Well, you didn't do bad at all. It was a good read, that scene.florza wrote:I remember being really embarrassed trying to translate that ridiculously long kiss scene.
Full of explanations + kissing = severe mental block. Sentences being extremely long, additionally it was also the longest part in the entire V4... that was quite the experience.
Godou can't store knowledge gained through Instruction for long in the novels either. But I'm sure he can hold on to it for a little while even in the anime. I just hope they don't f*ck it up as bad as the Yuri kiss in the latest episode, placing it into the middle of the fight. >.<