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	When Saito opened his eyes, he found himself lying on a bed of the mansion. Rays of morning light shone through the window.		When Saito opened his eyes, he found himself lying on a bed of the mansion. Rays of morning light shone through the window.
	~~<center>~~[[Image:ZnT17-015.jpg\|thumb~~\|"You’re okay, Saito-san?!"~~]]~~</center>~~		[[Image:ZnT17-015.jpg\|thumb]]

	“Are you okay, Saito-san?!”		“Are you okay, Saito-san?!”

Windwalker: /* Chapter 1: Saito's Despair */

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Chapter 1: Saito's Despair

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	After walking for a while, they came to the place where ~~Dudu~~ <!--ER: Original was ドゥドゥ.--> fought last night. The ground had deep cuts all over, displaying ~~Dudu~~'s powerful magic. They tried to find Derflinger’s fragments…but the pair couldn’t find them.		After walking for a while, they came to the place where Bleu <!--ER: Original was ドゥドゥ.--> fought last night. The ground had deep cuts all over, displaying Bleu's powerful magic. They tried to find Derflinger’s fragments…but the pair couldn’t find them.

	It was as if they had dissolved entirely.		It was as if they had dissolved entirely.

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	"… Today, I came just to report Louise’s disappearance but it seems Louise has already told Her Highness.”		"… Today, I came just to report Louise’s disappearance but it seems Louise has already told Her Highness.”

	Saito stared at the letter. Written on it wasn't a single word of blame directed at Henrietta. It merely stated her resignation and her gratitude for ~~the~~ all the hospitality she had received in the past.<!--ER: Original is 才人は手紙を見つめた。そこにはアンリエッタを非難するような言葉は一言も書かれていない。ただ、暇乞いと、今までの厚遇に関する礼が述べられているだけだった。-->		Saito stared at the letter. Written on it wasn't a single word of blame directed at Henrietta. It merely stated her resignation and her gratitude for all the hospitality she had received in the past.<!--ER: Original is 才人は手紙を見つめた。そこにはアンリエッタを非難するような言葉は一言も書かれていない。ただ、暇乞いと、今までの厚遇に関する礼が述べられているだけだった。-->

	As Saito imagined the feelings of Louise as she wrote this letter, he felt his chest tighten in sadness. As long as he thought of that he may never meet her again, he could not bear it.		As Saito imagined the feelings of Louise as she wrote this letter, he felt his chest tighten in sadness. As long as he thought of that he may never meet her again, he could not bear it.

EnigmaticRepose: Retranslated/translated the unfinished lines. Likely have few a inaccuracies since I'm far from fluent in Japanese. Also didn't feel like reviewing the lines I left commentary tags for before. Probably would help if I knew any ZnT terminology.

2012-12-23T07:33:16Z

Retranslated/translated the unfinished lines. Likely have few a inaccuracies since I'm far from fluent in Japanese. Also didn't feel like reviewing the lines I left commentary tags for before. Probably would help if I knew any ZnT terminology.

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	After walking for a while, they came to the place where 多德 fought last night. The ground had deep cuts all over, ~~showing the~~ powerful magic ~~of the 多德~~. They tried to find Derflinger’s ~~fragments……but~~ the pair couldn’t find them.		After walking for a while, they came to the place where Dudu <!--ER: Original was ドゥドゥ.--> fought last night. The ground had deep cuts all over, displaying Dudu's powerful magic. They tried to find Derflinger’s fragments…but the pair couldn’t find them.

	It was as if they had dissolved ~~eitrely~~.		It was as if they had dissolved entirely.

	Exactly who commissioned those siblings (2 brothers and a sister) to attack him…? However, given some thought, he was a celebrity after all. Even though he didn't consider it, there was the possibility of incurring the resentment of others. Speaking of which, a plebeian like himself becoming famous might just get the nobles jealous.		Exactly who commissioned those siblings (2 brothers and a sister) to attack him…? However, given some thought, he was a celebrity after all. Even though he didn't consider it, there was the possibility of incurring the resentment of others. Speaking of which, a plebeian like himself becoming famous might just get the nobles jealous.
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	"Why? Isn’t Henrietta Her Highness and Louise childhood friends?"		"Why? Isn’t Henrietta Her Highness and Louise childhood friends?"

