Re: Campione! Error Reporting and Clarification
Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:45 am
You can register on the wiki and make such corrections yourself, as long as its minor grammatical fixes/typos and doesn't change the line structure or meaning of text.Faiir wrote:Hello,
some suggested changes in vol.4:
Chapter 1, Part 1:
From: "The degree of scariness in Yuri's eyes was increasingly steadily."
to: "The degree of scariness in Yuri's eyes was increasing steadily."
From: "Even in countries that favored the slow food culture, would also sometimes make use of frozen foodstuffs as ingredients"
to: "Even countries that favored the slow food culture, would sometimes make use of frozen foodstuffs as ingredients"
Chapter 1, Part 2:
From: "Previously, she could control her emotions so well, yet nowadays she seemed to regard Erica with an air of malice."
to: "She could control her emotions so well previously, yet nowadays she seemed to regard Erica with an air of malice."
From: "Godou, who was suddenly cast aside, had a sudden urge to use the power he held as a 'King'. As a devil king, a Campione, to make Gantz take back his previous words."
to: "Godou, who was suddenly cast aside, had a sudden urge to use the power he held as a 'King' - as a devil king, a Campione - to make Gantz take back his previous words."