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[GAGAGA文庫] 魔王っぽいの! Maō ppoi no!(Teaser Included)

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Cover of the first volume :

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Author : 原田源五郎 Harada Gengoro
Illustrator : nyanya
Status : 4 volumes released as in Japan

Summary (credits to Chaika) :
Spoiler! :
[Introduction]
[I am... something like the maou!]
That beautiful girl said.
Even though it was the most important part, she gave a rather ambiguous introduction.
...something like? So she is not a maou?
I was casted as a hero by the self-proclaimed [maou-like] girl Mano.
I was forced to help her create a legend.
Although I would rather develop a H-Game story with the cute Mano...
Malo would only use strange magic,
the slime she summoned is just like a weak girl... that is not maou-like at all!
The lost maou and a hero who loves H-Game!
The lazy planless remedial comedy has officially began~?
Quite an interesting LN. Funny and quite an easy read. Oh and the illustrations are 'cute'.
For now, I've started TLing this from Chinese (!) and it can be found

HERE!!!!
Spoiler! :
And yes. You have to register before able to read it. It's nothing skecthy, you just have to register and make 2 posts somewhere on the site like intro or whatever. Again, sorry for that. Why do I post it here? I have some issues regarding the 'edits' and 'MTL' so I decided to put it there. Why do I put the link on BT then? I don't aim for traffic or whatever it is, I consider it a 'thank you' for BT community where I found links to my favorite LNs. So now I post links. If you want a teaser or some sort, the first 2 chapters are available in BT forums. Thank you for your understanding....Any questions or maybe angry rant(?) can be send to my PM.


If there are enough people interested in this I might make it on the wiki as teaser.
I would be glad if someone would like to help me transalting this from JP oh and if there are questions or anything you can PM here or there.

As a bonus, Chapter 1 :
Spoiler! :
Chapter 1
Not Quite Like the Devil

The empty classroom after school was an alluring empty place.

It’s very common for things like “ I love you….Kiss me,” this kind of confession, or like stealing the girls’ gym clothes. But then again, these were all just my imagination.

However, right now in front of my eyes was a girl in strange clothing.

It’s all black, making her looked like villains or some sort but with high exposure, the exposed belly looked very soft, and a black cape to top it off for some unknown reason.

She seemed to be the same age as me, it made me think that she was one of the students of this school. But why was she wearing this kind of clothes, not school uniforms?

In addition, it was not only her clothes that were weird.

“….Err…Should I introduce myself?”

She then began to look at a piece of note, and mumbling unclear things, adding the strangeness of her clothing.

“…Uh…let me tear you apart to pieces…ah…no…wrong one…”

Hey hey! Did she just not say something very terrifying? This is very suspicious!

No, maybe I’m peeking at a girl inside a classroom is even more suspicious.

But wait a minute… This is quite justified!

Let’s look back for a bit. After the school was over, when it was near the evening, I rushed back to the classroom.

It’s all because I accidentally left my H-game in the classroom.

How could I ever forget my masterpiece collection of H-game, the “ Flanders Childhood. “

But then again, bringing a H-game to the school was a problem on its own.

Anyways, I ran back to the classroom in panic and arrived in front of it.

After calming my ragged breath, I found something.

I could hear a girl’s voice somewhere nearby, probably from the classroom next door.

It seemed like she was talking to no one but herself, doing a monologue.

Maybe she was using the table’s corner to do exciting things.

Really hoping that this would unfold an H-Game scene, I will sneak a peek.

….No, thinking about it carefully, there was no justification in it!

Unfortunately, my expectation was crushed.

It was only a girl with strange clothing whispering something weird, and I was left speechless.

To say it clearly, wearing this kind of clothes was so eye-catching.

But I think there was something else more eye catching than her clothes.

And that was because she’s so beautiful.

Her long and smooth long black hair, the perfect cute face of her, her bright and clear eyes, slender limbs, all the material needed for the beautiful girl indeed were there.

She was such a beautiful girl that it would not be strange to have a doll modeled after her. Even selling her underwear as separate merchandise was not strange.

Who’s she anyways?

“Er….Devil King Wu Nai… um, well….”

It seemed that I heard the word ‘Devil King’ or something.

Well, those clothes she wore looked like what the devils would.

This school rules did not state ‘ Go to school in a cosplay and act properly ‘ this kind of rules like those Comiket ( No 1 ) rules.

Comiket ( No 1.) in short , Japan’s annual doujinshi sales.

So then…. Is she a member of a drama club? Maybe she’s practicing the scene when the devil king made an appearance. But to even wore these kinds of clothes in practice, such devotion.

