It wasn’t sure if they had the thing called ‘Self-respect’, much less talking about a sense of disgrace. from chapter 1 part 3. is this from the monsters Pov or from Heath? im guessing its Heath but have to make sure. cuz it gets quite confusing.
It was when she had misplaced Heath and was running away from soldiers with some pompous appearances. part 4 ???
With strength without any room for dissatisfaction, even if it wasn’t Heath, they were figures filled with aspiration for anyone. part 6. "They were figures filled with aspiration" are we talking about the knights order?
The gatekeeper showed a shady expression. How did he perceive such a Heath? from part 6. any other suggestions for the sentence? im utterly lost at "How did he perceive such a Heath?" o,o
mostly those that im wondering about, corrected a few spelling erors and fixed sentences but anyways job well done
cant wait to read more, definetly seems like a good novel
how many volumes does Kenkoku have atm?
Oh yeah Catwalk ill enlist for Editor so that when i edit the serie it wont get revoked or anything ^^ just give me a green light or something >.<