crown. The lips which have never known hardship gave off an alluring shine.		It was a 17 years old girl. The unusual color of her hair was the same blue as the pupils of her slender eyes. The appearance of such an unusual color would convey to any person that she is related to the Gallia royal family. The blue hair grown to shoulder length was combed carefully, smooth like silk thread, waving lightly in the wind. On her forehead was a large extravagant crown. The lips which have never known hardship gave off an alluring shine.

	The girl licked her crimson red colored lips with her tongue. This course and vulgar gesture spoiled the dignified features of an noble in an instant.		The girl licked her crimson red colored lips with her tongue. This course and vulgar gesture spoiled the dignified features of an noble in an instant.

Wildk at 09:58, 16 July 2012

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	After they return to the Magical Academy of Tristain, they would be able to chatter as happily as now		After they return to the Magical Academy of Tristain, they would be able to chatter as happily as now

	Therefore, this blue-scaled Sylphid, regardless of how many times Tabitha said "Quiet down quiet down", it will always nag next to Tabitha's side.		Therefore, this blue-scaled Sylphid, regardless of how many times Tabitha said "Quiet down quiet down", will always nag next to Tabitha's side.

Wildk at 09:58, 16 July 2012

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