It would be better to leave her practicing, and leave quietly.

“…and then laughter….uehehehehe!”

“What kind of devil laugh like that? Surely not ‘Uehehehehe’ ?! “

“Who, who’s there!!!”


Oh no! I accidentally retorted her weird laughter!

“…Well…Um…Sorry…I just want to know what you were doing…”

To get rid of this weird atmosphere, I opened the door, and hesitantly walked in.

I thought she would be angry at me peeping her, but she just quietly staring at me with calm face.

….How come?

If a girl as cute as this staring at you, no matter what, it would make you feel a bit restless.

Nononono, please calm down, me. Up to this day, I have been receiving stares from many girls have I not? No special meaning behind it.

Though it’s common in H-game to have those….

“….Ah! Right !”

The girl seemed to remember something, and smiled.

Suddenly, for unknown reason, the girl turned her back on me.

And then she slowly turned back again…..

“You come at the right time, O brave one! “

Declared the girl with stiff and rigid tone.

Brave one?

What is this the ‘brave one’?

Did that performance before had this kind of thing?

“I have been waiting for this moment to come.”

She continued her speech, ignoring me who froze in place.

What is this about? The continuation of that drama practice?

No, wait…

These kinds of lines, it felt like it came out from anime or manga. This girl also called herself the ‘devil king’ before.

“Wu Nai….”

If it’s true, the next line would be….

“Wu Nai is a Devil King-like.”

Eh? That’s wrong.

Correct one should be “Similar to devil”.

What kind of thing is “like a”?

That being the case, this was such an absurd way of self-introduction.

It’s like when someone who wore a police uniform saying, “ I’m a police-like, ” 100% suspicious speech, and so I felt suspicious.

“…ah! No, it’s wrong! A mistake!”

She suddenly stopped using that pretentious tone of her and began making “awawawa” kind of sound anxiously.

“Wait a minute, that one just now didn’t count! It’s Wu Nai the Devil King! The Devil King! Devil King yo!”

She waved her hand back and forth, while making corrections quickly.

What is this girl trying to do actually?

“Well… Can I ask you something..?”

I inquired the girl who still waved her hands.

“Yes? What? What is it? I’m a Devil King what is it?”

“What kind of thing is ‘Devil King-like’? Doesn’t that mean very similar but not ‘Devil King?’”

“Wrong, wrong, I am really the ‘Devil-King’ yo? How could I say such thing like ‘Devil-King Like’?”

She quickly looked away, avoiding eye contact.

This girl….really want to wriggle out ( Ignore ) the past completely.

“But you just said that very clearly before.”

“Er…what do you mean? I’m a Devil-King yo. Like the flower named “ Kill ( Massacre ) .”

“How could a flower justified you as the ‘Devil-king’ ?!”

Besides, there is no flower named “Kill (massacre)” !

“Because I am a devil, my hobby is killing with fragrances!”

The weirdness is doubled. But I’m too lazy and tired to retort.

“….in short, you are claiming to be the Devil-king....what for?”

“A good question…well..it’s….It’s to make the world mine!”

Even if you say that with a proud expression…

I don’t want to hear this kind of ‘Devil-King’ answer.

“So then…why are you acting as a Devil-King here?”

“Wha-whawhawat!? No, that’s not it! This is not acting!”

She started to panic and her expression changed back again.

“So….in order to escape the harsh reality of the world, you dressed as a devil to be one…?

I want to destroy this disgusting world—that sort of feeling.

“No! I’m not that kind of unfortunate people! I am a real ‘Devil King’! A real ‘Devil King’ ! At the sight of me 97 of 100 people out there will say that I’m a Devil King!”

“What did the three people said….”

It would be better if she said 100 of 100 people.

Well, in short, this girl wants to proof her devil appearance’s real?

“Well, that’s how it is. Then to continue after the greeting, er...”

Just as I thought , “ still more of it huh?” that’s when—

“…..what?”

She suddenly stopped moving.

“…..What else am I supposed to say?”

“How can I know that?!”

“Wa, wait a minute! I’ll think of something in a moment!”

“I think you should relax a bit more to make it easier to remember…”

“Un..well..? What is it again?”

“Is it something like, ‘’Please do something ‘dirty’ to me?’’ kind of thing?”

“Whawhawha!? I, I won’t say that! That… that kind of…”

The girl hurriedly took out her note again and began confirming it.

How should I say it, it’s really too easy to make this girl flustered and panicked.

I can’t help but think that she’s kind of cute.

No no, if these kind of strange dialogues continues, I will get a severe headache. If only it’s more of an H-game kind of dialogue, I’ll be much happier.

