[ch 4] chapter 4

[garra]

Umm i think i may have notice a little mistake...

I looked at my watch and it was past half past four. She said we were to meet at four!

Is that even correct O_o?

[Nandeyanen]

If it is correct, it would probably be better if one of the "pasts" were replaced with a synonym. Something like "it was already after half past four" or maybe we could rephrase it to "it was already after four thirty". Any of numerous rephrasings would work. Then again, it the translator might just have forgotten to remove a past, in which case, the problem is easily solved. I think an extra past might actually be the problem, since looking at Strato's version, it just translates it as 4:30, but I guess I since I don't have access to the original text, I shouldn't make any assumptions.