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Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby RikiNutcase » Sun Jan 12, 2014 4:41 am

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Summary:

[Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle]

[Lux a prince from a kingdom destroyed from a revolution 5 years ago, met up with Lizshalte the new kingdom's princess by accidentally trespassing into the girl dormitory bath house.
"....................How long are you planning to look at my naked body you foolllllll!"
The Drag ride-An ancient weapon that dug up from ruins. Lux who was once called the strongest drag knight is now being called the [Weakest undefeated] as he is now a drag knight who will never attack. On top of being challenged by Lizshalte, for some reason he was made to enroll into an female academy made for nurturing drag knights...........!?
The story of Lux being surrounded by noble girls from the academy now begins.
A mix of Military and royal principles, A academy fantasy of the "Strongest" now unfolds!]

Imagine Seirei Tsukai, Infinite Stratos(Minus useless Ichika), a little of Madan, and no Female supremacy as the males in this universe is able to use the weapons as well.

From one of my favorite illustrators.

Now has 2 volumes~! Enjoy~!
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby denormative » Sun Jan 12, 2014 6:37 am

RikiNutcase wrote:Lux a prince from a kingdom destroyed from a revolution 5 years ago, met up with Lizshalte the new kingdom's princess by accidentally trespassing into the girl dormitory bath house.

Oops.

That seems to happen surprisingly often in the first chapter of a LN.

Either that or the girl's bedroom. Of the girls dorms.

Essentially anywhere the MC really shouldn't have any probability of being in any event. Which of course, according to the laws of probability, absolutely guarantees he will be there.

Maybe this is some inexplicable pan-universal law in action?
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby RikiNutcase » Sun Jan 12, 2014 6:50 am

denormative wrote:
RikiNutcase wrote:Lux a prince from a kingdom destroyed from a revolution 5 years ago, met up with Lizshalte the new kingdom's princess by accidentally trespassing into the girl dormitory bath house.

Oops.

That seems to happen surprisingly often in the first chapter of a LN.

Either that or the girl's bedroom. Of the girls dorms.

Essentially anywhere the MC really shouldn't have any probability of being in any event. Which of course, according to the laws of probability, absolutely guarantees he will be there.

Maybe this is some inexplicable pan-universal law in action?


sadly to say, it is a cat's fault (or thanks to the cat) that the MC got dragged to the bath house.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby Xersax » Sun Jan 12, 2014 7:11 am

RikiNutcase wrote:sadly to say, it is a cat's fault (or thanks to the cat) that the MC got dragged to the bath house.


Well cat or no cat the end result is still the same...

Even if the males can use weapons, then it still brings to question he being in the female academy. Which many many LN use the same plot point. Haa...
Though I am intrigued by:
Lux who was once called the strongest drag knight is now being called the [Weakest undefeated] as he is now a drag knight who will never attack.


How far would the author define, "who will never attack". Like, "I won't attack first" or "I'll only fight real battles" or "Never kill again". Hmm... Art looks good though.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby RikiNutcase » Sun Jan 12, 2014 7:52 am

Xersax wrote:
RikiNutcase wrote:sadly to say, it is a cat's fault (or thanks to the cat) that the MC got dragged to the bath house.


Well cat or no cat the end result is still the same...

Even if the males can use weapons, then it still brings to question he being in the female academy. Which many many LN use the same plot point. Haa...
Though I am intrigued by:
Lux who was once called the strongest drag knight is now being called the [Weakest undefeated] as he is now a drag knight who will never attack.


How far would the author define, "who will never attack". Like, "I won't attack first" or "I'll only fight real battles" or "Never kill again". Hmm... Art looks good though.


He was first brought to the academy as a work to pay for his debts. And like usual since the females have better rates with the machines, they are sent to the school to be better at it. The current drawbacks for the males, is the time limit for the machine is less compared to the girls. There are also monsters in this series making it Monsters vs Bad guys vs good guys.


He has the title of undefeated but he never wins.....giving him the title [Weakest undefeated]........so basically every matches he goes to, he will try to get a draw. But well this part got cut off during the end of Vol 1 where he raped the enemies like no one's business.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby Kouen no Ten » Sun Jan 12, 2014 8:55 am

Did you read the 2nd volume too? And, is this good linguistically?
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby RikiNutcase » Sun Jan 12, 2014 3:47 pm

Kouen no Ten wrote:Did you read the 2nd volume too? And, is this good linguistically?


