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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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If you translate this, i WILL edit it (whether you want me to or not :D ) plot seems hilarious, imo. though it looks like it's going to be really predictable, i would love to see what happens in the actual book.
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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ラブ★ゆう
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%A9% ... 6%E3%81%86

Someone translate this for me? Its this novel's original japanese name

And some characters.
神田 俊(神田 俊(かんだ しゅん))
羅莎莉(ロザリー)
神田 真奈美(神田 真奈美(かんだ まなみ))
小鳩 美琴(小鳩 みこと(こばと みこと))
冷泉院 撫子(冷泉院 撫子(れいぜいいん なでしこ))
白金 碧空(白金 碧空(しろがね そら))
渚(ナギサ)
二條蓮(二条レン)
首相
田中和也
上原
娜鳥西卡 (Heroine of 風之谷(Wind valley?))

風紀管理
世界管理協會巡檢士

議事堂
東京都立四季島高中

Spells
克阿赫
貝格鳥拉
耶特魯
克拉鳥.索拉斯
利芙拉
天星流格鬥術 - 豔絕的天鵝座

P.S. is 勇者 translated to "Hero" considered okay? Or should it be kept in romanji? Especially since in this case it is a female, but would it be "Heroine" instead?
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You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

Post by Assassin »

I can only do parts which contain Katakana/Hiragana characters, as I don't have enough knowledge with Kanji.
ShadowZeroHeart wrote:ラブ★ゆう
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%A9% ... 6%E3%81%86

Someone translate this for me? Its this novel's original japanese name

Title is "Love★You"

And some characters.
神田 俊(神田 俊(かんだ しゅん)- Kanda Shun
羅莎莉(ロザリー) - Rosary (?)
神田 真奈美(神田 真奈美(かんだ まなみ)) - Kanda Manami
小鳩 美琴(小鳩 みこと(こばと みこと)) - Kobato Mikoto
冷泉院 撫子(冷泉院 撫子(れいぜいいん なでしこ)) - Reizeiin Nadeshiko (?)
白金 碧空(白金 碧空(しろがね そら)) - Shirogane Sora
渚(ナギサ) - Nagisa
二條蓮(二条レン)- ?? Ren
首相
田中和也
上原
娜鳥西卡 (Heroine of 風之谷(Wind valley?))

風紀管理
世界管理協會巡檢士

議事堂
東京都立四季島高中

Spells
克阿赫
貝格鳥拉
耶特魯
克拉鳥.索拉斯
利芙拉
天星流格鬥術 - 豔絕的天鵝座
Will this do for now? As for the others I'll leave them in the hands of those who are more knowledgeable u_u
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二條蓮(二条レン)Nishijou Ren
首相 - Shushou??
田中和也 Tanaka Kazuya
上原 Uehara
娜鳥西卡 Nausicaä

No idea about the spells, they sound like gibberish to me @.@
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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Assassin wrote:I can only do parts which contain Katakana/Hiragana characters, as I don't have enough knowledge with Kanji.
ShadowZeroHeart wrote:ラブ★ゆう
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%A9% ... 6%E3%81%86

Someone translate this for me? Its this novel's original japanese name

Title is "Love★You"

And some characters.
神田 俊(神田 俊(かんだ しゅん)- Kanda Shun
羅莎莉(ロザリー) - Rosary (?)
神田 真奈美(神田 真奈美(かんだ まなみ)) - Kanda Manami
小鳩 美琴(小鳩 みこと(こばと みこと)) - Kobato Mikoto
冷泉院 撫子(冷泉院 撫子(れいぜいいん なでしこ)) - Reizeiin Nadeshiko (?)
白金 碧空(白金 碧空(しろがね そら)) - Shirogane Sora
渚(ナギサ) - Nagisa
二條蓮(二条レン)- Nishijou Ren
首相 - Prime Minister (was uncertain, but no one realised it i guess...? checked it after i translated one part of KnS)
田中和也 -Tanaka Kazuya
上原 - Uehara
娜鳥西卡 - Nausicaa (Heroine of 風之谷(Wind valley?))

