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Satsuriku no Tenshi

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 6:11 pm
by Jam
Aloha!

I am currently translating the Satsuriku no Tenshi light novels! The teaser page is here.

I have the prologue and chapters 1 to 2 ready and up for reading.

I am slowly working on the rest and would greatly appreciate feedback!

Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy
Original Title: 殺戮の天使
Story: Makoto Sanada
Author: Chiren Kina
Illustrations: Negiyan
Published Volumes: 3
Series Status: Completed

Re: Satsuriku no Tenshi

PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2018 6:44 am
by zxzxzx
Hi there, and welcome! You'll probably get a bit more liveliness over on the discord server.

I had a read through the prologue, chapter 1, and then skimmed a bit of chapter 2. I don't have a copy of the actual novel for reference, but your translation looks pretty damn good so far. There don't seem to be any issues with grammar or tense, and you've captured the atmosphere of the novel well I'd say. I look forward to seeing you around :)

Re: Satsuriku no Tenshi

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:28 pm
by Jam
Thank you for your input!

I have recently uploaded chapter 6 (a flashback, so can be read separately) and just uploaded chapter 3 of the first volume!

Re: Satsuriku no Tenshi

PostPosted: Thu Mar 07, 2019 4:36 pm
by Jam
The first volume is now complete!