Zero no Tsukaima:Volume4 Chapter3 - Revision history

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	''Definitely, just like Louise always says, "Ignoring your master and getting along with other girls" irritates her.''		''Definitely, just like Louise always says, "Ignoring your master and getting along with other girls" irritates her.''

	What the heck? Anyways, her desire was to monopolize her familiar, Saito interpreted. She was getting mad at him because her pet dog was more attached to others than her. Never in his wildest dreams did Saito think Louise harbored feelings for him. Very Saito-like, a considerably roundabout way to misunderstand.		What the heck? Anyways, her desire was to monopolize her familiar, Saito interpreted. She was getting mad at him because her pet dog was more attached to others than her. Never in his wildest dreams did Saito think Louise harbored feelings for him. Very Saito-like, it was a considerably roundabout way to misunderstand.

	''Aah, when she found out I took a bath with Siesta a while ago, it was horrible.'' Resentfully, Saito looked at the restraints that were once again placed on him.		''Aah, when she found out I took a bath with Siesta a while ago, it was horrible.'' Resentfully, Saito looked at the restraints that were once again placed on him.

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	It was not just any potion. What a thing, how wrong that it was a forbidden potion. By the country's proclamation, it was an item forbidden to be created or used.		It was not just any potion. What a thing, how wrong that it was a forbidden potion. By the country's proclamation, it was an item forbidden to be created or used.

	Montmorency sold the perfumes she made in the town and slowly saved up money. And then, today, this day, she used the money she saved up and obtained the recipe for the forbidden potion, as well as the high priced secret medicine needed for the mixing, at a dark magic store. Hobbies ~~win~~ over ~~moral~~. Getting fed up over making normal potions, Montmorency felt like creating something forbidden despite knowing that an enormous fine would be imposed on her if she was discovered.		Montmorency sold the perfumes she made in the town and slowly saved up money. And then, today, this day, she used the money she saved up and obtained the recipe for the forbidden potion, as well as the high priced secret medicine needed for the mixing, at a dark magic store. Hobbies won over morals. Getting fed up over making normal potions, Montmorency felt like creating something forbidden despite knowing that an enormous fine would be imposed on her if she was discovered.

	Along with the mashed up fragrant wood, dragon sulfur, and mandragora, at last, to pour in the essential secret medicine... the liquid that she had paid a large amount of money to obtain, she grabbed the small bottle beside her.		Along with the mashed up fragrant wood, dragon sulfur, and mandragora, at last, to pour in the essential secret medicine... the liquid that she had paid a large amount of money to obtain, she grabbed the small bottle beside her.

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	===Chapter Three: The Sailor Outfit and Louise's Jealousy===		===Chapter Three: The Sailor Outfit and Louise's Jealousy===

	~~The~~ sunlight ~~shining~~ radiantly at Austri's Plaza, Saito was groveling on the ground and trembling violently. Then ~~he raised~~ his face, gazed at the work of art he had produced, and once again started to go mad from his excitement.		As the sunlight shone radiantly at Austri's Plaza, Saito was groveling on the ground and trembling violently. Then, raising his face, he gazed at the work of art he had produced, and once again started to go mad from his excitement.

	"Hah, hah, hah..." His breathing became hot.		"Hah, hah, hah..." His breathing became hot.

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	Along with the mashed up fragrant wood, dragon sulfur, and mandragora, at last, to pour in the essential secret medicine... the liquid that she had paid a large amount of money to obtain, she grabbed the small bottle beside her.		Along with the mashed up fragrant wood, dragon sulfur, and mandragora, at last, to pour in the essential secret medicine... the liquid that she had paid a large amount of money to obtain, she grabbed the small bottle beside her.

	Just a small quantity... For just this little amount of liquid stored in the perfume bottle, Montmorency used up pretty much all of the money she had saved up. 700 in ~~ecu~~ gold coins. An amount of money a commoner could use to live five to six years.		Just a small quantity... For just this little amount of liquid stored in the perfume bottle, Montmorency used up pretty much all of the money she had saved up. 700 in écu gold coins. An amount of money a commoner could use to live five to six years.