風紀管理
世界管理協會巡檢士

議事堂
東京都立四季島高中

Spells
克阿赫
貝格鳥拉
耶特魯
克拉鳥.索拉斯
利芙拉
天星流格鬥術 - 豔絕的天鵝座
Will this do for now? As for the others I'll leave them in the hands of those who are more knowledgeable u_u
Yes the spells are gibberish, except the last one. But since it was from the game "Dragon Bless III" I was thinking perhaps they are adapted from the game "Dragon Quest III" to some extent.
God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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Chapter 1 part 1
(Preview for the series, not sure how many parts i may translate for the preview)
=== 1 ===

A girl is emerging out from the television.

In Kanda Shun’s room, there is a girl that is gradually coming out from his 25 inch TV.

She is preparing to come from the game screen to the “real world”.

“…………”

Shun sits with his legs crossed on the carpet, and looks dumbly at what is happening before him.

The television is like the shining ripples of a watery surface, the screen shines with white light.

Ripples were made across the screen, and from within, a living girl gradually appears…… At this moment the area above her shoulder has already emerged from the television screen.

Shun subconsciously retreats backwards, and that resulted in his leg accidentally kicking onto the box of a game card.



“DRAGON BLESS III The Hero Princess of the Sky Realm”


This is the best selling RPG (Role Playing Game) in the whole of Japan that was released last month.

The cover of the box illustrates “Hero Princess Rosary”, she is a pure and elegant beautiful heroine that would feel great joy in helping and saving people.

The girl that is appearing from the television screen before his very eyes------ Looks almost exactly the same as Rosary.

Be it her golden colored hair, the cape for traveling, even the red sacred stone that is hanging from her neck, “Riji Houmichi” (利爾 法路)……

As if floating above the water surface, the girl bends her body over and floats above Shun’s head, her fringes and cape wavering non-stop.

She seems as though she is asleep.

Her tightly closed eyelids are very slender, as if telling others how beautiful the eyes hidden within are, that sweet face gives off a pure and innocent presence.

Anyway, she is a very cute girl.

The girl’s face continues to close in on him, her shadow falling onto Shun’s face.

The distance between them is so close they can feel each other breathing, just stretching their necks slightly and they would be able to kiss each other.

……This, this……!

Shun feels as though his heart is about to explode.

He cannot comprehend what is causing this situation to happen at all.

No.

Just now, Shun was still “fantasizing” about this kind of situation, when he was playing the game, when suddenly……



If Rosary really existed, how great would that be.



He can’t help but let such a thought appear in his mind.

But, how can this possibly be……!

Just at this moment, the girl’s feet has passed through the television screen as well.

And then, she fell directly from above.

“Wha……”

Shun was immediately pushed backwards by the body falling from above.

Bang!

The back of his head was knocked heavily against the ground.

Even though there is a carpet, but it is still very painful, and just as he was dizzy from the knock and his nose is filled with the smell of metal……

He realized the soft object that is being pressed onto his body.

The body heat that is sent over gradually, the thin and weak shoulder and the texture of pelvis, the flowery scent from the golden silky hair, and the cape that is draping over Shun’s leg.

These are all textures in “reality”.

Shun is still unable to comprehend what is going on.

He is unable to think at all.

Because he was kissed.

That’s right…… He was kissed.

The slightly moist pink lips of the girl pressed onto Shun’s cheek, and very close to his lips, with a hard to describe bounciness to it, the breathe that is being blown out lightly is warm and fragrant.

To Shun who had never had a girlfriend in sixteen years, this gave him quite a shock.

The game controller dropped from Shun’s left hand onto the floor.

The television screen turned pitch black, and following that silence spread to every corner of this room that is six tatami big.

…………

Shun finally knew, that humans can really be unable to feel the flow of time due to too much shock.

After that, he realized that he is wondering if he is dreaming from the bottom of his heart.

And then after that, he felt his mind slowly recovering.

He looks to the side, all he saw was a golden colored hairline.

Shun who is still unable to forget the texture of those lips slowly turns around, and saw that the girl still has her eyes closed.

……Is this some april fool trick……?