“….this one….no this one has nothing to do with realationship….um….”
“Ah this one! Even if I’m eliminated, there will be second and third Devil kin and more to appear--!”

“That one is for when the Devil King is overthrown….”

“….is it this one then…Who ate my pudding without permission!!”

“There are such lines too!?”


Besides, when would this kind of sentence is needed!

Furthermore, if you don’t want your pudding to be eaten, just write your name!

“Oh, I know! No problem. Everything’s OK. Okay, I’m going to say it!”

The girl put away the piece of note and cleared her throat.

“Er…the brave one…brave one…brave… that’s it, what is your name?”

“Name? My name is Morii Souta.”

“The brave one Morii Souta….too long. Under this circumstances….only 4 letters, so can I shorten it?”

“Oh…That’s fine.”

“Sentai Hero!” { This is kind of a word play. And I suck at it . }

“What kind nickname is that!!!”

“Wh ? What? What would it be then?”

“Hm…calling me Souta is good enough.”

“Well then…Souta the brave --- I am the highest rank devil in this world, making human tremble in fear and awe, the Devil King Mano!”

“Oh, so you’re Mano.”

“…..er that….what kind of reaction is that? I’m the Devil king you know? The dark site you know? The so called bad guys in your point of view! Don’t you start hating me now?”

This girl called Mano started pouting with a ‘mu mu mu’ kind of sound, looking unsatisfied.

Maybe she wanted me to play along with my role as the hero.

But I don’t have any intention to play along, why should I act that way?

“So then… can I go back now?”

“Going back….? The devil king in front of you, but you calmly chooses to run away, the reputation of the brave one is surely as low as the ground….! So then… to make this world mine, it’s only a matter of time!”

“So that’s it. Good bye—“

“Wa, wait a minute! If you are really going home, it would be troublesome for me! I still have things I want to say to you!”

Mano immediately tried to make me stay.

“But I want to go home immediately, and stand stark naked in front of my computer.”

“What are you going to do naked in front of your computer!? A, at least hear me first! Being a hero, you should at least care for the world right?”

What, it’s like those so called call-out to the heroes.

“Don’t you want to have an argumentation war with the devil king? This kind of ‘game’ play.”

“Yes yes, that’s right…huh? What kind of ‘Game’ ? Knowing you, it must not be good! Especially the way you say it at the end, it worries me.” { I think something’s wrong with this line. Checking it later.}

Mano released a sigh of relieve.

“So…in other words, you want me say hero-like lines?”

“That’s right, you truly are the brave one!”

“But to be abruptly called the hero, I feel so weird.”

“You ARE the brave one!”

“No, but…”

“You are the brave one! A hero IS a hero!”

Never thought she would be so unreasonable.

Now that’s she’s acting like this, it’s my turn to say something.

“…..I started to think….The clothes are fine, but Mano, your acting skill is completely no go.”

Up to this day I have conquered various H-games, good or bad, that’s why I’m very picky with lines or dialogues.

“Wh, what did you say!? Then, what should I do?”

Unexpectedly she reacted immediately.

“Okay first of all, take of your clothes one by one.”

“Whawhawha what!? Wh, Why must I take it off one by one!?”

“Oh! So you want to strip it all at once!”

“Why do you interpret it that way!? I won’t do that kind of thing! Definitely not!”

Her cheeks flushed red, Mano waved her hands angrily.

“So yeah…. Like this, it’s the so called ‘baiting’.”

“Yes, this is more like the Devil King lines!”

“I feel that those are completely different though….”

After Mano said that she made the ‘Look at me seriously’ Devil-king like expression, crossing her arms in front of her chest.

“So….Souta the hero! Do you hate this Devil King? “

“No, it’s not like I hate you, but it’s more like ‘suspicious’ ….”

“I will ask you one more time. Do you hate this Devil King….?”

“Huh? Of course not…”

“I will ask you one more time. You hate this Devil King, don’t you..?”

“H,huh? I told you I don’t ….”

“I will ask you one more time. Do you hate this Devil King….?”

“I hate you! The more I think about it, the more I hate you!”

In the end, I gave in. This kind of “NO” way out was what people hate.

She forced me to say it, and even more her expression of ‘Really do’ was very annoying.

“Is that so…You really hate this Devil King who’s going to destroy this world…..! Kekekeke!”

“How come the laughter is like that in the end!?”

“Huh? ‘Kekeke’ is weird? How about ‘ Uguehehe’ ? “

“This is getting indecent….” { Oh wow! Akiko?! Or was it me laughing?! }

“Is that so? Then what should it be like?”

“Well….I think ‘Mwahahaha’ is much better.”

