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Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 4:50 pm
by Daffyd ap Morgen
Greetings;

I did a major edit of vol 1 chap 2 but forgot to log in before doing so, so it looked "anonymous". I suspect this is the reason my edit was reverted back to prior edit.

I'm going to repost the major edit while correctly logged in. Apologies for any confusion.


Daffyd ap Morgen

Re: Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 4:51 pm
by Daffyd ap Morgen
Forgot to mention it's to part 1 of vol 1 chap 2.


DaM

Re: Major edit to vol 1 chap 2

Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 5:30 am
by onizuka-gto
thank you for your contribution.

The issue was just as you mentioned, it was far too big to allow it for annoyamous editing.

Also noticed you re-arrange some of the sentences?