why not "Kaze no Stigma"?

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Mon May 28, 2007 6:49 pm

well i played with the site a bit, still needs some work feel free to do it

navigation bar thing will be nice, someone?

I think these are the tentative chapters and chapters names except the chapter 4... need help translating it...

Chapter 1 — The Disinherited Son Returns
Chapter 2 — Disaster that suddenly Arrives
Chapter 3 — Clash with the Past
Chapter 4 — [Not too sure]
Chapter 5 — Rescue
Chapter 6 — Battle
Epilogue

also what is the pronunciation of the following characters:
賴通 - father of Juuga
慎吾 - brother of Shinji

onizuka-gto · Post by **onizuka-gto** » Mon May 28, 2007 9:40 pm

TNG will be on it soon, apparently he been working on it secretly, so he can give ou some help on those names.

Post by **HolyCow** » Mon May 28, 2007 10:14 pm

I've filled in some parts of the pages, but will need help with the following:

1- The titles of each book.
2- The amount of chapters in each book.
3- The titles for each chapter.

If possible, can someone send me the Table of Contents from each novel?

P/S: erehwon could you PM Onizuka-GTO your forum name and wiki name so that he can update your status to a translator?

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue May 29, 2007 12:51 pm

HolyCow
Thxs, you might want to get TNG or Felin to send you the stuff; they might have the Japanese Raws for the things you're looking for.

uhmm, I did PM Onizuka-GTO, and he (I assume its a he) did update the status... should something happen?

Well, I have about 50% of Chapter 2 I guess I'll tidy it up... and post There's a lot of passive voice

is that alright? change it active? suggestions?

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue May 29, 2007 12:59 pm

erehwon wrote:HolyCowuhmm, I did PM Onizuka-GTO, and he (I assume its a he)

He has bushy eyebrows and a thick 'stache. Hes a manly man making it in the world.

Its still possible hes a girl though...

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:00 pm

There is a lot of passive voice in chapter 1 too. You need to register on the main page in order to see a difference (http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... =Main_Page --> top right hand corner --> Log in / create account --> make an account).

I'm about 1/2 of the way done editing section 1 of chapter 1. When you post the chapter, try to keep everything consistant (formating). If this becomes a real project, the formating needs to be regulated.

P.S. I'm editing so why aren't I an editor?

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:03 pm

Easy kid, it'll come in time as long as you keep up the good work.

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:05 pm

Oh right, you're one to talk, Mr. Uber Spammer. At least I help.

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:12 pm

I did back when we had the Burning One Man Force project. I was all over that. But since it was dropped nothing really interested me.

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:15 pm

Well, I dislike double posting, but this has to do with editing.

　　"Hmmph, that's right."

　　Sakamoto's eyes showed a faintly cunning light. Kazuma's, even at the best of times, scarce desire to work, quickly neared zero.

　　"Mmmm, how about this? Why don't you both try the exorcism, and only the successful one gets paid. Ahh, naturally I won't tell the loser to return the advance payment."

　　"Good idea, yeah."

　　They had been flippant words, but Shinji had immediately accepted them. And then, with the face of someone who has been completely made a fool of, he asked Kazuma.

From this context, it looks like Shinji is the one who owns Kazuma (at least he thinks so). From the text, it looks like Shinji was the one who looks like, "someone who has been completely made a fool of." Should I change this or not?

P.S. With TGM's spamming, it looks like I didn't double post!!

Edit: I'm a wierd guy, and when I'm doing something like this, I need to go in order, so I'm stuck editing

erehwon · Post by **erehwon** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:15 pm

i try to keep the same spelling, same format as the one used TNG, so to have less confusion later on...

Passive voice occurs a lot because of the Chinese language structure some what reverse of the English. (not too sure about Japanese though.)

Jumpyshoes
umm, i did that =>(http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index ... =Main_Page --> top right hand corner --> Log in / create account --> make an account).

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:17 pm

You should have an upgraded status if you registered with the same nick. It also might take time for the computer to put it in. If it doesn't work soon, go PM a mod for help. Or ask around in the forum.

P.S. You might need to register for the chapter.

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:30 pm

　　"Hmmph, that's right."

　　Sakamoto's eyes showed a faintly cunning light. Kazuma's, even at the best of times, scarce desire to work, quickly neared zero.

　　"Mmmm, how about this? Why don't you both try the exorcism, and only the successful one gets paid. Ahh, naturally I won't tell the loser to return the advance payment."

　　"Good idea, yeah."

　　They had been flippant words, but Shinji had immediately accepted them. And then, with the face of someone who has been completely made a fool of, he asked Kazuma.

If thats the original text, it looks fine IMO.

EDIT - I haven't read before or after this excerpt of text. If Shinji is the one who is made a fool of, this is correct. If Kazuma is the one being a fool made of, then its incorrect.

TheGiftedMonkey · Post by **TheGiftedMonkey** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:30 pm

Gah, sorry again. The stupid network here pops up with errors and makes me double post.

Jumpyshoes · Post by **Jumpyshoes** » Tue May 29, 2007 1:35 pm

Thanks. I'll just get a few more people's opinion and I can go on.

ばか！バカ！　馬鹿ー月！

why not "Kaze no Stigma"?

Do you want "kaze no stigma" as the next project?