	Scarron~~'s gaze swept over~~ Saito~~, who was lying on~~ the floor ~~face down~~, muttering, "I ~~can~~'~~t do it. I’m~~ so useless. ~~I should not be~~ born in this era,代继子遭受排斥的家伙是德奥鲁尼艾鲁土地上的泥块是腐烂掉的橘子啊！我的橘子是柳澤公夫，那个还挺有意思的”之类完全意义不明自虐话语的才人，一会扫扫雪丝塔，随后他的嘴唇张成菱形，流着急汗不停哆嗦起来。		Then Scarron, like Siesta, could only stare as Saito fell prostrate onto the floor, muttering the vague, self-depreciating words, 'I'm useless, so freaking useless.　I shouldn't have been born into this world as a child of this era. A Des Ornières mud dumpling! A rotten orangee! My orange is Yanagisawa Kimio! He was interesting.' He opened his lips with a smack, and trembled as a cold sweat poured over him.<!--Original text: それからスカロンは、床につっぷしてもうだめだおれはだめだこの世にうまれるべきではなかった時代の継子だド・オルニエールの泥だんごだ腐ったみかんだあ! Myみかんは柳沢きみおだあれはおもしろかった、とわけのわからない自虐の言葉をぶつぶつと眩いている才人と、シエスタを交互に見っめ、かぱっと唇をひし形に開き、脂汗を流して小刻みに震えだした。 It's also likely an inaccurate translation.-->

	"D-don’t tell me… Saito’s love interest is… impossible… but looking at Saito-san’s past achievements… the country's best knight and Her Royal Highness Princess's tryst — there are still those kind of rumors… but I dared not think that the unexpected would become reality… ah ah, really wonderful!"		"D-don’t tell me… Saito’s love interest is… impossible… but looking at Saito-san’s past achievements… the country's best knight and Her Royal Highness Princess's tryst — there are still those kind of rumors… but I dared not think that the unexpected would become reality… ah ah, really wonderful!"
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	“Siesta, you may be able leave a mark in history. If it comes true, you must tell your uncle because uncle wants to turn this story into a drama, letting it spread throughout the universe!”		“Siesta, you may be able leave a mark in history. If it comes true, you must tell your uncle because uncle wants to turn this story into a drama, letting it spread throughout the universe!”

	"~~Please 收敛 a little~~! ~~Really~~!"		"That's enough! Honestly!"

	As Siesta raised her voice, Jessica, who had been doing laundry, suddenly jumped out.		As Siesta raised her voice, Jessica, who had been doing laundry, suddenly jumped out.
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	After listening to Scarron’s explanation, Jessica stared at Saito with wide eyes.		After listening to Scarron’s explanation, Jessica stared at Saito with wide eyes.

	"~~Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey~~!"		"Huuuuuuuuuh!?"

	Scarron and Jessica, started muttering that this was the greatest dirty news of the Kingdom of Tristan and if this matter was to spread, the government would definitely be shaken.		Scarron and Jessica, started muttering that this was the greatest dirty news of the Kingdom of Tristan and if this matter was to spread, the government would definitely be shaken.
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	"Yes… in fact, I just received a letter from Louise suddenly and was thinking of what to do…”		"Yes… in fact, I just received a letter from Louise suddenly and was thinking of what to do…”

	Saito had a nasty burst of premonition. After reading the letters, he understood that his premonition was accurate. It ~~was written~~, ~~自己想卸下作为和加里亚王的交涉官的任务，以及奉还司祭一职的想法。~~		Saito had a nasty burst of premonition. After reading the letters, he understood that his premonition was accurate. It read in gist, I wish to have myself removed from negotiable matters with the Gallia King, as well as relinquish my status of priestess.<!--ER: Original line: 才人は嫌な予感がした。手紙を読んで、その予感が的中したことを知る。そこには、自分をガリア王との交渉官から外して欲しい、及び司祭の職を返上するとの旨が記されてあった。

	"Then, I hope I never have to say farewell…"		"Then, I hope I never have to say farewell…"
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	"Actually…"		"Actually…"