Shun first thought of a very old and classical explanation, but precisely because it is classical, it is reasonable.

Even though he has witnessed the moment the girl went from the television screen, he still believes that there must be some trick to it.

“…………Mmmm……”

At this moment, the girl suddenly gave a moan.

Then…… Slowly opened her eyes.

Her eyes look exactly the same as on the game screen.

No, they are even more clear and beautiful, a clear azure like the sea of southern countries, these are incomparable with those when in game.

Shun’s face is reflected in her eyes.

Shun realizes she is staring at himself, and so……

“Wahhhhhh!”

Jumped up reflexively. He stumbles onto the floor, and then uses an amazing speed to retreat to the side of the wall.

At this moment, the girl stood up.

The cape that goes below knee level spreads out naturally, the necklace that locks the cape in place wavers left and right with it.

The girl that looks just like the hero Rosary seems surprised as she looks at Shun and the interior of the room, as if coming into some unfamiliar place without knowing it.

Her vacillating eyes suddenly stop at a certain something.

And then, she took action.

The first thing to do after entering a new room is not to talk to Shun……

Kachunk.

But to open the closet.

She looks into the closet very seriously, and then reaches out to move the clothes inside, even though the owner of the room is just beside her, she does not seem to care.

…… A hero……

Shun can’t help but believe that.

Because opening cabinets and closets are the basic actions of a hero.

In order to find important items, the hero will sometimes have to barge into other people’s homes to open their closets, break open jars and bottles, and the items they find will unconditionally become the hero’s possessions, this is also a solid law in the game world.

However, Shun suddenly felt that just accepting this is a little strange, so he struggles to hold this extraordinary train of thought back.

At this moment, the girl walks straight before him.

Shun recovers from his thinking, still having a slightly nervous expression.

Just as his heart beat for the fifth time, the girl faces Shun and stops.

Her face is sweet like a strawberry, her expression on the other hand is lively and imposing, the entire face gives off an unexplained solemn feeling.

But, she does not seem very pleased, probably because there is nothing in the closet.

The evening sun of this holiday shines into the room from outside the window.

The girl’s face is stained with some of that orange reddish color, and she opens the lips that were pressed against Shun’s cheek earlier.

“I have something to ask you.”

She gives off a clear voice that matches her outer appearance very well.

“What is this place?”

She continues to ask:

“What is the name of this town? Is this the Earth Realm or the Heaven Realm?”

Even though her tone when she speak is calm, but Shun is really unable to catch up with the speed at which she is asking her questions.

His thoughts are all tangled, each time the girl says something, it makes things even worse.

Is this girl really…… “her” whom I have admired for so long?

“…………”

Shun was unable to say anything.

The girl seems to have taken this silence to be Shun’s reply, and so she decided to end the speech by herself.

Following that, she faces the room door, and then walks past Shun.

Shun suddenly regains his senses.

He tries to call out to the girl, and so he turns his head around hurriedly, as if trying to confirm something, he shouts out:

“Ro……Rosary!”

The girl stops in her steps.

Then turns around, puzzled, and raises her eyebrows to say:

“Why do you know my name?”
God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

Post by onizuka-gto »

lovely!

:)

can't wait for more shadheart! :D
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Sounds rather interesting...


Not being fluent in Japanese, I can't honestly say it's a good translation (After all, how would I know? I just have to take your word for it! XD), but I CAN honestly say that the English preview is rather entertaining.
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Part 2 up.
2

“You really love Rosary a lot.”
(actual term used was “moe”, but not sure how to put it in a sentence)

Shun’s friend Uehara just said that to him two days ago.

“DRAGON BLESS” which is also known as RPG of the country.

Shun bought the latest “III” the very morning it was released, and then got completely mesmerized by the heroine “Hero Princess Rosary”.

“That’s not true.”

He used that line to deny Uehara’s comment.

In the story, this girl inherits her father’s duty to become a hero that saves the world.

She possesses a soul pure and elegant like a holy maiden. So long as she can save others and bring people happiness, she would feel immense joy to the fact that “the world became better”.

“Did I make you happy?”

She would always ask the people she saved.

