Zero no Tsukaima:Volume9 Epilogue - Revision history

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	The length of its wing span was roughly 150 mails. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed on its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one-by-one beside the extending wings.		The length of its wing span was roughly 150 mails. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed on its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one-by-one beside the extending wings.

	~~“The~~ wings ~~which amounted to 3 revolutions cause~~ the ~~driving force~~ of this ship ~~to increase by a few times~~. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate... is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment,'”		“There are 3 spinning wings that provide the huge amount of horsepower needed to power this ship. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate... is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment,'”

	Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.		Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.
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	“Yeah, that is it. But my Jean, he's so powerful, yet never shows off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”		“Yeah, that is it. But my Jean, he's so powerful, yet never shows off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”

	The expenses for the construction of the ship were apparently forked out by Kirche, or Kirche's family. The Zerbst of family of Kirche is wealthy and famous, but that's not the way to use it... ''How dreadful it is for someone who fell completely in love!'' Montmorency thought.		The expenses for the construction of the ship were apparently forked out by Kirche, or Kirche's family. The Zerbst of family of Kirche was wealthy and famous, but that's not the way to use it... ''How dreadful it is for someone who fell completely in love!'' Montmorency thought.

	“What is your age gap?”		“What is your age gap?”
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	Henrietta was after all, still a human.		Henrietta was after all, still a human.

	The same as herself; even Henrietta ~~gets~~ troubled by trivial things... ~~becomes~~ weak and helpless, her feelings hurt due to petty matters... ~~falls~~ in love... She is just a normal girl like that.		The same as herself; even Henrietta got troubled by trivial things... became weak and helpless, her feelings hurt due to petty matters... fell in love... She was just a normal girl like that.

	Until then, Louise kept regarding the things Henrietta did as absolute. Since the start, she believed that they were correct. However, that was not the case. Henrietta ~~makes~~ mistakes as well. She ~~falls~~ in love. And sometimes... ~~there should be incidents when~~ she ~~snatches away~~ the ~~one she loves~~.		Until then, Louise kept regarding the things Henrietta did as absolute. Since the start, she believed that they were correct. However, that was not the case. Henrietta made mistakes as well. She fell in love. And sometimes......Henrietta may also try to fight for the person she likes, even if the person was Louise's lover.

	She thought that... and somehow felt that this was like the first time she could understand Henrietta.		She thought that... and somehow felt that this was like the first time she could understand Henrietta.
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	Gazing at the paper shreds which scattered like snowflakes, Tabitha thought to herself.		Gazing at the paper shreds which scattered like snowflakes, Tabitha thought to herself.

	''I ~~did~~ not regret my conduct.''		''I do not regret my conduct.''

	''Anyhow, my mother is already an imprisoned body.''		''Anyhow, my mother is already an imprisoned body.''
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	Because of his achievements, his conferment of the title "Chevalier"...		Because of his achievements, his conferment of the title "Chevalier"...

	~~But... the moment~~ he saw Colbert ~~who was walking~~ towards him~~, those~~ could ~~not be turned into words. He merely held back~~ his tears ~~as if he did not cried, with~~ his ~~lips shut tight~~.		However, he could not say anything when he saw Mr Colbert walk towards him. Saito could only press his lips together tightly, resisting the urge to cry as tears began to well up in his eyes.

	He did not spend that long a time with Colbert.		He did not spend that long a time with Colbert.
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	The tears which Saito had been fighting back overflowed.		The tears which Saito had been fighting back overflowed.

	“Why are you crying? What a worrisome pupil you are! Come now, shouldn't we go together ~~now~~? To the ''Ostland''!”		“Why are you crying? What a worrisome pupil you are! Come now, shouldn't we go together? To the ''Ostland''!”

	Colbert clapped Saito's shoulder.		Colbert clapped Saito's shoulder.

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	She thought that... and somehow felt that this was like the first time she could understand Henrietta.		She thought that... and somehow felt that this was like the first time she could understand Henrietta.

