Volume 4 Chapter 5 Preview Is Up

[Darknemo2000]

Finally finished...Now go and find ten differences between mine version and Matt's.

http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... apter_Five

As you remember I added first part of the text a while ago, but then I noticed that the part that is missing is rather big and I will not be able to add it in "one sit down" so I rather kept on translating in my doc rather than online as I originally planned.

Also I had to redo almost every Matt's sentence so It also increased the time that I originally planned to spend on it...

[Darknemo2000]

is anyone doing Volume 4, Chapter 6?

If not then I will take it.. It seems that Matts translation is slightly better there so it may not take that much time as well...

[Lysanther]

Guiche embraced Montmorency closely. Then, holding her cheek, tried to kiss her. Startled Montmorency shut her eyes.

“Put off.”

Saito pulled them both apart.

"Put off" seems like an odd expression there even if that is what the orignial text literally translates as, however I think the phrase should be "knock it off".

[Darknemo2000]

Well I translated literally here, plus I was never good with english expressions. So yeah, it is better. Hope anyone edits is...as I have hands full with chapter 6 so far...

[onizuka-gto]

thanks Darknemo