Hiyono wrote:Ok, just finished giving the entire chapter 1 a quick run-through. I have a couple comments I wish to make:
- To kokolores: I would suggest posting any comments here in the forums, rather than in the novel text, for a simple reason, ShadowZeroHeart is much more likely to read them here. It's a little more professional this way, as well.
- To SHZ: a couple questions from kokolores that haven't been answered (and I wonder as well):
Her hairstyle, rather than saying it is a blunt blob, it is more like a round and simple hairstyle[actual text:西瓜皮頭, direct translation a head that is like watermelon skin? ^^”] with its sides cut evenly. [kokolores: isn't that what is usually called a bob? a simple haircut with the sides cut evenly?]
Seeing such a happy scene, Kazuma puts on a hurt expression on purpose. [kokolores: what's happy about that scene?]
And one from me: what does the following entry mean?
If you people have acknowledged everything that you have done towards the Fuga clan, then the Fuga clan can also only acknowledge what they did to you.
Firstly, sorry to admit this but yes, i do not read the translations on B-T often... afterall i have my master copy on my copy...
Okay, first question, i did not know of the names for hairstyles =X sorry about that, but someone answered my questions recently in another thread, so i shall make it clear now...
Yes it is a bob cut =X there are many phrases that i do not know the english names of... thus the difficulties in my translations, sorry about that...
Second question, perhaps the delightful scene would be an better option? coz Kazuma (the asshole) loves to make trouble everywhere, playing pranks, doing evil and stuff? ^^" so he is having fun seeing all Ayano's reactions and such?
Third question...Well, this means that if the Kannagis are to accept the mistreatment against the Fugas due to their lack of strength, then the the Fuga clan can also only accept everything they do to the Kannagis...
I am not sure how to phrase this, but it means that since they abuse the Fuga coz they are weak, similarly the Kannagis can be abused by the Fuga coz Fuga got more power then...?
Actual text: 如果你們肯定過去對風牙眾所做的一切, 那麼風牙眾同樣也只能肯定自己對你們所做的一切.
maybe you can think of a better translation? sorry... but my english is not that good >"<