Novel illustration translations

[coolizer]

So i saw volume 7's illustrations weren't translated so i tried something :L
http://i.imgur.com/3PKwI.jpg
but they still have quite noticable points compared with Brownsheep's [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index ... 04-005.jpg, so i would like some advice
^^ I used Photoshop and Gimp to edit these, in case you needed to know

[Misogi]

Good work in editing the picture, just by looking at it.

But you should use a different police for the white text, since it's a bit difficult to read it. Use one that is more visible and nice to read, like the example you mentionned.
For the black text, its police is a bit akward, but it's not a huge problem. Make it bigger, though.

These are some remarks that could help you to make something better, but that's my opinion.

[coolizer]

I see, the problem was that i could not find an appropriate font, which had a black outline like Brownsheep's
so i used outerglow instead

Brownsheep used the clone tool rather effectively so i wanted some help with that, because it doesnt look like theres any change at all

[Norren]

If you're using photoshop, maybe try the stroke blending option to generate the black outline around the fonts?

[Vaelis]

Just use a stroke.
And don't use lowercase font.