	Once Saito said that, Henrietta’s shoulders shivered. With clenched lips, her shy-like body stiffened. As a result, the Queen~~'s authority~~ disappeared and turned ~~into变成了芳龄少女的表情~~. This Henrietta, at this point of time, let Saito be defeated under her charm. Or, perhaps it was because he spent that kind of night with her, so he felt as such.		Once Saito said that, Henrietta’s shoulders shivered. With clenched lips, her shy-like body stiffened. As a result, the face of a majestic Queen disappeared and turned into one befitting of a girl her age. This Henrietta, at this point of time, let Saito be defeated under her charm. Or, perhaps it was because he spent that kind of night with her, so he felt as such. <!--ER: Original line is 才人がそう切り出すと、アンリエッタの肩がぴくりと震えた。唇をかみ締め、恥じ入るかのように硬く身をこわばらせる。そうすると、女王としての威厳が消え、年相応の少女の顔になる。そういったときのアンリエッタは、どうしようもないぐらいに魅力的だった。-->

	“From start to finish in that room, Louise saw everything…”		“From start to finish in that room, Louise saw everything…”
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	"… Today, I came just to report Louise’s disappearance but it seems Louise has already told Her Highness.”		"… Today, I came just to report Louise’s disappearance but it seems Louise has already told Her Highness.”

	~~才人凝视着书信。在那之中没有任何一句对安莉埃塔的非难。有的，仅仅是辞别，以及为至今以来受到的厚遇而感谢。~~		Saito stared at the letter. Written on it wasn't a single word of blame directed at Henrietta. It merely stated her resignation and her gratitude for the all the hospitality she had received in the past.<!--ER: Original is 才人は手紙を見つめた。そこにはアンリエッタを非難するような言葉は一言も書かれていない。ただ、暇乞いと、今までの厚遇に関する礼が述べられているだけだった。-->

	As Saito imagined the feelings of Louise as she wrote this letter, he felt his chest tighten in sadness. As long as he thought of that he may never meet her again, he could not bear it.		As Saito imagined the feelings of Louise as she wrote this letter, he felt his chest tighten in sadness. As long as he thought of that he may never meet her again, he could not bear it.
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	Henrietta said with an over thoughtful expression.		Henrietta said with an over thoughtful expression.

	"…If women want to hide themselves, they will certainly go to the monastery or the Chamber of Commerce. I will give notice to the ~~monastery of 托里斯汀,~~ to look for anyone that resembles Louise among the women who come to visit”		"…If women want to hide themselves, they will certainly go to the monastery or the Chamber of Commerce. I will give notice to the domestic monasteries to look for anyone that resembles Louise among the women who come to visit”

	"~~In short…~~ I ~~try to 托里斯汀look around”~~		"For now...I'll look all over the country."

	Speaking of which, Henrietta said with a troubled voice,		Speaking of which, Henrietta said with a troubled voice,

EnigmaticRepose: Some liberal changes. Left some commentary tags to review and if I feel like it, I will grab the Japanese raw text later and review the untranslated lines.

2012-12-20T09:03:22Z

Some liberal changes. Left some commentary tags  to review and if I feel like it, I will grab the Japanese raw text later and review the untranslated lines.

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71.81.123.49 at 00:44, 9 November 2012

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	“Siesta, what’s wrong with me?” a pale-faced Saito asked.		“Siesta, what’s wrong with me?” a pale-faced Saito asked.

	“What are you saying~~, because~~ Saito-san came home too late, I went to search for you. Later, I found Saito-san lying on the street side …… May I ask if you have found Miss Valliere yet?”		“What are you saying? Because Saito-san came home too late, I went to search for you. Later, I found Saito-san lying on the street side …… May I ask if you have found Miss Valliere yet?”

	From the back of his head came bursts of dull pain.		From the back of his head came bursts of dull pain.

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	“What do you mean? Because you were late in coming home, I went to search for you. Later, I found you lying on the side of a street… May I ask if you have found Miss Vallière yet?”		“What do you mean? Because you were late in coming home, I went to search for you. Later, I found you lying on the side of a street… May I ask if you have found Miss Vallière yet?”

	Jolts of dull pain assailed the back of head.		Jolts of dull pain assailed the back of his head.

	While in pain, Saito remembered the events of the previous night vividly.		While in pain, Saito remembered the events of the previous night vividly.
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	"Kissing…"		"Kissing…"

	When Siesta heard that, her countenance darkened and mercilessly slapped Saito on the face.		When Siesta heard that, her countenance darkened and she mercilessly slapped Saito on the face.

