Zero no Tsukaima:Volume19 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 2 - Assault===		===Chapter 2: Assault===

	Saito sighed. There was one problem that he couldn't discuss with Louise.		Saito sighed. There was one problem that he couldn't discuss with Louise.

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Comrade at 21:14, 14 October 2016

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	"How do you know it?"		"How do you know it?"

	Saito ~~reached~~ up and tried to reach Jack with the katana, but the giant moved fast and he dodged.		Saito kip-up and tried to reach Jack with the katana, but the giant moved fast and he dodged.

	"Hey, I'm not fighting you."		"Hey, I'm not fighting you."

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	"Forest trees, seize my foe."		"Forest trees, seize my foe."

	He recited a simple incantation with a very deep voice. Obeying Ancient Magic, tree branches moved tangling Saito's ~~legs~~.		He recited a simple incantation with a very deep voice. Obeying Ancient Magic, tree branches moved tangling Saito's leg.

	Saito was surprised for a moment by Tabitha's and Louise's appearance. Then he was deeply touched, almost moved to tears.		Saito was surprised for a moment by Tabitha's and Louise's appearance. Then he was deeply touched, almost moved to tears.

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	"You move, you die."		"You move, you die."

	She said ~~this~~ flatly. There was not a trace of fighting spirit in her voice, but the icy chill drifting from her whole body told Bleu that she was deadly serious. Although she looked like a child, her stance befitted a battlefield.		She said flatly. There was not a trace of fighting spirit in her voice, but the icy chill drifting from her whole body told Bleu that she was deadly serious. Although she looked like a child, her stance befitted a battlefield.

	But Bleu wasn't a rookie either. He prepared to absorb the girl's attack and cast a spell. Lightning flew from the cane top with a blinding flash.		But Bleu wasn't a rookie either. He prepared to absorb the girl's attack and cast a spell. Lightning flew from the cane top with a blinding flash.

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	Saito said sadly. He was angry. He shouldn't help this bunch to fight with the elves.		Saito said sadly. He was angry. He shouldn't help this bunch to fight with the elves.

	"Don't talk about the clients!" said Bleu angrily.		"Don't talk about the clients!" said Bleu angrily.

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	Instantly they were in the "water". Was there a flood of some kind? Did they teleport somewhere?		Instantly they were in the "water". Was there a flood of some kind? Did they teleport somewhere?

	Anyway, it was rather deep. Can't reach the ground! Saito's hand touched something. ~~Its~~ a tree! From a grove near the mansion.		Anyway, it was rather deep. Can't reach the ground! Saito's hand touched something. It's a tree! From a grove near the mansion.

	This means the ground changed into water somehow.		This means the ground changed into water somehow.

Comrade at 19:42, 14 October 2016

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	Saito tired of this bickering.		Saito tired of this bickering.

	"~~Anyways~~, go find some safe place. I don't really have time to mess with you. There is a lot to be done."		"Anyway, go find some safe place. I don't really have time to mess with you. There is a lot to be done."

	Bleu balked.		Bleu balked.
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	Saito pointed the katana at Bleu stomping his feet in frustration and said "Well, who hired you to kill me?"		Saito pointed the katana at Bleu stomping his feet in frustration and said "Well, who hired you to kill me?"

	~~Anyways~~, he didn't want to be targeted by country nobles anymore. Expecting a hit in the back while dealing with elves would be too much.		Anyway, he didn't want to be targeted by country nobles anymore. Expecting a hit in the back while dealing with elves would be too much.

	"Damn! Damn! How? Why?"		"Damn! Damn! How? Why?"

Comrade at 22:14, 13 October 2016

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	"Damn! To lose to this guy again! Damn!"		"Damn! To lose to this guy again! Damn!"

	Saito pointed the katana at Bleu.		Saito pointed the katana at Bleu stomping his feet in frustration and said "Well, who hired you to kill me?"

	~~Stomping~~ his feet in frustration and said "Well, who hired you to kill me?"

	Anyways, he didn't want to be targeted by country nobles anymore. Expecting a hit in the back while dealing with elves would be too much.		Anyways, he didn't want to be targeted by country nobles anymore. Expecting a hit in the back while dealing with elves would be too much.

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	''And if it happened, I wonder if I could say to her: 'Stop'...''		''And if it happened, I wonder if I could say to her 'Stop'...''

	Saito didn't know that "sometimes Void can take part of the caster's life force" was written in Founder's Prayer Book. Still, intuition was telling him that it was dangerous.		Saito didn't know that 'sometimes Void can take part of the caster's life force' was written in Founder's Prayer Book. Still, intuition was telling him that it was dangerous.

	And with Louise's dedication, no one could stop her casting such a spell.		And with Louise's dedication, no one could stop her casting such a spell.
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	"Hmm... It's supposed to happen everywhere. And whatever happens, I am sure we will survive."		"Hmm... It's supposed to happen everywhere. And whatever happens, I am sure we will survive."

	That most likely was correct. Maybe most nobles thought so? That whatever happens they will be fine? Actually, everyone thinks like that; yet just his popularity surge almost killed him. The Nobles will be fine, but what will happen to the commoners working in the fields? There are a lot more of them than nobles.		That most likely was correct. Maybe most nobles thought so? That whatever happens they will be fine? Actually, everyone thinks like that, yet just his popularity surge almost killed him. The Nobles will be fine, but what will happen to the commoners working in the fields? There are a lot more of them than nobles.

	"It was fine for six thousand years. It can't be that bad. Are you slow or something?"		"It was fine for six thousand years. It can't be that bad. Are you slow or something?"
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	"Windy Icicles" flew toward Bleu as an embodiment of Tabitha's anger.		"Windy Icicles" flew toward Bleu as an embodiment of Tabitha's anger.

	Apparently she was very angry~~; there~~ were dozens of them.		Apparently she was very angry. There were dozens of them.

	The icicles were launched all at once so they were difficult to deflect. Bleu stopped most of them with his wand, but he hadn't expected this attack and a few arrows hit him.		The icicles were launched all at once so they were difficult to deflect. Bleu stopped most of them with his wand, but he hadn't expected this attack and a few arrows hit him.
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	But Bleu wasn't a rookie either. He prepared to absorb the girl's attack and cast a spell. Lightning flew from the cane top with a blinding flash.		But Bleu wasn't a rookie either. He prepared to absorb the girl's attack and cast a spell. Lightning flew from the cane top with a blinding flash.

	"Lightning" is a spell of a high level mage. It is difficult to use because it can hit anyone, even the caster himself. Usually mages use "Lightning Cloud" instead, creating a small cloud from a safe distance.		'Lightning' is a spell of a high level mage. It is difficult to use because it can hit anyone, even the caster himself. Usually mages use 'Lightning Cloud' instead, creating a small cloud from a safe distance.

	Bleu, however, easily deflected the lightning. He was a worthy opponent.		Bleu, however, easily deflected the lightning. He was a worthy opponent.
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