Nightly translation project, volume 7, epliogue (complete)

[ArchmageXin]

Volume 7, Epilogue

The left hand of God is Gandlifer, the ferocious shield of the lord. Left hand wields the blade, right hand wield the lance (Note: The Chinese word for Lance and firearms are the same, I leave it to your interpretations). Protect me with endless vigilance.

The right hand of God is [???], Is the kind hearted [something] of lord. He dominated all beasts of life, take never endless move me from the heaven to the heart of sea. (very odd sentence.)

The mind of the god is [????], Is the book that carry the crystallization of thought. It carry all knowledge, provide me with endless knowledge. (Questionable)

And there was one more person, but remembering its name gave me trouble…

Taking the four disciples, I came to this land…

From outside came the songs of children, along with the dawning lights, a little girl woke up. She slowly and somewhat lazily got up. Her eye-dazzling hair, like a wave of golden sea, like a cloak unraveling through her body. Her hair is so beautiful it would make people gasp, However, if one look closely, her hair would be ½ as thin as that of normal people. So when such beautiful hair moves, one could almost hear the sound of air itself stroking it (translation questionable), and the light from her hair can be absolutely blinding.

Even if you call her hair ordinary, the rest of her body is also very slim.

[Sentence deliberately untranslated as it describes her most prominent assets with extreme detail. Since I translated it in school, I rather not have anyone over hearing me thinking I am translating porn or something] the young girl wore only a single part of pajamas, and lightly yawned as she woke up.

From the way her skin shinned, the girl’s age is about 15 or 16, but her (this translation go off the charts with praise), preventing anyone to accurately guess her age.

The girl reached out and opened her window, and a group of children ran toward her.

“Tiffany onee-chan!”

“Tiffany nee-chan!”

A group of children following one another ran toward the window, screaming loudly to this young lady named Tiffany.

It appears this fey-like beauty is these children’s idol.

“Ai Ya! (This is an exclamation used by many asian society), What happened? shamisen, Tom, [untranslated name], Eva, Sarah (I think…), everyone came together. I listened to your songs and I woke up, you been singing the same song again, don’t you know how to sing a different song?”

“Don’t know…!”

“In that case Tiffany-onee chan teach us to sing.”

Tiffany smiled, she consider these children to be her little brother and sisters.

She suddenly realized one of the younger children has a look as she wanted to say something.

“Eva what happened? Do you have something to say?”

The young girl called Eva shook uncontrollably.

“That…”

“Don’t be afraid, tell me.”

“In the forest…In the forest, I went to pick strawberries and I found…”

“What happened in the forest?”

“Eva what happened? If there is something you should told all of us!”

“Why didn’t you tell us?”

“Because, I am very scared…the body was covered in blood…woo..woo (Sounds of cryings)” Eva had a look of a girl on the verge of tears.

“Everyone stop picking on Eva. Eva, what happened? Tell big sister?”

“…there, there is someone, collapsed there.”

Tiffany’s face instantly became clouded.

“Another one came?”

The children begin to talk among themselves.

“Is it is probably that, is war, war!”

“Yea!”
The children nodded together.

“Because this morning, (something untranslated)’s army walked across those streets.”

Tiffany threw an overcoat over her pajamas, and leaped out the window.

“Eva, where is it?”

”…there”

The young girl flew through the already familiar forest as if it was her backyard, with the children following behind.

They found an young boy lying by an thick tree, his back against the wood.

“…Still breathing, but the wound is grave, I have to talk care of this quickly.”

Eva worriedly murmured, “Tiffany onee-chan, can he be healed?”

“Idiot!” One of the other youth yelled.

“How can there be an injury Tiffany-onee chan cannot cure? Don’t you know anything?”

“Lets take him back to the village first.”

The children lifted his body, Tiffany took an closer look at him.

“Black hair, wearing some clothes I never seen before.”

“He is a foreigner.”

But he don’t appear to be the people of (untranslated nation name), nor appear to be Henglkian, Just where is his clothes from?

No…Tiffany shook her head and let out a small smile, truthfully myself I have the blood of (untranslated nation), and in other words the bloodline of elves, Tiffany thought about it. The soft wind slowly caress her golden hair.

The hairs around her ears begin to flow.

In that moment, we could see her hair revealed a pair of pointy ears.

This was an short one. Valies send me Volume 8 plz.

[Vaelis]

Valies send me Volume 8 plz.

Done for chapter 1-2-3 (and it's Vaelis not Valies )

You can upload the Epilogue here: http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... ction=edit

[ArchmageXin]

Valies send me Volume 8 plz.

Done for chapter 1-2-3 (and it's Vaelis not Valies )

You can upload the Epilogue here: http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... ction=edit

Lol, sorry Valies.

You should know how well I spell names after you edited chapter for me last time. I remember I wrote an Eva fan fic years ago, and my editor commented I had like 15 ways to spell the name for one of the angels.

[onizuka-gto]

Done for chapter 1-2-3 (and it's Vaelis not Valies )

You can upload the Epilogue here: http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... ction=edit

Lol, sorry Valies.

You should know how well I spell names after you edited chapter for me last time. I remember I wrote an Eva fan fic years ago, and my editor commented I had like 15 ways to spell the name for one of the angels.

Welcome to the club, i do that all the time (not intentionally of course)

i found it easier if i i just shorten everyones handle to a three letter word, so i'll be Oni, Vaelis is Vae, and you'll be AMX!!!
...or maybe just Arc.

[leoblack9]

Okay I've been able to discover some corrections.

the right hand of god is the "flute" of the kind hearted God.

That's what my understanding gave me from the combined efforts of google translations and babelfish, at least it produced some sensible words.