	“That's okay. Princess's feelings are Princess's feelings. Please guard that valuable thing gently. To take it out, or to leave it locked all the time, this is Princess's freedom. I do not find any fault with it.”		“That's okay. Princess' feelings are Princess' feelings. Please guard that valuable thing gently. To take it out, or to leave it locked all the time, this is Princess' freedom. I do not find any fault with it.”

	“I don't get it. I... what is that? Really, what do you mean...?”		“I don't get it. I... what is that? Really, what do you mean...?”

Myopius at 09:39, 15 April 2010

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	Evidently, this princess... was as if she did not realize Louise's feelings at all.		Evidently, this princess... was as if she did not realize Louise's feelings at all.

	In contrast to friends or any other people, she did not appear to be ~~anyone~~ of them.		In contrast to friends or any other people, she did not appear to be any one of them.

	Instead being angry, Louise was shocked.		Instead of being angry, Louise was shocked.

	It could not be helped that she was a true princess. For her to conjecture things like other people's feelings, she could not do it at all. So it was inevitable for Louise to get mad at her.		It could not be helped that she was a true princess. For her to conjecture things like other people's feelings, she could not do it at all. So it was inevitable for Louise to get mad at her.

Ephyon at 23:09, 30 July 2009

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	There were many things he was worrying right now. ''Where is Tabitha now?''		There were many things he was worrying right now. ''Where is Tabitha now?''

	''I will speak to her afterwards''...but her figure could not be seen.		''I will speak to her afterwards''... but her figure could not be seen.


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	Louise muttered.		Louise muttered.

			''Somehow that IDIOT began to stand out... and because of that, gathering attention to himself. Anyhow, he had even fascinated Henrietta...''

	''How many times should I be fretting over him?''		''How many times should I be fretting over him?''
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	That was her dissatisfaction.		That was her dissatisfaction.

	''Somehow, with only a kiss... with only a gentle embrace, ''nngh''...that 'me' who would just think that 'Never mind, it's okay.' is unforgivable...''		''Somehow, with only a kiss... with only a gentle embrace, ''nngh''... that 'me' who would just think that 'Never mind, it's okay.' is unforgivable...''

	As she grew increasingly impatient, an angry-looking appearance surfaced, and Louise sped down the path towards that grassy field.		As she grew increasingly impatient, an angry-looking appearance surfaced, and Louise sped down the path towards that grassy field.

Ephyon at 23:07, 30 July 2009

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Akirasav: Jan --> Jean

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	Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.		Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.

	“That's because...I had to lie to that scary Onee-san from the Musketeer Corps, right? At that rate, my ~~Jan~~ would be killed.”		“That's because...I had to lie to that scary Onee-san from the Musketeer Corps, right? At that rate, my Jean would be killed.”

	“What do you mean by 'my ~~Jan~~'?”		“What do you mean by 'my Jean'?”

	“Hey, isn't that his name?”		“Hey, isn't that his name?”
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	“You...don't tell me...”		“You...don't tell me...”

	“Yeah, that is it. But my ~~Jan~~, he's so powerful, yet never shows off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”		“Yeah, that is it. But my Jean, he's so powerful, yet never shows off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”

	The expenses for the construction of the ship were apparently forked out by Kirche, or Kirche's family. The Zerbst of family of Kirche is wealthy and famous, but that's not the way to use it...''How dreadful it is for someone who fell completely in love!'' Montmorency thought.		The expenses for the construction of the ship were apparently forked out by Kirche, or Kirche's family. The Zerbst of family of Kirche is wealthy and famous, but that's not the way to use it...''How dreadful it is for someone who fell completely in love!'' Montmorency thought.
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	“Miss Zerbst.”		“Miss Zerbst.”

	“Yeeeessss! Just call me Kirche! I've already told you many times! No way, my ~~Jan~~!”		“Yeeeessss! Just call me Kirche! I've already told you many times! No way, my Jean!”

	As if she skipped and tread, Kirche leaped to his side energetically. She clung onto him, and Colbert grimaced, looking troubled.		As if she skipped and tread, Kirche leaped to his side energetically. She clung onto him, and Colbert grimaced, looking troubled.

Akirasav: clarity

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	The next morning...		The next morning...

