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	===Chapter 1 - Maidens of Des Ornières===		===Chapter 1: Maidens of Des Ornières===

	The fourth day of the third week of Niido in Des Ornieres turned out to be very hot. Halkeginia's summer is rather dry than hot, so heat is usually not a problem, but every now and then there is a day like that.		The fourth day of the third week of Niido in Des Ornieres turned out to be very hot. Halkeginia's summer is rather dry than hot, so heat is usually not a problem, but every now and then there is a day like that.

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	This is why a big fan was installed on the ceiling of the mansion room. It was repaired during renovation. Magic rotated the blades creating a flow of air. It didn't help Louise much.		This is why a big fan was installed on the ceiling of the mansion room. It was repaired during renovation. Magic rotated the blades creating a flow of air. It didn't help Louise much.

	"Uuuu...," - Louise wiped sweat from her forehead. "I can't fall asleep."		"Uuuu..." - Louise wiped sweat from her forehead. "I can't fall asleep."

	This was the second or third day she couldn't get enough sleep. Louise stared in disgust at the rotating fan.		This was the second or third day she couldn't get enough sleep. Louise stared in disgust at the rotating fan.
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	"Your familiar's room."		"Your familiar's room."

	Louise tried to stand up but was pulled back by the rope and fell on the bed with a yelp. The rope was still intact; Sylphid couldn't bite through it.		Louise tried to stand up but was pulled back by the rope and fell on the bed with a yelp. The rope was still intact. Sylphid couldn't bite through it.

	"Kyui! Durable rope! Pink Runt!"		"Kyui! Durable rope! Pink Runt!"
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	Louise pulled the rope and Tabitha and Siesta woke up.		Louise pulled the rope and Tabitha and Siesta woke up.

	"...~~what~~?"		"...What?"

	"What is going on?"		"What is going on?"
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	Tabitha paled, bit a lip lightly and looked away.		Tabitha paled, bit a lip lightly and looked away.

	Siesta said "~~excuse~~ me", lowered her head, and started exploring Tabitha's chest with both hands.		Siesta said "Excuse me", lowered her head, and started exploring Tabitha's chest with both hands.

	"Miss Valliere."		"Miss Valliere."
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	Eleonore frantically folded her arms and looked at the quiet Tabitha and sighed.		Eleonore frantically folded her arms and looked at the quiet Tabitha and sighed.

	"Even though a member of the Gallian royal family is our guest, the responsibility for your education is on me. 'Mingle with the great to become great'~~; this~~ is what I think as an elder daughter of the La Valliere family. Get ready, I will not go easy on you."		"Even though a member of the Gallian royal family is our guest, the responsibility for your education is on me. 'Mingle with the great to become great'. This is what I think as an elder daughter of the La Valliere family. Get ready, I will not go easy on you."

	Slap! She fetched a riding whip and hit the bed with all her strength. Everyone yelped.		Slap! She fetched a riding whip and hit the bed with all her strength. Everyone yelped.
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	It was just about an hour till dawn.		It was just about an hour till dawn.

	"What a preposterous night," - Louise said to herself when the noisy company fell asleep. She sneaked out and went to Saito's room.		"What a preposterous night." - Louise said to herself when the noisy company fell asleep. She sneaked out and went to Saito's room.

	When she opened the door, Saito was sitting on a sofa.		When she opened the door, Saito was sitting on a sofa.
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	"Are you awake?" - he said smiling.		"Are you awake?" - he said smiling.

	"Yes. Can't sleep for some reason. You too?" Louise replied blushing, strangely embarrassed. Saito seemed to be lost in thought until now~~; his~~ face had been serious and absent. It was like he had instantly become two or three years senior... one year at least.		"Yes. Can't sleep for some reason. You too?" Louise replied blushing, strangely embarrassed. Saito seemed to be lost in thought until now. His face had been serious and absent. It was like he had instantly become two or three years senior... one year at least.

	It was already mentioned that a year in Saito's world was a little shorter than a year of this world, but the length of a day seemed to be about the same. Their worlds were not all that different.		It was already mentioned that a year in Saito's world was a little shorter than a year of this world, but the length of a day seemed to be about the same. Their worlds were not all that different.
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	"Well, the Crusade," Saito said flatly.		"Well, the Crusade," Saito said flatly.

	"Not convinced?" - ~~she~~ asked with concern. Indeed, she didn't want to fight the Elves herself. If negotiations fail, she will...		"Not convinced?" - She asked with concern. Indeed, she didn't want to fight the Elves herself. If negotiations fail, she will...