“Mwahaha….Mwahahahaa! This one is good! So it’s like this!”

Mano made an ‘oooo’ expression, like she wholeheartedly agreed. This Devil King, she doesn’t even know the very basic of evil laughing?

She used my recommendation and turned to me.

“Souta the brave one….I commend you to finally arrive at this place...but with that level of power you wish to oppose me, Mano the Devil King….? Mwahahaha! Mwahahaha!”

“Now you use that ‘Mwahaha’ as you want huh….”

It seems that she is very happy to use this kind of laughter.

“You’re such a moron mwahaha! Like a weak child, I can use both of my hands to crush you easily mwahaha! But doing it like that won’t be fun at all mwahahaha!”

“Well… It seems that it has become a habit for you to end every sentences with that ‘mwahaha’ huh..”

It seems that she didn’t hear me.

“Okay…this time I will let you off….Souta the hero! Become stronger, and one day come to find me the Devil King! I will be looking forward to it! Take care of your feeble life! Mwahahahaha! “

After she finished laughing, Mano the Devil KIng made that ‘There you go!’ expression proudly.

“O…Okay…”

“……….”

“……….”

“……….”

“……….”

For unknown reason, she just stood there and smiling.

Now then what to do.

For a moment, both of us just looked at each other trying to see the other’s reaction…..

“…….well…..that’s it….”

Said Mano with a somehow troubled expression. Her voice became docile.

“What do you mean ‘That’s it’ ?”

“Um, I mean, don’t you think it’s time to leave?”

“Oh? I can go now?”

“Oh, okay, let me say it once again. Take care of your feeble life….”

“No! You don’t need to repeat it anymore! I understand! I completely understand!”

Because I feel like the weird atmosphere would return, I hastily stopped her.

“Is that right? I was hoping that you understand it immediately though. Or kicking you out forcibly is better? Though I considered that option to be the last on my list…”

Mano began to speak to herself, trying to get hold of the problem.

“Er…I’ll go back then.”

“Ah, wait a minute! Don’t go!”

“But you just told me to go back!”

“Since it’s a rare opportunity, I’d like you to tell me which part’s good and which part’s no good.”

And then Mano, with a very cute voice asked me, “Please”.

Surely, surely something good will happen!

Since she had so far as to say please, I can’t say “everything is a no go.” It looks like it’s better to give her some constructive answer.

“That….That is if your voice can be a bit more evil for Devil King would be better. After all, your voice is way too cute for it.”

“Ah! Tha, that, saying my voice is cute…! This kind of thing, to be told directly, it makes me feel a bit embarrassed….awawawa!”

Mano then made that kind of ‘ Really, don’t what to do with you’ kind of shy face.

Truth is…. It’s not a praise or compliment; it’s just that you don’t sound like the Devil King at all.

“Also, summoning that kind of tentacle monster, and ordering it to wrap around your body, and use it’s tentacle for that ‘no go place!’--- I think it would be much better.”

“Whawhawhat!? Why would the Devil King be treated that way! It’s way too strange!”

The shy Mano started to get angry.

Since that was a story line from an H-game.

“Anyways that’s it, I’m going back now…”

“Ah, wait a minute! Don’t go!”

“Just when are you going to let me go back?”

“I accidentally forgot! Souta is not the hero yet!”

“At this point what the hell are you talking about!?”

I’m totally confused right now.

At that time, she took out some sort of cellphone, and with a ‘click’ sound took a picture of me.

“Eh..after taking the photo…send….”

“….why do you take a picture of me…?”

“With this now Souta can truly be the hero.”

“So after taking a photo of me with a phone, I’m alleged to be a hero!? There is some sort of registering system!?”

“No problem, the camera is high resolution.”

“That’s totally unrelated!”

Then again….

If I were to ignore the method of me becoming a hero, why would it be the devil to come and register me?

“Now then the registration is all done; try hard to defeat the devils.”

“Huh? Defeat the devils?”

“Um! I don’t know when it will happen, so take care.”

“Eh? A hero?”

“Yup! Then, good bye….! Until we meet again mwahahaha….!”

“O….o…”

I was wondering what heck just happened, while walking out from the classroom.

In the end, what does that girl want to do?

Did she just want me to play the hero, as practice for her Devil King act in drama?

Or just some sort of a game in the real world to deepen a relationship like a girl falling in love..?

Well even if she’s cute, in all other aspects the girls just spells out troublesome.

Ah, that’s right. I can trick to get more into the H-game story line. Like example, telling her to expose her underwear to make her Devil King persona better.

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I was thinking that sort of thought while going home.

However…..

