Ero Manga Sensei - Imouto to Akazu no Ma

[shr3ddy66]

I am very assured that from this Tile there is nothing to wait.

well.. you could go read another Tile or whatever...

[sakura-tsuki]

I am very assured that from this Tile there is nothing to wait.

We already know you don't expect anything from this novel anymore. But, like I said before.
A judgment based on someone else his opinion without reading it yourself. I can't accept that and also I can't stop reading only because someone else says it.

There a lot of people out there that want to judge it for themselves and not because someone else says it.

By the way Baka tsuki has a lot of novels why don't you go read another title?

Again, don't jump to any conclusions yet.

[Cyclone1993]

Hey everyone! I'm Cyclone, the editor for the fist chapter of the second volume of Eromanga Sensei! I have never edited a novel before, so I was wondering if I could get some feedback? I mean it sounds good to me, but I just want to know what you guys think, especially since I'm working on the second chapter as well!

[shr3ddy66]

I have never edited a novel before, so I was wondering if I could get some feedback?

wot?

[Cyclone1993]

I have never edited a novel before, so I was wondering if I could get some feedback?

wot?

I was just wondering if there are any annoying editing issues in the novel that you would like to see fixed in future chapters.

[cautr]

Well, that you're asking for advice is already a good sign. Haven't read it though, so sadly I won't be any help in that regard. Just wanted to give my two cents.

[shr3ddy66]

I was just wondering if there are any annoying editing issues in the novel that you would like to see fixed in future chapters.

well... from what i've seen chaos almost never uses contractions, and uses "Although...~" too much.

[Cyclone1993]

I tried to add contractions where I thought it would make more sense. I left them in their original form in some lines, but it was mostly a situational thing.

[handsfeet]

Thanks for translating this, you´re awesome!
Now,the following contains some serious nagging with lots of spoilers and is protected by the hardly reliable spoiler button, which ironically only draws more attention, read at your own risk XD :

Spoiler! :

The series is great so far, my only issue is that Sagiri´s too obvious regarding her feelings; Kirino was more of a total asshole to Kyousuke, so in my opinion, that made it feel cooler when she said YES to his proposal - I was thinking "Holly shit" when I read that XD (Of course EroManga is still great, though to be honest my opinion of anything the author writes from this point on will be be seen biased because Oreimo is my favorite Romantic Comedy series, and personally, I´d be amazed if he could actually top that - he would have to reach godly levels, or just be really inspired) Anyway, I love this author´s works - actually, I only know Oreimo, but if you read my previous blabber you´ll know I love it - so my expectations for this are amazingly high, and so far I would give it the unofficial approval stamp ;D

[deathmailrock]

Thanks for translating this, you´re awesome!
Now,the following contains some serious nagging with lots of spoilers and is protected by the hardly reliable spoiler button, which ironically only draws more attention, read at your own risk XD :

Spoiler! :

The series is great so far, my only issue is that Sagiri´s too obvious regarding her feelings; Kirino was more of a total asshole to Kyousuke, so in my opinion, that made it feel cooler when she said YES to his proposal - I was thinking "Holly shit" when I read that XD (Of course EroManga is still great, though to be honest my opinion of anything the author writes from this point on will be be seen biased because Oreimo is my favorite Romantic Comedy series, and personally, I´d be amazed if he could actually top that - he would have to reach godly levels, or just be really inspired) Anyway, I love this author´s works - actually, I only know Oreimo, but if you read my previous blabber you´ll know I love it - so my expectations for this are amazingly high, and so far I would give it the unofficial approval stamp ;D

Spoiler! :

You are exaggerating about Kirino (and her feelings were kind of obvious too). She was a bit mean, but over all, it looked pretty obvious that she wanted her brother with her and she was a great little sister. She was just looking for excuses to spend time with her brother and make him hers.

In fact, Sagiri is kind of less obvious than Kirino (and Kirino was the actual blood related sister) when it comes to wanting to get along with her brother (from Masamune's perspective - since we are reading from the outside, it's more obvious to us).

Sagiri even has it easier than Kirino, since all she has to do is confess. She got his feelings, they would be accepted by society, they can get married, and they live together without anyone to hid from.