	When she tilted the small bottle to the pot, being careful not to spill anything...		When she tilted the small bottle to the pot, being careful not to spill anything...

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	Louise looked at the Zero fighter and was astonished. The engine part of the nose had been removed from the body and placed on the ground, and it had been tragically disassembled.		Louise looked at the Zero fighter and was astonished. The engine part of the nose had been removed from the body and placed on the ground, and it had been tragically disassembled.

	"Oh, this! I just got interested in the structure. I didn't get permission from Saito, but I lightly disassembled it. It's complicated, but theoretically speaking, it is not much different from the 'Joyful Snake' I designed. Still, this is quite a fragile thing. If it flies once, it has to be precisely disassembled and have the parts looked over. Otherwise, not only will it fail to perform to its original efficiency, there is also a chance it will break..."		"Oh, this! I just got interested in the structure. I didn't get permission from Saito-kun, but I lightly disassembled it. It's complicated, but theoretically speaking, it is not much different from the 'Joyful Snake-kun' I designed. Still, this is quite a fragile thing. If it flies once, it has to be precisely disassembled and have the parts looked over. Otherwise, not only will it fail to perform to its original efficiency, there is also a chance it will break..."

	Colbert finally started talking about the engine's structure and maintenance.		Colbert finally started talking about the engine's structure and maintenance.
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	Louise didn't really have interest in that conversation, so she bowed her head and started to run once again. Colbert shouted at her back.		Louise didn't really have interest in that conversation, so she bowed her head and started to run once again. Colbert shouted at her back.

	"Miss! If you meet Saito, tell him this! I have placed a surprising new weapon onto this 'Dragon's Raiment'!		"Miss! If you meet Saito-kun, tell him this! I have placed a surprising new weapon onto this 'Dragon's Raiment'!

	The next place Louise visited was the tower of wind. In the magic academy, towers were arranged into a pentagram with the main tower in the center. The tower of wind was one of them. It was mostly only used for lessons. There was only one entrance.		The next place Louise visited was the tower of wind. In the magic academy, towers were arranged into a pentagram with the main tower in the center. The tower of wind was one of them. It was mostly only used for lessons. There was only one entrance.
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	Louise buried her face in Saito's chest and wept.		Louise buried her face in Saito's chest and wept.

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	"Round and around, turn like that. Then, after that, say 'Sorry to keep you waiting!' cheerfully to me."		"Round and around, turn like that. Then, after that, say 'Sorry to keep you waiting!' cheerfully to me."

	Siesta drew back. Saito was coinciding with the type of men her mother told her not get close to when she was young. Still, Siesta wanted to please him.		Siesta drew back. Saito was coinciding with the type of men her mother told her not to get close to when she was young. Still, Siesta wanted to please him.

	As if to prepare herself, "Y-yes..." she nodded, and Siesta spun around. Her scarf and skirt lightly flew up into the air.		As if to prepare herself, "Y-yes..." she nodded, and Siesta spun around. Her scarf and skirt lightly flew up into the air.
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	''Is this okay, Siesta? Is it really okay for this person?'' She kind of felt that from the more composed part of her, but Siesta shut off that negativity.		''Is this okay, Siesta? Is it really okay for this person?'' She kind of felt that from the more composed part of her, but Siesta shut off that negativity.

	''Every person has hobbies and preferences that they can't tell others. Saito-san is no exception. Yeah, that's all... Yes, that's it!'' She ~~tells~~ herself brightly and smiled. Siesta is strong.		''Every person has hobbies and preferences that they can't tell others. Saito-san is no exception. Yeah, that's all... Yes, that's it!'' She told herself brightly and smiled. Siesta was strong.

	"What should I do next?"		"What should I do next?"
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	Montmorency, prideful of her long, curly golden hair and vivid blue eyes, was mixing a potion in her room at the dormitory. Leaning her tall body on a chair, she was engrossed in mixing a secret potion inside a pot with a wooden pestle.		Montmorency, prideful of her long, curly golden hair and vivid blue eyes, was mixing a potion in her room at the dormitory. Leaning her tall body on a chair, she was engrossed in mixing a secret potion inside a pot with a wooden pestle.