At that time I have yet to realize the most important thing. I completely forgot to bring back my H-game!!!


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{A ROUGH translation from the image above. I’m dead tired so expect mistranslations.}

It’s time to ask the Devil King’s Note corner (1)

Starring the lines from the Devil King and the hero (or sort of!)

When the Hero reveals “I don’t like Summer or blistering hot weather”

Mano : Let me use the infernal hell fire to burn you!

“It’s noon already! When are you going to wake up!” sort of speech was said by the Hero’s like a mother during holiday.

Mano : Who is that person…..to be so cheeky…and dare to disturb my sleep…

When the Hero began to take off his pants.

Mano : Oh? Let me take a look to check {try to guess what she says :D }

When finally the Hero’s pants was taken off already

Mano : Hm…Only at this level huh…. {OUCH!}

Souta : ‘The hero taking his pants of’ This hero is so weird!!!
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Re: [GAGAGA文庫] 魔王っぽいの! Maō ppoi no!

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For the sake of it....
Anyways, Chapter 2 :
Not Quite Like the Childhood Friend! {Done except last picture}
Btw, feel free to post a comment or something. And yes, my English sucks. Either bear with it or help me.
Spoiler! :
I heard the ‘click’ sound of door opening.

“Brother, hurry and wake up! It’s morning already!”

A voice filled with vigor echoed in my room.

Was it my little sister calling me to wake up?

Ah, yes.

Then it’s better to not wake up immediately, pretending to be asleep to make her annoyed.

“When are you going to wake up! Wake up brother!”

Even though she started to shake my body, I still pretended to be vast asleep.

“Aaa quickly wake up! You sleepy head!”

Hahaha, she’s getting troubled.

“Ahhh….that’s it…! If you still don’t wake up, I’ll do it this way!”

My little sister lets out unhappy grunts, seemed a little angry, and stopped shaking my body, and then there’s a rustling sound, I didn’t know what she is doing.

I’m curious of what she was doing, so I secretly opened my eyes a bit.

And then the figure of my little sister wearing school swimsuit could be seen!

“Since Brother isn’t waking up, I have no other option but to wear this kind of clothes!”

“Hey, hey! That’s not it! If it’s not the old styled one, it won’t do! Didn’t I always tell you to wear the old one! And your body has to be wet before wearing it, so the swimsuit will be all shiny and sultry! And then again there’s also the movement of ‘correcting the position of the wrinkled bottom’s part’! Also the glimpse of those parts unaffected by the natural sun tans!”
{Such fetishes……}

Then I snapped awake quickly, and found that I’m the only person in the room.

What the…a dream huh.

Well, that’s right. I don’t have a little sister to begin with.

Though it’s obviously not a nightmare, I have never dreamt about a swimsuit like this, even nitpicking on it, and got so excited I sweated. I began to feel sorry for myself. With that kind of gloomy mood, I began to prepare to go to school.

Nevertheless, I do really like H-games so much I dreamt about things like this, but why it’s never the same as the storyline? I surely like to look like the H-game Protagonist with the bangs covering the eyes, but I totally don’t have that kind of style.

Won’t it be good if one day suddenly a delicate little sisters popping out in front of your eyes!

Ah, that’s right. Speaking of H-Game, it made me remember something.

I left my newest H-game at school.

I got ready to go to school way faster than the usual and left the house.

And then I saw a girl I knew.

“Ah, Nao, good morning.”

“Oh, Souta, good morning. You’re way earlier than usual today.”

With a lukewarm answer to my greeting, was this girl—Murase Nao, she lives near my home, and the so called childhood friend. I certainly don’t have a little sister, but doesn’t having a childhood friend make you remember of the H-game settings? Under normal circumstances, it’s okay to think like that. However.

“Hey Nao, why don’t you come and wake me up every morning?”

“Huh? Why would I do such thing like that?”

“I think that’s because you’re a childhood friend of mine, they usually do things like that.”

“What are you talking about. You’re already a high school student, wake up yourself.”

Such a cold respond from Nao.

“Or we can go to school together.”

“No. Don’t you always arriving almost late at school, Souta?”

“Don’t be like that, or you can help me prepare some breakfast!”

“No. You can just buy some food.”

“Then you’ll be carrying it!”

“Outrageous!? How come you come into that kind of conclusion!”


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Nao then makes some sort of grumbling and was showing the ‘ Really, what is he talking about’ kind of face.

Precisely this kind of feeling. Nao is definitely my childhood friend, but she doesn’t act like one, at most we’re just calling each other’s using first names, nothing more.

I glanced to my side, looking at Nao.

