[ch 1] Nitpick over instant versus period of time

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[ch 1] Nitpick over instant versus period of time

Postby Da~Mike » Sun Aug 06, 2006 12:37 pm

Nitpick over instant versus period of time

"When did you notice?"
Her tone was so cold that it was as if she was talking to a rock on the side of the road.
I paused for a while to think about it.
"Hmm... for a while."

This should IMO be "Hmm... a while back", as she asked "when", which is an instant in time, not "how long".

202.147.107.2 04:21, 14 July 2006 (PDT)
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