Thanks, I've made the changes and uploaded the chapter to the main page. I appreciate the feedback. Although I'm surprised that no one noticed that I had translated Mizuki's name as "Mitsuki" -- I myself wouldn't have caught it if I hadn't needed to look up Honoka's last name on the terminology page.joay_b wrote:1. First sentence: here, Tatsuya was invited by both Honoka and Shizuku for lunch at their room, not Tatsuya's.
2. Second sentence: The bus merely ran into demonstrators. There was no indication that they were blocked.
3. 「応援に来てくれたのか」 != “Can I help you with something?”
「応援に来てくれたのか」== “So you're here to cheer us.”
So the good news is, chapter 5 is updated. The bad news is, I tried to update the updates page to reflect it, but it wasn't reflecting to the main page. So then I tried to fix it, but instead I managed to break the link to the updates somehow. So then I tried to undo what I'd done before, but that didn't seem to fix things either. So now a part of me is convinced that if I only fiddle around with things a bit more, I can get it working again, but a bigger part of me is saying that I'd better leave well enough alone before I really make a mess of things.
So both apologies and thanks in advance to anyone who can fix my, er, 'updating' the updates page.
...come to think of it, I've got maybe one more thing to try, but if that doesn't fix it I'll leave well enough alone.