Standing upright, shiny long hair with the aura of a leader, just like an honor student. Then again in reality, she is indeed a very capable person, a really amazing top-grade student.

She’s been like that since she was small, beautiful lips and a pair of clear eyes, and now she’s grown to a high school students, she looks even more mature, growing to be such a beauty. Too bad her chest didn’t grow much, the so called pettanko.
{ COME ON, FLAT IS JUSTICE YOU DUMB MC!}

So in short, it was like we were almost always seen together.

But in reality, we rarely enrolled at the same school, or as classmates, or even the class next door, how could it be like this!? This was such an insult to the so called ‘childhood friend’ type. Nothing resembling ‘childhood friends’ could be seen. This is a fake ‘childhood friend’, way different from those in H-game.

“Anyways Souta, why are you so early to school today?”

“Hm?Ah, I got something to do.”

“Something to do? What is that?”

Not answering honestly with a “I forgot my H-game at school” would be better.

Because in the past, when I used the term H-game, she was extremely angry.

“Er…I left a game where a girl puts on and takes off her clothes in the school.” {I think I mistranslated this line….}

“What kind of thing did you carry to the school!?”

Oh no! Explaining things like this is the same as saying that it’s H-game!

“N, No, this game has no such kind of exciting event between people or the kinds! The CG is also very few in number!”

“The problem is not the number you idiot!”

As expected, Nao was angry.

“Tha, that’s why I will surely bring it back home today.”

“For real! This kind of things will disrupt the school’s morale!”

“Ye…Yes….”

“Ah….Souta you haven’t changed, always talking about this kind of game all the time. Normally, no one would talk this kind of things in front of a girl…”

It seemed that Nao has given up on something.

I felt a bit lucky that her anger has quelled down, but the feeling of being ‘abandoned’ or ‘given up’ was somewhat disturbing me.

Then I can only say this.

“Don’t think I just like H-game. I have an ambition!”

“Huh?”

Nao looked at me as if I’m a pitiful creature or some sort.

“Listen to me! I want to live like a H-game protagonist! Gathering a harem on my side, and living with them happily with a laughter like ‘Yes! Hehehee!’ I’ve been playing H-game as reference for that!”

“Oh…..”

I was telling her with such enthusiasm, but Nao just looked at me with cold expression.

“Why do… I feel like entering a convenience store in the middle of summer heat…so cold…”

“Ah… so annoying. Why are you mixing reality with delusion? You have turned into an otaku.”

Nao shook her head. It’s because I explained in great detail the H-game, which was a topic she hates.

“No. After all… I can understand what reality is—“

“So then, using them as reference in real life… Sato, how many girls you have gathered in the school?”

“….huh?”

“How many of them are now? Hey….how many?”

This fellow… For a while now she’s been attacking my weaknesses. If she used the 秘孔神拳 { Fist of Death? A reference to fist of the north star? I don’t know } , I’d be dead already.

And unfortunately, there is not even one sweet and cute girl for me.

Even if I wanted to, I have no retort to say for this disappointing situation…Ah, that’s right.

“Come to speak of it, yesterday I was talking to a girl. Geez, such a cute girl too.”

I said that with pride.

I remembered that yesterday I was talking with this girl named Mano in the classroom next to mine. Even though it’s not exactly sweet moments…

“Um that, is that a girl in the game?”

“It’s a real high school student!”

“Liar. It’s impossible for that kind of girl to talk to Souta, right? I’m afraid it’s only in your imagination or your virtual reality.”

“How much of a delusional person I am in your eyes!?”

It seemed that Nao didn’t believe me at all, saying ,” Yeah yeah yeah”.

“So…the girl you’re talking about…what kind of girl is she?”

“Er…She’s…”

“Hmm? Can’t say it? It’s a delusion after all huh?”

Nao snickered.

Although I felt that her attitude was somewhat annoying, I couldn’t make any retort.

It’s because Mano’s clothes were not of those students’.

“Well….her appearance looks like a Devil.”

It sounded very weird, but had I lied it would be even more suspicious, therefore I told her the truth.

“Speaking of a game again…How many times you want me to repeat myself…”

“It’s the truth! She even said that she is a ‘Devil King-like’ herself!”

“Devil King-Like? What does the ‘like’ means?”

“Who knows? I asked her already, but she glossed it over with some sort of flower as answer.”

“Flower? Even for delusions, you can do the setting a little bit better…”

“It’s not a delusion! Even though the girl used a strange’ Mwahahaha’ kind of laughter!”

“What is ’Guahaha’ ? this is absurd. It sounds even more like a weird game you play.”

“No it’s not! She even said something like, ‘who ate my pudding without permission’ !”