“Then, I would feel very happy as well.”

In the end, with a charming smile, that is her fixed speech.

And so Shun likes Rosary very much.

There were even times when Shun was worried for her due to her destiny in the story, and is very touched by her noble sentiments and how she strive to accomplish her duties.

Be it when she, as the child of a hero, feels self-abased due to her being a female, and so looks and acts like a guy, and in the end was adulated by others as the “Hero Princess”.

And when she was released from the shadows of her past, and then softly mutters her father’s name towards the sky, crying, Shun can’t help but grow red in his eyes.

It was just like he was journeying with Rosary.

This is the first time Shun has had so much feelings towards a character in the game.

Shun admires this noble, pure, seemingly perfect hero princess Rosary…… So much so that it is an emotion that is like love.

In the end he cannot bear to complete the game, and continuously raise her level up before defeating the last maou(Dark lord/Demon king).

In the end, Rosary’s level finally reached level 99.

Just to mention, even though all the other stats are around 300, only “intelligence” for some reason did not increase, and is only at 40.

In order words, all Shun can do is to complete the game.

Shun lets the controller down, and sub-consciously……

Sub-consciously look towards his side.

He looks at the carpet, and blankly imagines “the way Rosary would be sitting beside him”.

If Rosary really existed, and is sitting right here, and to be able to chat with her……

How nice that would be.

Such “fantasizing” suddenly appeared in Shun’s mind.

Shun has not been able to make fantasizing that are beyond reality since birth, this is the first time he has successfully imagined the picture of “Rosary existing here”.

And then……
Maybe 4/10 parts of chapter 1 would give a good enough preview? Will work on the preview WHEN I FEEL LIKE IT =X

Edit: P.S. it is guys like Shun that would want to marry fictional characters. Sheesh!
And should I use Yuusha(勇者) instead of hero? It seems rather weird to say Rosary is a hero... hmmm...
Besides, i intend to use maou(魔王) anyway. So...

Edit 2: Need help with her companions' names as well.
寶菈
甘德
尼特
God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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...What if this ends up to be another case of *ahem*?

Would-be-translator A: SHADOW, I'LL HELP YOU ONCE IT'S UP.
Would be translator B: SHADOW, I'LL HELP YOU ONCE IT'S UP TOO!
Would be translator C: SHADOW, I'LL HELP YOU ONCE IT'S UP THREE!!

And when the main page is created,

A: "..."

B: "......"

C: "............"

*puff*

:roll:
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Of course not!!

Because the "would-be-translator"s have yet to even appear... It is more of another case of...

People say "Lets get someone to work on this novel!!"

People looks around.

People looks down to avoid each others gaze.

People spot that dark shadow on the floor.

People say "Where is that translation you promised??"

Despite how I never even start this thread...
m(T.T)m

P.S. I am the only one giving a "NO!" vote in this thread. Maybe I should stop putting up novel reviews?
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You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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The few words I didnt translate are the names of her companions. Besides that, it should be understandable... Anyways, heres part 3
3

“Why do you know my name?”

The girl asked.

Her puzzled expression is overly natural, and has deeply touched Shun’s heart.

Shun sees her slowly turning around to face him.

She seems real from head to toe, and is no different from “Rosary” ’s image at all.

No, to have appeared in that manner, won’t it be even stranger to suspect her?

This girl must be the real Rosary.

She came out from the game.

“…………”

Shun suddenly felt hard to breathe.

His fingers kept trembling, his mind a total blank as well.

Because his blood is flowing too quickly, there is a paralyzing feeling as though he is being electrocuted running through his body.

Rosary is standing right before his eyes.

But, he does not know what to do next.

Even his thoughts are frozen entirely.

Shun can only think secretly in his heart: Meeting with a scenario that has never happened before in the history of mankind, just what is the most logical thing to do?

He closes his eyes, and then shakes his head.

I should be a little happier at a time like this!

Thinking that, Shun decides to look at her once more.

Yet there is no one before him.

“Where, where did she go!?”

Just as Shun nervously looks around, and realized that the door is open……

Clang!

The sound of something being smashed could be heard from the first storey.

