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Re: Rakudai Kishi no Chivalry

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すり鉢状の観客席の一角。 (seariously...cant get this is english..)
and theres,
兎丸の笑顔は日に焼けた小麦色の肌と同じ、とても健康的で澄刺としたものだ。
Tomaru’s smile was like the light brown colour of her tanned skin, in cleared away smoothly
"学園序列第四位<城砕き>の異名を持つ我が校の生徒△葎昏貝の一人、Cランク騎士・砕城雷選手だぁぁッ! 長ラン康かせながら、悠々とヴァーミリオン選手の前に立つ! そこに今まで彼女と対時した選手のような緊張や気負いは見られません! ただただ倒すべき敵を鋭い眼光で睨み付ける! 事前の破軍学園壁新聞部の取材に「日本男子に逃走はない」と断言した通り、彼はヴァーミリオン選手と戦う気満々! いよいよ我々も<紅蓮の皇女>の戦いを生で見ることが出来そうだ! そして今両選手が固有霊装を顕現して 試合開始のブザーが
なったあああああ"
“Ranked 4th in out Hagun academy and a member of the stundent cousil, nicknamed the <Destroyer>, the C rank knight, competitor Saijou Ikazuchi! Surpassing the長ラン, he leisurely stood infront of contestant Vermillion! There is no sight of the tension or excitement that was seen from the others who fought competitor Vermillion! Only glaring at the opponent he has to defeat! Just like the wall newspaper club guaranteed, ‘No running away for Japanese men’, he lives up to the word! Completely ready to face Competitor vermillion! Could it be that this time, we will finally witness the true power of the <Crimson Princess> !? Now, with both of them summoning their devices――――Match, START!”
i seriously dunno what 長ラン stands for so here's the whole paragraph...i think i messed up the meanins =,=

need better lines for these...think stuff up nyaa~ also the "Match, START!" for the "試合開始のブザーが
なったあああああ" that i used...it sounds like the broadcaster is pulling the trigger for the match..which is wrong, any suggestions?
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okay, i already started on the V2 Colour images, but i noticed that the images at the project page were already Photoshopped, but they had image tears in them so i took a raw one wich i had myself and removed the page line in the middle.
so is it alright if i use my own image for he English version?

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lifeman120 wrote:okay, i already started on the V2 Colour images, but i noticed that the images at the project page were already Photoshopped, but they had image tears in them so i took a raw one wich i had myself and removed the page line in the middle.
so is it alright if i use my own image for he English version?

Image:
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as i said before, if anyone has better quality imgs than they are welcome to use them.
btw, do ya only have the colour images or all the illustrations? if so then u should replace the one i up'ed with those.
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do you have the raws of v2 too? the ones i have are a bit..well...lesser in quality i guess
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lifeman120 wrote:Currently making temporary Epub and finishing the colour pages, do you want the colour pages at the start of the novel or in the story where they appear?

temporary epub:
i got news from a few peeps that this link aint working. (though i works for me). can u fix it?
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Just got back from work. Editing Soon need food first... funny since I work as a chef...

CAT!... THISSSSSSSSSSSSSS ARE YOU TRYING TO MESS WITH MY BRAIN.... ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME READ THE RAW?

All the # rank ... using ctrl-f to fine the work rank and change it to #-Rank ... every single one... Also should i turn 3rd rank into 3rd-Rank like with the A-F rankings? Or leave it as 3rd rank? What about then its ranked F? :v
Also the first line さあそれでは! = Well the folk! ummmmm any better translations plz I refuse to TLC. (TLCingawayalreadyanyway).
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sirgoodguy wrote:Just got back from work. Editing Soon need food first... funny since I work as a chef...

CAT!... THISSSSSSSSSSSSSS ARE YOU TRYING TO MESS WITH MY BRAIN.... ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME READ THE RAW?