	~~Students~~ and teachers from the Academy of Magic ~~who had gathered~~ and ~~were surrounding~~ the ''Ostland'', which was parked on a grassy field a distance away from the Academy of Magic~~, were staring at it~~.		Gathering around, students and teachers from the Academy of Magic surrounded and stared at the ''Ostland'', which was parked on a grassy field a distance away from the Academy of Magic.

	At first glance, it was just like a gigantic ship.		At first glance, it was just like a gigantic ship.

	The length ~~of the wings~~ was roughly 150 ~~meters~~. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed on its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one-by-one beside the extending wings.		The length it's wing span was roughly 150 mails. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed on its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one-by-one beside the extending wings.

	“The wings which amounted to 3 revolutions cause the driving force of this ship to increase by a few times. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate...is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment,'”		“The wings which amounted to 3 revolutions cause the driving force of this ship to increase by a few times. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate...is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment,'”
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	Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.		Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.

	“What an awesome ship~~...~~...Why did you install such huge wings?”		“What an awesome ship...Why did you install such huge wings?”

	“To travel to the east. To work hard to travel long distances~~...~~...we must by all means minimize the expenditure of wind stones. With those huge wings, the ship can get the buoyancy it needs to float, gliding and flying at the same time. Its principles are the same as the albatross and the oscar.		“To travel to the east. To work hard to travel long distances...we must by all means minimize the expenditure of wind stones. With those huge wings, the ship can get the buoyancy it needs to float, gliding and flying at the same time. Its principles are the same as the albatross and the oscar.

	Mr. Osman rubbed his white beard.		Mr. Osman rubbed his white beard.
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	“Well, this is splendid. If this is applied to warships, what type of air force would be able to form...?”		“Well, this is splendid. If this is applied to warships, what type of air force would be able to form...?”

	“I do not have any intention to use this as a warship. In the end, this is still an 'exploring ship.' Weapons needed to defend itself have been installed...but I have no intention to hand it over to the king's army. The expenses to construct this ship has been paid for by Miss Zerbst's family. So the ship belongs to Germania~~, no matter what~~. If the Tristain government inspects this ship, it would become a diplomatic issue. Well...in any case...besides me, no one else can ~~move~~ this ship.”		“I do not have any intention to use this as a warship. In the end, this is still an 'exploring ship.' Weapons needed to defend itself have been installed...but I have no intention to hand it over to the king's army. The expenses to construct this ship has been paid for by Miss Zerbst's family. So regardless, the ship belongs to Germania. If the Tristain government inspects this ship, it would become a diplomatic issue. Well...in any case...besides me, no one else can fly this ship.”

	Mr. Osman nodded, satisfied.		Mr. Osman nodded, satisfied.
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	Montmorency muttered in a dispirited voice.		Montmorency muttered in a dispirited voice.

	“That teacher is still alive huh...or should I say, why did you lie that he had died?”		“That teacher is still alive huh...or should I say, why did you lie and say that he had died?”

	Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.		Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.

	“That's because~~...~~...I had to lie to that scary Onee-san from the Musketeer Corps, right? At that rate, my Jan would be killed.”		“That's because...I had to lie to that scary Onee-san from the Musketeer Corps, right? At that rate, my Jan would be killed.”

	“What do you mean by 'my Jan'?”		“What do you mean by 'my Jan'?”
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	“Haaa? His name?”		“Haaa? His name?”

	“Yeah. What a lovely name~~...~~...”		“Yeah. What a lovely name...”

	Absentmindedly, Kirche replied.		Absentmindedly, Kirche replied.
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	“What is your age gap?”		“What is your age gap?”

	“For me, age gap is not an obstacle at all.”		“For me, an age gap is not an obstacle at all.”

	“What about his bald head?”		“What about his bald head?”
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	Montmorency muttered.		Montmorency muttered.

	“Sigh~~...~~...Things which must at a certain time happen will happen, huh?"		“Sigh...Things which must at a certain time happen will happen, huh?"