Shun walks out of the room, and stands at the stairway looking down…… and sees Rosary squatting at the door, inspecting whether there is any items amidst the broken pieces of the vase.

She is a hero after all.

Rosary stands up, and leaves the wet doorway with an unhappy expression, walking into the living room on her own.

“寶菈! 甘德! 尼特! Are you around?”

She seems to be looking for her companions.

Shun hurriedly dashes down the stairs, and then turns at the door.

Then, he spotted Rosary at the entrance of the living room.

At this moment, there are some words right at the centre of his vision.

Code: Select all

>> Eat 
   Don’t Eat 
“…… Huh……?”

Just like captions appearing on television, instead of saying those are words…… they should be said to be just like the command window in the game.

Rosary on the other hand is staring intensely at the table in the kitchen.

On the table is a box of cream puffs that have been taken out from the fridge but was left there, forgotten.

And Rosary is staring at that box, motionless.

…… Could it be……

Shun is a big fan of video gaming originally, so he understood the relationship between the current situation and the command window instantly.

But, how do I input commands without a controller?

Rosary stares at the pastry box that is giving off aromatic fragrance, her eyes seem a little sad, and just as Shun can’t bear it and thinks to himself “I wish I can let her eat the cream puffs”……

The command window suddenly vanishes.

Even though there is no sound effect that can usually be heard when you input a command, but there is that kind of feeling there.

Following that, Rosary as if released, walks towards the table, and then with a little force opens the box, and grabs one of the puffs with her hand.

She then places the puff to her nose and sniffs it, and after staring at the puff for some time…… opens her mouth to take a bit.

She then suddenly stopped moving, as if time froze.

And her body began trembling.

At that moment, it was as though jagged edges appeared at her body.

What a fateful encounter.

She blinks her round eyes twice, and then the cheeks, stuffed with puff, reddens slowly.

And so, Rosary began indulging herself in the puffs.

She opens her eyes wide, with a puff in each of her hands, she bites into them one by one. Each time she bites into a puff, she would shiver continuously, and show a blissful expression.

At this moment, Shun suddenly thought of something.

“DRAGON BLESS”------ “DB” in short, there is no such action as “eat” in the game.

So, this is the first time that Rosary has “eat” in the real world.

This is also a very incredible thing.

Even so……

Rosary is still wolfing the puffs……

Her mouth is stuffed with puffs like a scene from a manga, the extremely relaxed expression is like a certain Alps girl who is always running on plains.

There is sticky cream all around her mouth.

“…………”

……Huh…….?

Shun suddenly felt that something is not right.

No matter how he looks at her, she seems a little different from the elegant “Hero Princess” in the game.

Shun takes another look at Rosary who is taking big bites, munching on the puffs.

…… Weird…………?

After a while, she has already finished eating one box of puffs.

She looks at the empty box, depressed, and then……

Turns back to look at Shun silently.

“Sorry…… There is no more.”

Shun got the message from Rosary’s eyes, and stutters in response.

Rosary shows a very disappointed expression immediately.

“What is this?”

She points at the box and asks.

“Hmm……”

Shun seems hesitant on how to reply.

“That is a cream puff.”

“Cream puff?”

She looks at the empty box with an unwilling look, as if unsure of how to express her feelings, she says softly:

“Mmm…… How powerful.”

…… How powerful……?

“By the way……”

Shun has no chance of interrupting her.

“……Who are you?”

She looks at Shun with a very serious expression, completely different from just now.

“I feel as though we are bonded in some way, even if it is just for an instant…… But, I am sure I felt something.”

Could it be that she is talking about that command window just now?

“How should I say this…… It is not an unfamiliar feeling, even though I am not very sure, but I have always had that kind of feeling. Tell me, you…… No, please tell me, who are you?”

What an instant that goes beyond normal logic.

The heroine of the game felt the link with the player, and asked the question “Who are you?”

The feelings that kept emerging made his temple a little numb, and just as Shun intends to say his name……

He suddenly thought of a certain coincidence that can make people misunderstand very easily.

“Please tell me your name.”