	"Pa!" it clearly echoed throughout the entire room.		"Pa!" it clearly echoed throughout the entire room.
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	Siesta wiped the corner of her eye while holding back her tears.		Siesta wiped the corner of her eye while holding back her tears.

	"Even though I also want to cry out, because there is no time to cry, I will not cry. We must immediately find Miss Vallière, right? Even you had been attacked and Miss Vallière might encounter the same danger.”		"Even though I also want to cry out, because there is no time to cry, I will not cry. We must immediately find Miss Vallière, right? Even you had been attacked, and Miss Vallière might encounter the same danger.”

	Saito opened his mouth with an “ah”. It was as Siesta said.		Saito opened his mouth with an “ah”. It was as Siesta said.

	"I…… even though Miss Vallière and I are vying for Saito-san as rivals, I really like Miss Vallière. To be honest, there were times when I hated her even as I ~~were~~ complimenting her, and her personality cannot be considered good…		"I…… even though Miss Vallière and I are vying for Saito-san as rivals, I really like Miss Vallière. To be honest, there were times when I hated her even as I was complimenting her, and her personality cannot be considered good…

	But I still like her very much. Because, a noble like her can sleep beside a person like me without voicing a complaint, isn’t that right? We are obviously rivals."		But I still like her very much. Because, a noble like her can sleep beside a person like me without voicing a complaint, isn’t that right? We are obviously rivals."
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	He didn't know why, but his own body did not feel like a part of himself. The core of his body felt as if it was deprived of life.		He didn't know why, but his own body did not feel like a part of himself. The core of his body felt as if it was deprived of life.

	When they went to the inn, Saito borrowed horses to rush to ~~Tristan~~. When they reached the Charming Fairies Inn, they were just preparing the stop for the night.		When they went to the inn, Saito borrowed horses to rush to Tristain. When they reached the Charming Fairies Inn, they were just preparing the stop for the night.

	“Ah! If it isn't Saito and Siesta!"		“Ah! If it isn't Saito and Siesta!"
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	Siesta interrupted Scarron who still wanted to pursue the matter.		Siesta interrupted Scarron who still wanted to pursue the matter.

	"Uncle Scarron! Please ~~Stop~~! Saito-san has just lost a close friend and is fragile!”		"Uncle Scarron! Please stop! Saito-san has just lost a close friend and is fragile!”

	"Who is the close friend?"		"Who is the close friend?"
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	"Why? Isn’t Henrietta Her Highness and Louise childhood friends?"		"Why? Isn’t Henrietta Her Highness and Louise childhood friends?"

	Then Scarron, like Siesta, could only stare as Saito fell prostrate onto the floor, muttering the vague, self-depreciating words, 'I'm useless, so freaking useless.　I shouldn't have been born into this world as a child of this era. A Des Ornières mud dumpling! A rotten ~~orangee~~! My orange is Yanagisawa Kimio! He was interesting.' He opened his lips with a smack, and trembled as a cold sweat poured over him.<!--Original text: それからスカロンは、床につっぷしてもうだめだおれはだめだこの世にうまれるべきではなかった時代の継子だド・オルニエールの泥だんごだ腐ったみかんだあ! Myみかんは柳沢きみおだあれはおもしろかった、とわけのわからない自虐の言葉をぶつぶつと眩いている才人と、シエスタを交互に見っめ、かぱっと唇をひし形に開き、脂汗を流して小刻みに震えだした。 It's also likely an inaccurate translation.-->		Then Scarron, like Siesta, could only stare as Saito fell prostrate onto the floor, muttering the vague, self-depreciating words, 'I'm useless, so freaking useless.　I shouldn't have been born into this world as a child of this era. A Des Ornières mud dumpling! A rotten orange! My orange is Yanagisawa Kimio! He was interesting.' He opened his lips with a smack, and trembled as a cold sweat poured over him.<!--Original text: それからスカロンは、床につっぷしてもうだめだおれはだめだこの世にうまれるべきではなかった時代の継子だド・オルニエールの泥だんごだ腐ったみかんだあ! Myみかんは柳沢きみおだあれはおもしろかった、とわけのわからない自虐の言葉をぶつぶつと眩いている才人と、シエスタを交互に見っめ、かぱっと唇をひし形に開き、脂汗を流して小刻みに震えだした。 It's also likely an inaccurate translation.-->

