Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter4 - Revision history

Arcorann: Pretty important translation here (その日の夜中)

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Pretty important translation here (その日の夜中)

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	Guiche quickly got back on the horse. Meanwhile, Saito, realizing that Louise was looking at him, turned his head away.		Guiche quickly got back on the horse. Meanwhile, Saito, realizing that Louise was looking at him, turned his head away.

	As they had been traveling at full speed and exchanged their tired horses for fresh ones several times, they reached the outskirts of La Rochelle ~~by nightfall~~.		As they had been traveling at full speed and exchanged their tired horses for fresh ones several times, they reached the outskirts of La Rochelle that night.

	Saito looked around in astonishment. ''Aren't we approaching a port? Why do I still see mountains everywhere? Maybe once we cross this mountain we should be able to see the ocean.''		Saito looked around in astonishment. ''Aren't we approaching a port? Why do I still see mountains everywhere? Maybe once we cross this mountain we should be able to see the ocean.''

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	"You're welcome."		"You're welcome."

	Saito took the opportunity to size up Wardes. He was indeed handsome. Even though Guiche could also be considered a bishonen<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bishonen 美少年] meaning "Beautiful Youth" in ~~japanese~~. Mostly used for describing males.</ref> himself, he was always making a fool out of himself and making irrational decisions. He could even rub his own cheek with a giant mole.		Saito took the opportunity to size up Wardes. He was indeed handsome. Even though Guiche could also be considered a bishonen<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bishonen 美少年] meaning "Beautiful Youth" in Japanese. Mostly used for describing males.</ref> himself, he was always making a fool out of himself and making irrational decisions. He could even rub his own cheek with a giant mole.

	However for Wardes, not only he had the looks. His eyes were like that of an eagle – keen and sharp. That mustache he had further enhanced his suaveness.		However for Wardes, not only he had the looks. His eyes were like that of an eagle – keen and sharp. That mustache he had further enhanced his suaveness.
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	“She's.. she's a noble!”		“She's.. she's a noble!”

	The men immediately backed away from her. As Fouquet was not wearing a cloak<ref>All nobles wear cloaks with an ~~insigna~~ in front.</ref>, none of them knew that she was a magician.		The men immediately backed away from her. As Fouquet was not wearing a cloak<ref>All nobles wear cloaks with an insignia in front.</ref>, none of them knew that she was a magician.

	“Even though I'm a magician, I'm not a noble,” Fouquet said nonchalantly.		“Even though I'm a magician, I'm not a noble,” Fouquet said nonchalantly.

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	It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city was situated on a deep and narrow gorge and because of this, it had a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle was the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers was ten times more than the local population.		It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city was situated on a deep and narrow gorge and because of this, it had a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle was the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers was ten times more than the local population.

	Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings ~~look~~ ordinary, upon closer inspection one ~~can~~ realize that all of them ~~are~~ carved out of a single rock, a feat done by Square ranked earth mages.		Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings looked ordinary, upon closer inspection one could realize that all of them were carved out of a single rock, a feat done by Square ranked earth mages.

	On the narrow street, it appeared to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one made a turn on the street, they could see an even narrower street leading to a bar.		On the narrow street, it appeared to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one made a turn on the street, they could see an even narrower street leading to a bar.
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	Wardes effortlessly mounted back to the top of his griffin, carrying Louise up with him. He then announced to everyone, “We'll spend the night at La Rochelle, tomorrow we will take the first ship to Albion at the break of dawn.”		Wardes effortlessly mounted back to the top of his griffin, carrying Louise up with him. He then announced to everyone, “We'll spend the night at La Rochelle, tomorrow we will take the first ship to Albion at the break of dawn.”

	Kirche sat behind Saito, sharing the same horse with him. Guiche also ~~mounted back to~~ his horse. As for Tabitha, she was still reading her book on her wind dragon.		Kirche sat behind Saito, sharing the same horse with him. Guiche also remounted his horse. As for Tabitha, she was still reading her book on her wind dragon.

	In front of them, sandwiched between two cliffs, was the port city La Rochelle, dazzling with lights.		In front of them, sandwiched between two cliffs, was the port city La Rochelle, dazzling with lights.

186.84.2.35: /* Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle */

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Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle

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	“I have no common knowledge of this world and please don't assume that I do.”		“I have no common knowledge of this world and please don't assume that I do.”

	Suddenly, from top of the cliff, torches were thrown at ~~the~~ their horses. The burning torches illuminated the ravine they were about to cross.		Suddenly, from the top of the cliff, torches were thrown at their horses. The burning torches illuminated the ravine they were about to cross.

	“What's... What's happening !?” Guiche cried.		“What's... What's happening !?” Guiche cried.

Davtoh: /* Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle */

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Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle

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	“Fiancée?”		“Fiancée?”

	“This majestic looking noble is Louise' ~~fiancé~~???”		“This majestic looking noble is Louise' fiancée???”

	“Wardes-sama...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.		“Wardes-sama...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.
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	Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.		Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.

	In a instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.		In an instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.

	“She's.. she's a noble!”		“She's.. she's a noble!”
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	The marriage that was decided by her parents.		The marriage that was decided by her parents.