	Guiche extended his arm towards Montmorency's shoulder.		Guiche extended his arm towards Montmorency's shoulder.
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	“You, while Saito and the others were in danger, what were you doing?”		“You, while Saito and the others were in danger, what were you doing?”

	“Ummm, in the ball~~...~~...”		“Ummm, in the ball...”

	“And you formed the knight corps! You, get down to work! You're the Commanding Officer, right!?”		“And you formed the knight corps! You, get down to work! You're the Commanding Officer, right!?”
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	“Princess, there's something I want to ask.”		“Princess, there's something I want to ask.”

	“Wh-~~what~~ is it?”		“Wh-What is it?”

	“Princess's actions in the ball, were they from your true feelings?”		“Princess's actions in the ball, were they from your true feelings?”
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	I was like that during those days as well, huh?		I was like that during those days as well, huh?

	“What's wrong? What's so funny? Louise. I haven't said anything funny~~...~~...”		“What's wrong? What's so funny? Louise. I haven't said anything funny...”

	Henrietta looked nervous.		Henrietta looked nervous.
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	''Paaaaannnggg!'' The dry sound echoed in the room.		''Paaaaannnggg!'' The dry sound echoed in the room.

	“Y-, you~~...~~...”		“Y-, you...”

	Next, just like before, she landed another slap at the dumbstruck Henrietta's right cheek.		Next, just like before, she landed another slap on the dumbstruck Henrietta's right cheek.

	''Paaaaaaaaannnggg!''		''Paaaaaaaaannnggg!''
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	Louise knelt at Henrietta's feet.		Louise knelt at Henrietta's feet.

	“I have been very rude. However, that is my familiar. Since you were prepared to strike, please come with ~~the~~ suitable readiness as well.”		“I have been very rude. However, that is my familiar. Since you were prepared to strike, please come with suitable readiness as well.”

	Louise looked up at Henrietta. Anger and possessiveness were swimming in those eyes.		Louise looked up at Henrietta. Anger and possessiveness were swimming in those eyes.
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	''Her residence has merely changed.''		''Her residence has merely changed.''

	''I ~~would~~ retrieve my mum with my own hands.''		''I will retrieve my mum with my own hands.''

	''That day is not far.''		''That day is not far.''
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	Saito became very nervous.		Saito became very nervous.

	Meeting Colbert whom he had ~~been thinking~~ all this ~~while~~ to be dead...what was the best thing to say first?		Meeting Colbert whom he had thought all this time to be dead...what was the best thing to say first?

	There were many things to say.		There were many things to say.
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	Amongst them, she discovered Saito's figure...and Louise rushed over.		Amongst them, she discovered Saito's figure...and Louise rushed over.

	She must continue the incident yesterday night.		She must continue the incident from yesterday night.

	At that time, she had planned to hit him many more times...but she could not do it.		At that time, she had planned to hit him many more times...but she could not do it.
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	''Somehow, with only a kiss...with only a gentle embrace, ''nngh''...that 'me' who would just think that 'Never mind, it's okay.' is unforgivable...''		''Somehow, with only a kiss...with only a gentle embrace, ''nngh''...that 'me' who would just think that 'Never mind, it's okay.' is unforgivable...''

	As she ~~was growing~~ increasingly impatient, an angry-looking appearance surfaced, and Louise sped down the path towards that grassy field.		As she grew increasingly impatient, an angry-looking appearance surfaced, and Louise sped down the path towards that grassy field.

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Akirasav: clarity

2009-04-24T20:46:40Z

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2009-04-24T00:08:48Z

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	===Epilogue===		===Epilogue===

	The next morning~~...~~...		The next morning...

	Students and teachers from the Academy of Magic who had gathered and were surrounding the ''Ostland'', which was parked at a ~~grassland~~ a distance away from the Academy of Magic, were staring at it.		Students and teachers from the Academy of Magic who had gathered and were surrounding the ''Ostland'', which was parked on a grassy field a distance away from the Academy of Magic, were staring at it.

	At ~~one look~~, it was just like a gigantic ship.		At first glance, it was just like a gigantic ship.