	"D-don’t tell me… Saito’s love interest is… impossible… but looking at Saito-san’s past achievements… the country's best knight and Her Royal Highness Princess's tryst — there are still those kind of rumors… but I dared not think that the unexpected would become reality… ah ah, really wonderful!"		"D-don’t tell me… Saito’s love interest is… impossible… but looking at Saito-san’s past achievements… the country's best knight and Her Royal Highness Princess's tryst — there are still those kind of rumors… but I dared not think that the unexpected would become reality… ah ah, really wonderful!"
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	"Huuuuuuuuuh!?"		"Huuuuuuuuuh!?"

	Scarron and Jessica, started muttering that this was the greatest dirty news of the Kingdom of ~~Tristan~~ and if this matter was to spread, the government would definitely be shaken.		Scarron and Jessica, started muttering that this was the greatest dirty news of the Kingdom of Tristain and if this matter was to spread, the government would definitely be shaken.

	"So, you definitely must not tell anyone! Writing it to be a drama is even more ridiculous!"		"So, you definitely must not tell anyone! Writing it to be a drama is even more ridiculous!"
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	Under the harsh glare of Siesta, the two finally became more honest.		Under the harsh glare of Siesta, the two finally became more honest.

	“Yes… It's not like I don't hear enough things that would cost more than a few lives. I won’t tell anyone so don’t you worry."		“Yes… It's not like I don't hear enough things that would cost more than a few lives. I won’t tell anyone, so don’t you worry."

	"Next?"		"Next?"
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	"However, that aside, informing this matter to Her Majesty the Queen should be a little better. After all, Miss Vallière is a female officer of Her Majesty. Ah, this has become a grand event!"		"However, that aside, informing this matter to Her Majesty the Queen should be a little better. After all, Miss Vallière is a female officer of Her Majesty. Ah, this has become a grand event!"

	Therefore, Saito wrote a few letters. The contents were, "Has Louise arrived there?” As summer vacation had ~~came~~, the students had gone back home. The Ondine Knights were no exception. The only person who was willing to listen to Saito from Louise’s own family was Cattleya, so he wrote a letter to her, too. As he was writing, the sadness in his chest became unbearable. He had clearly promised Cattleya that he would protect Louise……but she ran away. At ~~Tristan~~, even though they didn’t have a post office, there are industries like Japan that used owls to mail letters or articles.		Therefore, Saito wrote a few letters. The contents were, "Has Louise arrived there?” As summer vacation had arrived, the students had gone back home. The Ondine Knights were no exception. The only person who was willing to listen to Saito from Louise’s own family was Cattleya, so he wrote a letter to her, too. As he was writing, the sadness in his chest became unbearable. He had clearly promised Cattleya that he would protect Louise……but she ran away. At Tristain, even though they didn’t have a post office, there are industries like Japan that used owls to mail letters or articles.

	He gave the letters to one of the Des Ornières post offices. Within two to three days, the letters ~~will~~ have been delivered.		He gave the letters to one of the Des Ornières post offices. Within two to three days, the letters would have been delivered.

	Even though he was troubled, Saito finally rushed directly to Henrietta. Getting attacked by those unknown people also needs to be reported.		Even though he was troubled, Saito finally rushed directly to Henrietta. Getting attacked by those unknown people also needs to be reported.
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	Speaking of which, Henrietta said with a troubled voice,		Speaking of which, Henrietta said with a troubled voice,

	"…This is after all ~~affairs~~ of the state. Be sure to come back before the Gallia Queen's Coronation garden party starts.”		"…This is, after all, an affair of the state. Be sure to come back before the Gallia Queen's Coronation garden party starts.”

	After considering for a moment, Saito nodded. Work was work, after all. Ah, it was also necessary to finish. Must be added with that of Louise's work together.		After considering for a moment, Saito nodded. Work was work, after all. Ah, it was also necessary to finish. Must be added with that of Louise's work together.
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	"I'm terrible,"		"I'm terrible,"

	Saito thought as he could not forgive the “him” who was attracted to woman before him.		Saito thought as he could not forgive the “him” who was attracted to the woman before him.