	The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her ~~fiancé~~.		The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her fiancée.

	At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.		At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.
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	Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.		Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.

	Suddenly faced with a ~~fiancé~~ and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.		Suddenly faced with a fiancée and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.

	Louise turned her head and looked behind.		Louise turned her head and looked behind.
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	“We have already been on these horses for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.		“We have already been on these horses for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.

	“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again...this time hugging her by the shoulder... ''What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's ~~fiancé~~, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...''		“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again...this time hugging her by the shoulder... ''What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's fiancée, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...''

	Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.		Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.
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	“I'm all right...” replied Saito.		“I'm all right...” replied Saito.

	''Damn it! Louise's ~~fiancé~~ just saved my life.'' That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Derflinger. The runes on his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.		''Damn it! Louise's fiancée just saved my life.'' That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Derflinger. The runes on his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.
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	She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.		She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.

	''Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's ~~fiancé~~?'' As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.		''Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's fiancée?'' As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.

	“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”		“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”
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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.		From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.

	Today, “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” is filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons ~~are~~ mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.		Today, the “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” was filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons were mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.

	“The king of Albion is finished!”		“The king of Albion is finished!”
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	“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”		“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”

	The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the ~~royalist~~ to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they ~~value~~ their lives more than their beliefs, and so they ~~are~~ not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.		The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalists to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they valued their lives more than their beliefs, and so felt that they were not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.

	As they were drinking, the bar's door opened ~~and a~~ rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady ~~wore~~ covered most of her face except ~~for~~ the lower part. However, from just the lower part of her face one ~~could~~ already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.		As they were drinking, the bar's door opened. A rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady had worn covered most of her face except the lower part of her face. However, from just the lower part of her face one can already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.

	The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.		The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.

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	“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”		“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”

	The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the ~~royalists~~ to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they ~~valued~~ their lives more than their beliefs, and so they ~~felt that they were~~ not obliged to fight to ~~the~~ death for their clients.		The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalist to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they value their lives more than their beliefs, and so they are not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.

	As they were drinking, the bar's door opened~~. A~~ rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady ~~had worn~~ covered most of her face except the lower part ~~of her face~~. However, from just the lower part of her face one ~~can~~ already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.		As they were drinking, the bar's door opened and a rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady wore covered most of her face except for the lower part. However, from just the lower part of her face one could already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.

	The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.		The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.

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	From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.		From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.

	Today, ~~the~~ “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” ~~was~~ filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons ~~were~~ mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.		Today, “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” is filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons are mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.

	“The king of Albion is finished!”		“The king of Albion is finished!”
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	“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”		“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”

	The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the ~~royalist~~ to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they ~~value~~ their lives more than their beliefs, and so they ~~are~~ not obliged to fight to ~~their~~ death for their clients.		The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalists to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they valued their lives more than their beliefs, and so they felt that they were not obliged to fight to the death for their clients.

	As they were drinking, the bar's door opened. A rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady had worn covered most of her face except the lower part of her face. However, from just the lower part of her face one can already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.		As they were drinking, the bar's door opened. A rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady had worn covered most of her face except the lower part of her face. However, from just the lower part of her face one can already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.

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	It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city was situated on a deep and narrow gorge and because of this, it had a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle was the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers was ten times more than the local population.		It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city was situated on a deep and narrow gorge and because of this, it had a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle was the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers was ten times more than the local population.

	Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings ~~looked~~ ordinary, upon closer inspection one ~~could~~ realize that all of them ~~were~~ carved out of a single rock, a feat ~~that had been~~ done by Square ranked earth mages.		Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings look ordinary, upon closer inspection one can realize that all of them are carved out of a single rock, a feat done by Square ranked earth mages.

	On the narrow street, it appeared to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one made a turn on the street, they could see an even narrower street leading to a bar.		On the narrow street, it appeared to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one made a turn on the street, they could see an even narrower street leading to a bar.
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	From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.		From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.

	Today, “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” is filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons ~~are~~ mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.		Today, the “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” was filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons were mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.

	“The king of Albion is finished!”		“The king of Albion is finished!”

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	“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”		“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”

	The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the ~~royalists~~ to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they valued their lives more than their beliefs, and so felt that they were not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.		The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalist to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they valued their lives more than their beliefs, and so they felt that they were not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.

	As they were drinking, the bar's door opened~~. A~~ rather tall lady ~~had~~ entered the bar. The hood the lady ~~had worn~~ covered most of her face except the lower part ~~of her face~~. However, from just the lower part of her face one ~~can~~ already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.		As they were drinking, the bar's door opened and a rather tall lady entered the bar. The hood the lady wore covered most of her face except for the lower part. However, from just the lower part of her face one could already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.

	The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.		The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.
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	With a vile smile on his face, one of them lifted up the lady's hood. Whistles and catcalls could be heard once the hood was removed. The lady was quite a beauty, with her beautiful eyes and elegant nose.		With a vile smile on his face, one of them lifted up the lady's hood. Whistles and catcalls could be heard once the hood was removed. The lady was quite a beauty, with her beautiful eyes and elegant nose.

