Kenkoku no Jungfrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

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Kenkoku no Jungfrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby TheCatWalk » Fri Sep 13, 2013 3:01 am

Okay, some of you might know my circumstances so i wont bother explaining. But in any case, i really think that this series deserves some attention here. So i am starting a project and believe it or not, i will try to tl this while i am in the slammer and update it monthly or weekly or yearly 8)

Status: Publishing
Published: Oct 20, 2012 to -----
Genres: Comedy, Ecchi, Fantasy, Magic, Romance, School, Harem
Authors: Teshima, Fuminori
Illustrator: Yasaka, Minato


the synopsis is Roughly like this. dont mind my lacking english since it isnt relly my 1st language and i tl'ed this with my 70-75% complete japanese...so everything here is free for editting..
It was the times of antiquity. Many kings, Many countries, and Many Faiths were mixed together, and then they conflicted, an age where nothing was controlled.
ーand finally, an existence know as a demon revealed itself in this world.
Then the many kings went to battle. Even possessing any kind of sword, or casting any kind of magic, or using any kind of knowledge, could not harm the body of the demon.
ーIt was at that time of chaos, a single sage appeared and said this,
“There exists a sword that can kill the demon. I want a person who has excellent techniques. Isn’t there anyone who would come with me?”
There were 12 people.
The 12 kings sent one of the most excellent knights from each of their kingdoms.
The 12 knight and the single Sage confronted the demon, and then splendidly defeated it.
After that, making the sage their king, the 12 kingdoms became one. The 12 knights were referred as The Knights of the Round Table and became the model of all knights. ー
And so, time has reached the present. ー


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Spoiler! :
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And here is the prologue...once more, my english is REALLY lacking so dont try to laugh at this inmate who is trying to pass his time.I left the parts i was confused about bold so can someone try to fix them?
Spoiler! :
Prologue
Kenkoku no Jungfrau

On the dark night road, a lone boy, Heath walked while looking up at the sky.
The moon was out. Cloudless, while drawing a true circle, it was a harvest moon without any complaints. In the moonlight which seemed to be gnawing, even the appearance of the surrounding stars darkened as if they were concealing themselves. Thanks to that, it was easy to walk even on a road devastated by gravels. In this area, there were only a few private houses.
Even though it was the king’s capital, outside the outer wall, there was scenery no different from a rural area. If one would turn to the opposite side, a vast forest could be seen spreading along the road. The main road spread out as if just to separat the forest and the residential area.
“I’m totally late…..”
The time has already passed midnight. It wasn’t the proper time for a boy who was still in his teens to be roaming around the main road. However, it was reasonable if one would consider the boys’ standpoint.
There was a big wrapping held in Heath’s arm. Though the contents were as cheap as sashimi with skin still attached, it was still armour. A long spear was held on the other arm. Even though it appeared that way, this was still following one’s duties as a soldier.
“I probably shouldn’t have undertaken tomorrow’s duties.”
Heath put himself to work even though he was originally off duty this morning. If he didn’t feel that the previous day seemed very slow, he wouldn’t have taken the job……[[本来ならば午前中は非番だったのだが、ヒースはそこに仕事を入れてしまった。前日がこうも遅くなるとわかっていれば引き受けなかったのだが……]]
Leaking a small sigh, Heath walked on alone.
Three months had passed since that event occurred….
Three months before; at the place of a certain ceremony, a knight, on top of that a knight leader was killed and the riot occurred.
Though Heath was not present there, since the senior pupil’s and acquaintances were involved, it wasn’t someone else’s problem. [[ ヒースはその場にはいなかったが、兄弟子や知人が何人も巻き込まれており、他人事ではない]]
It was caused in the king’s presence and the incident hence still caused unrest amongst the citizen even now.
Presume to such confusion, the number of dangerous events occurring had increased.
Even today, there seemed to be some kind of uproar on the main street. The substitute did not show up even after the shift ended, and it was not possible to part from the [[ possession intestines ]] until he came.
--- I wonder if Mana went to sleep already…. .
Thinking of his sister who remained at home, he paced up his speed.
“What... was that………..?”
While looking up at the moon aimlessly, Heath saw a strange shadow pass by.
It possessed wings like a bat and a long tail like that of a snake. If it was a bird that would fly in the middle of the night, then it should have been like an Owl but the figure of the shadow seemed to vary a bit from a bird.
One’s eyesight usually darkens in the moonlight, the sense of distance also was not grasped but Heath was able to perceive a rough figure of the shadow.
---- Saika…!!
Saika is the general term used for monsters which attack humans. Amongst them, it is said that there are ones with wings too. Not a bird, but being able to flutter about in the sky. If one would think of such a thing than the only thing that comes to mind would be a Saika.
---I have to notify the Knight’s Order---
If you see something that looks like a Saika then notify a Knight –-- this was a common sense that even children knew of.
Luckily, it seemed that the shadow didn’t notice Heath. He started to descend to the forest immediately like that.
If it was from there, then rather than the Knights of the Royal palace, the barracks where Heath worked at was nearer. While retracing back his footsteps, Heath suddenly noticed.
“A person……..?”
Intertwined with the tail of the flying shadow, anther silver coloured profile could be seen. And then, there were also limbs that expanded loosely from there.
---Was he captured……?
Though the retreating Heath held on to the armour, the only thing that could become a weapon was the spear that he shouldered.
To make matters worse, if the one who was caught on its tail was a person, then the current shadow was somewhat like a small building.
He should go call for help immediately, and bring as many powerful knights and soldiers as possible.
---That’s no good; I’ll lose sight of it!
A moment of hesitation, nevertheless, he still wavered for an instant.

