Zero no Tsukaima:Volume4 Chapter4 - MTL - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 07:10, 11 October 2015

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	"Since then, the Miss sealed away her words and expressions. Miss Charlotte originally was lively and bright, a different person than she is now. However it is understandable. Anyone who would witness their mother going mad would become like that.		"Since then, the Miss sealed away her words and expressions. Miss Charlotte originally was lively and bright, a different person than she is now. However it is understandable. Anyone who would witness their mother going mad would become like that.

	The others, knowing they had failed and in order to protect themselves, sent a royal order to Miss Charlotte. The task was extremely difficult, no one had been able to accomplish it alive.		"The others, knowing they had failed and in order to protect themselves, sent a royal order to Miss Charlotte. The task was extremely difficult, no one had been able to accomplish it alive.

	However the Miss did complete the task and pledged her loyalty to the royal family, to protect them. But Miss Charlotte was still treated coldly by the royal family. Normally this achievement would have been enough to deserve a territory, but instead she was granted the title of Chevalier and was forced to study abroad.		"However the Miss did complete the task and pledged her loyalty to the royal family, to protect them. But Miss Charlotte was still treated coldly by the royal family. Normally this achievement would have been enough to deserve a territory, but instead she was granted the title of Chevalier and was forced to study abroad.

	The Madame stayed here at the house, in the current condition she is in."		"The Madame stayed here at the house, in the current condition she is in."

	Percerin bit his lip with regrets.		Percerin bit his lip with regrets.

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	===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===		===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===
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	It was very likely that they could die attempting to complete this task. But as a noble, the risk of death had always been in the not so distant future. Compared to that, she was more worried about this child.		It was very likely that they could die attempting to complete this task. But as a noble, the risk of death had always been in the not so distant future. Compared to that, she was more worried about this child.

	What incredible loneliness this child ~~might~~ have endured?		What incredible loneliness this child must have endured?

	Tabitha was turning over in her bed. With her glasses now gone, her sleeping face was the one of an innocent young girl.		Tabitha was turning over in her bed. With her glasses now gone, her sleeping face was the one of an innocent young girl.

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	Percerin took a deep breath and continued.		Percerin took a deep breath and continued.

	"Next those who made Joseph the King started targeting the Miss. They wanted to stamp out the source of any possible future trouble. These people summoned Madame and the Miss to a banquet in their honor. However they had poisoned the Miss' drink. Madame had realized this, and in order to protect the Miss, drank it herself. A magic which breaks one's mind had been cast on the water. Since then, Madame has been insane."		"Next those who made Joseph the King started targeting the Miss. They wanted to stamp out the source of any possible future trouble. These people summoned Madame and the Miss to a banquet in their honor. However, they had poisoned the Miss' drink. Madame had realized this, and in order to protect the Miss, drank it herself. A magic which breaks one's mind had been cast on the water. Since then, Madame has been insane."

	Kirche, shocked and at a loss for words, was listening to the butler's confession.		Kirche, shocked and at a loss for words, was listening to the butler's confession.
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	"Then...! Whenever the royal family had a difficult task to be done, they asked her to do their dirty work? Her father was killed, her mother was poisoned and driven insane, and she is led and directed by her personal enemies like a beast of burden! I never knew something could be as tragic as this, how people could be so cruel to this level."		"Then...! Whenever the royal family had a difficult task to be done, they asked her to do their dirty work? Her father was killed, her mother was poisoned and driven insane, and she is led and directed by her personal enemies like a beast of burden! I never knew something could be as tragic as this, how people could be so cruel to this level."

	Kirche now realized why Tabitha had remained silent. She had never known the reason why she was given the title of Chevalier was for a task she ~~didn~~'t ~~apply~~ for.		Kirche now realized why Tabitha had remained silent. She had never known the reason why she was given the title of Chevalier was for a task that she hadn't applied for.

	On their travels she had remained staring at the same page in her book.		On their travels she had remained staring at the same page in her book.

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	Kirche noticed a farmer with a basket of apples and called for the carriage to stop. Then she yelled out to the farmer.		Kirche noticed a farmer with a basket of apples and called for the carriage to stop. Then she yelled out to the farmer.

	"Those look like some delicious apples, for how much do you sell them to me?"		"Those look like some delicious apples, for how much would you sell them to me?"

	The farmer took an apple from the basket and passed it to Kirche in exchange for several copper coins.		The farmer took an apple from the basket and passed it to Kirche in exchange for several copper coins.
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	"I'm the butler of the Orléans family, Percerin. Are you Miss Charlotte's friend?"		"I'm the butler of the Orléans family, Percerin. Are you Miss Charlotte's friend?"

	Kirche nodded. Charlotte d'Orléans ~~seems~~ to be Tabitha's real name.		Kirche nodded. Charlotte d'Orléans seemed to be Tabitha's real name.

	Orléans, Orléans, she kept thinking of the name, and then suddenly she thought of something. ''Orléans, isn't it the family name of the younger brother of the King of Gallia?''		Orléans, Orléans, she kept thinking of the name, and then suddenly she thought of something. ''Orléans, isn't it the family name of the younger brother of the King of Gallia?''

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	"Hey, Tabitha. It is a long awaited return home from school, shouldn't you be more happy?"		"Hey, Tabitha. It is a long awaited return home from school, shouldn't you be more happy?"

	Since Louise and Saito weren't here because they had been called to the royal palace, when she ~~came~~ to Tabitha's room to play, she was shocked to find her packing her luggage.		Since Louise and Saito weren't here because they had been called to the royal palace, when she had come to Tabitha's room to play, she was shocked to find her packing her luggage.

	"Are you going on a trip?" Kirche asked her.		"Are you going on a trip?" Kirche asked her.

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2015-07-03T22:17:30Z

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	===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===		===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===

	A few ~~days~~ before, in the late morning of the day Louise had been chasing Saito around.		A few hours before, in the late morning of the day Louise had been chasing Saito around.
	<!--Translation needs to be checked さて少し時間をさかのぼり、ルイズと才人が追いかけっこをした日の昼前のこと……。-->		<!--Translation needs to be checked さて少し時間をさかのぼり、ルイズと才人が追いかけっこをした日の昼前のこと……。-->

Vaelis at 08:48, 20 April 2012

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	===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===		===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===

Ephyon at 23:57, 16 July 2009

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	===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===		===Chapter Four: Tabitha's Secret ===

	A few days before, in the late morning of the day Louise had been chasing Saito around		A few days before, in the late morning of the day Louise had been chasing Saito around.
	<!--Translation needs to be checked さて少し時間をさかのぼり、ルイズと才人が追いかけっこをした日の昼前のこと……。-->		<!--Translation needs to be checked さて少し時間をさかのぼり、ルイズと才人が追いかけっこをした日の昼前のこと……。-->