Zero no Tsukaima:Volume17 Chapter4 - Revision history

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grammar, punctuation.

Vaelis at 05:56, 20 November 2013

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	"Eh? Where is she cute?"		"Eh? Where is she cute?"
	[[File:ZnT17-085.jpg\|thumbnail~~\|"Can't sleep?"~~]]		[[File:ZnT17-085.jpg\|thumbnail]]
	"Even though normally her temper is really bad......O-o-on the bed, she's really cute. She becomes very meek and docile, she'll hear anything I say." Saito said with a trembling voice.		"Even though normally her temper is really bad......O-o-on the bed, she's really cute. She becomes very meek and docile, she'll hear anything I say." Saito said with a trembling voice.

Shadowys at 03:51, 3 March 2013

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	"Err......"		"Err......"

	Saito unconsciously started to curl himself up. Thinking back, wasn't trying to be gentle with her just ended up with him doing some strange things? He just said something like Lemon-chan, little ~~cat~~......Louise did say that she likes a romantic guy, but what he was doing was......		Saito unconsciously started to curl himself up. Thinking back, wasn't trying to be gentle with her just ended up with him doing some strange things? He just said something like Lemon-chan, little kitty......Louise did say that she likes a romantic guy, but what he was doing was......

	"Am I a pervert?"		"Am I a pervert?"
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	"Eh? Where is she cute?"		"Eh? Where is she cute?"
			[[File:ZnT17-085.jpg\|thumbnail\|"Can't sleep?"]]
	"Even though normally her temper is really bad......O-o-on the bed, she's really cute. She becomes very meek and docile, she'll hear anything I say." Saito said with a trembling voice.		"Even though normally her temper is really bad......O-o-on the bed, she's really cute. She becomes very meek and docile, she'll hear anything I say." Saito said with a trembling voice.

180.191.127.84 at 15:04, 13 February 2013

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	"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours." Saito said, troubled.		"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours." Saito said, troubled.

	The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people.		The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people."

	Saying that, the bar was filled with laughter. Saito sighed, took the bottle and finished the beer in one gulp.		Saying that, the bar was filled with laughter. Saito sighed, took the bottle and finished the beer in one gulp.

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	"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours." Saito said, troubled.		"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours." Saito said, troubled.

	The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people."		The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people.

	Saying that, the bar was filled with laughter. Saito sighed, took the bottle and finished the beer in one gulp.		Saying that, the bar was filled with laughter. Saito sighed, took the bottle and finished the beer in one gulp.

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Vaelis at 18:54, 19 January 2013

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50.53.151.31 at 23:41, 12 January 2013

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Shadowys at 15:06, 7 January 2013

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 	However, the innkeeper answered with a shake of his head.
-	"Saito, let's go," Guiche was saying, but Saito sat on a chair and placed one gold coin on the counter. Glancing the gold coin, the innkeeper said,"What would you like?"
+	"Saito, let's go," Guiche was saying, but Saito sat on a chair and placed one gold coin on the counter. Glancing at the gold coin, the innkeeper said,"What would you like?"
-	"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours."
+	"No......I'm just saying that if you know anything, this thing's yours." Saito said, troubled.
-	Saito said, troubled. The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people."
+        The innkeeper silently put down a beer bottle and said, "My job doesn't include being a tourist guide and finding missing people."
 	Saying that, the bar was filled with laughter. Saito sighed, took the bottle and finished the beer in one gulp.
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 	"You're the first noble to drink my beer, you know."
-	Saito turned back and said while clutching his mantle,"Even with this, I still can't look like a noble. I just that's why she left."
+	Saito turned back and said while clutching his mantle,"Even with this, I still can't look like a noble. I guess that's why she left."
 	Everybody gathered around Saito who just exited the inn.
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 	There were burning torches everywhere, illuminating streets that look quite unsafe.
-	Even thoush there were about 20 hotels on the street, along with smaller residential houses, and wooden inns in the alleys, there were quite a large amount of hotels in the town. Nights in Tristain were always pitch-black, but this town has completely immersed itself in the shadows.
+	Even though there were about 20 hotels on the street, along with smaller residential houses, and wooden inns in the alleys, there were quite a large amount of hotels in the town. Nights in Tristain were always pitch-black, but this town has completely immersed itself in the shadows.
 	This darkness really does not help in finding Louise.
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 	"I-if it was like that, didn't I become a liar......so many times that I've said that I only like you(Louise)......"
-	"You're supposed to think like that when you're saying that. I'm the same, it's not a lie. No matter the time, I always felt that I was true to heart then. It's something like "You're the most important!'.
+	"You're supposed to think like that when you're saying that. I'm the same, it's not a lie. No matter the time, I always felt that I was true to heart then. It's something like "You're the most important!'."
 	"But isn't this simply an excuse?"
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 	Saying this, Guiche finished the beer in one gulp. Like an started engine, he started to speak more forcefully.
-	"That's why for some time, I stopped associating myself with beautiful women. Of course, I did it perfectly. When was it......before I met you, let's leave it at that. At that time, I kept myself to Montmorency......even when there was a beautiful woman walking by, I just thought, "Yeah, she's very pretty." That's it. Nothing said, nothing done. Days gone by just doing that."
+	"That's why for some time, I stopped associating myself with beautiful women. Of course, I did it perfectly. When was it......it's before I met you, let's leave it at that. At that time, I kept myself to Montmorency......even when there was a beautiful woman walking by, I just thought, "Yeah, she's very pretty." That's it. Nothing said, nothing done. Days gone by just doing that."
 	Saito adjusted his pose and listen attentively to Guiche.
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 	"You’re not supposed to apologise to me, but Louise!"
-	Tiffania then turned to GUiche and Malicorne, "The both of you too! Simply stating your theories! What do you take girls to be?!"
+	Tiffania then turned to Guiche and Malicorne, "The both of you too! Simply stating your theories! What do you take girls to be?!"
 	Under the scoldings of the normally gentle Tiffania, Guiche and Malicorne started to mumble,"Sorry."
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 	"Don’t want to think about how to get her forgiveness anymore."
-	Looking at the sunlight streaming in from the window, Saito
+	Looking at the sunlight streaming in from the window, Saito thought so.