Heath let go of the wrapped armour and started dashing while grasping only a spear, towards the forest where the shadow disappeared.
四半刻 passed after he has stepped into the forest, and he let out a light groan.
--- I can’t see anything….
The moonlight was being blocked by the branches of the surrounding trees. Even the ground could not be clearly seen. He walked carefully and advanced so as not to stumble on the root of a tree, but he already lost sight of the area where the shadow descended.
--- Calm down. That thing should have been large.
The surrounding trees had become overcrowded too. If that giant creature which was as big as a small building moved, it was likely to break some branches or step on some dry grass. It was impossible for it to not make any sound.
After clearing his ears and checking out the surroundings, he heard a large sound of water splashing reverberating from the distance.
--- Water……That’s it, a lake!
There should be a lake deeper inside the forest. It is said that a fairy dwells in the lake connected to the knight of the round table which exists in the folklores.
He fastened his pace and advanced towards the direction which the sound came from. But while approaching nearer, an unpleasant sweat of perspiration ran along his forehead. His breathing also grew heavier and he couldn’t help but close his mouth. His heartbeat seemed like an alarm bell that could be heard in the surroundings.
--- The monster from before, it’s just beyond here….
What could he do now, after he threw away his armour. The possibility of the person who was capture being alive at the point of being captured might be very low. It could be that all he was doing was increasing the number of monster feed by one.
But still, Heath did not retreat.
--- If it was master, he would never step back at a time like this.
While tightly gripping his spear, he started building up his courage.
Heath has a mentor who taught him how to handle a spear. Precisely because that technique was accepted, the 16 year old him was also accepted as a soldier. His mentor was an eccentric character, but he was not man who would desert a dying human without trying to the best of his powers to save him.
And exactly because he thought of that master as a protagonist from an epic tale, he took up apprenticeship and desperately piled up his trainings.
And advancing like that, the forest suddenly cleared up.
--- A lake.
While feeling relieved after seeing light in the darkness, he also stiffened his body at the same time. The real danger starts from there.
Surveying the surroundings while killing his breathing ---
*Splash* Silver coloured water droplets danced in mid-air.
There was a lone girl there.
In the drops of moonlight and water, an argent hair shakes the iris like a miracle and it reels it in.
The reason that the droplets looked silver was because of her hair, that’s what he indistinctly thought.
When she shakes off the drops from the hair; thin, beautiful fingers could be seen, which she submerges on the lakes surface. After drawing up water in the palm of both hands to her tender lips, the overflowing water went along from her chins to her neck.
The girl who enriched her throat leaked a sigh that seemed to be satisfactory and watched the surface of the lake. There might’ve been some water striders. A ripple appeared and then disappeared, shaking the full moon’s reflection on the lake’s surface.
The girl was leaning on a small islet which was trusting out from the lake.
And the pupils of the girl who was watching the lake were deep crimson in colour. Did she wash her face? Droplets of water were glittering on the long eyelashes covering her eyes.
---A fairy……….?
The girl was beautiful enough for him to forget about what he came here to do.
Her clothes boldly exposed her shoulders. But rather than saying it looked mysterious, it would be more proper to say that it looked fairytale-like. On top of her laps, a richly coloured hat was placed.
While feeling fascinated *snap* Heath accidentally stepped on a branch under his feet.
“Who’s there!”
Even though it was a sharp, challenging voice; it had a sound echo like a falling bell.
“Ah, err, I am, well....?”
While answering in a confused tone, the girl’s presence in front of him was distancing fast.
“e-eh…….?”
He suddenly noticed that his body was floating in mid-air. But then his ascending stopped with a jerk.
There seemed to be a big shadow extending on the surface of the water. And it seems like the thing which was struggling and wriggling at the end of the apex was his own shadow. Heath realized that he was lifted up by something gigantic.
ーI shouldn’t turn around I shouldn’t turn around I shouldn’t turn around!
Even though he understood that, Heath turned his head around while shivering.
A bright red pupil similar to the girl’s shook there.
The only precise difference would be that, those eyes were as big as the girl’s whole head. And the head those eyes were installed in were furthermore, bigger. A helmet such as a man's heads would be crunched instantly in that mouth, where gigantic fangs were closely packed.
This wasn’t as Saika. It was a far more fearsome being….!
His face became pale/bloodless.
The thing that stood there was a real Dragon.
It had scales of a beautiful black colour, as if dissolving into the darkness of the night.
The difference between a Saika and a Dragon was extremely simple.
Only that, their difference in power was on a hopeless level.
A Saika could be slashed with an edged blade and even magic was effective against it. A person with enough strength could even fight it one on one.
In case of a Dragon though, nothing will reach it without exception. Even the scales of a very young Dragon cannot be wounded with a sword forged from iron, and magic would become powerless and disappear before reaching it. There is only one sole thing that will reach, a sword that carries magic. And that might only range in the magic’s used by the < Knights of the Round Table > which were called one of the secrets of magic. [[それこそ魔術の奥義と言われる<円卓の騎士>に連なる魔術くらいのものだろう]] It was an existence which could only be possible to confront at last, by a person who mastered both the sword and the magic thoroughly.