Linguistically =average. Vol 2 a little bit.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby Tenzai » Mon Jan 13, 2014 8:31 am

is there a teaser coming? :) anyways it sounds quite generic but im not one to nitpick on that as i find that the big difference is how the author uses the setting to play to its strength and not screw up to much with weird anime/manga/novel (Japanese :S ) logic ^^
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby jonathanasdf » Mon Jan 13, 2014 7:55 pm

this sounds so much like the teasers to fafnir i just tl'd...

Spoiler! :
http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Unlimited_Fafnir
please don't derail this thread more than I already have :P
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby lightdreamer » Tue Jan 14, 2014 6:05 pm

Sounds like just one of your typical shonen harem LN to me. Not interested.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby whsie » Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:02 pm

Of the ones currently listed, I'm perhaps most interested in this one and Mismarca.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby Code-Zero » Sat Mar 08, 2014 10:07 pm

Copy and paste.

Prologue

Spoiler! :
Prologue: The Black Hero

The girl looked up to the sky.

As if she was being absorbed by the deep dark sky, the girl was looking up as if she was enchanted by it.

However, the lower region of the sky was red.

The red flames that was slowly wavering within the whole surface.

The powerful country that controlled one fifth of the world. The castle of Acadia Empire was burning in flames.

A castle made from thick rock build up high as if it cut itself from the outside world.

Being surrounded by it where the sparks fell down to courtyard, the girl simply looked up the sky.


There were Dragons dancing within the sky.

The battle of the Drag-Knights with their life on the line where they wore dark grey ancient weapon over their body.

Hundreds of Dragons danced within the sky that was lit by the flames as they made their howls, had their wings torn off, and fell.


“Aren’t you going to run away, brat?”

The girl turned around due to hearing a voice from behind her.

There was a youth standing there.

A handsome face with silver hair and ash coloured eyes.

That man who wore a cape with a refined design imprinted on it acts in a manly manner like that of a noble, but he looked at the girl with his sparkling eyes that made you think of a hungry beast.

However, the girl cladded in black dress who had no emotion in her eyes didn’t get scared and instead gazed the youth with her eyes.

“……Were you the one that killed them? The people of this castle—”

“I did. …….If I say that, will you avenge them? Fine then, bring it.”

Instead of trembling at the question thrown at him, he drew his sword out with joy.

It was a beautiful blade that had multiple silver lines on its surface.

A divine weapon that was the key to activate the Drag-Ride and control them—the sword device.

“……If you did, then kill me right here as well.”

“What……?”

The youth twitched his eyebrows at what the girl muttered.

“If the Empire is going to fall, then I don’t have any other place left where I belong to—.”

“…………”

The youth made an uncanny look, and stared at the girl for a while.

“……Kuhahahaha! Oh I see! So you were that kind of girl! One of those kinds of people! This is a masterpiece! Hahahahaha! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!”

He suddenly put his hand on his forehead and laughed as if he broke.

Despite that, the girl didn’t show any response.

“This is boring…… I’m not going to kill you, idiot. What will I benefit from by killing someone amusing like you?”

As the man said that, he took off the other sword that was hanging on his hip along with its sheath and threw at towards the girl.

On the sheath that sunk down on the grasses while it made a heavy sound, it had beautiful ornaments carved into it.

“I’ll give that to you. The “power” that will change fate—that sword device that is. So flee while taking that with you. This castle will go down very soon, lady.”

The man said that while putting on a smile that didn’t carry any craziness he had till just now.

“…………”

The girl picked up the sword silently.

She embraced the sword which was too big for a young small body like hers along with the sheath.

After the youth smiled fearlessly seeing that, he turned around and walked into the castle.

“Wait.”

“What’s wrong?”

The silver haired youth stopped due to the girl’s voice, and he turned around reluctantly.

“What is that……?”

The girl pointed at the sky.

What was there was a devil that was destroying the Empire that was known as the absolute undefeated myth.

It flew in many directions at the sky where there was sparks. A single grey coloured Dragon that was causing havoc by destroying Drag-Rides that belonged to the Empire one after another.

It was a giant jet-black Drag-Ride that had the same colour as the sky.

