Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:28, 9 October 2015

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	Seeing her cute gestures, Saito’s heart started throbbing.		Seeing her cute gestures, Saito’s heart started throbbing.

	“T-Thanks. But, Louise ~~has let~~ me eat at the table now, so I haven’t really been hungry.”		“T-Thanks. But, Louise lets me eat at the table now, so I haven’t really been hungry.”

	“Really? I’ve been serving the teachers table recently so I didn’t notice. If I’m just a being nuisance then…”		“Really? I’ve been serving the teachers table recently so I didn’t notice. If I’m just being nuisance then…”

	Siesta hung her head slightly.		Siesta hung her head slightly.
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	“I’ll come again in the evening! Don’t drink too much!”		“I’ll come again in the evening! Don’t drink too much!”

	And then Siesta hurried away in the same fashion she had ~~came~~.		And then Siesta hurried away in the same fashion she had come.

	Watching her leave, Guiche said with an artificial rose in his mouth, “Well, Louise would get angry if you were two timing.”		Watching her leave, Guiche said with an artificial rose in his mouth, “Well, Louise would get angry if you were two timing.”

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Coffeezombie: fix Montmorency's name

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	“It’s just like you said! You're an idiot!” shouted Saito. It seems like he had drunk so much he couldn’t even articulate properly.		“It’s just like you said! You're an idiot!” shouted Saito. It seems like he had drunk so much he couldn’t even articulate properly.

	“I didn’t even do anything with that Katie. She held my hand, and I had only lightly kissed ~~Mortmerncy~~! Despite that, I-!”		“I didn’t even do anything with that Katie. She held my hand, and I had only lightly kissed Montmorency! Despite that, I-!”

	Guiche burst into tears. He was the type who cried when he drank. Kirche sighed. ''Why do men have to be such idiots?''		Guiche burst into tears. He was the type who cried when he drank. Kirche sighed. ''Why do men have to be such idiots?''

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	“I don’t know what happened, but don’t go thinking Verdandi is the same as you.”		“I don’t know what happened, but don’t go thinking Verdandi is the same as you.”

	Guiche peered inside the tent. Derflinger and for some reason, Kirche’s salamander were in there.		Guiche peered inside the tent. Derflinger and, for some reason, Kirche’s salamander were in there.

	“Kyuru kyuru.”		“Kyuru kyuru.”

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	“Well, eat to your heart’s content.”		“Well, eat to your heart’s content.”

	The small table was crammed full of food. Siesta sat next to Saito, smiling. Saito started to hate himself for eating so much before but he couldn’t just let Siesta’s good intentions go to waste. Determined, he started to eat the food.		The small table was crammed full of food. Siesta sat next to Saito, smiling. Saito started to hate himself for eating so much before, but he couldn’t just let Siesta’s good intentions go to waste. Determined, he started to eat the food.

	“Is it good?” asked Siesta.		“Is it good?” asked Siesta.

Coffeezombie: fix verb tense

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	Around her, students were enjoying themselves. There was a group playing with a ball. Using magic, they would throw the ball into a basket without using their hands and try to score the most points. Staring at the group of people, Louise sighed heavily and looked at what she had started to knit.		Around her, students were enjoying themselves. There was a group playing with a ball. Using magic, they would throw the ball into a basket without using their hands and try to score the most points. Staring at the group of people, Louise sighed heavily and looked at what she had started to knit.

	Looking at the scene from the side, it was much like a painting. Sitting there quietly, Louise looked like a beautiful girl. Louise’s hobby was knitting. When she was small, her mother told her that if she had no talent for magic, she should at least have something she was good at, and so her mother taught her how to knit.		Looking at the scene from the side, it was much like a painting. Sitting there quietly, Louise looked like a beautiful girl. Louise’s hobby was knitting. When she was small, her mother told her that if she had no talent for magic, she should at least have something she was good at, and so her mother had taught her how to knit.

	But it seemed like the heavens did not give Louise any talent in knitting. Louise had planned to knit a sweater. However, regardless of how favorably she looked upon it, it looked more like a distorted muffler. Actually it was more like an object complicatedly entangled with wool. Louise stared bitterly at the object and let out another sigh.		But it seemed like the heavens did not give Louise any talent in knitting. Louise had planned to knit a sweater. However, regardless of how favorably she looked upon it, it looked more like a distorted muffler. Actually it was more like an object complicatedly entangled with wool. Louise stared bitterly at the object and let out another sigh.

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	Louise was seated in the east courtyard of the Academy of Magic, commonly known as Austri, and frantically knitting. The spring weather was beginning to change as summer approached, but Louise could still be seen in her spring clothing. Even during the summer, it was quite dry instead of humid.		Louise was seated in the east courtyard of the Academy of Magic, commonly known as Austri, and frantically knitting. The spring weather was beginning to change as summer approached, but Louise could still be seen in her spring clothing. Even during the summer, it was quite dry instead of humid.

	Ten days had passed since they had returned from Albion. ~~That day~~ was a day off. Without even eating dessert, Louise came to the courtyard after her meal to knit. Sometimes, she would give her hands a rest and stare at the white pages of the Founder’s Prayer book while thinking of a fitting edict for the Princess’s ceremony.		Ten days had passed since they had returned from Albion. Today was a day off. Without even eating dessert, Louise came to the courtyard after her meal to knit. Sometimes, she would give her hands a rest and stare at the white pages of the Founder’s Prayer book while thinking of a fitting edict for the Princess’s ceremony.

	Around her, students were enjoying themselves. There was a group playing with a ball. Using magic, they would throw the ball into a basket without using their hands and try to score the most points. Staring at the group of people, Louise sighed heavily and looked at what she had started to knit.		Around her, students were enjoying themselves. There was a group playing with a ball. Using magic, they would throw the ball into a basket without using their hands and try to score the most points. Staring at the group of people, Louise sighed heavily and looked at what she had started to knit.

Vaelis at 08:41, 20 April 2012

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	Louise was trying to take it back, but Kirche easily restrained her.		Louise was trying to take it back, but Kirche easily restrained her.

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	“What is it?” asked Kirche, dumbfounded while looking at the object.		“What is it?” asked Kirche, dumbfounded while looking at the object.

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	“A sweater? It looks more like a starfish. And a new species at that.”		“A sweater? It looks more like a starfish. And a new species at that.”

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	“As if I would knit something like that!”		“As if I would knit something like that!”

203.218.133.154 at 06:50, 5 June 2011

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	One: Louise noticed that Siesta was pushed onto the bed by Saito.		One: Louise noticed that Siesta was pushed onto the bed by Saito.
	Two: Louise noticed that Sieta's blouse was undone.		Two: Louise noticed that Sieta's blouse was undone.
	Three: Saito and Siesta ~~standed~~ up flustered.		Three: Saito and Siesta stood up flustered.
	Six: Siesta buttoned up her blouse.		Six: Siesta buttoned up her blouse.
	Seven: Siesta dashed out of the room, facing away from Louise.		Seven: Siesta dashed out of the room, facing away from Louise.

Vaelis at 21:15, 15 July 2009

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