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Rxls at 15:30, 30 June 2018

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	===Chapter 5 - Ali's visit=== <!-- アリィーの訪問 -->		===Chapter 5: Ali's visit=== <!-- アリィーの訪問 -->

	Next morning...		Next morning...

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	Lose heart... Saito remembered something Tabitha said about it.		Lose heart... Saito remembered something Tabitha said about it.

	Tabitha... an elf almost forced her to take medicine... If they hadn't rescued her in the last moment at the Alhambra, she would have "lost her heart".		Tabitha... an elf almost forced her to take medicine... If they hadn't rescued her in the last moment at the Alhambra, she would have 'lost her heart'.

	"You should be grateful. The Council wanted to use it from the start. It would be safer. Only because I and my uncle vigorously objected can you guys still think clearly."		"You should be grateful. The Council wanted to use it from the start. It would be safer. Only because I and my uncle vigorously objected can you guys still think clearly."
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	"Yes. She was very beautiful. Even though my childhood memories are faint, I remember this..."		"Yes. She was very beautiful. Even though my childhood memories are faint, I remember this..."

	"I will check. It is very unusual for an elf to go there~~; maybe~~ I can find out more about her."		"I will check. It is very unusual for an elf to go there. Maybe I can find out more about her."

	"Really?"		"Really?"
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	"It's Ali!"		"It's Ali!"

	Luctiana went outside to meet her fiancee; Saito followed her. A large Wind Dragon was swimming to the pier with an elf on his back.		Luctiana went outside to meet her fiancee, Saito followed her. A large Wind Dragon was swimming to the pier with an elf on his back.

	As the elf approached in long strides, Saito noticed a frown on his face. The elf's aversion to humans was rather obvious.		As the elf approached in long strides, Saito noticed a frown on his face. The elf's aversion to humans was rather obvious.
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	Excited, Saito was about to complain but was chided by Tiffania.		Excited, Saito was about to complain but was chided by Tiffania.

	"I understand your feelings but..., calm down. Please."		"I understand your feelings but... calm down. Please."

	Saito came to his senses and nodded.		Saito came to his senses and nodded.
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	"You have dangerous guests. Are you ok?"		"You have dangerous guests. Are you ok?"

	Ali said to Luctiana; she nodded.		Ali said to Luctiana, she nodded.

	"Indeed. We had a lot of fun talking."		"Indeed. We had a lot of fun talking."
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Comrade at 20:01, 14 October 2016

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	Next morning...		Next morning...

	Saito was awakened by sunlight flowing through a window. Tiffania occupied the bed, so he was sleeping on a couch. He couldn't sleep in the same bed with Tiffania again, even though Tiffania had said "We're friends, so ~~its~~ fine", Saito realized that it wasn't.		Saito was awakened by sunlight flowing through a window. Tiffania occupied the bed, so he was sleeping on a couch. He couldn't sleep in the same bed with Tiffania again, even though Tiffania had said "We're friends, so it's fine", Saito realized that it wasn't.

	For example, he could touch something while tossing in his sleep. It was obvious for him that that touch, like a drug, would just switch his brain off, so he slept on the sofa. The view of the cleavage convinced him that it was a wise decision.		For example, he could touch something while tossing in his sleep. It was obvious for him that that touch, like a drug, would just switch his brain off, so he slept on the sofa. The view of the cleavage convinced him that it was a wise decision.
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	Luctiana pouted.		Luctiana pouted.

	"It's not yours, ~~its~~ a guest bed."		"It's not yours, it's a guest bed."

	"Anyway, I don't like barbarian sleeping in an elf's bed."		"Anyway, I don't like barbarian sleeping in an elf's bed."

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	Next morning...		Next morning...

	Saito was ~~waked up~~ by sunlight flowing through a window. Tiffania occupied the bed, so he was sleeping on a couch. He couldn't sleep in same bed with Tiffania again~~. Even~~ though Tiffania said '~~we are~~ friends, so its fine', Saito realized that it wasn't.		Saito was awakened by sunlight flowing through a window. Tiffania occupied the bed, so he was sleeping on a couch. He couldn't sleep in the same bed with Tiffania again, even though Tiffania had said "We're friends, so its fine", Saito realized that it wasn't.

	For example, he could touch something while tossing in his sleep. It was obvious for him that touch, like a drug, would just ~~swith~~ his brain off.		For example, he could touch something while tossing in his sleep. It was obvious for him that that touch, like a drug, would just switch his brain off, so he slept on the sofa. The view of the cleavage convinced him that it was a wise decision.

	~~So he~~ slept ~~on the sofa~~. The view ~~of the cleavage~~ convinced ~~him~~ that it was ~~a wise decision~~.		Tiffania slept peacefully. The spacious robe went awry in the night, and the resulting view was captivating. Saito tried to look away, but about ten seconds later he childishly convinced himself that it was an encouragement from God.

