Volume 2 Chapter 9

Dan · Post by **Dan** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:40 pm

The sub version I have is translated as "earthen fist". "Crumbling dirt" sounds good, what do the translators say though?

Christof · Post by **Christof** » Wed Jun 06, 2007 6:08 am

Im okay with crumbing dirt. It sounds better then "Dirt Crumb" anytime.

Dan · Post by **Dan** » Wed Jun 06, 2007 4:19 pm

Did someone undo my edits? I thought I missed a discrepancy in the past/present tense near the beginning, then I saw that everything I had changed was back to the old version.

onizuka-gto · Post by **onizuka-gto** » Wed Jun 06, 2007 6:56 pm

Did you login when you did your edits?

Dan · Post by **Dan** » Wed Jun 06, 2007 7:01 pm

Christof and I found the problem.

Christof · Post by **Christof** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:50 am

Phew! Finally managed to finish chapter 8! Lol. It's Two in the morning now. Time to get some sleep. I need to return to camp tommrrow and will not be around till monday, although I should be able to use the camp's computer... Anyways, enjoy!

Post by **HolyCow** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 11:09 am

Thanks a lot mate!

Dan · Post by **Dan** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:37 pm

Damn that was fast!

Good job, Christof!

onizuka-gto · Post by **onizuka-gto** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 4:41 pm

cheers Christof,

nothing like waking up to ZNT.

Christof => Conscripted Foot-slogging Soldier by Day

Speed translator for obscure Japanese literature, that no one out side of Japan, probably never heard of.

me <3 1337 hobbies

Beware the talking cat · Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:14 pm

Christof! YAY!

Christof · Post by **Christof** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:40 pm

I think I will most probably start book 2 chapter one next week. Could someone send the raws to me? Thanks in advance!

Dan · Post by **Dan** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 6:37 pm

I came across this, I have no clue what to think. What do you mean by "admonishes" in this passage?

Spoiler! :

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 7:43 pm

Dan wrote:I came across this, I have no clue what to think. What do you mean by "admonishes" in this passage?

Spoiler! :
Saito held his breath. Louise was dressed in a white evening gown with her long, strawberry blonde hair tied up into a pony tail. Her hands were covered by pure white gloves which admonishes her grandeur. Her petite face admonished by her low cut evening gown made her sparkle like a gem.

It would be to "amplify" or "pronounce", though the definition of the word says otherwise.

ad·mon·ish (d-mnsh)
tr.v. ad·mon·ished, ad·mon·ish·ing, ad·mon·ish·es
1. To reprove gently but earnestly.
2. To counsel (another) against something to be avoided; caution.
3. To remind of something forgotten or disregarded, as an obligation or a responsibility.

re·prove (r-prv)
tr.v. re·proved, re·prov·ing, re·proves
1. To voice or convey disapproval of; rebuke. See Synonyms at admonish.
2. To find fault with.

*Edit*

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Christof · Post by **Christof** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:21 pm

Hmm. Sorry my bad. The word I wanted to use was adorn

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:19 pm

That sounds alot better.