Heath finally remembered that he had entered the forest when he was chasing after a monster.
While shaking, Heath put his gaze back on the girl; she, rather than being afraid; was glaring and Heath with her arm crossed as if she was pouting.
The Silver girl and a Black Dragonーand then, that was a forest where Fairies were said to live. Heath started to think that he lost himself in an illusion of a scene from a play.
The Dragon, as if it were a pet presenting the prey to its master, lifted Heath up in front of the girl. With a splash, a sheet of water stood. Heath felt as if the height changed.
The girl then questioned him with a voice filled with vigilance.
“Who are you? What are you doing here?”
Heath, with a stiff face shouted
“I came to save you.”
Being held in the jaws of a dragon, with his legs shaking to and fro in mid-air, and tears seemingly to overflow at any time were collected in his eyes. His voice was also turning inside out too. The only thing worth praising was that, even till the last moment he did not release the spear from his hands.
No matter how you see it, the line he should be uttering was not “I came to save you” but rather, “Please save me”.
Despite all of that, to the Heath who bravely stated such a thing, the girl opened her mouth with a vacant expression. The previous sharp facial expression looked surprised enough to be called innocent. [[ 険のとれたその表情は、驚くほどあどけなく見えた]]
After that, as if she were desperately enduring her urges to laugh out, her mouth kept trembling all over. And yet, after smoothing over her voice in that kind of state, she asked another question.
“Save me? From what?”
Heath, while he was still shaking straightened his back.
“Probably……….from him.”
Dragon, monster, Saika; whichever representation he used, it might’ve offended the dragon or the girl. Heath hesitantly answered thinking of that while still trembling .
The girl squatted down and remained in that position while putting her face on both palms. The dragon also lowered Heath to a position in which he can touch the lake surface according to that.
The girl faced towards Heath with deep scarlet upturned eyes, and whispered with a teasing tone as if pleading for some sweets.
“I want to be saved~ How are you going to save me?”
“We-well, how about, Using the dragon blind spot I’ll grab your hand and escape….like that?”
With an answer like that, the girl finally magnificently burst into laughter and started rolling on top of the small islet.
Well, it really couldn’t be helped, could it? While saying about finding the dragons blank spot but splendidly getting captured, it wasn’t a matter of rescuing someone or not, since the Dragon was completely the girl’s companion. Even Heath himself couldn’t help but laugh.
After laughing for a while, the girl let out a long breath as if she enjoyed herself fully and stood up before long.
“ahaha, that was funny. You’re not too bad, are you? Actually making me laugh this much.”
“You’re welcome…………”
The girl who was wiping her tears seemed to have laughed enough to make more tears fall while wiping. She said in a tone as if she was troubled.
“About rescuing me, I see……….When I was riding the Dragon <TeiFue>, I was seen by you. I really made a blunder”
ーーWhat a failureー
By Teifue, she probably meant the Dragon.
Learning that she was troubled after being seen, Heath felt a cold chill on his back.
“Umm, Dragon, Will I die?”
He didn’t understand the relationship between the dragon and the girl but, in this situation, he wasn’t able to think of any other fate that could befall him.
As if considering what to do with the trembling Heath, the Girl brought her index finger up to her lips.
“Hmm, what should I do……It doesn’t look like you have any evil intentions……rather, for making me laugh this much, i can’t do without giving you some kind of reward, can I?”
ーReward……..?
In this situation, without even thinking why the girl said such a thing, Heath inclined his neck.
The girl was fixedly inquiring about Heath’s state, but before long she flashed a gentle smile.
“I think it should be okay to overlook you.”
The lamp of hope returned to Heath’s pupils after the potentiality of living that had been given to him.
“But, you will have to follow what I am about to tell you.”
“I’ll followーI’ll listen to anything!”
“You didn’t meet me here, and you didn’t see any flying Dragons either.”
“Yes! I didn’t see nor hear any Dragons.”
“That’s strange. Then doesn’t that mean that that there wasn’t any promise to listen to/obey me?”
“E-eh? Well, That’s...erm….”
When Heath kept going in circles in front of her eyes, the girl again started laughing while embracing her stomach.
“Ahaha, you really are very amusing.”
After saying that, the girl looked up at the Dragon and had it jerk its jaws.
“It’s alright now.”
After the girl muttered that, the Dragon suddenly released Heath.
With a loud splash, Heath fell down in the water while splashing up a grand spray of water. The depth of the water wasn’t much, so he hit his face with the bottom of the lake. Bringing his head up after struggling for some time, the Dragon's figure had disappeared before he was even aware of it.
On the other hand, the girl was looking down at Heath with the same crimson eyes as the Dragon. The girl quietly placed her foot on the water while smiling.
“Eh~?”
After seeing those pure white legs treading on top of the water’s surface rather than sinking, Heath leaked out an idiotic voice.
When she shook her argent hair, the girl interrupted greatly.
”My name is Estelle Norn Schutern. A Clown.”
“A Clown……..?”
Now that he thought about it, certainly the girl’s mysterious clothing didn’t look anything but that of a Clown’s.
“To be able to make a Clown laugh, I’ll at least spare your life~”
And then, pointing at Heath with a snap
“But, if you tell someone about me, next time I really will eat you okay?”

