User talk:BladeUnderHeart
Golden Time Changes[edit]
Out of purest curiosity, did you make those changes today for stylistic reasons, or because they were a better translation? I have no complaint with the changes, I'm just curious . . . --Rpapo (talk) 16:35, 11 September 2012 (CDT)
Having gone through all your changes, it would appear to me that most were simply smoothing over the awkwardness that I don't always notice as I deal with far greater awkwardnesses in the Japanese grammar. A few of the changes were good catches of mistakes of my own. I don't see hardly anything that would indicate that you'd actually read the original text. In any case, I've incorporated all of your changes into my working document, and fixed one initial capitalization you left out. Thanks for the edits. --Rpapo (talk) 16:51, 11 September 2012 (CDT)
