why not "Kaze no Stigma"?

magus · Post by **magus** » Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:09 pm

受難 should be suffer or sufferings

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 11:08 am

Going to start to edit chapter 2 in a bit. Also, I'll be completely gone from the 21st to the 24th. So can't do anything there.

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:20 pm

Jumpyshoes: keep up the good work

last 25% of chapter 2 posted, so chapter 2 is done.

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:35 pm

Oh yea, are you supposed to put 100% or nothing? If it's supposed to be 100%, should I finish editing before changing it?

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:39 pm

Completed chapters don't need anything after them. Since your still editing you could put. "100% Editing"

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:43 pm

Thanks. Oh yea, should I put 100%, editing? Otherwise, it looks like it's 100% done editing.

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:45 pm

"100% - Currently In Editing"

That better? I'm pretty sure people will understand it either way.

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:46 pm

Thanks. Something helpful for once!!! Good job!!! Keep up the good work. AND I'M IN THE TOP 10!! JUST 1.5K MORE POSTS TILL I'M FIRST PLACE!!

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:44 pm

you got a long way to go... quite hopeless endeavor given how much TGM posts... (spam)

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:49 pm

I can do it . . . I hope.

Anyways, thanks for your hard work. And speed. I think I'll start editing by the latest on Friday. Earliest tommorow.

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:52 pm

you might, you know given your spamming and editing, so you have more say...

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:58 pm

erehwon wrote:you might, you know given your spamming and editing, so you have more say...

?? Does that mean I might pass TGM? Or edit faster?

Anyways, should I keep the formating consistant with chapter 1 (minus the indents)? Or should I keep it as is until more people come and help (so we can decide on what to do). If we decide, I'll do formating first.

Also, in chapter 1, the wind clan is spelled fuuga (2 u), but in chapter 2, it's spelled fuga. Which is right?

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:12 pm

“Not ready yet? How much longer do we have to wait, Hyoue?”

“— — Please wait a little longer,” Hyoue replied towards the seemly impatient person.

Then, that person closed his eyes pensively and walked away. The wind was blowing against Hyoue. Within the blowing wind was the air still with the ki of youma, passing beneath Hyoue’s palm. The ki of youma that passed beneath his palms was like an air that would swallow anyone, no matter whom.

For the first one, the word choice is wierd. Still has 2 meanings, and I thought the sentance meant that the ki was still (not moving). For the next two, they conflict. If you look back, you can see what it means, but I think it's wierd.

If you don't want to change it, no need to respond. I'll just keep it as is if you don't want to change it.

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:13 pm

use fuuga... to keep consistency with chapter 1, just a general guideline, keep to chapter 1's spelling for the most part.

?? Does that mean I might pass TGM? Or edit faster?

both

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:27 pm

Right. It's late where I live, so I'll try to do formating stuff tommorow. Then I'll start editing.

ばか！バカ！　馬鹿ー月！

why not "Kaze no Stigma"?

Do you want "kaze no stigma" as the next project?