Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter4 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 17:25, 18 October 2015

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	The allied forces did not invade to negotiate with Cromwell. They came to abolish Cromwell and dominate this land. Eight to nine chances out of ten, they would think about the civilians after the war and perform charity.		The allied forces did not invade to negotiate with Cromwell. They came to abolish Cromwell and dominate this land. Eight to nine chances out of ten, they would think about the civilians after the war and perform charity.

	Still... What will we do if we ~~will~~? At the worst, a whole metropolis could revolt. That is how fearful the resentment from food is.		Still... What will we do if we win? At the worst, a whole metropolis could revolt. That is how fearful the resentment from food is.

	"You plan to make a whole metropolis your enemy... Either way, there will be unpleasant aftereffects..."		"You plan to make a whole metropolis your enemy... Either way, there will be unpleasant aftereffects..."

Veritatis cupitor at 07:59, 18 October 2015

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	It was unknown how, but Cromwell excelled in negotiation with sub-humans. Knowing that the sub-humans were sent ahead not for a normal army operation but for this kind of strategy, the generals were dumbfounded.		It was unknown how, but Cromwell excelled in negotiation with sub-humans. Knowing that the sub-humans were sent ahead not for a normal army operation but for this kind of strategy, the generals were dumbfounded.

	Their leader broke a treaty, not only used makeshift means to commence strategies, but finally ~~planed~~ to betray his own country's civilians through cowardly measures.		Their leader broke a treaty, not only used makeshift means to commence strategies, but finally planned to betray his own country's civilians through cowardly measures.

	"I will also place a trap in the water of Saxe-Gotha."		"I will also place a trap in the water of Saxe-Gotha."
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	"Gentlemen, it's the Pentecost! Stop the enemy until then! When the Pentecost ends... 'Void' and the crossing of two staffs will drop the iron hammer upon our haughty enemies!"		"Gentlemen, it's the Pentecost! Stop the enemy until then! When the Pentecost ends... 'Void' and the crossing of two staffs will drop the iron hammer upon our haughty enemies!"

	The crossing of two staffs is the crest of the Gallia royal family.		The crossing of two staffs was the crest of the Gallia royal family.

	"OHH! Finally, Gallia!" ~~As the~~ conference room became excited.		"OHH! Finally, Gallia!" The conference room became excited.

	"At that time, our army will advance! To demolish our haughty enemies! I promise you!"		"At that time, our army will advance! To demolish our haughty enemies! I promise you!"

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Vaelis: Protected "Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter4" [edit=autoconfirmed:move=autoconfirmed]

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	"That was a brilliant speech, Prelate."		"That was a brilliant speech, Prelate."

	The man, who was called ~~Prelate~~ in his previous position, as if falling off the chair, kneeled down at Sheffield's feet.		The man, who was called a prelate in his previous position, as if falling off the chair, kneeled down at Sheffield's feet.

	The mask of dignity he had shown earlier had been blown off.		The mask of dignity he had shown earlier had been blown off.

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	"Then it isn't 'Void'?"		"Then it isn't 'Void'?"

	"Correct, this is not 'Void'. 'Wind stones' and this 'Ring of Andvari' are just drops of the source of the powers that rule this world. This is the material that becomes the source of ~~magic~~ called ~~Predecessor Magic<!--~~Ancient Magic~~?-->~~. There are all kinds of names it is called by though. Sage's Stone, Orb of Life... Historically, it would be called 'Void's enemy'..."		"Correct, this is not 'Void'. 'Wind stones' and this 'Ring of Andvari' are just drops of the source of the powers that rule this world. This is the material that becomes the source of power called Ancient Magic. There are all kinds of names it is called by though. Sage's Stone, Orb of Life... Historically, it would be called 'Void's enemy'..."

	"I am constantly impressed by the profoundness of your knowledge."		"I am constantly impressed by the profoundness of your knowledge."
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	Cromwell nodded.		Cromwell nodded.

	"The point is, this is a crystallization of the ~~Predecessor's magic~~ of Water. The condensed magic hidden in this is incomparable to the wind stones common around here... A rare stone. Which is the reason this is the protected treasure of the Water Spirit... The Ring of Andvari. In other words, the ~~Predecessor~~'s treasure..."		"The point is, this is a crystallization of the Ancient Magic of Water. The condensed magic hidden in this is incomparable to the wind stones common around here... A rare stone. Which is the reason this is the protected treasure of the Water Spirit... The Ring of Andvari. In other words, the ancients' treasure..."

	Sheffield stared at the ring.		Sheffield stared at the ring.

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	The light was flowing from inside.		The light was flowing from inside.

	When Cromwell first saw this light, he was surprised. When Sheffield touched this 'Ring of Andvari', her forehead ~~shined~~.		When Cromwell first saw this light, he was surprised. When Sheffield touched this 'Ring of Andvari', her forehead shone.

	''Are there times when people's foreheads shine?''		''Are there times when people's foreheads shine?''
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	"Do you know? The trait of the power of Water?"		"Do you know? The trait of the power of Water?"

	"~~He,~~ healing wounds..."		"H-healing wounds..."