	~~Tiffania slept peacefully. Spacious robe went awry in the night and resulting view was captivating. Saito tried to look away, but, about ten seconds later~~, ~~he childishly convinced himself that it was an encouragement from God.~~		Actually, a difficult mission was ahead of them both. It would be a waste if only he received the encouragement.

	~~Actually~~ difficult mission was ahead of them both. It would be a waste if only he received the encouragement.

	Saito thought about it and shook his head.		Saito thought about it and shook his head.
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	''This is wrong.''		''This is wrong.''

	Tiffania tossed in her sleep again. ~~Loose~~ robe shifted even more, Grand Canyon came into Saito's view. It was amazing.		Tiffania tossed in her sleep again. The loose robe shifted even more, and the Grand Canyon came into Saito's view. It was amazing.

	Saito almost cried with excitement and joined his palms. Then Tiffania woke up. She noticed the state of her robe and Saito's gaze, blushed and covered cleavage with hand. Saito was very embarrassed.		Saito almost cried with excitement and joined his palms. Then Tiffania woke up. She noticed the state of her robe and Saito's gaze, blushed and covered her cleavage with her hand. Saito was very embarrassed.

	''It was just a peep, wasn't it? Knowing me, would Louise be disappointed?'' Saito mentally bowed to his sweetheart.		''It was just a peep, wasn't it? Knowing me, would Louise be disappointed?'' Saito mentally bowed to his sweetheart.

	''Is there an instinct below love? Can I be above this instinct? Then I act like that not because of flaw of human's nature~~, it~~ is because of my own flaw.'' Saito mentally vowed to Louise to be strong.		''Is there an instinct below love? Can I be above this instinct? Then I act like that not because of flaw of human's nature. It is because of my own flaw.'' Saito mentally vowed to Louise to be strong.

	''I will not look anymore. Because Louise is the best...'' he muttered in his mind. He gave promise to Louise. It didn't happen often, Saito made a mental promise of loyalty.		''I will not look anymore. Because Louise is the best...'' he muttered in his mind. He gave a promise to Louise. It didn't happen often, but Saito made a mental promise of loyalty.

	Tiffania murmured something almost crying.		Tiffania murmured something almost crying.

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	Next morning...		Next morning...

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	Ali become sullen.		Ali become sullen.

	"I wish you ~~got rid of~~ barbarians~~' influence~~. Anyway, barbarians, get on the dragon. Lord Bidashal is waiting."		"I wish you wasn't so passionate about barbarians. Anyway, barbarians, get on the dragon. Lord Bidashal is waiting."

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Comrade at 07:32, 18 August 2016

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	Luctiana become serious. It seemed that it wasn't a trivial matter for her.		Luctiana become serious. It seemed that it wasn't a trivial matter for her.

	"Frankly I was thinking about it. The cataclysm might be a part of ~~The~~ Great Purpose but just accepting it as such doesn't feel right. But keep in mind, very few elves would see it like this."		"Frankly I was thinking about it. The cataclysm might be a part of the Great Purpose but just accepting it as such doesn't feel right. But keep in mind, very few elves would see it like this."

	"Really?"		"Really?"

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	Saito thought about it and shook his head.		Saito thought about it and shook his head.

	"This is wrong."		''This is wrong.''

	Tiffania tossed in her sleep again. Loose robe shifted even more, Grand Canyon came into Saito's view. It was amazing.		Tiffania tossed in her sleep again. Loose robe shifted even more, Grand Canyon came into Saito's view. It was amazing.
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	"Hey, you guys. We are leaving. Get ready."		"Hey, you guys. We are leaving. Get ready."

	''Ali.''		Ali.

	''Is he the fiance Luctiana mentioned yesterday? He is probably the one who put Saito to sleep. And Louise and Tabitha...''		Is he the fiance Luctiana mentioned yesterday? He is probably the one who put Saito to sleep. And Louise and Tabitha...

	Saito couldn't suppress his anger anymore. It wasn't a good time for it. But he just couldn't.		Saito couldn't suppress his anger anymore. It wasn't a good time for it. But he just couldn't.
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	"Bastard, how dared you... Louise and Tabitha..."		"Bastard, how dared you... Louise and Tabitha..."
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	However, Tiffania firmly grasped his hand.		However, Tiffania firmly grasped his hand.

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	"How dare you to attack my Louise!"		"How dare you to attack my Louise!"
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	A full force hit reached Ali's face, he winced.		A full force hit reached Ali's face, he winced.

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*Chapter 5 - Ali's visit 

Next morning...