	The ~~diameter~~ of the wings was roughly 150 ~~mails~~. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed at its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one by one beside the extending wings.		The length of the wings was roughly 150 meters. Although the hull of the ship was the same as the ones in Halkeginia, the huge propellers which were installed on its back, together with its huge wings, caused the ship to emanate a bizarre atmosphere. The propellers were installed one-by-one beside the extending wings.

	“The wings which amounted to 3 revolutions cause the driving force of this ship to increase by a few times. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate~~...~~...is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment.'”		“The wings which amounted to 3 revolutions cause the driving force of this ship to increase by a few times. The power which causes the revolving wings to operate...is acquired from the pressure of the steam which originates from water heated by coals. I call this a 'steam engine.' This is a design which resembled the installed power devices from that 'Dragon's Raiment,'”

	Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.		Colbert explained to Mr. Osman who was standing beside him.
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	“What an awesome ship......Why did you install such huge wings?”		“What an awesome ship......Why did you install such huge wings?”

	“To travel to the east. To work hard to travel long distances......we must by all means minimize the expenditure of wind stones. With those huge wings, the ship can get the buoyancy it needs to float, gliding and flying at the same time. Its principles are the same as the ~~Albatross~~ and the ~~Oscar~~.		“To travel to the east. To work hard to travel long distances......we must by all means minimize the expenditure of wind stones. With those huge wings, the ship can get the buoyancy it needs to float, gliding and flying at the same time. Its principles are the same as the albatross and the oscar.

	Mr. Osman rubbed his white beard.		Mr. Osman rubbed his white beard.

	“Well, this is splendid. If this is applied in warships, what type of air force would be able to ~~be formed...~~...?”		“Well, this is splendid. If this is applied to warships, what type of air force would be able to form...?”

	“I do not have ~~the~~ intention to use this as a warship. In the end, this is still an 'exploring ship.' Weapons needed to defend itself have been installed~~...~~...but I have no intention to hand it over to the king's army. The expenses to construct this ship has been paid for by Miss Zerbst's family. So the ship belongs to Germania, no matter what. If the Tristain government inspects this ship, it would become a diplomatic issue. Well...~~no matter what~~...besides me, no one else can move this ship.”		“I do not have any intention to use this as a warship. In the end, this is still an 'exploring ship.' Weapons needed to defend itself have been installed...but I have no intention to hand it over to the king's army. The expenses to construct this ship has been paid for by Miss Zerbst's family. So the ship belongs to Germania, no matter what. If the Tristain government inspects this ship, it would become a diplomatic issue. Well...in any case...besides me, no one else can move this ship.”

	Mr. Osman nodded, satisfied.		Mr. Osman nodded, satisfied.

	“If that's the case, I have nothing else to say. Believe in yourself, just like that, and decide your own path, ~~Flaming~~ Serpent.”		“If that's the case, I have nothing else to say. Believe in yourself, just like that, and decide your own path, Flame Serpent.”

	Colbert smiled, and nodded.		Colbert smiled, and nodded.
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	Montmorency muttered in a dispirited voice.		Montmorency muttered in a dispirited voice.

	“That teacher is still alive huh~~...~~...or should I say, why did you lie that he had died?”		“That teacher is still alive huh...or should I say, why did you lie that he had died?”

	Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.		Kirche combed her hair upwards triumphantly and replied.

	“That's because......I had to lie to that scary ~~onee~~-san of the ~~musketeer squad~~, right? At that rate, my Jan would be killed.”		“That's because......I had to lie to that scary Onee-san from the Musketeer Corps, right? At that rate, my Jan would be killed.”

	“What do you mean by 'my Jan'?”		“What do you mean by 'my Jan'?”
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	Montmorency who had realized Kirche's feelings from her look, asked in a amazed tone.		Montmorency who had realized Kirche's feelings from her look, asked in a amazed tone.

	“You~~...~~...don't tell me~~...~~...”		“You...don't tell me...”

	“Yeah, that is it. But my Jan, he's so powerful, yet never showing off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”		“Yeah, that is it. But my Jan, he's so powerful, yet never showing off his powers, a knowledgeable person, and able to make such a magnificent thing like this ship!”

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