“Ermm…… Mmm……”

As he is hesitating, the mobile phone in his pocket gives off the ring tone of having received a text message.

Rosary shows a very tense expression instantly, and then gives a violent reaction.

Because Shun likes the game “DRAGON BLESS” very much, and so the ring tone he uses is “the sound effect of activation of a spell”.

“Danger!!”

“Woah!?”

Shun was knocked onto the floor by Rosary.

Rosary uses her right hand to hold onto her necklace, and at this moment, the necklace gives off light particles, and from it appears the handle of a sword.

She reaches out to grab the handle, and then draws her sword, waving it.

Sssss~~~~!

Rosary gives off a strong shockwave, the wallpaper on the wall is cut instantly, the calendar on the wall is sliced into two, the glass of the bowl cabinet are all shattered, the whole house wavers non-stop as though a typhoon is passing by.

Crack……

There is glass shards all over the kitchen, within a short moment, it looks just like the scene of an action movie (The scene after the shoot).

“…… Did it escape?”

She hugs Shun tightly, and looks around.

Only now does Shun realize one thing.

If she goes outside, or if other people gets to know her existence, things can become very serious.

But, right now Shun cannot think of anything more complicated than that.

Because his face is currently buried right into Rosary’s chest.

“…….!”

Rosary’s chest is well-developed than they look, and Shun can feel her body temperature directly, and that unbelievable devil…… No, angel-like bounciness.

……D, damn! This is not good!

The situation, especially at the lower half of his body, is very a very critical state.

Shun wants to leave immediately, but Rosary is hugging the back of his head, and has him secured tightly at her chest, the incredible force is so strong even a high school guy like him cannot escape, and he can hardly breathe.

“Mm~~~! Mmm~~~! Mmm~~~!”

Just at this moment, the sound of the door opening came from the doorway.

And the footsteps of someone hurriedly running into the house.

“Shun-kun! What happened!?”

That voice belongs to Shun’s cousin Mikoto, as she lives just next door, she probably heard that loud noise just now?

…… Don’t come here! Don’t!!

But, the door still opens mercilessly.

“Shun-kun!”

Opening the door is his delicate and beautiful cousin Mikoto nee-san------ Kobato Mikoto.

All she sees is the kitchen in ruins and the strangely dressed Rosary, and the scene of her younger cousin being buried in Rosary’s chest.

Mikoto’s entire body froze, as if struck by lightning, the focal point of her eyes flutters off somewhere, and…...

“Shun-kun became a good-for-nothing!”

After saying that, with a Kadong, Mikoto faints right at the scene

Even though Shun saw his cousin drop before him, he did not become panicky and make a lot of noise, as she faints frequently.

At this moment, Rosary suddenly lets go, and Shun successfully escape from her hug.

“…………”

Then, she went into a daze for some reason.

Shun hurriedly changes the ring tone of his phone, and takes a look at the message he received just now.

It was a message sent by his friend Uehara, and the content says……



<<Did Rosary at your side disappear as well?>>
And if anyone can make me that box, the help is greatly appreciated... LOLz

Edit: sighz, box creation failed, will use quote. It is meant to look like the command window of RPGs like dragon quest.
God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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Last part for preview, part 4, have fun~
4

“Uehara, what is this about?”

Shun goes to the corridor outside the living room, and then calls Uehara.

“What are you asking, haven’t you played DB today?”

Even though he sounds calm like usual, but Shun has known him for some time, and so Shun knows that he is rarely this agitated. (But, he will still send a message to see if the other party is convenient to chat on the phone, he is that kind of people who would pay attention to details.)

“Yeah…… I played……”

“So your Rosary disappeared right?”

Suddenly he increased the speed at which he talks.

“Right now there is a big scene on the internet, don’t you find it strange? All the players in the world have hanged all at the same time, and this is a game on individual domestic consoles!”

“Hanged……”

“Rosary suddenly disappeared in the middle of the game, and then it hanged instantly. After that, no matter how you reset, the game will hang at the starting screen, all the save files are gone. I have already completed the game, so I did not see the instant when the character disappeared, but I have already tried with my console. It seems everyone has the same situation.”