All the # rank ... using ctrl-f to fine the work rank and change it to #-Rank ... every single one... Also should i turn 3rd rank into 3rd-Rank like with the A-F rankings? Or leave it as 3rd rank? What about then its ranked F? :v
Also the first line さあそれでは! = Well the folk! ummmmm any better translations plz I refuse to TLC. (TLCingawayalreadyanyway).
some slave you are.
lemme answer yer questions so shut up and read NYAAAAAA~
first of all.. 3rd ranked as in, she is the third strongest person in the school. doesnt have anything to do with the genaral knight ranking (A-F).
Idk but if you have a better suggestion with the wording..any synonyms to 'rank' then you can use that..you know...edit it and stuff.
'Well the folk' is a typo for 'then'... sry but cut me some slack here, i'm finding barely enough time here to tl and read millions of other raw lns at the same time...did i mention i also read the popular english novels? I am half way through 'dance with the dragon' here...GAME OF THRONES IS SOOOO......damnit.
and lastly, if you want catnip, i aint sharing any.
(thanks for TLC'ing ^_^) ~(=3=)~
michael, you're such a dear, if i was a girl, i'd fall in love with ya lolz.
NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
p.s. -> well, i'll see if i can fix this typo habbit but...dont expect too much.
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TheCatWalk wrote:
lifeman120 wrote:okay, i already started on the V2 Colour images, but i noticed that the images at the project page were already Photoshopped, but they had image tears in them so i took a raw one wich i had myself and removed the page line in the middle.
so is it alright if i use my own image for he English version?

Image:
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as i said before, if anyone has better quality imgs than they are welcome to use them.
btw, do ya only have the colour images or all the illustrations? if so then u should replace the one i up'ed with those.
Spoiler! :
do you have the raws of v2 too? the ones i have are a bit..well...lesser in quality i guess
I do have the images up to V4 ( i could upload them if you want) all my non colour images are the same quality as the ones already uploaded
The V3 and V4 images all have 9xx X 14xx Resolution so idk if they are thinner or just a bit lower quality
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no I don't have any raws (i can't realy read or speak japanese i'm going to start learning it soon though!)
TheCatWalk wrote:
lifeman120 wrote:Currently making temporary Epub and finishing the colour pages, do you want the colour pages at the start of the novel or in the story where they appear?

temporary epub:
i got news from a few peeps that this link aint working. (though i works for me). can u fix it?
new link in the old post and the link is also in my signature

P.S: cleaning the Colour images of V2 is a lot harder then those of V1 but the parts that end up a little messy can be covered up with text.
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TheCatWalk wrote: michael, you're such a dear, if i was a girl, i'd fall in love with ya lolz.
Don't need your love.
Also cat don't use ~~~~~ in your translations please you get date and time with that...
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Mhmm who is destiny is that you Cat or Sir?
Not sure what to put here mhmm.......oh well back to my manga. A.K.A Dual Blades
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Again ty for TL Cat, hoping for more. Love sexy red hair herione. Btw Shouldn't this be considered Full Project Status since V1 is complete?
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Shuiko wrote:Again ty for TL Cat, hoping for more. Love sexy red hair herione. Btw Shouldn't this be considered Full Project Status since V1 is complete?
We need to completely proofread it before we can call a volume complete.
Clad In Armour wrote:Mhmm who is destiny is that you Cat or Sir?
None of us.
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sirgoodguy wrote:
Shuiko wrote:Again ty for TL Cat, hoping for more. Love sexy red hair herione. Btw Shouldn't this be considered Full Project Status since V1 is complete?
We need to completely proofread it before we can call a volume complete.
Clad In Armour wrote:Mhmm who is destiny is that you Cat or Sir?
None of us.

Ah IC. I was hoping if this went Full Stats it would get more attention (it deserves it so good). It's not a mind blowing series some generic stuff. But it reads very well and i feel its its so well executed. PLus Red Hair Sexy Herione just too good. Just too good...
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Shuiko wrote:Ah IC. I was hoping if this went Full Stats it would get more attention (it deserves it so good). It's not a mind blowing series some generic stuff. But it reads very well and i feel its its so well executed. PLus Red Hair Sexy Herione just too good. Just too good...
well what i like about this series is:
Spoiler! :
Holy monkey balls the MC is not dense, they actually confessed to each other! Finally a novel with romance tag that has an actual couple! KYAAA!!!~~~
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Shuiko wrote:Ah IC. I was hoping if this went Full Stats it would get more attention (it deserves it so good). It's not a mind blowing series some generic stuff. But it reads very well and i feel its its so well executed. PLus Red Hair Sexy Herione just too good. Just too good...
Red haired heroine? Just read one of the most viewed novels on BT... DxD
lifeman120 wrote:
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Holy monkey balls the MC is not dense, they actually confessed to each other! Finally a novel with romance tag that has an actual couple! KYAAA!!!~~~
Lulz yea.
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sirgoodguy wrote: Red haired heroine? Just read one of the most viewed novels on BT... DxD
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My previous statement aplies to DxD Big time, That's one hell of a epic novel
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