If she just confessed, most of the romantic problems that might come later on would have been solved much easier (other girls vying for Masamune's attention)

[handsfeet]

Spoiler! :

Well, in retrospect I guess Oreimo had some indirect hints, like Kirino playing little sister based eroge XD However, according to people I´m pretty oblivious to anything subtle, so much that I usually even forget most restaurants I´ve been to, so when Sagiri said she loved someone I immediately thought "That b*tch!" Well, until I read volume 2´s first chapter, where Masamune made me look super sharp in comparison X)

[deathmailrock]

Spoiler! :

Well, in retrospect I guess Oreimo had some indirect hints, like Kirino playing little sister based eroge XD However, according to people I´m pretty oblivious to anything subtle, so much that I usually even forget most restaurants I´ve been to, so when Sagiri said she loved someone I immediately thought "That b*tch!" Well, until I read volume 2´s first chapter, where Masamune made me look super sharp in comparison X)

Seriously? She should have the right to reject and love whoever she wants. And there were lots of obvious stuff in OreImo.

Spoiler! :

Kirino playing incest games, make him go everywhere with her, plays pornographic games with him, going on a Christmas date, going back to Japan to be with her brother, hating her brother getting a girlfriend or being friendly with girls, that "fake date", bragging about how much of a siscon her brother is, staring at an image of her male self raping her brother, enjoying being in a wedding dress while Kyousuke was in a suit, making him play "little sister wife".... there were many things

Sagiri was a lot less obvious.... but looking at her

Spoiler! :

While Sagiri is a lot more perverted than Kirino, who could go crazy around a loli but is truly innocent, it should be noted that Sagiri has communication issues. So she might be horrible at getting her intentions across, & while it was probably only an accident, Sagiri said words that usually mean (especially in Japan) rejection. So any signs that she shows towards liking Masamune will probably not be translated towards him as her liking him. He'd probably think he's just misreading the signs

I mean, Kyousuke & Masamune kind of have good reasons for being "dense"

Spoiler! :

1st off, It's harder to notice when someone likes you, but even then there was rational for Kyousuke & Masamune to not realize that some girls like them.
For Kyousuke: Kanako seemed to just want a slave, Ayase seemed to hate him (but he realized that he gave her good reason to hate him), he and Manami were too close, and Kirino was his sister. The only one that could make sense for liking him was Kuroneko and he kinda realized it.
For Masamune Sagiri rejected him, Tomoe didn't really show any signs, Elf just seems like a lonely kid who doesn't have friends, and Megumi just seems like a flirt.

You'd have to be arrogant to actually think that those people had a crush on you in those kind of situations, and those 2 don't have that great opinions of themselves.

[sakura-tsuki]

Spoiler! :

I think she does love him. Like Oreimo there are some subtle hints. Although Oreimo had a lot more obvious hints. That were hard to miss. There are still people out there who still think that those hints are there just for fun.

About Ero Manga sensei it's also possible she's not really in love with Masamune and maybe she hasn't realised it and she lied when she said I love someone else but she propably hasn't anyone else.

Why do I think this is because she is practically a hikimori and always in her room. She's not a social person and so I don't think she has a secret love somewere.

But I can also be wrong. For now this is my theory

[deathmailrock]

Spoiler! :

I think she does love him. Like Oreimo there are some subtle hints. Although Oreimo had a lot more obvious hints. That were hard to miss. There are still people out there who still think that those hints are there just for fun.

About Ero Manga sensei it's also possible she's not really in love with Masamune and maybe she hasn't realised it and she lied when she said I love someone else but she propably hasn't anyone else.

Why do I think this is because she is practically a hikimori and always in her room. She's not a social person and so I don't think she has a secret love somewere.

But I can also be wrong. For now this is my theory

Ya, it's possible that she hasn't realized it yet; but it could also be her bad communication skills.

[sakura-tsuki]

Spoiler! :

I think she does love him. Like Oreimo there are some subtle hints. Although Oreimo had a lot more obvious hints. That were hard to miss. There are still people out there who still think that those hints are there just for fun.

About Ero Manga sensei it's also possible she's not really in love with Masamune and maybe she hasn't realised it and she lied when she said I love someone else but she propably hasn't anyone else.

Why do I think this is because she is practically a hikimori and always in her room. She's not a social person and so I don't think she has a secret love somewere.

But I can also be wrong. For now this is my theory

Ya, it's possible that she hasn't realized it yet; but it could also be her bad communication skills.

That's also a possibility. Chapter 2 is out and I heard from Chaos that in chapter 3 we get to know the reason why Sagiri became ero manga sensei.....