	Montmorency the "Fragrance", a mage of the "water" element, had a hobby of magical medicine... potion making. And just like her second name suggested, her specialty was perfume making. The perfumes she made were known for the uniquely lovely fragrance they ~~emit~~, and she was extremely popular with the ladies and town girls.		Montmorency the "Fragrance", a mage of the "water" element, had a hobby of magical medicine... potion making. And just like her second name suggested, her specialty was perfume making. The perfumes she made were known for the uniquely lovely fragrance they emitted, and she was extremely popular with the ladies and town girls.

	Today, Montmorency was zealously creating a certain potion.		Today, Montmorency was zealously creating a certain potion.
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	Louise's eyes went up.		Louise's eyes went up.

	"Eh? Well, he had the maid wear these clothes and spin around... Aah, it was moving! Just thinking back to it, my heart feels burnt from those lovely ~~senses~~! That's why I should at least reflect myself in this mirror wearing it as a memento of that memory... Aaah, I... I'm such a lovely fairy... AAAaaaaahh!"		"Eh? Well, he had the maid wear these clothes and spin around... Aah, it was moving! Just thinking back to it, my heart feels burnt from those lovely scenes! That's why I should at least reflect myself in this mirror wearing it as a memento of that memory... Aaah, I... I'm such a lovely fairy... AAAaaaaahh!"

	Malicorne shouted. Louise trampled that face with her foot.		Malicorne shouted. Louise trampled that face with her foot.
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	"Eh, yes... Because, I thought Saito-san would be happier if I wore this."		"Eh, yes... Because, I thought Saito-san would be happier if I wore this."

	''Crap. I should have said return it, instead of bring it. There's no way I can tell her to take it off right here.'' While Saito was panicking like that, Siesta spun around and ~~stood~~ a finger in front of her face.		''Crap. I should have said return it, instead of bring it. There's no way I can tell her to take it off right here.'' While Saito was panicking like that, Siesta spun around and raised a finger in front of her face.

	The skirt lightly soared up.		The skirt lightly soared up.
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	"Eh? Eeeeehhh? You know, to the breasts, like this, protect it..."		"Eh? Eeeeehhh? You know, to the breasts, like this, protect it..."

	But, Siesta still looked blankly at him. It ~~seems~~ there ~~are~~ no bras in this world.		But, Siesta still looked blankly at him. It seemed there were no bras in this world.

	"I do wear drawers and a corset under my shirt when I am in my maid outfit though..."		"I do wear drawers and a corset under my shirt when I am in my maid outfit though..."

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	Folding his arms together, Saito puffed up his chest with pride.		Folding his arms together, Saito puffed up his chest with pride.

	"Of course. It has the charming magic from my birthplace ~~casted~~ on it."		"Of course. It has the charming magic from my birthplace cast on it."


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	''Definitely, just like Louise always says, "Ignoring your master and getting along with other girls" irritates her.''		''Definitely, just like Louise always says, "Ignoring your master and getting along with other girls" irritates her.''

	What the heck? Anyways, her desire to monopolize her familiar, Saito ~~interpretated~~. She was getting mad at him because her pet dog was more attached to others than her. Never in his wildest dreams did Saito think Louise harbored feelings for him. Very Saito-like, a considerably roundabout way to misunderstand.		What the heck? Anyways, her desire was to monopolize her familiar, Saito interpreted. She was getting mad at him because her pet dog was more attached to others than her. Never in his wildest dreams did Saito think Louise harbored feelings for him. Very Saito-like, a considerably roundabout way to misunderstand.

	''Aah, when she found out I took a bath with Siesta a while ago, it was horrible.'' Resentfully, Saito looked at the restraints that were once again placed on him.		''Aah, when she found out I took a bath with Siesta a while ago, it was horrible.'' Resentfully, Saito looked at the restraints that were once again placed on him.

