ばか！バカ！　馬鹿ー月！

I don't want to be mean, but Ulrick, it's not the first time you asked this kind of questions.

For HSDxD, the translation was posted beforehand on his blog (like Tap for SAO), that's why the whole volume was posted.

It's up to you if you want to restrain yourself, but if you have troubles after asking that, I won't be able to defend you.

Sorry, I didn't go on his blog. WellI will go take a look.

I took a look and there was nothing about Altina.

In case someone wants to rollback the last update of Chapter 1, I did the edit (I can't use my account at university).

Narration is now in past tense, but I'm trying to get rid of the "it was" repetitions.

It's 100 Li (444 km) away from the Imperial capital, and it takes five days to get here by caravan.

Maybe I'm wrong, but I think it should be "lieue" instead of "Li".
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Units_of_m ... ion#Length

It may be possible, as I doubt that this unit was created specially for the series.

JustGuest wrote:

It's 100 Li (444 km) away from the Imperial capital, and it takes five days to get here by caravan.

Maybe I'm wrong, but I think it should be "lieue" instead of "Li".
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Units_of_m ... ion#Length

Misogi wrote:It may be possible, as I doubt that this unit was created specially for the series.

Well the math matches the lieue de 25 au degré anyway. ~4.448km x 100 is 444km plus change after all.

As the lieue's length greatly varies (between 3 and 5km), and since the value is in that range, we can use it, then.

The only reason why I used "Li" was because that's what the author used(Yes, in English alphabets), but it also has a furigana(in katakana) above it where it would read as Lieue.
I think the author used "Li" for lieue in a similar way how kilometers would be written as "Km".
I'll leave all of the decision to Misogi in terms of french words and terms.

Well, I guess that I'll have to put a note there, as it won't fit with a furigana.

I was reading your project and saw I wanted to help with the editing. I saw there were a lot of "it's" in it. Also some words were missing from sentences. If you don't mind me editing your work as a English proof-reader then please tell me

Well, some help would be great. Changing the narration from present to past tense is giving a lot of work, not to mention that there are also other things to correct.

I haven't forgotten to finish my PR, it may be done on December.

Can I take that as a yes from you to help out?

Well, go ahead, I'll finish my work sometime in the month.

Misogi wrote:Well, some help would be great. Changing the narration from present to past tense is giving a lot of work, not to mention that there are also other things to correct.

I haven't forgotten to finish my PR, it may be done on December.

Why are you changing this to past tense? I thought Code-Zero want to TL this in present tense.

Well, I discussed that with him, and a past narration would be better, as it is more usual and natural. Especially for an external narrator and for the descriptions.

However, for Regis' thoughts, they're considered as dialogues for the tenses' choices.

Quoting a message received on October.

Code-Zero wrote:Sorry for the late reply.
I've just shifted to my new home and just got my internet connection just now.
Yeah, changing to past tense would be great.
I'll also try to find some time to continue translating this. Luckily my Uni ends at mid November.