Zero no Tsukaima:Volume18 Chapter9 - Revision history

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IcePhantom at 12:29, 10 March 2016

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	Louise's eyes grew wide in surprise.		Louise's eyes grew wide in surprise.

	"Um? Why? Onee-sama?"		"Um? Why? Onee-sama?"[[File:ZnT18-197.jpg\|thumb]]

	"As I've said before, I have no reason to be called an 'Onee-sama' by you."		"As I've said before, I have no reason to be called an 'Onee-sama' by you."
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	Louise slightly opened her lips. Then weaving, the magical words.		Louise slightly opened her lips. Then weaving, the magical words.

	"Kiss me."		"Kiss me."[[File:ZnT18-211.jpg\|thumb]]

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	"I'd like to be alone with you for another moment."		"I'd like to be alone with you for another moment."

			Louise is so cute! So,Saito followed Louise's wish.

			Although the room has not been used for some time, it is still spotlessly clean, it seems that Siesta and Mrs Helen have been hard at work.

			A lighted magical lamp was placed on the table, faint gentle light spreading out across the room.

			Louise and Saito, sat down on the couch beside the wall. Just as they sat down did Louise immediately attach herself onto Saito's body like a kitten.

			There were no words sufficient to describe the blissfulness Saito was feeling.

			Louise's words just now......was still reverberating in his ears. The young girl clinging onto him now, had just said that she was willing to "dismiss the Duke's name from hers" for him.

			When he first met Louise... ... he felt that she was a horrible porcupine of a person that he couldn't get along with, and now she has became his soul mate. The transformation was incredible.

			Just like that, Louise leaning on him, as he thought about things, when suddenly all kinds of experiences came to mind.

			"What's wrong?"

			Louise snuggled up to Saito, eyes shut as she asked.

			"Hmm? I just thought about a little something."

			"What kind of things?"

			"For 'people', if you just judge them from what you see, you can't really see the their real side. Or rather, there's something in everybody's heart that they won't express at all."

			"Of course it's like that, naturally."

			"Sometimes I just feel like something as 'natural' as that, is really unfathomable. It's like just now when Eleonore actually recognized our relationship, that was unbelievable."

			"Yeah. However, I'm also thinking about the same thing. Getting Eleonore onee-sama's permission or something, really unbelievable. That was a first."

			Everyone is hiding their true self, Saito thought.

			Besides, everyone has all sorts of reasons for doing that, right......

			This time, Julio's face surfaced in Saito's mind. A Romanian priest. The annoying familiar of the Holy Pope. A handsome guy, and nobody had any idea what he was thinking ......

			"But then again,"

			"Hmm?"

			"That Julio guy was also like that too. That guy has been keeping a stiff upper lip all this time. What a annoying guy, and even now I'm still annoyed by him."

			"Yeah."

			"Hey, Louise."

			"What's wrong?"

			"I really want to know it, the truth. I want to know what actually happened to this world. Why I came to this world. I also want to know, what I can actually do. What is right, and what is wrong. I will not run away, from all these things. I don't want to be abandoned, because I knew nothing at all, because I was a fool.

			Louise said nothing and just nodded.

			"So, Louise. The truths, tell me all of them. Or what you actually think. What you're thinking right now. Don't hide anything anymore, and don't care about what I think about it anymore. Because you're everything to me. Now, what you're thinking, are you hurt, are you feeling unhappy, once I start thinking about all of this, my brain just stops working. In other words, how do I put this, I just don't feeling like stopping. Because the world is spinning at an amazing rate......It feels like, if I stop now, I will just die."

			Louise stared at Saito. Then, spat out her breath with a "pooh".

			"Stupid guy."

			"I'm not talking nonsense."

			"No, no, no. You've made a mistake, you know. I have been saying what I thought since a long time ago."

			"Really?"

			"Uhn. I can't hide anything from you. However, there was once I hid things from you. It was something I wanted to do, but I didn't say it. No, it's that I can't say it."

			"But now, you can."

			Louise nodded. Then, she showed a gentle smile.

			Her smile was enough to change the atmosphere in the room. Saito immediately found it hard for him to breathe. The vague concept that was "living", suddenly had an outline and was rendered in a multitude of colors.

			Louise's lips, really had the perfect shape, don't they? Saito has this sudden thought in his mind. Also, why was there such a pleasant fragrance. A fragrance that came from nowhere.

			Louise slightly opened her lips. Then weaving, the magical words.

			"Kiss me."

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 Magic flew from both sides of the door. The "Air Net" and "Icicle Arrows"...Kirche, in turn, called forth a huge fireball that emerged from the tip of her wand. Louise, preparing the second wave of attacks, chanted the "Explosion" spell.
-Saito quickly leapt forward to pin the enemy down, his katana placed on the enemy's throat.
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 "Sorry, I'm so sorry!"

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	“Eleonore-neesama!” Louise cried as her face turned completely pale.		“Eleonore-neesama!” Louise cried as her face turned completely pale.

	“Sorry, I’m sorry!” ~~Please finish this yours sincearly Mr B~~		“Sorry, I’m sorry!”

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	“Eleonore-neesama!” Louise cried as her face turned completely pale.		“Eleonore-neesama!” Louise cried as her face turned completely pale.

	“Sorry, I’m sorry!”		“Sorry, I’m sorry!” Please finish this yours sincearly Mr B

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	“Is it someone in the neighborhood?” At the moment Saito said this, Siesta's face became worried.		“Is it someone in the neighborhood?” At the moment Saito said this, Siesta's face became worried.

	''That cannot be... Perhaps someone who were after Saito ...!'' Then Saito and Louise looked at each other.		''That cannot be... Perhaps someone who were after Saito ...!''

			Then Saito and Louise looked at each other.

			The group who are also known as "Elemental Siblings..."

			They destroyed Derflinger in Des Ornieres and also attempted to assassinate Saito in Gallia, they might be these mysterious brothers.

			One of them, Jack, who had been captured in Gallia, remained steadfastly silent. Even after threatening to torture him by the officers of Gallia, it seemed would not get any information from him.

			Saito 's eyes grew wide as he quickly took the katana from the right side of his bed, then the rune on his left hand began to shine.

			“I shall take my revenge for what they did to Derf!”

			Louise, with a serious face, also prepared her wand.

			“Well, let's finish this quickly.”

			Tabitha, still without a word, had taken her staff tightly in her hands.

			However, aside from them, Kirche and Colbert-sensei were also present in the house, so they wouldn’t be defeated in this battle easily.

			Upon leaving the room, they found Kirche and Colbert, who also prepared their wands.

			Then Saito and others prepared to descend downstairs and listened carefully to the wall on either side of the door.

			tock! tock! tock!

			Again they heard the door being beaten.

			Saito then stretched his hand and started to remove the bolt.

			“It's open!” With the door opened , someone then tried to enter the house.

			“Attack!”

			From both sides of the door magic flew: Air attacks and also Windy icicle...

			Kirche in turn had created a huge fireball that emerged from the tip of her wand, then, Louise as a second line of attack prepared to chant the spell: "Explosion"

			Saito then quickly jumped over and pinned the visitor then he placed the katana onto his throat.

			“Wait!”

			“... What do you want!?” He rang out a shrill voice that was obviously quite upset.

			Because of the light emitted from the fireball of Kirche, at this point everyone there could see the face of the mysterious character lying on the floor.

			“Eleonore-neesama!” Louise cried as her face turned completely pale.

			“Sorry, I’m sorry!”