Saito was waked up by sunlight flowing through a window. Tiffania occupied the bed, so he was sleeping on a couch. He couldn't sleep in same bed with Tiffania again. Even though Tiffania said 'we are friends, so its fine', Saito realized that it wasn't.

For example, he could touch something while tossing in his sleep. It was obvious for him that touch, like a drug, would just swith his brain off.

So he slept on the sofa. The view of the cleavage convinced him that it was a wise decision.

Tiffania slept peacefully. Spacious robe went awry in the night and resulting view was captivating. Saito tried to look away, but, about ten seconds later, he childishly convinced himself that it was an encouragement from God.

Actually difficult mission was ahead of them both. It would be a waste if only he received the encouragement.

Saito thought about it and shook his head.

"This is wrong."

Tiffania tossed in her sleep again. Loose robe shifted even more, Grand Canyon came into Saito's view. It was amazing.

Saito almost cried with excitement and joined his palms. Then Tiffania woke up. She noticed the state of her robe and Saito's gaze, blushed and covered cleavage with hand. Saito was very embarrassed.

''It was just a peep, wasn't it? Knowing me, would Louise be disappointed?'' Saito mentally bowed to his sweetheart.

''Is there an instinct below love? Can I be above this instinct? Then I act like that not because of flaw of human's nature, it is because of my own flaw.'' Saito mentally vowed to Louise to be strong.

''I will not look anymore. Because Louise is the best...'' he muttered in his mind. He gave promise to Louise. It didn't happen often, Saito made a mental promise of loyalty.

Tiffania murmured something almost crying.

"...weird. Definitely my chest is weird. It bothers you, doesn't it? Sniff..."

"No! Don't worry about it!" Saito hastily shook his head.

"What is happening?"

Door opened and Luctiana entered. Saito pretended that nothing happened. Tiffania gulped, she looked nervous.

Saito winked to Tiffania, she nodded.

"Did you have breakfast? Some fruits in this oasis are very good."

Saito raised his hand, Luctiana noticed.

"Huh? What happened?"

"I have something to discuss. Let's negotiate?"

"Negotiate what?" Said Luctiana with blank expression.

"I would like to talk with elf leaders."

"What? Again? You want to see Shaitan's Gate and so-called magic equipment?"

"Exactly."

"Didn't I say already to forget about it?"

Saito nonchalantly declared.

"Then I will die."

"Huh? What are you talking about?"

Tiffania was looking at Saito waiting for signal to intervene. He nodded.

"Ah! This guy will do as he says!"

"Yes I will."

"Die! Stop this nonsense! Hey Saito!"

"Ah. Nonsense."

This was the strategy they came up with yesterday. Elves needed Saito alive. They agreed to keep Tiffania's ability to erase memory as a trump card.

Luctiana looked at them alternately and started to laugh.

"Funny! You guys sure have strangest ideas!"

Saito blushed.

"Why are you laughing? If I died, wouldn't it be a problem for you? A new familiar..."

"I can see it in your eyes. You are not really intended to die, are you?"

Saito didn't have a response for that.

Luctiana stared at him.

"You'd better not to say something like that in front of other elves. Suicide, huh? You would lose your heart."

"Huh?"

Lose heart... Saito remembered something Tabitha said about it.

Tabitha... an elf almost forced her to take medicine... If they didn't rescue her in the last moment from Alhambra, she would "lose her heart".

"You should be grateful. Council wanted to use it from the start. It would be safer. Only because I and my uncle vigorously objected you guys still can think clearly."

Tiffania and Saito paled. It was horrifying.

Luctiana mentioned someone else.

"Why did he protect me?"

"Hmm. He seems to think you are unusual. He said that he had a lot of questions to you, so you will meet him soon. My uncle is great. It's almost what you wanted. And please no more crazy ideas."

Saito and Tiffania exchanged embarrassed glances.

Then Luctiana continued her inquiry. This time she was mostly asking Tiffania.

"Who is your mother? How you were born?"

Tiffania glanced at Saito for support. He was sitting nearby.

Somewhat frightened, she started slowly describe her upbringing. Her parents were Grand Duke of Albion and his mistress, an elf woman. Then her uncle, the king, sent soldiers to kill her parents.

She escaped and lived in a forest. And met Saito and his friends...

She told everything except for the fact that she had Void magic abilities.

Luctiana listened her story with interest, taking notes.

"What was your mother's name?"

"Father was calling her Shayal."

Luctiana smiled.

"It means 'pearl' in our language. I am sure she was beautiful."

Tiffania smiled shyly.

"Yes. She was very beautiful. Even though my childhood memories are faint, I remember this..."

"I will check. It is very unusual for an elf to go there, maybe I can find out more about her."

"Really?"