“…………”

Shun of course has witnessed the instant which Uehara has spoke of.

Shun found it strange when Rosary disappeared as well.

Just as he fantasized how it would be like with “Rosary sitting beside him”, she vanished from the screen.

If there is anything different from others, it would be his personal experience after that……

“There are discussion threads all over 2ch (Note: The biggest online forum in Japan), some discussion threads even said that it is the omen of terrorists from some countries preparing to attack Japan, the entire forum is flooded. There are even people who called the company and showed the contents of their chat. There are even some threads that are gossiping things like “This is the terrorist action from some country!!”……”

Uehara as a big game maniac, goes on and on saying things like 2chan.net(Note: A big-sized forum like 2ch) or “VIPPER” (Note: Means people who overly post in 2ch and causes trouble to other users) which Shun cannot understand at all.

…… So it is true……

Shun secretly thinks to himself. This problem that the whole globe is experiencing made him even more certain that the person in the living room is the real Rosary.

…… So Rosary came out from the game……

“Hey, Kanda, are you listening to what I am saying?”

“Ah…… Sorry.”

“Never mind, you must be having a great shock from Rosary’s disappearance, you were about to complete the game weren’t you?”

“Ah, I still haven’t……”

“Shun.”

Rosary has been standing behind Shun since who knows when.

“Woah!?”

“Hey, what happened…… Wait, was that a girl’s voice just now……”

“S, sorry! I will call you again later!!”

Shun ends the call, and then switches the phone off quickly.

“Shun.”

“W, what is it?”

Shun answers nervously, but realized that Rosary’s expression seems much more cheerful than before.

“…… So you really are “Shun”……”

Rosary lifts her head to look at Shun, who is half a head taller than her, with respectful eyes.

Shun realized that the thing he was most worried about earlier has happened.

Which is that easily misunderstood coincidence.

Rosary kneels down instantly, and then uses her clear eyes and voice to declare to Shun:

“I am your bride.”



…… The coincidence lies as follows.

In order to defeat the last maou, a new power must be obtained------“The blessing of spirit of the dragon god (DRAGON BLESS)”.

And so, the hero princess Rosary must form a marriage by ritual with the sacred spirit of the dragon god.

And the name of that spirit of the dragon god is------ “Shun”.

But, in the game there would be the message “Once the ritual is held you will get transported to the final battleground directly and you will not be able to return, so Shun has yet to undergo the ritual.

“I finally understand.”

Rosary says.

“This is another world, and is a completely different place from where I was earlier.”

Shun nods.

“This is the world of the spirit of the dragon god.”

She has not understood anything.

“No, that is not right!”

Shun intends to use this opportunity to try explaining everything to Rosary.

“I am not the spirit of the dragon god! This is indeed another world, but it is a little different from the world you spoke of…… I hope you will calm down and listen carefully to what I say, firstly……”

“So then, let us exchange oaths immediately.”

She is not listening at all.

“That is not it! What…… What oaths?”

Rosary stands up suddenly.

“Huh!?”

She continues to close in, gradually forcing Shun back to the side of the wall.

“Please bestow me with the power of the blessing.”

Rosary looks passionately at Shun.

Shun can’t help but be scared by this earnest resolution so much so that his legs go weak, yet Rosary follows suit and squats down, her body almost pressed against Shun.

“Please marry me.”

Rosary who lies on top continues to say:

“Please exchange oaths with me.”

…… Exchange oaths…… Could it be to……!

At this moment, another command window appear before Shun’s eyes.

Code: Select all

>>Exchange
  Don’t exchange
Shun feels as though his heart is about to burst.

Rosary stares motionlessly at Shun. She blinks at times, it seems she is still conscious, but if Shun does not decide on the command, she seems to be unable to perform the next action.

Shun’s hands begins to sweat, the command window appears coincidentally before Rosary’s breasts.

So, he looks at those breasts that are being drawn by gravity and the white slender legs under the skirt.

I actually get to be with Rosary and do……

…… Wahhhhhhhhh!!

Shun’s mind and instincts battle within his brain, he feels as though he is about to suffer internal injuries.