“……It doesn’t seem like what a Devil King would say does it? And also, she could have written her name before putting the pudding in the fridge.”

Nao shook her head with a bored and weary look.

This is weird….I was obviously stating the truth, but the more I stated, it got weirder and weirder, why was it?

“Ah…I know, it’s because she was still practicing the lines, so she didn’t really know what kind of lines usually spoken by a Devil King?”

Then again, why did I want to help Mano huh?

“Well did she say some lines resembling the Devil King? Such as ‘ I’ll give you half of this world.’”

“Oh, she did say such a thing.”

“There’s also…’Someday there will be the second and the third devil king appears’ and such speech.”

“Ah, yes. There exists that kind of line. The timing’s a little off though…”

“Also, there was… ‘ Why so stubborn? It’s because I like destruction. Human’s death are beautiful. Now come, perish in my hand!’ kind of thing.”

“Uh….no, she did not say such a thing.”

The sentence was too long, and full of trivial things.

“Oh, is that so….But didn’t that girl said something very evil like a Devil King would?”

“Yeah, that much is true…eh?”

What ? I feel like something’s wrong.

“Mm? Is there something wrong?”

Nao looked at me with a puzzled looks.

“…err that is….Nao, why do you know those Devil King lines…?”

“….huh?”

She suddenly froze.

What wrong was that she is able to precisely say those Devil King lines.

“Nao, do you play a game where these kinds of lines shows up?”

“N, no, er…That….I….!”

Nao started to show anxious expressions.

“Ah, maybe I was just thinking too much because I don’t think Nao as the type who would play games. Especially this kind of game, you won’t like it.”
“Tha, that’s right…..! It’s not possible for me to play games! These kinds of lines the Devil King spoke can be heard in daily lives you know! So of course everyone knows about them! That’s common sense!”

“Eh…? In daily life…? What kind of situation would they be used?”

“It’s..well…When chopping cabbage you say, ‘Huhuhu…I will cut you to pieces!’ or something.”

“You are in such foul mood while cooking!?”

“Ba, basically everyone is excited when they are cooking!”

Just as I was thinking ‘is that so?’ we’ve passed the school gate and arrived at the shoe lockers area.

“Forget it. Just that to sum it up, what I said about me talking to the ‘Devil’ schoolgirl is a fact.”

“Hmmmm. And your relationship with her had gone nowhere good right?”

Nao’s changing to her indoor shoes while scoffing at me.

“No such thing happened! Although when I asked her to take off her clothes, she refused.”

“How can other people have any good relationship with you if things happen like that!? Really… No one would ever talk to Souta…Probably I’m the only one who talks with you.”

Nao chuckled gently.

“Damn….Couldn’t you be not so happy while saying those kinds of things?”

“Wha--! I, I wasn’t happy just now! Stop saying those weird things! It’s because you’re like this no girl would get close to you! Stupid Souta!

For unknown reason Nao suddenly got angry and she turned away to go.

I think I saw her cheek blushing a bit.

“What the heck…”

I was so confused and don’t know what to make of the mood while taking off my shoes.

At that moment—

“…then again Souta, I am really concerned about you just now.”

Nao was obviously still angry, but now she said those confusing words.

“Er? What do you mean?

“Why are you opening and closing others’ shoe lockers?”

“…..huh?”

Opening and closing others’ shoe lockers?

At first I didn’t know what Nao meant.

She found what I was doing at the moment, ready to open other people’s shoe locker.

Huh, what is this? Why am I doing this?

“What’s wrong? Your shoes not inside?”

“….Eh? No that’s…eh?”

And then I opened my own locker and looked inside, my indoor shoes was there.

“What is it, it’s there right? Why are you opening other’s people locker without their permission?”

“….Opening and closing…?”

“Opening and closing other’s people locker shoes as if you’re examining the insides. I don’t know what kind of reason you have for doing it, but it’s not good to randomly opening up other people’s locker shoes like that.”

“…Ah…yea…”

I answered her weakly.

Why did I open those locker shoes, I myself don’t know what the reason was.

It was just a sudden urge to check out everyone’s shoe locker.

What kind of urge is this? Such unknown feeling.

“What’s wrong Souta? Not going to hurry it up to the classroom?”

Nao’s voice reached me who was still standing in front of the shoe lockers.

Oh well, it’s not that big of a problem anyways.

I hurried and caught up to Nao and took the lead, going to the third’s floor classroom.

When I sat down, I remembered something. That’s right, I wanted to take my H-game.

I hurriedly checked my desk drawer, took out my H-game and put it inside my bag.

Ahhhh…

Mission accomplished.