After giving a bright nod, Heath nervously said in an inquiring voice.
“Err, one thing, is it okay for me to ask about one thing?”
“What is it?”
“That Dragon just now, what in the world was that? Was it magic? Surely it wasn’t a real Dragon,right?”
The girl’s pupils were not of a light purple colour. Thus she surely couldn’t be one of the <Knights of the Round Table>.
To the Heath who revealed a voice filled with bewilderment, the narrowed her scarlet coloured eyes.
“Clowns antics you see, that was just a simple magic trick.”
Apparently, even the miracle of her standing on top of water was about to be solved off as a simple magic trick. The girl seems to be happily fluttering the palms of her hands.
“See you then, Bye Bye”
After leaving those last words, her body began to disappear as if dissolving into the night wind.
“Ah, Wait!”
By the time Heath shouted that, the girls figure was no-where to be seen.
ーShe disappeared……?
The black Dragon, and the Silver haired girl too disappeared as if they weren’t there from the beginning. Even saying that he saw a strange dream would have a lot of persuasive power.
Only the silver moon alone did not change. It seemed to be floating in the sky and nodding as if saying that it was not a dream.
For a while, after staring off blankly in a daze, and shivering in the cold, Heath crawled up from the lake to ashore.
That was in fact, Heath and her’s, Estelle’s first meeting.