	It's inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.		It's inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.
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	"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such strong opponents."		"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such strong opponents."

	"Well," - Louise also become serious.		"Well." - Louise also become serious.

	"We don't have much to bargain with in negotiations. Usual magic is ineffective against them."		"We don't have much to bargain with in negotiations. Usual magic is ineffective against them."
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	"Maybe we will be able to use Void magic when we need it. This is how it worked before."		"Maybe we will be able to use Void magic when we need it. This is how it worked before."

	"Right..." - ~~said~~ Saito with concern.		"Right..." - Said Saito with concern.

	"What's wrong?"		"What's wrong?"
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	It was indisputable.		It was indisputable.

	"I will study elves," - Louise said. In any case it's good to know your adversary. She noticed Saito's sadness.		"I will study elves." - Louise said. In any case it's good to know your adversary. She noticed Saito's sadness.

	"You don't want to fight?"		"You don't want to fight?"
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	Saito shook his head.		Saito shook his head.

	"It's inevitable. Well, I hate it, but it's just how it is~~; there~~ is nothing to like or dislike. First we will properly explain our problem to the Elves. If they reply 'whatever, tough luck'" - he squinted his eyes - "I will fight. For myself and my friends. There is no doubt about it."		"It's inevitable. Well, I hate it, but it's just how it is. There is nothing to like or dislike. First we will properly explain our problem to the Elves. If they reply 'whatever, tough luck'" - he squinted his eyes - "I will fight. For myself and my friends. There is no doubt about it."

	"Thank you."		"Thank you."
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	"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."		"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."

	Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place" thought Louise. Of course this wasn't something she would say aloud.		Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place.", thought Louise. Of course this wasn't something she would say aloud.

	"I will fight too. To protect this place."		"I will fight too. To protect this place."
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	There were no air conditioners in this world. Coolers based on water magic existed but they were rather expensive and unreliable. Continuous spell cast was difficult to control and losing control was dangerous. Magic was rarely used for air cooling.		There were no air conditioners in this world. Coolers based on water magic existed but they were rather expensive and unreliable. Continuous spell cast was difficult to control and losing control was dangerous. Magic was rarely used for air cooling.

	This is why a big fan was installed on the ceiling of the mansion room. It was repaired during renovation. Magic rotated the blades creating a flow of air~~, but it~~ didn't help Louise much.		This is why a big fan was installed on the ceiling of the mansion room. It was repaired during renovation. Magic rotated the blades creating a flow of air. It didn't help Louise much.

	"Uuuu...," - Louise wiped sweat from her forehead. "I can't fall asleep."		"Uuuu...," - Louise wiped sweat from her forehead. "I can't fall asleep."

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	Napping was her favorite pastime. She was a genius at falling asleep. If there ever was a Falling Asleep Championship she would win hands down.		Napping was her favorite pastime. She was a genius at falling asleep. If there ever was a Falling Asleep Championship she would win hands down.

	''Ah, ~~its~~ impossible. The pillow is humid and hot and it only gets better when someone breathes on your nape. Just perfect.''		''Ah, it's impossible. The pillow is humid and hot and it only gets better when someone breathes on your nape. Just perfect.''

	A rope connected the wrists of Louise and Siesta. ~~Its~~ like a painter that keeps a ship at a pier. Untie it and Siesta, little unfaithful boat, will start her travel to port Saito sleeping in the other room.		A rope connected the wrists of Louise and Siesta. It's like a painter that keeps a ship at a pier. Untie it and Siesta, little unfaithful boat, will start her travel to port Saito sleeping in the other room.

	''And it wouldn't be good for anyone. It would only lead to unnecessary violence. No one wants that, right?''		''And it wouldn't be good for anyone. It would only lead to unnecessary violence. No one wants that, right?''
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	She whispered her complaint about her sister sleeping in the next room. Suddenly she opened her eyes.		She whispered her complaint about her sister sleeping in the next room. Suddenly she opened her eyes.

	''Impossible. I can't sleep. ~~Its~~ too hot and Saito is not here.''		''Impossible. I can't sleep. It's too hot and Saito is not here.''

	''How can I fall asleep?'' Louise blushed lightly.		''How can I fall asleep?'' Louise blushed lightly.
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	Sylphid and Louise were pressing each others foreheads with sullen growls.		Sylphid and Louise were pressing each others foreheads with sullen growls.

	"No, ~~its~~ miss Tabitha."		"No, it's miss Tabitha."