“Kukuku. ……No idea. Except, for the majority of the people in this town, you can call it the great hero that took down the horrible Empire.”

“A hero……?”

The man disappeared during the time the girl looked up once again.

She didn’t get any answers.

That’s why, the girl wished to live on until she find the answer.


Even the hot wind that came from inside the castle got violent and caused the sparks that were falling down on the courtyard to make a swirl.

“…………”

The girl went inside the water well while embracing the sword that was given to her by the youth.

When she went down the well using the hanging rope, there was a blocked hole near the water surface.

She used the key she was hiding inside her pocket. The girl stopped right before entering the passage.


She looked up very high to the night sky which was a battlefield as if she was being absorbed by it.

“Father…… I—”


The girl muttered as if she was dead.


Episode 1(Part 1)
Spoiler! :
Episode 1: The Intruder at Midnight
+++Part1+++

There was a colour of the skin.

A white steam that covered all of the sight.

At the other side of the steam, there was a wall and a marble pillar that was visible due to being lit by the lamp.

And the feeling of the warm water that wet his cotton trouser.

No matter how you thought about it, this was a bathroom.

“……U-Umm?”

(How did this happen again……?)

That question was going through Lux’s mind.

“……!?”

Lux looked down while he tried not to look at the naked girls that were standing there shocked at the other side of the steam.

“…………Fu.”

Underneath Lux who was inside the hot water with his clothes on was a girl who made a laugh.

Unlike her slim body, there was a mature smile on her expression.

Her smooth white skin turned red due to being inside the bath where her cheek also became red.

(She’s cute.)

He could have said that if he was looking at her from the side, but Lux not only couldn’t speak, but also couldn’t move an inch due to the dangerous feeling and the steam coming out from the girl.

“……Hey, pervert. Do you have anything left to say before dying?”

Scary words came out from her lovely face where she was forcefully made a smile.

Well, it wouldn’t be weird for her to be angry.

That’s because—, he could see her.

Inside the spacious bathroom, the towel that was wrapped around her body fell and her fresh looking naked body became visible.

Her cute looking breast that was shivering while hitting back the hot water.

Her collarbone that rose above the hot water and the tight curve on her hips.

And also, even places below her silky stomach was—.

“…………”

His fate might be decided with his next word.

Lux started to choose the words carefully with his panicked head.

(I, I should praise her first……!)

In the past when he did chores while working as a bar waiter, he was taught the technique of how to praise a girl.

Before he could come up with something, his honest opinion came out from his mouth.

“……Hmm, the thing is. You are cute. Your whole packages itself is like that of a child……no, even though you seem young, you have quite the breast—and it’s quite taunting. ……Wait, what the!?”

(I’m dead.)

(What on earth am I saying! That’s not what I’m supposed to say!)

(Who was it!? The one who taught me the wrong way to say it!? That damn perverted bar owner!)

“…………Fu.”

The naked girl who heard that released a bitter laughter.

For an instant, she made a bright smile as if she was satisfied with it, and then—


“How long are you planning to ride on top of me, you fooooooool!”


She made an angry voice.

“Kyaaaaaaaah!?”

At the same time, there was many screams coming from the girls of the whole bathroom.

The naked girls started to throw anything they could find at Lux with all their might.

“I, I’m sooooooooorry!”

Lux tried to escape in panic.

“H-How did it turn out like this!?”

With a teary eyes, Lux started to remember what happened several hours ago with the bag he was carrying in his hand.
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby octapusxft » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:13 pm

That is my kind of novel.
I think I will love it
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby MyGawd » Wed Apr 02, 2014 3:04 am

i like it since the mc is not dense at all plus he is actually
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the guy in the beginning of prologue, which means he destroyed his own castle, and he and the sis become the servant to the new royal family. i don't know why he is satisfied with that, which just pisses me off. the transfer student is 100x better than the princess


plus the design of the dragride is pretty fluid, streamlined and really gives a vibe that so damn (the feeling you see a nice car). Pretty much, this and gakuen fights for the IS successor in my heart. plus that scene in v2 damn. so many plus so many win
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Re: Saijaku muhai no Bahamut

Postby MiyukiShiba » Wed Apr 02, 2014 7:43 am

I saw the other day the illustrations of this one, they are pretty. Too bad, the plot doesn't appeals to me.
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