PS --> if someone wants to tl this, can you start it from volume 2?since i'll be doing 1 and god knows how long that will take...it might or rather,will take months...or i might quit cause my skills werent near hing enough nyaa~ and can someone finish the making the teaser page and up the illustrations? like give it some more info.and editors are free to sign up since i wont actually be here all the time to supervise it. later than
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Last edited by Rohan123 on Tue Sep 17, 2013 10:13 am, edited 2 times in total.
Reason: Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau"
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby TheCatWalk » Fri Sep 13, 2013 3:40 am

and a bit of ch one
Spoiler! :
Chapter One  The Star Falls, The Clown Laughs.
“ーIt is like so in the legends. ー”
Under that dazzling sunlight, and on the spacious stage, a dignified singing voice resounded.
And then, following the song, a many music strings started to play in a refreshing tone. They were Harps.
“ーIt was the times of antiquity. Many kings, Many countries, and Many Faiths were mixed together, and then they conflicted, an age where nothing was controlled ーand finally, an existence know as a demon revealed itself in this world ー”
That place was an arena which had been opened in a grand scale.
In the central area, there was a stone stage that had been cut in a square shape. And in its surroundings, a maintained area was planted. The low wall had been wonderfully decorated with candlesticks, and a small flag was stabbed below that. Even from a distant view it could be realised from their varied designs that, there were 12 kinds of flags in total.
Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall, a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen, but everyone had been attentively listening without opening their mouths.
“ーThen the many kings went to battleーTherefore, a certain king lost his territory and nation to the demon. For a certain king, it was to acquire the territory trampled by the demon. Again, for a certain king it was just to gain more prestige with bravery and valour. ー”
To be able to make one’s voice echo here, an extraordinary speaking volume and technique should be necessary. However, the girl’s singing voice could not pile up that impossible amount of vibration.
The one singing while playing the harp was a girl with light purple eyes.
There was a thin ring fixed on the finger that was playing the bowstrings. There was also a bracelet of the same design on her arm. Anyone who was familiar with magic should be able to tell that the design curved there represented an <Omen>, which had properties of power.
“ーAnd thus, the many kingdoms began to decrease. Even possessing any kind of sword, or casting any kind of magic, or using any kind of knowledge, could not harm the body of the demon ーThe legend begins from hereー”
Her raven hair was tied in a bundled by the back of her head. It extended to her waist, forming a long ponytail. Her closed eyes looked long and narrow, and her flower bud like lips was soaked in a beautiful pink colour.
The cloths that she wore were not a dress but a uniform that a schoolgirl usually wears. Compared to a dress, it had fewer decorations but her long and slender legs which were covers by tights helped her undulated rich body figure. As a woman, her glamour was definitely not at a disadvantage.
Though it was a fine weather, for her to be able to wear such lightweight clothing in a season where the snow had yet to melt, was all thanks to the magic flames that warmed that place up.
“ーFrom a number of countries which could not possibly counted, soon only 12 remained. There was a king who advanced to defeat the demon too. There was a kind who though his own power was more than enough to defeat it too. There was a king who from the fear of the demon concealed himself in his territory too. It was at that time, a single sage was said to cut down one of the demon’s arms. ー”
The girl was singing about a heroic tale from the time of antiquity. It wasn’t old enough to be called a myth, but it wasn’t from a near enough past to leave behind remnants in literature. But, it is a very familiar tale for the people who live there. It was a splendid singing voice; none of spectators opened their mouths and listened attentively to the song. ” ーThere is a sword that could kill the demon. I want a person who has excellent techniques. Isn’t there anyone who would come with me? ーThere were 12 people. The 12 kings sent one of the most excellent knights from each of their kingdoms. ー”
Other than the audience seats, on the other side of the outer wall, the spire of a watchtower ascended.
The number of spires surrounding the arena, and the decorative flags hanging on the outer wall, were of 12 of each of them in total. To this country, the number 12 represented holiness/dignity.
“ーThe 12 knight and the single Sage confronted the demon, and then splendidly defeated it. ーAnd like that, making the sage their king, the 12 kingdoms became one. The 12 knights were referred as The Knights of the Round Table and became the model of all knights. ーAnd so, time has reached the present. ー”
After finishing singing for a while; the girl let out a breath feeling relieved.
While a grand applause was being sent, the girl saw a single face move back. It was when she was leaving the stage. Raising her face, the girl fixed her sight on that spot.
ーーA Clown…..?
Following the knights, the soldiers were forming a line; it was the front row seats of the auditorium. On the next row of seats, there were mercenaries with robust physiques but there was a girl with a Clowns clothing there.
She had long silver coloured hair and vivid crimson pupils. With a strikingly good body figure, she should’ve attracted a lot of attention.
The general visitors were seated on a further row. She was curious about how the girl slipped in with the soldiers but she couldn’t stand still there for too long. She quietly got down from the stage.
On both sides of the stage, several knights were standing in a row. Amongst them, after she joined the East side, she heard a sociable voice calling out next to her.
“Did you see something that caught your interest, Lutile[ルチル]?”
The girl, Lutile’s name was called by Youth who had a fearless physique and face. He had long blonde hair tied behind his back, and was wearing a frock coat. It was a little bit exaggerated thing to wear at the place of a ceremony.
After being asked, the girl searched for clown's appearance again but was not able to find it.
“ーThe time has reached the presentー was it? That was quite a good show you know.”
The last phrase was a part the girl added specifically for this ceremony. It wasn’t in the original song.
“We are still in the middle of the ceremony, Gillette Oni-sama.”
Even though she had deliberately lowered her voice, she accidentally called him by his old nickname. When she realised this, her face became red. At this the youth made a nostalgic gentle face and shrugged his shoulders.
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Mytsy » Fri Sep 13, 2013 3:45 am