	"Grrrr."		"Grrrr."
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	Louise, with a red face, nodded to Tabitha and muttered a few words to her ear. Tabitha looked at her with wide opened eyes. Louise nodded to her again and said few more words. Cold sweat covered the forehead of the trembling in fear Tabitha. Her mouth opened.		Louise, with a red face, nodded to Tabitha and muttered a few words to her ear. Tabitha looked at her with wide opened eyes. Louise nodded to her again and said few more words. Cold sweat covered the forehead of the trembling in fear Tabitha. Her mouth opened.

	"You know what, I will go to Saito's room in the middle of the night and pretend to be you. ~~Its~~ wrong, but he is a good guy. Things can only happen if he is tricked. What do you think?"		"You know what, I will go to Saito's room in the middle of the night and pretend to be you. It's wrong, but he is a good guy. Things can only happen if he is tricked. What do you think?"

	Tabitha stiffened. Louise's spell was too strong of a stimulus for the innocent Tabitha.		Tabitha stiffened. Louise's spell was too strong of a stimulus for the innocent Tabitha.
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	"I heard the word 'estrus'. What was that?"		"I heard the word 'estrus'. What was that?"

	"~~Its~~... ~~its~~ just that this maid is really noisy."		"It's... it's just that this maid is really noisy."

	Siesta felt that she should say something and looked at Tabitha, who quietly cancelled the silencing spell.		Siesta felt that she should say something and looked at Tabitha, who quietly cancelled the silencing spell.
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	But not now. Embarrassing.		But not now. Embarrassing.

	"I also wanted to see you. I can't sleep. ~~Its~~ so hot and sleeping separately is strange. Unusual I mean."		"I also wanted to see you. I can't sleep. It's so hot and sleeping separately is strange. Unusual I mean."

	Louise sat next to Saito and gently snuggled to him. It was a new habit. She took his hand. Saito took the hint and lifted her chin. Louise closed her eyes. Their lips met and a sense of security filled Louise. After a while she asked "What were you thinking about?"		Louise sat next to Saito and gently snuggled to him. It was a new habit. She took his hand. Saito took the hint and lifted her chin. Louise closed her eyes. Their lips met and a sense of security filled Louise. After a while she asked "What were you thinking about?"
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	"Not convinced?" - she asked with concern. Indeed, she didn't want to fight the elves herself. If negotiations fail, she will...		"Not convinced?" - she asked with concern. Indeed, she didn't want to fight the elves herself. If negotiations fail, she will...

	~~Its~~ inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.		It's inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.

	"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such strong opponents."		"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such strong opponents."
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	"I will arrive tomorrow... What? She is going to summon a familiar!" - said a surprised Louise.		"I will arrive tomorrow... What? She is going to summon a familiar!" - said a surprised Louise.

	"~~Its~~ not completely unexpected. The Pope gathers four of four together to use full Void potential."		"It's not completely unexpected. The Pope gathers four of four together to use full Void potential."

	"Right, but..." said a worried Louise. Crusade wasn't something new, but now it had become real for her.		"Right, but..." said a worried Louise. Crusade wasn't something new, but now it had become real for her.
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	Saito shook his head.		Saito shook his head.

	"~~Its~~ inevitable. Well, I hate it, but ~~its~~ just how it is, there is nothing to like or dislike. First we will properly explain our problem to the elves. If they reply 'whatever, tough luck'" - he squinted his eyes - "I will fight. For myself and my friends. There is no doubt about it."		"It's inevitable. Well, I hate it, but it's just how it is, there is nothing to like or dislike. First we will properly explain our problem to the elves. If they reply 'whatever, tough luck'" - he squinted his eyes - "I will fight. For myself and my friends. There is no doubt about it."

	"Thank you."		"Thank you."

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	"I can't. Eleonore would kill me. She would never allow it."		"I can't. Eleonore would kill me. She would never allow it."

	~~Anyways~~, God and sister have to forgive what will happen in the next five minutes, Louise thought while untying the rope. Then the door opened and a cheerful voice rang in the room.		Anyway, God and sister have to forgive what will happen in the next five minutes, Louise thought while untying the rope. Then the door opened and a cheerful voice rang in the room.

	"Yes! Hi! Kyuikyui!"		"Yes! Hi! Kyuikyui!"

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	''Ah, its impossible. The pillow is humid and hot and it only gets better when someone breathes on your nape. Just perfect.''		''Ah, its impossible. The pillow is humid and hot and it only gets better when someone breathes on your nape. Just perfect.''