	"That is on the surface. The power of 'Water' rules over the body's constitution. The heart too."		"That is on the surface. The power of 'Water' rules over the body's constitution. The heart too."

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Dan at 04:09, 13 February 2009

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Akirasav: clarity

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	===Chapter Four: The Secretary and the Emperor===		===Chapter Four: The Secretary and the Emperor===

	In ~~the~~ Albion's capital city Londonium, there was a heated discussion going on over the sortie at White Hall.		In Albion's capital city Londonium, there was a heated discussion going on over the sortie at White Hall.

	Because the Albion army was attracted to Dartanes by Louise's "Illusion", they let the chance to defeat the enemy army at the coast escape. If they had properly assaulted the enemy as they landed in Rosais, it would have been possible to chase the enemy from Albion to Halkeginia......		Because the Albion army was attracted to Dartanes by Louise's "Illusion", they let the chance to defeat the enemy army at the coast escape. If they had properly assaulted the enemy as they landed in Rosais, it would have been possible to chase the enemy from Albion to Halkeginia......
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	On the other hand, Tristain and Germania's combined fleet lost twelve vessels and eight received heavy damage, but there were still forty able to fight. They had complete air superiority in this situation.		On the other hand, Tristain and Germania's combined fleet lost twelve vessels and eight received heavy damage, but there were still forty able to fight. They had complete air superiority in this situation.

	On top of that, the number of people in the Albion army were decreasing. At the battle of Tarbes, they lost a three-thousand, and the loss the other day caused the morale of the entire army to drop; some groups ended up deserting. The vigor shown during the revolution was no longer there.		On top of that, the number of people in the Albion army were decreasing. At the battle of Tarbes, they lost three thousand, and the loss the other day caused the morale of the entire army to drop; some groups ended up deserting. The vigor shown during the revolution was no longer there.

	Against the sixty-thousand who claimed air superiority, there was no way they could continue attacking.		Against the sixty-thousand who claimed air superiority, there was no way they could continue attacking.
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	"It had an enormous effect."		"It had an enormous effect."

	Hawkins said, closing his eyes. ~~Perplex~~ through illusions ~~and cause~~ the army to be brought back...... In other words, it was creating an effect that ~~doesn't change~~ from a military force of tens of thousands. He couldn't make light of this as just an illusion.		Hawkins said, closing his eyes. Confusion through illusions caused the army to be brought back...... In other words, it was creating an effect that was no different from a military force of tens of thousands. He couldn't make light of this as just an illusion.

	"To be honest, I am afraid of the enemy. Besides the illusion at Dartanes, the enemy uses many unknown magic. That magic light which destroyed our fleet..."		"To be honest, I am afraid of the enemy. Besides the illusion at Dartanes, the enemy uses many unknown magic. That magic light which destroyed our fleet..."
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	The man, who was called Prelate in his previous position, as if falling off the chair, kneeled down at Sheffield's feet.		The man, who was called Prelate in his previous position, as if falling off the chair, kneeled down at Sheffield's feet.

	The mask of dignity he had shown earlier ~~has~~ been blown off.		The mask of dignity he had shown earlier had been blown off.

	Just a man in his thirties that was panicking in fear, just a thin man who was nothing but a prelate was there.		Just a man in his thirties that was panicking in fear, just a thin man who was nothing but a prelate was there.
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	"How many times does it take for you to understand. It is necessary to join Halkeginia into one. To recover the Holy Land is the only way to follow the Founder and God's will."		"How many times does it take for you to understand. It is necessary to join Halkeginia into one. To recover the Holy Land is the only way to follow the Founder and God's will."

	"To me, that is a part of a clergyman. Though there is no mistake that recovering the Holy Land is a dream......"		"To me, that is a part of being a clergyman. Though there is no mistake that recovering the Holy Land is a dream......"

	"Then continue to dream."		"Then continue to dream."

	"The responsibility is too heavy! The enemy has invaded! Enemy in my country! The enemy has come to hang me like those incompetent kings! What should I do! Tell me this isn't a nightmare. Miss..."		"The responsibility is too heavy! The enemy has invaded! Enemy in my country! The enemy has come to hang me like those incompetent kings! What should I do?! Tell me this isn't a nightmare. Miss..."
	Smiling, Sheffield squatted down in front of Cromwell and looked into his tear-soaked face. Cromwell raised his face. Lifting up his chin, Sheffield... "Stop acting spoiled," whispered quietly.		Smiling, Sheffield squatted down in front of Cromwell and looked into his tear-soaked face. Cromwell raised his face. Lifting up his chin, Sheffield... "Stop acting spoiled," whispered quietly.

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	''Are there times when people's foreheads shine?''		''Are there times when people's foreheads shine?''

	Even when he asked Sheffield, she did not answer. This mysterious female would not teach him anything that ~~matters~~, anything essential. She only handed down orders.		Even when he asked Sheffield, she did not answer. This mysterious female would not teach him anything that mattered, anything essential. She only handed down orders.

	With the stone, Sheffield lightly combed Cromwell's cheek.		With the stone, Sheffield lightly combed Cromwell's cheek.