Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

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nikuniku wrote:
Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was very regretful.
I am a little bit uncomfortable with the word "regretful", but I don't have a better alternative myself.

The original word is "その事実がーー純粋に悔しい".
truly vexing/mortifying/frustrating/regrettable/annoying
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By the way volume 7 is available for download now so you guys can get illustration for volume 7 and upload it.
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Hey Code Zero. Who is the girl appear on the cover of vol 7?
Can she be Kamito's female alter ego or Ren Ashbell?!
Also i can see Restia fight alongside with Kamito.
Can it be that she finally return to Kamito?!
Lol.If this is the true then Kamito sure is the strongest now due to the fact having the Vorpal sword and the Holy sword :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Where exactly can you find the Chinese translated version of this novel, or the download of the original?
I'm sorry if its out of place, but any google search I've run so far only brings me to Baka-Tsuki's translation page, and it only appears to go up to vol 2.8 there
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LuxLucisAddo wrote:Where exactly can you find the Chinese translated version of this novel, or the download of the original?
I'm sorry if its out of place, but any google search I've run so far only brings me to Baka-Tsuki's translation page, and it only appears to go up to vol 2.8 there
I wonder what key words you have tried. For the raw, you might want to try "seirei tsukai no kenbu", and for Chinese, 精灵使的剑舞。
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nikuniku wrote:
LuxLucisAddo wrote:Where exactly can you find the Chinese translated version of this novel, or the download of the original?
I'm sorry if its out of place, but any google search I've run so far only brings me to Baka-Tsuki's translation page, and it only appears to go up to vol 2.8 there
I wonder what key words you have tried. For the raw, you might want to try "seirei tsukai no kenbu", and for Chinese, 精灵使的剑舞。
Are u seeing only the first link? scroll down to the 2or 3 rd page n u will get it. Rest the same as above

Edit: Since we are addressing this as a status, shouldn't we use "Demon King" instead of "demon king" ?
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chancs wrote:Since we are addressing this as a status, shouldn't we use "Demon King" instead of "demon king" ?
That's the trouble I've been having, there's no clear distinction, so I leave most stuff in lower casing. I suppose in most cases Demon King would be in title-case. I'm also going to add in the furigana, which I left out, next week when I review the format and etc.
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KuroiHikari wrote:
chancs wrote:Since we are addressing this as a status, shouldn't we use "Demon King" instead of "demon king" ?
That's the trouble I've been having, there's no clear distinction, so I leave most stuff in lower casing. I suppose in most cases Demon King would be in title-case. I'm also going to add in the furigana, which I left out, next week when I review the format and etc.
So, should it be kept as it is or 'I change it to as mentioned above?
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Go ahead and change, but normally Zero2001 kinds of title-cased words he thinks should be title-cased. I'll define things more clearly when I look through again after finishing vol 2.

About things to do, there's still the changing of 'ceremony' to 'ritual', and 'magic XX spirit' to 'demon XX spirit'.
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I'm not sure where to say it, but since I don't know how to go to the talk page of the chapter..a minor flaw in translation maybe? Seirei_Tsukai_no_Blade_Dance:Volume2_Chapter9
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Jio's posture was slightly crumbled by the wind pressure— that chance of a moment was overlooked by Kamito. Shouldn't that be wasn't overlooked? Because next is an attack:
Holding the silver shiny sword up overhead, he launched a strike with all his might—
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Ah! Yes, I double checked it, and I had overlooked the negative word. :lol:
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Another awesome volume completed. Thank you KuroiHikari and editors. Looking forward to more Kamito and the girls.
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as soon i finish campione (volume 3) ill start this one, is this some what related to zero? seems hilarious . thanks for ur work :)
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Code-Zero wrote:By the way volume 7 is available for download now so you guys can get illustration for volume 7 and upload it.
Can I have the permission to add the illustration on vol 6 and 7? Thou I'm new here and at least wanted to help you guys even if it's not translating.

Also, if you guys permit me, I would like to know how to add the page for it.
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this novel looks pretty good to read
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