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Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Postby Daffyd ap Morgen » Tue May 06, 2008 4:50 pm

Greetings;

I did a major edit of vol 1 chap 2 but forgot to log in before doing so, so it looked "anonymous". I suspect this is the reason my edit was reverted back to prior edit.

I'm going to repost the major edit while correctly logged in. Apologies for any confusion.


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Re: Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Postby Daffyd ap Morgen » Tue May 06, 2008 4:51 pm

Forgot to mention it's to part 1 of vol 1 chap 2.


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Re: Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Postby onizuka-gto » Wed May 07, 2008 5:30 am

thank you for your contribution.

The issue was just as you mentioned, it was far too big to allow it for annoyamous editing.

Also noticed you re-arrange some of the sentences?
"Please note, we have added a consequence for failure.Any contact with the chamber floor will result in an unsatisfactory mark on your official test record, followed by death. Good luck."

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