	A rope connected the wrists of ~~Luise~~ and Siesta. Its like a painter that keeps a ship at a pier. Untie it and Siesta, little unfaithful boat, will start her travel to port Saito sleeping in the other room.		A rope connected the wrists of Louise and Siesta. Its like a painter that keeps a ship at a pier. Untie it and Siesta, little unfaithful boat, will start her travel to port Saito sleeping in the other room.

	''And it wouldn't be good for anyone. It would only lead to unnecessary violence. No one wants that, right?''		''And it wouldn't be good for anyone. It would only lead to unnecessary violence. No one wants that, right?''
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	"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."		"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."

	Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place" thought Louise. Of ~~couuse~~ this wasn't something she would say aloud.		Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place" thought Louise. Of course this wasn't something she would say aloud.

	"I will fight too. To protect this place."		"I will fight too. To protect this place."

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	"Huge difference! You are trying to bite through the rope with your teeth! Stop it!"		"Huge difference! You are trying to bite through the rope with your teeth! Stop it!"

	Louise pulled the rope, Tabitha and Siesta woke up.		Louise pulled the rope and Tabitha and Siesta woke up.

	"...what?"		"...what?"

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	"Your familiar's room."		"Your familiar's room."

	Louise tried to stand up but was pulled back by the rope and fell on the bed with a yelp. The rope was still intact, Sylphid couldn't bite through it.		Louise tried to stand up but was pulled back by the rope and fell on the bed with a yelp. The rope was still intact; Sylphid couldn't bite through it.

	"Kyui! Durable rope! Pink Runt!"		"Kyui! Durable rope! Pink Runt!"

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	"Stop talking and get out. Dragons sleep outside."		"Stop talking and get out. Dragons sleep outside."

	Louise and Sylphid glared at each other~~, Siesta asked Tabitha:~~		Louise and Sylphid glared at each other.

	"So, does the stupid dragon speak for miss Tabitha?"		Siesta asked Tabitha "So, does the stupid dragon speak for miss Tabitha?"

	Tabitha paled, bit a lip lightly and looked away.		Tabitha paled, bit a lip lightly and looked away.
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	Tabitha reached for the cane with her free right hand and cast a silencing spell on Siesta. Ignoring Siesta's attempt to make signs she bashed the head of the dumb dragon.		Tabitha reached for the cane with her free right hand and cast a silencing spell on Siesta. Ignoring Siesta's attempt to make signs she bashed the head of the dumb dragon.

	Louise, with red face, nodded to Tabitha and muttered a few words to her ear. Tabitha looked at her with wide opened eyes. Louise nodded to her again and said few more words. Cold sweat covered the forehead of the trembling in fear Tabitha. Her mouth opened.		Louise, with a red face, nodded to Tabitha and muttered a few words to her ear. Tabitha looked at her with wide opened eyes. Louise nodded to her again and said few more words. Cold sweat covered the forehead of the trembling in fear Tabitha. Her mouth opened.

	"You know what, I will go to Saito's room in the middle of the night and pretend to be you. Its wrong, but he is a good guy. Things only ~~can~~ happen if he is tricked. What do you think?"		"You know what, I will go to Saito's room in the middle of the night and pretend to be you. Its wrong, but he is a good guy. Things can only happen if he is tricked. What do you think?"

	Tabitha stiffened. Louise's spell was too strong of a stimulus for the innocent Tabitha.		Tabitha stiffened. Louise's spell was too strong of a stimulus for the innocent Tabitha.
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	"Why would you start this party in the middle of the night?"		"Why would you start this party in the middle of the night?"

	"We didn't" mumbled Louise but Eleonore didn't hear her.		"We didn't", mumbled Louise, but Eleonore didn't hear her.

	"I heard the word 'estrus'. What was that?"		"I heard the word 'estrus'. What was that?"
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	"No!" - everyone replied briskly.		"No!" - everyone replied briskly.

	The "lesson" lasted about two hours. Apparently its purpose was to entertain the awakened Eleonore. Mostly they were ~~training~~ to walk properly under a relentless stream of Eleonore's homilies.		The "lesson" lasted about two hours. Apparently its purpose was to entertain the awakened Eleonore. Mostly they were trained to walk properly under a relentless stream of Eleonore's homilies.

