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Element Warriors

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Yeah, the #1000 spammer here in Baka-Tsuki is making a novel series.
I am currently low in my memory bank (which is 10 MB) in my head so I don't think I could make this one up.

The Summary Overview:
NOTE: Do not open if you are not ready for the real thing
Spoiler! :
The Element Warriors is a story that revolves around an elemental being "Wind Freeze" and his team to save his world from a far sinister they called "Heylel" or the "Dark Lord". The world was inhabited by people with looks of human beings but they got some more in their soul. It was called the elemental essence which allows the inhabitants to control the power of element that affiliated with their essence. It is the story of sacrifice, friendship, love, family, and the battle between the good and the evil.
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The story will be split in 7 planned series... Expect to have A LOT OF CROSSOVERS in #7 series
The Elements:
Spoiler! :
Venti = The Wind
Ignis = The Fire
Aqua = The Water
Terra = The Earth
Two Elements (Won't say it for too much spoiling)
The Characters:
Protagonist and Deuteragonist Characters
Spoiler! :
Wind Freeze = Real Name "Venti Congelo", one of the protagonist of the novel. He controls the power of Venti
Fiery Fire = Real Name "Igneus Ignis", one of the protagonist of the novel, She controls the power of Ignis
Flowed Water = Real Name "Flux Aqua", one of the protagonist of the novel, She controls the power of Aqua
Earth Shock = Real Name "Terra Perculsus", one of the protagonist of the novel, He controls the power of Terra
Antagonist Characters:
Spoiler! :
The Dark Lord = Real Name "Heylel" the main antagonist of the novel
The Settings:
Spoiler! :
The Elemental World
The Wind Tribe
The Fire Tribe
The Water Tribe
The Earth Triber
The Crucible of the World
Forest of Darkness
Castle of Heylel
Paradise
The Dimensions:
(For Ultimate No Spoil do not open the next spoiler tab.)
Spoiler! :
Clockwork Dimension
PPGZ Dimension = PPGZ Crossover
Mage Dimension = Zero no Tsukaima Crossover
Ninja Dimension = Naruto Crossover
Reality Dimension = The main dimension where everything is ordinary
Progress:
Book 1: The Tyrannizing of Darkness = 60% Book 2: The Curse of the Ice Gryphon = 50%
Book 3: The New Generation = 50%
Book 4: The New World = 50%
Book 5: The Awakening = 50%
Book 6: The Requiem of Darkness = 50%
Book 7: The Clash of Worlds = 50%

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I want to read the prologue... :D
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Seems like a cliche. But who knows. Cliches are usually the best works... I guess. :)

Taking a guess here. I think Light and darkness... Or something similar.
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oninn wrote:I want to read the prologue... :D
I was having a bad start on the prologue....

Cliche??? What is that?
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cboy123 wrote:
oninn wrote:I want to read the prologue... :D
I was having a bad start on the prologue....

Cliche??? What is that?
Cliche means a worn out remark. Instead of remark, I used it in terms of plot. (Used this way a lot by this generation)
So basically I'm saying that your using a plot which has been used a lot. There's nothing wrong with this, even I have a hard time thinking of something non cliche.
Mainstream seems to be the traditional way of doing it. Don't feel unmotivated by what I said.

Also on the Prologue, Go ahead and post it. We will help you out, tell you ideas and what not.
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If you ask me, it seems really similar to "Shinkyoku Sōkai Polyphonica" for a start. Maybe cross it with Avatar or something?

At the same time, I would think it is insanely hard to pull off, not to mention time consuming. Personally, I would say "Good luck" because its almost impossible to do really well unless you work as a writer for this as a profession.
cboy123 wrote:
oninn wrote:I want to read the prologue... :D
I was having a bad start on the prologue....

Cliche??? What is that?
Cliche means its a common plot/idea that almost everyone does. Nothing special about it.
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I can't think of things that would make this unique... But men, I'm sure the contents are very similar to the others manga's anime's.
It's been 10 years since this story was in my head... I'm sure most of them are in those shows, novels, manga, etc.
Like the Kyuubi in Naruto. There was some part that it will be the same but I have thought of it in my childhood years before I started reading mangas novels. Maybe its a coincidence but still even though my ideas have been wash away, I will continue this so that I could achieve a peace of mind.

Edit: And oh, thanks for the shows, I improved most of the contents.
But, really... This Series would be the main series to most of my fantasy novels.
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