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Hi, I just want to say thanks to you guys for keep going with this. Your work is very much apreciated :)
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Glad to see this project is still going.

This is very late, but thanks to Arczyx and Ignas616 for PDF and MOBI links!
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4-10
Noumi’s wings remained folded, and he didn’t show any signs of taking out his purple wave motion attack. He must first wish to have a ground battle of incarnate techniques.
Logically, it should be "without". Since he didn't show his purple wave.
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Ushwood wrote:4-10
Noumi’s wings remained folded, and he didn’t show any signs of taking out his purple wave motion attack. He must first wish to have a ground battle of incarnate techniques.
Logically, it should be "without". Since he didn't show his purple wave.
Hmm, you're right. I can't quite remember what the exact phrasing in the original was, but yeah, "without" is what naturally fits there.
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4-10
The two huge cuboids, which had a texture that felt like it could cut darkness itself, poured pressure that easily exceeded the pressure from before onto Haruyuki.
"texture that could cut darkness itself" seems very strange. Texture can't cut anything. Dreamer, maybe you accidentally mixed up active and passive voices? "Texture that seemed to be cut out of darkness itself" sounds much better.
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Ushwood wrote:4-10
The two huge cuboids, which had a texture that felt like it could cut darkness itself, poured pressure that easily exceeded the pressure from before onto Haruyuki.
"texture that could cut darkness itself" seems very strange. Texture can't cut anything. Dreamer, maybe you accidentally mixed up active and passive voices? "Texture that seemed to be cut out of darkness itself" sounds much better.
Hmm, this one's a little tricky, but I think your suggested change does fit with the intent behind the original text. Feel free to change it as you like.
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Last night, I uploaded the first 10% of V9.1 onto my blog here: [link removed].

When I complete the chapter I will then upload it onto BT after editing too.
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Vol 6 chapter 6 was planned to be finished by friday this week but will be delayed a little as i've injured my arm :( . i'll try get it done by monday next week.
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Good luck translating the lines Maiden speaks when she activates her IS skill :P
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The First wrote:Vol 6 chapter 6 was planned to be finished by friday this week but will be delayed a little as i've injured my arm :( . i'll try get it done by monday next week.
To bad to hear that, the delay not your arm (just kiding XD). Hope you get better soon (o.<)b
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4-10
A blue radiance that also resembled a hot flame—«Over-Ray» was suddenly released from the thin seems and joints of Silver Crow’s mirror-like armor.
Meaning seams? Or I don't get it.
There was a single silhouette, with the enormous blue full moon in the background behind it.
Impossible.
I checked with the original, it's not that at all. 騎馬 is "rider".
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Ushwood wrote:4-10
A blue radiance that also resembled a hot flame—«Over-Ray» was suddenly released from the thin seems and joints of Silver Crow’s mirror-like armor.
Meaning seams? Or I don't get it.
There was a single silhouette, with the enormous blue full moon in the background behind it.
Impossible.
I checked with the original, it's not that at all. 騎馬 is "rider".
Ah, that's supposed to be seams, yeah.

Hmm, you're right, I mistook 騎馬 for 馬鹿. Good job finding that. So it should be "It was a rider".
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4-10
—If it becomes a draw between us and all the points get awarded to Cyan Pike. If I let Takumu take over my dream. My battle is pointless.
"My battle is NOT pointless"
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Ushwood wrote:4-10
—If it becomes a draw between us and all the points get awarded to Cyan Pike. If I let Takumu take over my dream. My battle is pointless.
"My battle is NOT pointless"
Hmm, in that case, the proper phrasing here is "My battle will not be pointless".
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4-10 (patience - it's nearing the end!)
Kuroyukihime swung her wight arm up with a yell.
Right arm, Iguess?
“……Thank you, Chiyuri. If only me and Taku had been here, we would have definitely lost. Truly…thank you.”
Chiyu.

Dreamer, I get it you leave all actual corrections on the Wiki to me? Okay, then when I reach the end of the volume I'll make the whole bunch.

P.S. Wow, 500th post :).
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