If you are that much high-strung about this why not just continue translating even more?
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Tenzai » Fri Sep 13, 2013 6:06 am

from what i have read it definetly seems interesting :) i might do some minor edits for spelling corrections if you dont mind, just want to ask if you want me to report what changes i do then or is there no need? anyways thanks for translating :D
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Rohan123 » Fri Sep 13, 2013 7:29 am

The illustrations and the synopsis seem nice, will read it soon. :D
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Lazyanon » Sat Sep 14, 2013 1:18 pm

Seems interesting, waiting for more to read
I have been plagued with eternal boredom and never ending fatigue.
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby TheCatWalk » Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:43 am

Ok, Michael and Bryans gonna edit so any questions, ask sirgoodguy and he'll anwser..
btw, i calculated and it might take 20 days for be to do ch1 (88 pages) nyaa :D
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby sirgoodguy » Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:13 am

Tenzai wrote:from what i have read it definetly seems interesting :) i might do some minor edits for spelling corrections if you don't mind, just want to ask if you want me to report what changes i do then or is there no need? anyways thanks for translating :D


Its ok we can see your edits.
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TheCatWalk wrote:Ok, Michael and Bryans gonna edit so any questions, ask sirgoodguy and he'll anwser..
btw, i calculated and it might take 20 days for be to do ch1 (88 pages) nyaa :D


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So yea like the Cat said i'm the one to ask if you have any questions. TheCatwalk is well in a place with limited internet access so he will not be here much. Also the cat's current translation speed is about 3 pages a day because of skill level and also school. So yea just ask anything you want i'm here to answer what i can.
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Misogi » Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:55 am

@sirgoodguy : Triple post merged.

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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby sirgoodguy » Sun Sep 15, 2013 5:26 am

Misogi wrote:@sirgoodguy : Triple post merged.

There are two methods to avoid useless multi-posts :
- Editing your last message.
- Copy-pasting your last message, deleting it, then posting the updated message that you deleted.


Why thank you :P I've had this account for ever but never posted anything at all.
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Tenzai » Sun Sep 15, 2013 7:42 am

SirGoodGuy is there a certain style of english i should be aware of when editing? like british or american, or are we talking about some kind of old style?
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby sirgoodguy » Sun Sep 15, 2013 9:45 pm

Tenzai wrote:SirGoodGuy is there a certain style of english i should be aware of when editing? like british or american, or are we talking about some kind of old style?


It british english that we use on B-T. I will put this on the Novel's mainpage
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Kenkoku no Jungfrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Rohan123 » Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:23 pm

This is the feedback thread for Kenkoku no Jungfrau.

Please vote on the poll above, and also tell us what you think! (You can change your vote if you change your mind about the series later!)
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby Rohan123 » Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:24 pm

Created a teaser feedback topic for this project and updated the "feedback thread" link on the project page to reflect this.

You now go here.
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Re: Kenkoku no JungFrau (剣刻の銀乙女)

Postby sirgoodguy » Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:51 pm

TheCatWalk wrote:Ok, Michael gonna edit so any questions, ask sirgoodguy and he'll anwser..
btw, i calculated and it might take 20 days for be to do ch1 (88 pages) nyaa :D


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