[ch 1] She always has this aspiration that she would soon m
Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 12:27 pm
She always has this aspiration that she would soon meet the supernatural world that I abandoned long ago, and she enthusiastically tries to achieve her dream.
(alt translation from Cruzz's site: http://koti.mbnet.fi/~cruzz/haruhi/Haruhi.html)
I can't really comment meaning-wise on either one. I believe Cruzz's runs more smoothly in English -- the only thing I'd change is "approach at it" to "approach to it."
--The naming game 13:47, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
Cruzz's version does seem more fluid.
Your change seems to enhance the flow of the sentence so I think we should go with that.
--Da~Mike 00:57, 7 May 2006 (GMT)
I've made some modifications to this section, based mostly on TLG's original text rather than what was here. Please look it over and make any further improvements necessary.
--BlckKnght 13:24, 30 May 2006 (PDT)
(alt translation from Cruzz's site: http://koti.mbnet.fi/~cruzz/haruhi/Haruhi.html)
Even now, she's eagerly waiting for that chance meeting with the paranormal, something I gave up on a long time ago. And she's certainly taking an active approach at it.
I can't really comment meaning-wise on either one. I believe Cruzz's runs more smoothly in English -- the only thing I'd change is "approach at it" to "approach to it."
--The naming game 13:47, 1 May 2006 (PDT)
Cruzz's version does seem more fluid.
:I can't really comment meaning-wise on either one. I believe Cruzz's runs more smoothly in English -- the only thing I'd change is "approach at it" to "approach to it."
Your change seems to enhance the flow of the sentence so I think we should go with that.
--Da~Mike 00:57, 7 May 2006 (GMT)
I've made some modifications to this section, based mostly on TLG's original text rather than what was here. Please look it over and make any further improvements necessary.
--BlckKnght 13:24, 30 May 2006 (PDT)