	This beautiful lady is none other than Fouquet of the crumbling earth.		This beautiful lady was none other than Fouquet of the crumbling earth.

	“She's really top notch! Look at her skin! It's as white as ivory!”		“She's really top notch! Look at her skin! It's as white as ivory!”
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	“Well, aren't you early.”		“Well, aren't you early.”

	Fouquet seeing that man, gave a low “Hmm” as a reply. The mercenaries, seeing that man's peculiar ~~dressing~~, were all quite surprised.		Fouquet seeing that man, gave a low “Hmm” as a reply. The mercenaries, seeing that man's peculiar dress, were all quite surprised.
	“They have started on their journey,” the masked man said.		“They have started on their journey,” the masked man said.

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	The man in the white mask gave a once over at the mercenaries that Fouquet had hired.		The man in the white mask gave a once over at the mercenaries that Fouquet had hired.

	“All of you were formerly employed by the Albion ~~royalist~~. Am I right?”		“All of you were formerly employed by the Albion royalists. Am I right?”

	“That was until last month,” one of the mercenaries replied with glee.		“That was until last month,” one of the mercenaries replied with glee.

	“But the soon to be defeated ~~royalist~~ aren't our employers anymore.”		“But the soon to be defeated royalists aren't our employers anymore.”

	The mercenaries laughed in unison. The man in the white mask laughed as well.		The mercenaries laughed in unison. The man in the white mask laughed as well.
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	Since departing from the magical academy, Wardes' griffin had been endlessly moving towards their destination. Even though the rest of the group had already changed their mount twice, Wardes' griffin just like its master, appeared to be tireless.		Since departing from the magical academy, Wardes' griffin had been endlessly moving towards their destination. Even though the rest of the group had already changed their mount twice, Wardes' griffin, just like its master, appeared to be tireless.

	“Hold on, isn't the pace too fast for us?” Louise, who was on Wardes' griffin, asked. Over the duration of the journey, Louise spoke in a more informal manner to Wardes than when they were reunited. But that was also partly due to the Viscount's request.		“Hold on, isn't the pace too fast for us?” Louise, who was on Wardes' griffin, asked. Over the duration of the journey, Louise spoke in a more informal manner to Wardes than when they were reunited. But that was also partly due to the Viscount's request.
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	“From then on, you seldom went back to your estate again,” replied Louise while closing her eyes. She too seemed to be immersed in her memories.		“From then on, you seldom went back to your estate again,” replied Louise while closing her eyes. She too seemed to be immersed in her memories.

	“My house and estate were cared for by butler Galgann while I put all my effort serving the nation. After so long, I finally made a name for myself, accomplishing what I had decided upon leaving my homeland.”		“My house and estate were cared for by my butler, Galgann, while I put all my effort serving the nation. After so long, I finally made a name for myself, accomplishing what I had decided upon leaving my homeland.”

	“What was that you ~~have~~ decided upon?”		“What was it that you decided upon?”

	“To ask your hand for marriage once I have made a name for myself.”		“To ask your hand for marriage once I have made a name for myself.”
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	Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.		Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.

	Suddenly faced with a fiancé and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether if she still had any feelings for him.		Suddenly faced with a fiancé and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.

	Louise turned her head and looked behind.		Louise turned her head and looked behind.
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	“It's an ambush!” Guiche shouted.		“It's an ambush!” Guiche shouted.

	Saito began to panic, just as he ~~wanted~~ to unsheathe Derflinger which was slung behind his back, two more arrows flew towards him.		Saito began to panic, just as he tried to unsheathe Derflinger, which was slung behind his back, two more arrows flew towards him.

	“Whoa!”		“Whoa!”
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	“Secret mission? You should have said so earlier! How would I know if you did not tell me about it? Anyways, be thankful to me, for I have apprehended the people who wanted to ambush you!”		“Secret mission? You should have said so earlier! How would I know if you did not tell me about it? Anyways, be thankful to me, for I have apprehended the people who wanted to ambush you!”

	Kirche said while ~~pointed~~ to the people who were lying on the ground. Those ambushers were unable to move due to their injuries and hurled abuses towards Louise and the group. Guiche approached them and began interrogating them.		Kirche said this while pointing to the people who were lying on the ground. Those ambushers were unable to move due to their injuries and hurled abuses towards Louise and the group. Guiche approached them and began interrogating them.

	Louise, crossing her arms, gave a vicious stare at Kirche.		Louise, crossing her arms, gave a vicious stare at Kirche.
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	“What? She's your fiancée!?”		“What? She's your fiancée!?”

	Wardes nodded in response. Kirche took a closer look at Wardes~~, she~~ did not realize it before. Wardes' eyes showed no emotion at all. Just like ice.		Wardes nodded in response. Kirche took a closer look at Wardes. She did not realize it before, but Wardes' eyes showed no emotion at all. Just like ice.

	She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.		She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.
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	“Viscount...”		“Viscount...”

	Guiche who was interrogating ~~those~~ ambushers had just returned.		Guiche, who was interrogating the ambushers, had just returned.

	“Viscount, those ambushers admitted that they were robbers.”		“Viscount, those ambushers admitted that they were robbers.”