“No exchanging! I will not exchange!!”

Shun escapes from under Rosary, the command window vanishes with that.

And Rosary regains her motion instantly as well.

“Why?”

“No why! To exchange oaths or to wed, these aren’t things that can be done that easily!!”

“…… I get it, you are right.”

Rosary seems to have recalled something, and so looks as if enlightened.

“Before males and females undergo “marriage”, they must first go through many tests.”

“Wha……?”

“I once helped in the marriage of a prince and a princess of opposing countries.”

Rosary puts on an expression that she knows everything, and nods.

“First they must “communicate through letters”.”

She bears a solemn expression and continues to say:

“After exchanging letters like “I have been in love with you for a long time” “Me too” several times, then they have to go on “dates”. Let them have a secret meeting by the lake at night, then they will hug each other, and the female would cry: “Why must you be Henry?” and lastly would be “elope”, thinking of a way to let them escape from the castle, and then at this moment the male would say: “Let us be together forever”. The two would then elope far away, and finally get “married” in a small certain in some town.”

Rosary confidently talks about the scenario in the game.

“Shun, so……”

She bears a serious expression as she says:

“Let us communicate through letters immediately.”

“…………”

Intelligence 40.

Rosary’s stats flashed across Shun’s mind at that instant.

“We have to prepare pen and paper first.”

Rosary suddenly began walking.

“I wrote letters before, to write letters, you need pen and paper.”

She wanders around on the corridor, it is one of the hero’s habits to go around searching without the consent of the owner of the house.

“Hey!”

Shun follows closely behind.

Rosary stands before the closest door, and then turns the door handle immediately.

“Ah…… That is the……”

Toilet.

“……?”

Rosary looks puzzled as she looks at the western toilet with the toilet bowl closed, and at this moment……

Code: Select all

>>Use the toilet
  Don’t use the toilet
……She needs to go to toilet!?

And this thought that appeared in Shun’s mind is automatically decided as “Use the toilet”.

“Ah……”

Then Rosary walks into the toilet and lifts the toilet bowl cover, and then reaches her hand under her skirt, and without hesitation pulls down her panties.

“Wahhh~~!?”

Shun hurriedly shuts the door with a bang.

Shun leans his back against the wall, trying hard to control the rampaging heart, the pure white object that he saw for an instant is clearly burned into his eyes.

When he heard the sound of a flush, his cheeks was even redder, so much so that even his ears are red.

Not long later, Rosary opens the door and walks out of the toilet, her expression seems refreshed as though little flowers have blossomed all around her.

But, she changes back to that impressive look instantly, and hands in the direction of the living room.

Shun came back to himself suddenly, because he remembered that Mikoto nee is still in there.

“Y, you don’t have to rush…… You can write later, it doesn’t matter……”

“No.”

Rosary uses a tone filled with her sense of duty to reply, and following that she walks into the living room.

The inside is naturally still in a pathetic state, Mikoto is still lying on the floor, unconscious.

……I must get Rosary out before Mikoto nee regains consciousness……

Just as Shun nervously plans to do so……

“ “Katsu a seki”!”

Rosary suddenly chanted an awakening spell.

“What are you doing!?”

Shun can’t help but grab Rosary’s shoulders and shake with force.

“W, why are you angry?”

At this moment, Mikoto’s body give off a weak glow.

“…… Mmm……”

She gives off a weak moan, and slowly opens her eyes.
Spell name converted with online translation, once again, quote used to include the command window.

Well, this part seems like a rather interesting place to end, so thats all for the preview~ have fun ^^
God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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WoW

this novel contains pure awesomeness (even better than i thought it was going to be).

thanks shadow for the preview

btw...i edited your posts for the code box

that was what you wanted right?
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Re: Novel Suggestion: Love You My Hero Princess

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LOLz not the best, but good enough. This is something like what is in my novel by the way.
A close remake in 10mins.
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God!!
You need not forgive me.
For those I love,
The violence brought about by sinful men
Shall now be used once more.
If you were created to save this world,
If there is a single shred of hope left for the future of mankind,
I am very sorry, but, please begone!
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