With this now I can go home and play the game with the sweet, pure and cute childhood friend’s character, and maybe some moments of ‘ehehehe’ scenes.

“….Souta , don’t bring that kind of game to the school again.”

Tsk! Sitting beside me was the keen-eyed ‘real’ childhood friend of mine.

“Nao is truly an earnest person. Ok, I got it.”

“I’m in the class administrative { Is this the correct term?} anyways, I must pay attention to behaviors like these .”

“Yea you’re right….Hm? Wait wait. Surely you’re not the class rep? You don’t wear glasses, and your hair is not braided into twin pig tails either!”

“That’s such a weird bias! Being a class rep doesn’t mean you have to look like that! Then again, I’m only the vice-class representative!”

“Ahhh so that’s the case…If it’s a vice-class representative then its fine.”

“…..forget it… I can’t follow your way of thinking…..”

Nao looked utterly confused, but a class rep is a major role in any H-game, only this point I won’t back down on. A vice-class rep is okay though.

“If the class rep is a girl, please tell her to wear glasses and braid her hair into twin pig tails for me.”

“Why must I do such a thing….hey wait, what are you doing!?”

“Huh? Wha, what is it!?”

Nao’s suddenly shouted and made jumped in surprise.

“Why are you searching inside my bag without permission!”

“Huh?”

Although I was thinking, ‘what the hell are you talking about?” then I looked at my hands. I was undoubtedly searching inside Nao’s bag at the moment.

“W, what!? Wh, what am I doing!?”

“That’s what I wanted to ask! You sick pervert!”

Nao took her bag from me at once and send an angry glare at me.

How come I acted like this? Did I unconsciously took her bag?

Like the previous incident when I was checking up the shoe locker, I really had no intention to check Nao’s bag. But first I most solve this misunderstanding.

“Na, Nao! You are mistaken!”

“What did I misunderstand!”

What should I do to clear this misunderstanding!

I myself have no idea how to explain this mysterious incident!

“That….uh… That’s because I thought that there were bombs inside your bag!”

“Bombs!? There’s no such thing inside!”

“I mean it’s I who put it in!”

“WHY!? To think you would do that kind of thing!”

“Oh, sorry I had misspoken! Not bombs!”

“Then what was it!?”

“I put my H-game inside!”

“To think you’re so disgusting!”

“It’s a way to change the inside of my childhood friend!”

“Like this thing can grow a childhood friend for you! Idiot!”

She’s right.
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Chapter 3 can be found :

http://forums.nanodesutranslations.org/ ... 7772#p7772 (INCOMPLETE!)

If any of you interested feel free to comment or anything. When I've completed TLing more and there are enough people interested, I might upgrade this to teaser.
Otherwise...It will stay like this and :?:
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Looks interesting, will definitely read it if you translated it.
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Updated chapter 3.

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There, Chapter 3 completed.
Chapter 4 will be starting soon after chapter 1 - 2 done with the edits.
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Why is this posted on the forums there? I'd like to check this out but it requires an account to see and I'd rather not make an account.
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Chapter 1 and 2 are available on the posts above...
This is still a 'teaser' project. And its nothing sketchy. its just a forum and you can easily read it there.

So.. when there are enough readers an/or responses I will post post them on the wiki normally.
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Okay, I understand that it's a trustworthy site but I try to avoid making new accounts in general. Since you say it'll be added to the wiki I'll just wait until you do so. At that point if you need an editor I might be able to help.
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Apparently, even when I make an account on nanodesu, I still can't read the chapter. It says "You are not authorized to read this forum."
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Sorry, so you have to post 2 random things in any part of the forum before gaining access to it. Just spam some things and you're good to go.
Mr. Lightchaser, it would take quite some time :D.
And btw, Chapter 4 started :D
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Sorry for double posting. So it seems that after some 'discussion' ...
It's decided that I will post it in BT as usual. BUT only after that chapter finished. So if you want to read the work in progress you still have to follow up the link.
I will work on it tomorrow.
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Hi there. This is an interesting work, and I will definitely read it if you keep translating it.
I noticed on the staff listings you don't appear to have anyone editing, so I made a few changes here and there on the first chapter in an attempt to help out a bit. Nothing close to a full and proper edit, but if you would like me to continue, by all means, please say so. I will try my best to do a better job in such a case.
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Sorry for the late reply Demon.
Login issue somehow crippled me. But yeah, I am still translating it albeit at a much slower pace due to other projects.... You can check on the link at chapter 4, 80% of it has been TLed. Its easier to find me there too. Or just wait at the BT page, I will put it on BT when Im done as always.
Yeap I don't mind the edits. You can do as you please :D.
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