Tiffania was delighted.

"Yes. Maybe you have relatives."

Tiffania's smile faded.

"Right... But... I think..."

"What?"

"My parents loved each other very much. So, I think humans and elves can understand each other."

"Well, yes. That's why we can talk like this."

"In this case please take us to 'Holy Land'! Otherwise a lot of people will die! And those who survive will lose everything!"

Luctiana become serious. It seemed that it wasn't a trivial matter for her.

"Frankly I was thinking about it. The cataclysm might be a part of The Great Purpose but just accepting it as such doesn't feel right. But keep in mind, very few elves would see it like this."

"Really?"

"Thank you very much!"

Tiffania and Saito bowed.

"For six thousand years we protected Shaitan's Gate. They say opening it would cause a horrible disaster."

"What kind of disaster?"

Asked Saito. Luctiana opened eyes wide.

"Huge calamity."

"But what is it?"

"People believe that six thousands years ago 'devil' came from Shaitan's Gate."

"What happened then?"

"They say every second elf had died."

Saito gulped. Tiffania paled.

"Did it really happen?"

"Who knows? Not all elves believe it. After all it was so long ago. But this is why Shaitan's Gate must be protected at all costs. You guys may be in big trouble but this is far from trivial matter for us."

Saito and Tiffania looked at each other, both very concerned.

Something large splashed into the water outside.

"It's Ali!"

Luctiana went outside to meet her fiance, Saito followed her. Large wind dragon was swimming to the pier with an elf on his back.

As the elf approached in long strides, Saito noticed frown on his face. Elf's aversion to humans was rather obvious.

With arrogant expression on his delicate face elf was examining Saito as if he was a wild animal. It gave Saito new appreciation of Luctiana's attitude.

Ali looked around the room and said in a sullen voice.

"Hey, I hope barbarian wasn't sleeping in my bed."

Luctiana pouted.

"It's not yours, its a guest bed."

"Anyway, I don't like barbarian sleeping in an elf's bed."

Replied Ali glancing askance at Saito

"Hey, you guys. We are leaving. Get ready."

''Ali.''

''Is he the fiance Luctiana mentioned yesterday? He is probably the one who put Saito to sleep. And Louise and Tabitha...''

Saito couldn't suppress his anger anymore. It wasn't a good time for it. But he just couldn't.

"Bastard!"

Yelled Saito and threw a hit. As if he expected the attack, Ali dodged and knocked Saito down. He moved very fast, like a professional boxer.

Saito spectacularly fell. Tiffania rushed to help him get up. Ali wiped his fist with a handkerchief.

"Hey! Ali! Stop it!"

"He started it."

Saito tried to stand up.

"Bastard, how dared you... Louise and Tabitha..."

However, Tiffania firmly grasped his hand.

"Stop it. Saito, stop!"

Ignoring them Ali said to Luctiana.

"You should modify 'defense' spell so that it protected me too. Anyone visiting you can be attacked like that."

Saito gripped katana. Ali noticed it and frowned.

"Hey, barbarian, don't. If you draw the sword even I can't go easy on you."

"Did you injure Louise and Tabitha?"

"Louise? Tabitha? Ah, right, they tried to stop us. I didn't kill the descendant of the devil. Relax."

There seemed to be regret in his tone, as if he felt sorry about missed opportunity. Saito groaned and pounced again. Annoyed Ali dodged and responded with sharp kick.

Saito blocked the kick with both hands and kept pressing.

"How dare you to attack my Louise!"
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A full force hit reached Ali's face, he winced.

"This is for Tabitha!"

Another hit in the face. Ali tried to cast a spell but at this moment an umbrella hanging from the ceiling suddenly opened and fell covering heads of both fighters. They tried to get rid of it but for naught. The umbrella closed tight.

"Guys, so irresponsible! It's my house! You wanna fight, go outside!"

"Are you taking barbarian's side now?"

Exclaimed Ali from under the umbrella.

"No, I am not! You just tried to use spirit magic in my house!"

Replied Luctiana glaring at Ali.

"Anyway, promise not to fight in the house. Otherwise you are not welcome here."

Luctiana snapped her fingers and the umbrella obediently returned to the ceiling. Ali suppressing anger turned to Saito.

"Don't forget it, barbarian."

Excited Saito was about to complain but was chided by Tiffania.

"I understand your feelings but..., calm down. Please."

Saito came to his senses and nodded.

"I'm sorry, Tiffa..."

"You have dangerous guests. Are you ok?"

Ali said to Luctiana, she nodded.

"Indeed. We had a lot of fun talking."

Ali become sullen.

"I wish you got rid of barbarians' influence. Anyway, barbarians, get on the dragon. Lord Bidashal is waiting."

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