	Louise was confident that her gait was appropriate for a noble, but on this night nothing was good enough for Eleonore. She had to repeat the "exercises" again and again.		Louise was confident that her gait was appropriate for a noble, but on this night nothing was good enough for Eleonore. She had to repeat the "exercises" again and again.
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	"Are you awake?" - he said smiling.		"Are you awake?" - he said smiling.

	"Yes. Can't sleep for some reason. You too?" Louise replied blushing, strangely embarrassed. Saito seemed to be lost in thoughts until now, his face had been serious and absent. ~~Its~~ like he had instantly become two or three years senior... a year at least.		"Yes. Can't sleep for some reason. You too?" Louise replied blushing, strangely embarrassed. Saito seemed to be lost in thoughts until now, his face had been serious and absent. It was like he had instantly become two or three years senior... one year at least.

	It was already mentioned that a year in Saito's world was a little shorter than a year of this world~~. The~~ length of a day seemed to be about the same. Their worlds were not all that different.		It was already mentioned that a year in Saito's world was a little shorter than a year of this world but the length of a day seemed to be about the same. Their worlds were not all that different.

	It meant that Saito was about the same age as her, yet just moment ago he seemed to be an adult. It was unusual. She always considered contemporary boys to be just kids, always spouting some nonsense. Boorish and rude creatures. Until she met Saito she wasn't much interested in love, and not so long ago he was one of those creatures.		It meant that Saito was about the same age as her, yet just moment ago he seemed to be an adult. It was unusual. She had always considered contemporary boys to be just kids, always spouting some nonsense. Boorish and rude creatures. Until she met Saito she wasn't much interested in love, and not so long ago he was just one of those creatures.

	But he had matured very fast.		But he had matured very fast.
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	''I wonder why?" she thought. "A lot had happened recently. But one crisis he faced was obviously the greatest. He left his world. Did it change him?''		''I wonder why?" she thought. "A lot had happened recently. But one crisis he faced was obviously the greatest. He left his world. Did it change him?''

	"What is it? Did you want to discuss something?" - said Saito to the silently watching ~~him~~ Louise.		"What is it? Did you want to discuss something?" - said Saito to the silently watching Louise.

	"What? Ah, no. Nothing special..."		"What? Ah, no. Nothing special..."
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	Its inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.		Its inevitable. Otherwise half of the people in Halkeginia will have nowhere to live. And for the other half life will change completely.

	"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such a strong opponents."		"No, I understand the Pope's position. People will have no place to live. It doesn't get more serious than that. But elves are such strong opponents."

	"Well," - Louise also become serious.		"Well," - Louise also become serious.

	"We don't have much to bargain with in negotiations. Usual magic is ineffective against them."		"We don't have much to bargain with in negotiations. Usual magic is ineffective against them."

	Louise knew it. But if four of four worked together they would be able to use much more powerful magic.		Louise knew it. But if four of four worked together they would be able to use much more powerful magic.

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	"Tiffania. I mean, her mother was an elf. It might be hard for her to fight against her mother's people."		"Tiffania. I mean, her mother was an elf. It might be hard for her to fight against her mother's people."

	Louise was startled. Indeed, for them elves were bitter enemies. They definitely didn't want to fight them, but if it had to be done, there wouldn't be much rejection. But Tiffania was different.		Louise was startled. Indeed, for them, elves were bitter enemies. They definitely didn't want to fight them, but if it had to be done, there wouldn't be much rejection. But Tiffania was different.

	And they couldn't do it without her.		And they couldn't do it without her.
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	"Right, but..." said a worried Louise. Crusade wasn't something new, but now it had become real for her.		"Right, but..." said a worried Louise. Crusade wasn't something new, but now it had become real for her.

	Gathering of the Tristain invasion army had started again. Judging by previous campaigns invasions, is unlikely to go smoothly.		Gathering of the Tristain invasion army had started again. Judging by previous campaigns invasions, it is unlikely to go smoothly.

	Nothing unusual, but this time she was directly involved. Louise was nervous. The future of the entire of Halkeginia, beyond any doubt, depended on tiny and unreliable her.		Nothing unusual, but this time she was directly involved. Louise was nervous. The future of the entire of Halkeginia, beyond any doubt, depended on tiny and unreliable her.
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	"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."		"No. Well, just a little. But, really, thank you."

	Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place" thought Louise. Of ~~cause~~ this wasn't something she would say aloud.		Louise put her cheek on Saito's chest. He gently stroked her hair for a while. "This is my place" thought Louise. Of couuse this wasn't something she would say aloud.

	"I will fight too. To protect this place."		"I will fight too. To protect this place."