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	Ever since he said he was going to feed his pigeon, Saito had not shown himself.		Ever since he said he was going to feed his pigeon, Saito had not shown himself.

	Getting to the tower of fire, she peeked inside Mister ~~Colbet~~'s laboratory. Even if you call it a laboratory, it's just a worn-out shack. Whenever Colbert had free time, he usually hung out in there.		Getting to the tower of fire, she peeked inside Mister Colbert's laboratory. Even if you call it a laboratory, it's just a worn-out shack. Whenever Colbert had free time, he usually hung out in there.

	But, Saito was not there. Colbert, by himself, was doing something noisily to the Dragon's Raiment that was left in front of his laboratory.		But, Saito was not there. Colbert, by himself, was doing something noisily to the Dragon's Raiment that was left in front of his laboratory.
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	At the corner of the appointed place, Vestri Plaza, Siesta came up to the staircase of the tower of fire after night had completely fallen. After her job ended, it took time to clean her body with a bath and finish dressing up.		At the corner of the appointed place, Vestri Plaza, Siesta came up to the staircase of the tower of fire after night had completely fallen. After her job ended, it took time to clean her body with a bath and finish dressing up.

	She headed towards the landing of the ~~staricase~~, but Saito was not there. There were only two barrels there. The surroundings were dim. Siesta worriedly looked around her.		She headed towards the landing of the staircase, but Saito was not there. There were only two barrels there. The surroundings were dim. Siesta worriedly looked around her.

	"Saito-san......"		"Saito-san......"
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	"What is with you? Are you planning to oppose your master? Isn't that interesting?"		"What is with you? Are you planning to oppose your master? Isn't that interesting?"

	Louise muttering that was scary. More than a battleship, more than a dragoon, more than an orc demon, more than ~~Waldo~~...... Louise was scarier than anything up to now.		Louise muttering that was scary. More than a battleship, more than a dragoon, more than an orc demon, more than Wardes...... Louise was scarier than anything up to now.

	Saito's body trembled stiffly.		Saito's body trembled stiffly.
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	"Vo-vo-vo-void isn't anything! Bring it on!"		"Vo-vo-vo-void isn't anything! Bring it on!"

	The rune on Saito's left hand shone...... Louise ~~swang~~ her wand down half-way though her chanting.		The rune on Saito's left hand shone...... Louise swung her wand down half-way though her chanting.
	Boom! And the area in front of Saito exploded.		Boom! And the area in front of Saito exploded.

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	Seeing this, Guiche searched his head even more and unleashed words to attract her affection.		Seeing this, Guiche searched his head even more and unleashed words to attract her affection.

	"In front of you, wouldn't the spirit of water run away? See, this hair...... It like a golden grassland. It's a sea of glittering stars. Aah, any female besides you can no longer enter my eye."		"In front of you, wouldn't the spirit of water run away? See, this hair...... It is like a golden grassland. It's a sea of glittering stars. Aah, any female besides you can no longer enter my eye."

	Guiche kept going in and out of the room, and he had already spat out enough lines to make a drama. ''I guess this should be enough'' Montmorency thought.		Guiche kept going in and out of the room, and he had already spat out enough lines to make a drama. ''I guess this should be enough'' Montmorency thought.
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	In other words, it was the problem of pride.		In other words, it was the problem of pride.

	But, the moment she saw Saito just now, her feelings toward Saito jumped straight up. Until then, well, she vaguely liked him. She ~~would~~'t accept it herself, but she ~~likeed~~ him. That was probably why she was so jealous......		But, the moment she saw Saito just now, her feelings toward Saito jumped straight up. Until then, well, she vaguely liked him. She wouldn't accept it herself, but she liked him. That was probably why she was so jealous......

	In this moment, she loved with no hamper at all. That emotion was so big, even Louise herself was bewildered. Without thinking, Louise covered her cheeks with her hands.		In this moment, she loved with no hamper at all. That emotion was so big, even Louise herself was bewildered. Without thinking, Louise covered her cheeks with her hands.